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Hello professor. I am a student in this class (Everyday Life and Social Structure)。I have joined the dashboard system. and Completed training tasks. Ask the professor to check. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 06:58, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, Professor. I am a student in this class (Introduction to Information Sociology) and (Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia). I attended the training, you can check it out via this link.Thank you! Yangpeifu (talk) 08:54, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, Professor. I am a student of your three classes (Everyday Life and Social Structure, Introduction to Information Sociology and Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia).
@TMXX0818: Good, and thank you for linking your contributions. Please note that Facebook is not considered a reliable source (it is ok to cite official Facebook accounts, but they should be replaced by non-social media sources if possible). But it was still very good to add references to the unreferenced article - good job. Note I've added the code to display references in the proper place: see here. I recommend using this script to see what references are good or not (bad ones are marked in red, weak are marked in yellow: User:Headbomb/unreliable.js. We will be learning how to install the script in class in the near future, but if you want to get a head start, go to your preferences>gadgets>Install scripts without having to manually edit JavaScript files and then try install the Headbomb script. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:26, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 1(Week2)ZHONG XIN
Hello, Professor. I am a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia.
Hello, Professor. I am a student of Collective Intelligence course.
I completed Wikipedia training and enrolled in the dashboard system.
Please check it. Thank you！ Leeyj0401 (talk) 06:57, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor. I am a student in this class (Everyday Life and Social Structure)。I have joined the dashboard system. and Completed training tasks. Ask the professor to check. Eunbini(talk) 06:58, 10 March 2024 (UTC) Eunbini (talk) 07:57, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
For edits here and here, please add references. We will be learning how to do so in a class soon, but I see you already know how to do this. In your next edits, please add references, otherwise the content you have added ma be removed as unreferenced (see Wikipedia:Verifiability). The reference you added here should be converted to a footnote - ask me in class or during office hours how to do so if you need help.
Hello, Professor.I am a student of Course Everyday Life and Social Structure.I have completed the Wikipedia:Training/For students and enrolled in the courses. Please check it!Thank you！ ！Wsw1357 (talk) 11:37, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor. I am a student in this class (Everyday Life and Social Structure)。I have joined the dashboard system. and completed the training. Ask the professor to check. MouFengcoo (talk) 11:45, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, professor? I'm Lee Jiyoon, taking collective intelligence.
I have completed both Wikipedia training and registered on the dashboard.
Please check. Thank you!
Hello Professor. I am a student studying Everyday Life and Social Structure. I completed additional training to earn extra credits, including Special topics/How-to refreshers/Exercises/Discussions/Additional resources. Please check my homework. Thank you for your time and guidance. 220.74.81.4 (talk) 12:44, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
Dear Wang Siewn. You forgot to log in. To complete the task, please log in and sign your post. Edits made without logging in are not counted for our course as they are not tied to your account. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:37, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 1(Week2)LIU XINRUI
Hello Professor.I am a student of Course Everyday Life and Social Structure.I have completed Wikipedia training and dashboard registration.Please check it!Thank you！ 유신예 (talk) 14:14, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
Professor, I would like to select 王白渊 as the Wiki article for an “Introduction to Information Sociology”.I want to choose this "Eggy Party" that needs to be expanded as the wiki article for my "Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia", is it okay? If it’s too little, can I add another one? Yangpeifu (talk) 05:46, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
@Yangpeifu: “Introduction to Information Sociology” does not have a wiki assignment, although wiki edits can be used for extra credits. The topics you selected seem good, please talk to me after class and we will record them in the spreadsheet. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:39, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
Deadline1(Week2) Kwon Jaeeun
Hello professor. I'm a student of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I took all the required training and enrolled in the course. please check it here. thank you. Cookinu (talk) 05:55, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
Deadline1(Week2) - Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU
Hello professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, a student of Sociology of Everyday Life. I have completed training and confirmed registration for the dashboard system.[2]Please review, thank you. Csiiiyu (talk) 06:14, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
Hi professer Piotr K. I am a student of course Everyday Life and Social Structure. I completed Wikipedia:Traning/For students and enrolled in our course at dashboard system. Also, I did additional training in Korean at 위키백과:길라잡이 for extra credit. I additionally completed the section of Discussions/Additional resources and Special Topics(“contributing images and media files” , “translating articles”)and as many of the Exercises as I can. Please check my wikipedia assignment and my extra credit. Thank you. Kimseoeun2023079825 (talk) 06:16, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, I'm Kim Yeonjun. I've completed training[3] and joining the dashboard [4]
please check it. thanks professor.
