User talk:Redmarkviolinist/Archive 4
News! Tag & Assess 2008 is coming ...Milhist's new drive – Tag & Assess 2008 – goes live on April 25 and you are cordially invited to participate. This time, the task is housekeeping. As ever, there are awards galore, plus there's a bit of friendly competition built-in, with a race for bronze, silver and gold wikis! You can sign up, in advance, here. I look forward to seeing you on the drive page! All the best, --ROGER DAVIES talk 13:15, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
Thanks for signing upI hope you don't mind but I'd like to comment on the first few articles.
All the best, --ROGER DAVIES talk 17:50, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
Good man! --ROGER DAVIES talk 18:16, 28 April 2008 (UTC) Signpost updated for April 21st, 2008.
You are receiving this message because you have signed up for the Signpost spamlist. If you wish to stop receiving these messages, simply remove your name from the list. Ralbot (talk) 16:25, 25 April 2008 (UTC) Category: American Civil WarI noted you added this back to several articles. The WP:ACW has been working to not use this generic category, but instead to use more specific subcats. Wiki convention is not to use both the master cat and subcat on the same article. Thanks!! 8th Ohio Volunteers (talk) 20:35, 25 April 2008 (UTC) AssessmentI'm extremely sorry, but I accidentally did your range. I noticed that you haven't started yet, so I was wondering if I could move you to the 9500 range instead (or whatever I haven't done). I'm terribly sorry for the inconvenience. ṜέđṃάяķvюĨїήīṣŢ Drop me a line§ 02:17, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
Did you mean to mark this as part of the military history WikiProject? It seems rather tangential to me - the only relevant entries are from the US Naval Academy and a single Civil War-era brass band. I don't mind, it's only a talk page after all, I'm just wondering if that was a mistake on your part. Tuf-Kat (talk) 03:58, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
Re: Get Well SoonThanks for the get well message. My stomache has been on a steady downward slide for years, but as of late my never ending heartburn has triggered an abrupt resurgence of my halucinations, and an even more disturbing 'stabbing' like pain near my heart. Taken togather these two concerns are a severe enough that my upper digestive system doctor wants me in the hospital just as soon as school ends so he can do another endoscopy. I can not make sound editorial judgements when the hallucinations start up, hence the template. I'm hoping that summer break and the resulting drop in stress will improve my health (it has in the past), so if past evidence holds true I should be back on in full and health force the second or third week of May. TomStar81 (Talk) 06:44, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
adoptionum you said to leave a message on your user page sooooo I have! lol Flardox (talk) 22:11, 26 April 2008 (UTC) Milhist tag and assessHi there Mark. Just a follow-up from some of the ranges that you have been doing. Could you make sure that you include all of the available task forces? Also, please don't include all of the available parameters as for Milhist, this is an awful lot and can fill the talkpage with unneccessary code. Would you mind going through and checking the worklists that you have already completed? I went through this section and found half that could have an extra task force, and one tag that was broken. Time for a cliche I think: Quality over quantity. ;) If you have any questions, don't hesitate to leave a note on my talkpage. Thanks again for all your continued effort in this drive. It is appreciated. Regards. Woody (talk) 21:47, 27 April 2008 (UTC) Re:CoachingAch, sorry, I thought you were still taking exams. Well, I'm sure that you should get Battle of Marion at least to GA status; if you need help, I'll help. You should probably change your signature as well: Too unreadable. Familiarize yourself with policy; the best way to do this is to actually participate in policy processes such as AfD. Nousernamesleftcopper, not wood 22:53, 28 April 2008 (UTC) SaprotrophExcuse me, but can you explain why you assessed this article as a B-class article? Whatever the assessing scale that WikiProject Fungi is using, it seriously needs to be revised if that is what you assessed this off of. If this was a mistake or typo, feel free to let me know. Cheers, ṜέđṃάяķvюĨїήīṣŢ Drop me a line§ 03:03, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
Transhumanist RFAI have removed the RfA of The Transhumanist that you have transcluded, as it is required that nominees accept the nomination before it goes live. -- Naerii 22:32, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
