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Peer-review

Hey user Galanyousuf1,

Try to expand on the introduction for MerR with appropriate hyper-linking as this is probably the most vital part of the entire Wikipedia page. Most people search up names or topics on Google simply to see what they are and will be led to your Wikipedia page only to read the first few lines.

For your Mechanism of Action section, remove the dash before the start of your paragraph whenever you get the chance to make it look cleaner. Also consider starting with the name of what’s being discussed rather than using they, as this is the start of a new heading.

Try to expand on your Structure section and see if you can get any images that are copyright friendly. Or if not, just describe it succinctly in words.

Good luck on the rest of your assignment!

Cheers!

Mr. Senfai (talk) 07:35, 2 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Peer-review

Hello! I'd be very happy if you'd be able to critique my current work in progress in my sandbox!

Mr. Senfai (talk) 16:43, 1 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"'Sup?"

What is up, my classmate.

--Rfwh (talk) 17:32, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"Hey, fellow classmate!"

Let's do a fantastic job this semester and put CHM437S on the map.

Mr. Senfai (talk) 19:29, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome!

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Bibliography

Dear Galanyousuf1: Nice start on your bibliography, I will check back again later to see if you have added a few more references and points. Don't forget to leave the header on the top of your sandbox: {{User sandbox}} and then on the next line . Have a nice weekend. Dbzam (talk) 20:12, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

CHM437 Peer Editing

Hello, I'm not sure if you're finished with the first draft of your wiki page, but I'll leave some suggestions here. I think you're off to a good start and I like that a sizable part of your references are secondary sources. That being said, I would work on the introduction as the first sentence is kind of confusing. Also, perhaps you could link to other wiki pages whenever you mention something technical as most of the general public will not necessarily have a strong biology background. Also, a few diagrams and pictures wouldn't hurt, but I'm sure that you'll add them in later. Good luck with the assignment!

BChung2 (talk) 18:03, 1 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

CHM437

Hey Galanyousuf1, as BChung2 has pointed out, you could expand your article a bit more. To improve, you can add a picture to show the enzyme in all its glory. You can also compare different type of MeRs and possibly add a historical section. Rahman437 (talk) 22:54, 2 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Work in sandboxes

Dear Galanyousuf1: Don't forget that everybody is working in their sandboxes, so if you want to leave comments you should leave them either in the talk page for the sandbox or the author's personal talk page. If you leave comments on the talk pages of the original articles (i.e. the live WP articles), the person you are speaking to will not get it. Dbzam (talk) 13:36, 4 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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