(I hope you understand that I used Instagram because the picture didn't go up well)
talk) 09:29, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, I'm Chaehyun Lee who is taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. and I have completed Deadline 1 (Week 2).[Basic],[How to refreshers],[5]. so please check it out. Thank you very much. Chaekyo (talk) 12:54, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, I have completed the Wikipedia:Training/For students and have additionally completed enrollment in our course dashboard, which you can see verified images of here.
Also, since the registration for the extra class has not been confirmed yet, I am not currently registered in the LMS for the course, so I cannot see the announcement.
If you have already been invited to blog for our course, please let me know!
Hello, Professor. I am a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia.
I've completed my first and second weeks of weekly Wikipedia edits, totaling over twenty edits recorded.Hoping to get some extra points.Please check：[6]
Hello professor, I'm ZHANG QI who is taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' and ‘Collective Intelligence in Practice’. And I have completed Deadline 1 (Week 2).
Hello, Professor. I'm a student of "Collective Intelligence in Practice" and "Introduction to Information Sociology" course, soganan. soganan. I'm not up to date with the course additions, but I've finished the week2 video study https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students and homepage creation and editing, here's my homepage: please check it out, thank you! SHAO JIANUAN (talk) 04:26, 12 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, Professor! i’m a student of'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. my name is WEN JIAYAO.I have completed all modules of the basics and joined the course. Please check and see if there is anything else I can do. Thank you! Wjyy1212 (talk) 07:58, 12 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello Professor. I am Li Haochang. My group member is Han Yuanyuan. Our Chinese translation into English is this (because the Chinese content is a bit sparse, we will also add it after it is translated into English.). The English translation into Chinese is this.
thank you professor Lihaochang678 (talk) 11:28, 12 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, professor. I am a student of your class, Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed training for students and enrolled in your dashboard system. please check. Chaeyeong09 (talk) 03:13, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
@Mys 721tx Thank you for your feedback. I was unable to review some of those in class since I do not speak Chinese and cannot translate their comments to English in classroom quickly. Having reviewed them, they do not seem wrong - many seem constructive to me? However, I'd appreciate further feedback. I am now posting the content of class activities I am asking my students to do at User:Hanyangprofessor2#Collective_intelligence - feel free to suggest tweaks, rewordings, new content, and anything else! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:44, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
Deadline1（week2）ZHANG BINGYI
Hello, Professor. I am a student in this class (Introduction to Information Sociology) and (Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia). I attended the training, you can check it out via this https://imgur.com/a/94f9ix1.
and registered for course Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia~
Thank you Zhangzhang111 (talk) 05:29, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, professor. I am a student of your class, Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed training for students and enrolled in your dashboard system. please check. Hayoung1 (talk) 05:57, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, I'm Kim minjun. I am taking collective intelligence. I completed training and uploaded in my imgur website. Also, i entered Collective intelligence Dashboard. Thank you. Please check it.
Hi, professer, I'm dayean your class student. The class name is Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed training for student and enrolled in your dashboard system. Please check. Jeong dayean (talk) 06:20, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, Professor. I am a student of your three classes (Everyday Life and Social Structure, Introduction to Information Sociology and Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia).