You put "Speedy close" on this afd "per above" which did not make any sense to me. Speedy close should be used when you feel that an afd is completely without merit or has been use in a manner inconsistent with policy, such as when an afd is opened immediately after it has already passed as a "keep". Did you instead intend to use "Speedy Delete"? If so, could you amend you entry? Trusilver 23:28, 29 April 2008 (UTC) AdoptionI was wondering if you'd be willing to adopt me? Elluminate (talk) 02:43, 30 April 2008 (UTC) Lady Aleena's RfA
Business War GamesDear Redmarkviolinist: First, thanks for taking the time to improve on my Business War Games page. Second, what it shows now are references to references but not the references themselves. In other words, if someone wahts to read the articel or book cited, where is the full refernce? m I missing something? Cimas (talk) 12:16, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
Welcome!Now that this Welcome rule is settled, please explain the folloiwng: you feel free going into someone's else work, change it in a way that reduces its value to Wikipedia's readers, and then throw in inchallantly, oh, you need to put the full reference inside the text? Do you consider other people's time as valuable as yours, son, or less valuable? Would you go looking for those original references now? If you want to be helpful, be helpful. If you just want to show your superior Wikipedia editing skills, please be aware that most of us don't care that much about the rules, we care about the content. Feel free to "drop me a line", but try and be truly helpful next time. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Cimas (talk • contribs) 15:06, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
Not WelcomeYou completely miss the point, and confuse being helpful with who needs to be helpful. In rational discourse and action, there is cause and thre is effect. You enetred a site- original work that was contributed to Wikepedia for readers' benefits- and you made a change without regard to consequences, then you moved on. Like a child who finished p[laying with a toy, you did not go back to check what was the result. Then you insist that form is more important than substance, so you send me reading about more rules (form), which is your right to think, but you should not be working on encyclopedias if this is your main interest, becasue you do not create knowledge, you destroy it with excessive form. Let others edit pages, since it is clear you do not have real regard to making them better. That will solve the problem, which did not exist (think about it) until you created it. That's cause and effect. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Cimas (talk • contribs) 19:20, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
Re:StressFunny, I was just following that on ANI this morning. I think you handled it fairly well, but this comment: "I am going to kindly ask you to leave me alone before I do get a higher authority figure to block you," could have been left out; he wouldn't have gotten blocked if you had reported him, and threatening other users is not a good idea. Just to let you know, I'll be pretty inactive the following week or so because of real life events. I might not reply to comments so quickly. Nousernamesleftcopper, not wood 02:17, 1 May 2008 (UTC)
Under 18'sṜέđṃάяķvюĨїήīṣŢ Drop me a line§ 03:13, 1 May 2008 (UTC) GAN reviewsHello, I see that you have been doing a lot of reviewing for Good Article nominations lately. You may want to revisit the instructions for reviewing/putting articles on hold; I've noticed that you are mixing up your templates, such as the "On Hold" one at Talk:Operation Varsity, which I've since fixed, and this edit at the GAN page, which removed the original nomination for Operation Varsity; you are supposed to copy and paste "#: {{GAReview|status=onhold}} ~~~~" below the nomination entry. That still needs to be fixed, btw. Also, another user has voiced disagreement with one of your GAN fails at Talk:Battle of Glasgow, which you may want to address; this article probably should not have been failed so quickly. It takes a while to get used to the GAN reviewing process, so I suggest taking it slow at first. :) Best of luck, María (habla conmigo) 13:56, 1 May 2008 (UTC) GAN: Double Tenth IncidentThank u for your review but I seek further clarification. Pse reply to my queries at the article talkpage here. Thanks! -- Aldwinteo (talk) 16:15, 1 May 2008 (UTC)