Hello professor, I’m Wanting Zeng from the class ‘Everyday Life and Social Structure’, I completed the training and also enrolled in the dashboard, please check it, thank you! Wantiin (talk) 07:35, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, I am Jang Seoyoon from the Everyday Life and Social Structure. I just completed the training Wikipedia and participated the dash board. Plesase check it. Seoyoon J (talk) 09:58, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, I’m TIAN XIAOYU from the class ‘Everyday Life and Social Structure’, I completed the training and also enrolled in the dashboard, please check it, thank you. Sephyy (talk) 10:02, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello Professor, I am ZHANGMINGSHUO from Collective Intelligence in Practice class, I have finished the extra editing of "Qingcheng Park". Please check it, thank you.Qingcheng Park：修订历史 - Wikipedia Shuo1103 (talk) 10:02, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, I am Gaoxiaoxia from the Everyday Life and Social Structure. I just completed the training Wikipedia and participated the dash board. Plesase check it. Thank you. Babaibiaobin (talk) 10:19, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, Professor. I'm a student of "Collective Intelligence in Practice" and "Introduction to Information Sociology" course, HUANGQIHAO . I'm not up to date with the course additions, but I've finished the week2 video study Training
And I finished editing my personal homepage.User:Hkiho - WikipediaPlease check it out. Hkiho (talk) 10:45, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
@WANGYIFAN2024 Yes, but you need to tell me which class you want this project to be assigned to as you are taking two of my classes. Remember that you will need to translate more than one article for each class; see syllabus for details. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:49, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello Professer!I'm a student of'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.I have completed Deadline 1.Please check it.Thank you. ZixuanHE (talk) 05:43, 14 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, Professor. I'm a student of "Collective Intelligence in Practice" and "Introduction to Information Sociology" course, ZHANGMINGSHUO . I'm not up to date with the course additions, but I've finished the week2 video study TrainingAnd I finished editing my personal homepage.User:Shuo1103 WikipediaPlease check it out Shuo1103 (talk) 11:08, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, Professor. I'm a student of "Collective Intelligence in Practice" and "Introduction to Information Sociology" course, HONGJIARAN . I'm not up to date with the course additions, but I've finished the week2 video study Traning And I finished editing my personal homepage.User：[[9]] WikipediaPlease check it out Redyeoni (talk) 11:35, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor.
1. I have added the translation task to the dashboard. Check, please
2. I finished editing outside the sandbox. References and hyperlinks added. Check, please. Lihaochang678 (talk) 13:58, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor. I am a student in this class (Everyday Life and Social Structure)。I have joined the dashboard system. and Completed training tasks. Ask the professor to check. YZY2233 (talk) 14:16, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, professor. I'm LI LINLIN. I'm taking classes of 'Understanding Wikipedia' 、'Introduction to Information Sociology'and 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. I have completed deadline 1.
I have completed the [Basic, Special topics, how to refreshers, and some exercises] in the 'Student training module'. Here is the link.
I have entered in our courses 'Understanding Wikipedia' and 'Everyday Life and Social Structure '.
Dear professor, we have selected our topic ：12 May I ask if we can translation for these two articles in to Chinese? Thank you. Hhhlx (talk) 06:11, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
@Hhhlx The topics are very good, but first, you need to tell me which class you want them assigned to (as you are taking two of my classes), and second, remember that a group needs to translate one article to English. Check the online syllabus for details. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:03, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
Dear professor, we would like to assign these two articles to the assignment for the course "Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia".The article translated from English to Chinese is: 1. The article translated from Chinese to English is: 2. Thank you. Hhhlx (talk) 07:27, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
Hi, professor. I’m nakyoung your classs student. The class name is Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed training for student and enrolled in your dashboard system. Please check. njkcs478. 218.235.241.134 (talk) 03:17, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
Dear Kim nakyoung. You need to complete this assignment while logged in. Edits made without logging in cannot be tracked and are not counted for our course. Please try to sign your post here again while logged in. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:38, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
@유신예 and @Muqing112233 While the topics are good and , please remember that as stated in our syllabus, a group of two will need to write or translate one article in English. You have chosen one article to tranbslat eto Korean, and one to Chinese. The second one can be considered for extra credit, but you need to chose a topic to add to English Wikipedia for half of your main project. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:26, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
@Sephyy The topic is approved. But you need to complete two translations to complete the project, so you need to chose one more topic. Also, you need to tell me which of my two classes you are taking you want to assign this article to. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:16, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, Professor. In my Everyday Life and Social Structure class, I want to translate these two Wikipedia articles：
Deadline2(Week3) - Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU
Hello, professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, a student of Sociology of Everyday Life. I plan to complete the wiki online assignment alone. The article I chose is this. Please check whether it matches the course theme. And can I edit it. Looking forward to your reply, thank you. Csiiiyu (talk) 10:39, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
@Csiiiyu This is a good topic and it is approved. But you will need to chose and complete one more translation to complete this project (see syllabus for details). Also, please let me know what language you want to translate your articles to. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:23, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
@Leeyj0401 Population growth is approved but I am afraid the other topic has already been reserved by another student and you will need to choose another topic.
Got it professor. (Establish an independent brand company) This is what I made and it doesn’t show up. I made another one and added the quote. Check, please. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 02:50, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
@Hanyuanyuan613: I see. Good. However, I have removed the 'social influence' part as it was written in a tone that is too similar to marketing/advertising and not neutral/encyclopedic (see WP:NPOV); it was also sourced to a blog and blogs are not good sources. But you still get full credit for trying - try to be more neutral in your writing in the future, however. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:21, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, Professor.
I am a student of Collective Intelligence course.
I have enrolled in our course,and also completed the training.
Please check it. Thank you Sephyy (talk) 19:25, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
A related discussion is ongoing about your students' undocumented/unauthorized use of machine-generated content to participate in Chinese Wikipedia editing and discussion. I hope you can understand this discussion and provide your feedback via GPT or machine translator, if not please ask your questions. YFdyh000 (talk) 20:11, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor. I'm Seoyoon Jang from Everyday Life and Social Structure. I just selected the article Korean rock. This article deals with the origin and development of Korean rock. It doesn't translated into Korean yet, so if you allow me, I will do my best. Seoyoon J (talk) 03:04, 17 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello Professer!I'm a student of'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.I have completed Deadline 1.Please check it.Thank you. SU YIQI (talk) 11:52, 17 March 2024 (UTC)
The word deflagration is technically correct but is not often used in English. Try to locate a similar article on English Wikipedia and see how it is titled. Look at Category:Gas explosions in China for example.
Hello, professor. Can I choose yellow journalism as my target? I want to translate it into Korean. Is it possible?
Please understand that the submission has been delayed because it was registered in LMS after going through the course increase period. Hayoung1 (talk) 15:21, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor. I'm sorry that I didn't give you the feedback on the task of deadline 1 until today because the administration department only approved my application for the increase of staff in the course this week. I am a student of Collective Intelligence course. I have enrolled in our course,and also completed the training. Please check it. Thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 13:52, 17 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor. I'm a student of 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. I completed 'Deadline1', so please check it! I'm sorry for late. Thank you. Jeongha1 (talk) 04:40, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
@Yangpeifu Very good. But remember that 10 wiki edits a week have to done on article(s) different from your main project, so you will have to edit articles other than on Wang Baiyuan to get points for that assignment. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:16, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
Good evening , professor. I am a student of 'Collective Intelligence course' and ‘Everyday Life and Social Structure’.I have completed over ten edits on Wikipedia. Please check it. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 11:48, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello Professor, I am ZHANG QI and I am a student of 'Collective Intelligence course' and ‘Everyday Life and Social Structure’. My teammate is HUANGYANHAN. We've decided that the theme for this term is HANGZHOU DAILY and FILM CENSORSHIP. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 12:15, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, I am a student taking the course 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. In this assignment, I will be working alone and I have been approved to work on the Korean translation of the articles Overexploitation and Lookism. Also, I have written these topics in a spreadsheet today. Finally, I also uploaded these two articles to my dashboard, please check it out! Chaekyo (talk) 13:59, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
Thank you professor for your recommendation! Then I chose Sailor tattoos and Social psychology for translation YZY2233 (talk) 07:30, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
Weekly editing - CHENG SHIYI
Good evening, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
Hello, professor. We are Gao xiaoxia(2022083990)and Qiu pengyu(2022079825)from Everyday Life and Social Structure. We will finished our homework in a group. We chose "Censorship of TikTok"and"Polyethnicty".All translated from English to chinese.Is it possible? Babaibiaobin (talk) 11:08, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
Also, please talk me after class - you need to update the spreadsheet with your wiki usernames. Based on your message I do not know if "Babaibiaobin" belongs to Gao xiaoxia(2022083990) or Qiu pengyu(2022079825). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:18, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
Dear Yujin. First, please remember to log in while editing Wikipedia.