Darrell S. ColeHello, I was hoping to get some more input on the Darrell S. Cole you failed for GA. I need to ask some additional questions in order to fix the problems you noted on the articles talk page. You stated that there were not enough reliable articles, how many do I need? Also you said that there are all caps but other than abbreviations I didn't know what you meant could you give me some examples? Also, regarding the comment that it didn't have enough coverage of the topic, he was 24 years old when he died, he wasn't alive long enough to do much, is length itself a reason to fail or is it a matter of finding info, without crossing the original research line there just isn't much out there on some of these biographies including this one? Thanks for the extra input.--Kumioko (talk) 17:23, 1 May 2008 (UTC)
Wikipedia:List of Wikipedians under 18I've deleted this page as an extreme privacy issue. Feel free to take to WP:DRV, but no underage users should be broadcasting their age in a centralized fashion. MBisanz talk 17:46, 1 May 2008 (UTC)
Redmark, please review the essay Wikipedia:Protecting children's privacy both for your own safety and other's. MBisanz talk 20:59, 1 May 2008 (UTC)
adoption offerHi Redmarkviolinist, I thank you for your offer. I am a semi-experienced editor, and currently topic-banned. I noticed you are quite young, and very active, esp. on military history. What I am looking for is coaching regarding the WP:NPOV policy (and other applicable policies of course). I am curious whether you are holding strong views toward the September 11, 2001 attacks. You can read something about me here. Do you feel that this coaching can be a good idea, or should I look further? — Xiutwel ♫☺♥♪ (speech has the power to bind the absolute) 20:51, 1 May 2008 (UTC) GA ReviewsHello. I am a member of WP:WGA and as an experienced reviewer, I must say that your recent reviews were very poorly done. The comments you made during the reviews, (including to the articles 36th Engineer Brigade (United States) and 15th Sustainment Brigade (United States) which I am trying to promote) were ambiguous, easily correctable, and, in one case, completely wrong. I understand if you were just trying to move the qeue along so that your own articles could be promoted faster, but please do not waste other's time and energy by arbitrarily failing their articles without reading the guidelines for a GA review (or putting them on hold to allow such easy mistakes to be fixed). You are not the first person in the past few weeks who has done this, and it has made the GA review process more problematic for the rest of us who review articles. -Ed!(talk)(Hall of Fame) 00:01, 2 May 2008 (UTC)
Sure. Here are the things I noticed:
Remember: GA is not a competition. Our purpose here is not to see who can make the most GAs but to improve as many of our articles as possible. Ideally, we can get every article nominated up to GA quality. If you want some examples, take a look at my review history, it was a learning process for me to review GAs well, too. -Ed!(talk)(Hall of Fame) 03:07, 2 May 2008 (UTC)
-Also, do you know Dreamafter? ṜέđṃάяķvюĨїήīṣŢ Drop me a line§ 03:18, 2 May 2008 (UTC)
RE: U-18 attacksOuch. I've read some of the other ones on your main userpage, those are VICIOUS. I've been fortunate enough to not run into anyone like that (although I tend to keep my arguments to the rationally-minded Military History Project). But still. Harsh. Cheers! Cam (Chat) 05:54, 2 May 2008 (UTC)
Adopt me!Hey, glad to hear that you're willing to adopt me! I've been slowly figuring things out, so I don't need any help at the moment, but I'll definitely tap you for some information help sometime. WP is a crazy maze. Incidentally, my email is imperfectlyinformed@gmail.com -- if you could drop me a line with an email address or something I would appreciate it. As my Userpage says, ideally I'd like to have someone that I could instant message when I have a quick question. It's just faster. Maybe we can figure something out. ImperfectlyInformed | {talk - contribs} 10:35, 2 May 2008 (UTC) Three thingsHi Mark! First, I don't know whether you've seen it yet but I left you some feedback about your assessing and tagging. I have unresolved concerns about the speed and accuracy with which you'd doing this and would be grateful if you checked all your ranges in the light of my comments. I'd also appreciate comment from you.
Second, you asked me to GA review the Battle of Marion. I have read it and could not pass it without further work. (Some examples: the intro needs beefing up; some of the sections are distinctly stubby; it needs a copy-edit, and I'd prefer to see more paper refs. I also personally prefer short cites/full sources see Hamlet as an example, but that's not a deal breaker.) Unfortunately, I just do not have enough spare time to shepherd it through GA. Third, I'm puzzled about your tally at WP:MHA-T&A08#Participants. You claimed 2200 but your ranges show only 1800 articles. Why did you change it to 2000 after I set it to 1800?