I am afraid Fashion in South Korea has already been translated to Korean and Yellow journalism has been reserved by another students just recently, so you will need to reconsidered your topics. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:54, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
Dear Lee Seung Mi. You forgot to log in. To complete the task, please log in and sign your post. Edits made without logging in are not counted for our course as they are not tied to your account. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:22, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, professor. I'm sure I logged in and carried out the deadline 1 assignment, but I think there was an error. Can you check it again? Seungmilsm (talk) 07:00, 21 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello Professor, I am HUANG YANHAN and I am a student of 'Collective Intelligence course' . My teammate is ZHANG QI. We've decided that the theme for this term is HANGZHOU DAILY and FILM CENSORSHIP. HYH031277777 (talk) 10:00, 21 March 2024 (UTC)
Dear student. You forgot to log in. To complete the task, please log in and sign your post. Edits made without logging in are not counted for our course as they are not tied to your account. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:11, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, professor.
I am taking a lecture 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.
I have completed the Korean translation task. And I registered those articles on my personal dashboard.
If you check each document's rivison history, you'll find my editing history. [11][12] — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kim younggyun (talk • contribs) 19:26, 21 March 2024 (UTC)
--Kim younggyun (talk) 19:28, 21 March 2024 (UTC)
@Kim younggyun That's a good start. Please make sure that the content you add is referenced and has sufficient blue links (hyperlinks) that point to other Wikipedia articles.
I know Professor, I will write one more movie article and add all three articles to the dashboard. Thank you Professor for your guidance. Mcx8202229 (talk) 05:37, 21 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, professor, I'm Jiyoon Lee and I'm taking a collective intelligence course. As I told you in class, I'll translate the following two articles into Korean. Please check. Thank you.
Hello, professor. I'm Gyeomgmin Hong,taking the collective intelligence course. I'll do the Wiki project alone. I want to translate [[Dune: Part2]] from English to Korean. please check it out and give me your feedback. Thank you! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hkm5420 (talk • contribs) 00:12, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, Professor. I am a student in this class (Introduction to Information Sociology) and (Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia). I attended the training, you can check it out via this link.Thank you! Donghem (talk) 05:37, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
Good evening, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses. Here's my wikivoyage edit assignmentThank you for checking. Shuo1103 (talk) 12:13, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello. Professor. My name is Kim minjun taking the Collective Intelligence class. I'll do the main Wiki project alone. I'd like to ask if it's possible for me to do it alone. Also, i selected the article about String of Pearls (Indian Ocean). I will translate that article to Korean. Please check it. I'll visit you one more time during next week's class to get confirmation on the topic. KMJ0521 (talk) 12:53, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
@등혜진 Ok. But please remember all content added to Wikipedia has to be referenced (see WP:V). I have removed some content that was unreferenced and not written in correct English. In the future, please use Grammarly or similar tools to check for errors in the content you add. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:06, 24 March 2024 (UTC)
Article translated from English to Chinese(DENGHUICHEN)
Hello, professor! I'm DENGHUICHEN,taking the Collective Intelligence in Practice course.I want to add (Abortion in Japan ) this article and translate it from English into Chinese,thank you! DENG HUICHEN (talk) 08:02, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello Professor, we are students in the course Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia. @Redyeoniand I wanted to form the same team to complete the task of translating the article assigned by the professorWe are going to translate the article Russian fashion from English to Chinese, and the article 2024年河北邯郸初中生杀人埋尸案 from Chinese to English, please check if we are feasible, look forward to your reply, if approved I will be grateful, and start the translation work as soon as possible. Hkiho (talk) 09:13, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
@WSH0927 Well done. When you add references with Chinese titles, please add English translation of the titles using the translated title parameter. PS. I am glad you found the story of Michael S. Hart interesting. His biography can be translated to Chinese for extra credit. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:29, 24 March 2024 (UTC)
Deadline3(Week4) - Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU
Hello, professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life. This week I translated "Observer Bias" in the sandbox. This is my sandbox. Please check. And I found that the second article I selected cannot seem to be edited at the same time as the first article. Should I start editing the second article after the first article is published?Looking forward to your reply, thank you. Csiiiyu (talk) 13:49, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
@Csiiiyu Your translation is a good start. You can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审
I am not sure what you mean about the problem with the second article. You can create another sandbox to work on it - talk to me during or after class if you need help with this. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:37, 24 March 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 2(Week 3) ：LIYULUN ,SHAOJIANUAN, group8(Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia)
Hello professor, we are LIYULUN, SHAOJIANUAN from the eighth group. We discussed the theme of our group with you. English translation into Chinese - Intensive animal farming. Translated from Chinese to English - 开心宝贝Happy Baby. LIYULUN (talk) 16:56, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, Professor. The article I will write is: articles about Chinese women missing from English Wikipedia . Hope you pass it. I will create an English article about the luxury lady. And I found that the Chinese Wikipedia also lacks the content about the luxury lady, I will try to edit. This is a Chinese encyclopedia about the luxury lady, you can refer to it and make suggestions. thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 13:26, 17 March 2024 (UTC)
@WSH0927 This seems like a good topic. However, remember to use reliable sources such as books, academic papers or newspapers. Baidu cannot be used as a source on Wikipedia (see "WP:BAIDU), and we cannot copy content from baidu as it would be plagiarism and copyright violation. But you can write the article based on the sources cited on Baidu, as long as you can access them and read/verify their content. Please let me know what is the name of your article in Chinese and English. "the luxury lady" is not a name that the article can be published under. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:23, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
I'm sorry, Professor. I can't find She ci in Chinese Wikipedia. I think there's too little information about her. Not suitable for project work. I picked another Chinese woman who was interested: Tian Xiwei. This is the Chinese Wikipedia about her：田曦薇Can I create an article with Tian Xiwei as the title? WSH0927 (talk) 06:07, 21 March 2024 (UTC)
@WSH0927 It is possible Shi Ci or your first suggestion (奢香夫人（约1361年—1396年）) would be fine - you can start by creating an article about her (them) on Chinese Wikipedia for extra credit, then translate it to English. With regards to Tian Xiwei, that article is very short, so while you can translate it to English, it would not be enough for a full project (but it is again totally fine to do it for extra points). Check our syllabus for word counts. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:18, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
Yes, Professor. I take your advice. Will my weekly progress be based on She Ci's Chinese Wikipedia? It is translated into English at the final stage. I would like to know what the weekly progress of my project should be in the future. WSH0927 (talk) 09:09, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
@WSH0927 For your weekly edits, all edits that are not related to your main project will count. So first we need to decide what is your main project. If you are working solo, one English article will be ok. If She Ci does not have an article on Chinese nor English Wikipedia, you can use your weekly edits to create and improve her biography in Chinese and for your main project translate it to English. Please remember that content you add to Wikipedia has to be referenced to reliable sources (academic books, papers, or newspapers) and not Baidu or social media (blogs). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:36, 24 March 2024 (UTC)
Yes, professor. I understand. I will edit the English article with the title of She Ci as the main project. And She Ci's weekly Chinese article editing. WSH0927 (talk) 01:11, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 2 (week3) Chaeyeong Lee
Hello, professor. I am Chaeyeong Lee , taking an "Everyday Life and Social" structure. I decided on the article.I chose Beer in Japan(I told you last time) and The New York Times.I would like to translate two articles into Korean. Is it possible? Chaeyeong09 (talk) 09:44, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
I'm LI LINLIN, taking classes of 'Understanding Wikipedia' and 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.
I finished the deadline3: add an inline reference, both of the two classes, and I also use the User:Headbomb/unreliable after I add the references to make sure they are feasible. You can check here and here.
there is unnecessary underlinking, for example <u>had been bullying the victim at school</u>. It should be removed.