I look forward to hearing from you. All the best, --ROGER DAVIES talk 11:25, 2 May 2008 (UTC) AdviceRedmarkviolinist, I am going to offer some advice. I am not trying to be a teacher, but my advice will help your reviews for GA nominations be less opposed by editors. You have stated for several GA nomination reviews that the article being reviewed does not have enough reliable sources. I advise you to look at the Good article criteria. You will see that a GA nomination cannot be failed because you consider that there are too few reliable sources used. It is perfectly acceptable for only two or three reliable sources to be utilised by an GA class article. If you follow my advice, and realise that GA nominations cannot be failed on the basis of your perception that there are not enough reliable sources employed, then your GA nomination reviews will not come under less a degree of opposition from experienced editors (I am not calling myself an experienced editor, but I am sure you have noticed the relatively large number of experienced editors who have voiced concern regarding your GA nomination reviews). I am not doing this because you have failed my GA nomination, although the failure did lead me to look up other reviews you have done, which lead to me seeing several comments against your reviews by experienced editors. I am not bitter, and I do think you will make an excellent editor one day, based on the fact that you are very active, if you just follow the guidelines of Wikipedia. Hope to see you around. Thank you for reading.EasyPeasy21 (talk) 16:48, 2 May 2008 (UTC) Re: Your checkuser request on my pageNo, not without you providing some supporting evidence, similar to how it's done on WP:RFCU. Asking checkusers directly does not mean you can forgo the evidence requirement. --Deskana (talk) 21:58, 2 May 2008 (UTC) WikiProject Good Articles May NewsletterThe May Newsletter for WikiProject Good Articles has now been published. Dr. Cash (talk) 22:16, 2 May 2008 (UTC)
Belleville Philharmonic SocietyA proposed deletion template has been added to the article Belleville Philharmonic Society, suggesting that it be deleted according to the proposed deletion process. All contributions are appreciated, but this article may not satisfy Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion, and the deletion notice should explain why (see also "What Wikipedia is not" and Wikipedia's deletion policy). You may prevent the proposed deletion by removing the Please consider improving the article to address the issues raised because even though removing the deletion notice will prevent deletion through the proposed deletion process, the article may still be deleted if it matches any of the speedy deletion criteria or it can be sent to Articles for Deletion, where it may be deleted if consensus to delete is reached. Do you want to opt out of receiving this notice? Grey Wanderer | Talk 23:12, 2 May 2008 (UTC) The Military history WikiProject Newsletter : Issue XXVI (April 2008)The April 2008 issue of the Military history WikiProject newsletter has been published. You may read the newsletter, change the format in which future issues will be delivered to you, or unsubscribe from this notification by following the link. Thank you. GA stuffG'day. I'm here from Talk:Double_Tenth_Incident#Second_opinion. I saw what you did there. I thank you for trying to help out at GAN...it is appreciated. But please, please, please, before making a pass/fail decision, could you possibly ask one of the GAN mentors to take a quick look, in future. I'd be happy to. I'm sure this will make this easier for everyone, and help the project a great deal more. Best regards, dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 02:49, 3 May 2008 (UTC) I know that he/she is one of your adoptees. So you know, he/she has been asking me about information about helping out at DYK. I said that I would be willing to mentor. Royalbroil 22:43, 3 May 2008 (UTC) Milhist contestThe contest runs on a monthly basis, so it is measured from the beginning of the month. At the beginning of the month the article was a start class article. Admittedly you assessed it as GA not long after midnight, but it was still assessed as GA in May. I think arguing over semantics is demeaning the contest, Kyriakos put in the work and this should be reflected in his tally at the end of the month. Regards Woody (talk) 20:25, 4 May 2008 (UTC)
Re: Battle of Kalka RiverI had also thought you put the starting class as the class that it was at the start of the month. If not, I would be more than happy to change it from Start to GA if it is indeed the class when you nominate the article. Also thanks for doing the article's GAC. Kyriakos (talk) 21:46, 4 May 2008 (UTC) GA: James GrahamThanks for your review of James Graham (soldier), and passing the GA. I'm sure this is an oversight, but you forgot to remove the listing from WP:GAN, and to add it to WP:GA. Not a problem on this occasion, since I've sorted it, but do remember next time to go through the full pass process, so we can all keep track. Thanks. Gwinva (talk) 22:07, 4 May 2008 (UTC)
GA ReviewHi Mark. Just a note. When you pass a GA-Nomination, my suggestion is that your change the template on the GAN Page IMMEDIATELY. For instance, in the most recent one (Battle of N'Djamena (2008)), you didn't remove the template, and I put the article down as being reviewed by me, and promptly disagreed with your decision to immediately pass the article (it needs a copyedit, and then it should be fine). Just as a friendly reminder so as to avoid confusion. Cheers! Cam (Chat) 04:01, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
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