You will also need to add more blue links to other Wikipedia articles. If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link
the incident was covered by international media, including English. Please add some references in English. I recommend sources like CNN, Washington Post, The Guardian, BBC
for your existing references, add translated title (in English, do not replace to existing Chinese title - use the translated title parameter. Ask me in class if you need help). Add other missing medadata (date, names of authors) and fix publisher from url to company name (ex. not www.nbd.com.cn but National Business Daily).
Can you check CORRUPTION IN RUSSIA or INTERNET CENSORSHIP IN THE UNITED STATES is available topic instead of ONLINE HATE SPEECH? Njkcs478 (talk) 02:23, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, professor. I'm Seohyun Son. I am a student taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I have completed the wiki training course and dashboard assignment, so please check it. https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students Seohyun S (talk) 02:30, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello Professor, I am taking every day Life and Social Structure class. I chose to translate Film Sensibility in South_Korea into Korean for my 3rd week assignment. I will also upload the translation assignment soon. Please check.
Dear student. Please remember to sign your wiki messages properly. That topic is already reserved for another student and you will need to choose a different one. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:51, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
Weekly editing -HUANGQIHAO
Hello Professor, I have completed ten edits per week. Please check it. If there is anything I did not do well, please remind me and I will correct it immediately. Thank you! Hkiho (talk) 11:14, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
@Hkiho Good start. Unfortunately your edits were removed from Wikipedia because they were not referenced. Please remember to add only referenced content to Wikipedia - see WP:V . You can restore your edit if you can back it up with reliable sources. Baidu is not allowed as a reference on Wikipedia. See WP:BAIDUPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:32, 24 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello Professor, we are students in the course Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia.
@CHENG SHIYI and I wanted to form the same team to complete the task of translating the article assigned by the professor.We've already given feedback to the professor in class today that we plan to translate the article "中国史前文化" into English and then translate the article "Organic food culture" into Chinese.
Please check and let us know if this is feasible, thank you.
@Zhongxxin This is good. However, 中国史前文化 is missing many references. Remember that only referenced content can be translated. Fortunately, you can also rely on French fr:Préhistoire de la ChineYo which is good quality and has many references. You can add content from French to Chinese for extra credit, then translate Chinese to English. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:56, 24 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor. I'm Changyeop Jung, taking the collective intelligence course. I'll do the Wiki project alone. I selected the article about Yang Hee-eun. Please check it. Thank you! Ckdduq0919 (talk) 05:57, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, professor, I have joined the dashboard system. And completed the training task. Please ask the professor to check it. thank you! DENG HUICHEN (talk) 05:42, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, I am taking life and social structure classes every day. I decided again to translate Information overload into Korean for my week 3 assignment. I will also upload the translation assignment soon. Please check.
@Minis707 Good choice, topic approved, but remember you need to chose one more topic to translate. Also, please talk to me after class as I cannot find Minis707 in our spreadsheet; there are two students with your name 김민지 but they reported two different Wikipedia usernames to me. Please let me know if one of them is yours (but wrong) or if you are a third 김민지 taking my class this year. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:36, 26 March 2024 (UTC)
Project operation：WU SHUHAN
Excuse me, Professor. .About my project assignment: Wikidata query: articles about Chinese women missing from English Wikipedia . As we discussed before, I will create an English Wikipedia with the title She Ci. But I suddenly discovered that her article already existed under another name: She Xiang. Although it has very little content. And here is her Chinese Wikipedia: She Xiang. Can I continue with my original project topic, or can I replace another Chinese woman to create the article? Please tell me your suggestion. WSH0927 (talk) 04:54, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello! I'm taking Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia. I deleted dead link and added new Citation. Please check it Thank you! Ckdduq0919 (talk) 09:13, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello! Professor. I am YUE ZIYI, a student majoring in sociology of daily life. This week I translated Sailor tattoos and Social psychology (sociology) in the sandbox. Here's mine User:YZY2233/沙盒2 and User:YZY2233/沙盒 , Please check. YZY2233 (talk) 10:48, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, professor. I'm ZHANG QI, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence in Practice. This week I translated "Hangzhou Daily" in the sandbox. This is my sandbox. Please check it.
I have a question, I have two of your classes with a total of four articles. Does this mean that I have to start preparing four articles at the same time, or can I finish one article before editing the next one. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 13:39, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
@ZHANGQI1066 It is totally fine to finish one before starting on another.
Your draft is quite good. A few sentences need clarification, for example "n March 1992, the folio 4-page "West Lake Weekend" (later expanded to 8 color printing)" is missing a verb. I recommend using a service like Grammarly to double check your prose.
Some content in your draft needs references, for example the paragraph "The Hangzhou Daily now has 8 pages on Mondays, 20 pages on Tuesdays and Wednesdays, 24 pages on Thursdays and Fridays, and 4 pages on Saturdays, Sundays and holidays. The content of the newspaper covers important news, Hangzhou news, district and county (city) news, Zhejiang news, China and international news, economic news, culture and sports news and supplements." If the Chinese version is also missing a reference, you can add it there as well for extra credit.
Yes, Chongqing history is an article I want to translate from Chinese to English. Chinese Influence on Japanese culture is an Article I Want to Translate from English to Chinese.These two articles are my own group of articles for the class on 'Everyday Life and Social Structure’ ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 05:24, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
Deadline2(제3주) _손서현
@Seohyun S Good choice, topic approved, but remember you need to chose one more topic to translate. How about Vietnam War protest music?
I see, professor. I will translate and upload 'South Korean protest music' and 'Vietnam War protest music'. Thank you.
@Bai0926 Your edits look quite good, but some further fixes are needed.
In here, one of the paragraphs you added has no reference - this needs to be fixed - see Wikipedia:Verifiability.
In Pegasus 2, there is no need to add the same review to the lead and the body. First, add to the body, then summarize the content in the lead shortly. Baidu is also not an acceptable source (see WP:BAIDU). Some content is also unreferenced; I've removed some empty headings as Wikipedia does not allow empty section headings.
Dear professor, I am Zhang Zehua from the Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia course. These are the ten Wikipedia edits I completed this week Wu Sha, please check them out, thank you！ ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 01:26, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello Professor, my friend Tian Xiaoyu and I want to complete the translation work in a team. Tian Xiaoyu registered the translation work last week as a personal project and now wants to cancel the individual project to enter the team work.
Here are the translation topics we have chosen:
Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia："copyfaud" This article was translated from English to Chinese."奇虎360相关争议"This article was translated from Chinese into English.
Everyday Life and Social Structure ："Censorship of TikTok "This article was translated from English to Chinese."豫章书院修身教育专修学校"This article was translated from Chinese into English.
Please help us check whether it is feasible, thank you!
@WYRRRR @Sephyy I see. Your friend Tian Xiaoyu previously told me they want to work individually and they have chosen articles they want to translate for Everyday Life (Deft (gamer) to zh 西遊記大結局之仙履奇緣 to en (Cinderella Wonders of the Great Finale)). Is this no longer correct?
They also have chosen other topics for the other class (Collective intelligence): Definitions of knowledge to zh and 对百度的争议 to en (Controversy over Baidu).
For now, I'll approve most other topics you mention for you. Please let me know in class which topics you want to keep and if you are working together or individually.
Censorship of TikTok is already reserved for another student, unfortunately, so you'll need to chose another topic. Translation of 豫章书院修身教育专修学校#立案与审判 to English is approved. Translation of copyfraud to zh is approved. 奇虎360相关争议 to en (Qihoo 360 controversy is approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:26, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, I would like to cancel my personal translation project and form a team with my friend WANG YUERONG to complete the translation task.
hello, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
Chinese to English中国近代史 English to Chinese Anak Krakatoa
I would appreciate it if you could check out these two articles and give me some feedback.I'll finish it myself.
Thank you! Shuo1103 (talk) 08:58, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
@Shuo1103 According to the spreadsheet you signed, you are taking Collective Intelligence and Everday Life courses, not Introduction. Anak Krakatoa can be translated to Chinese. zh:中国近代史 can be translated to English, but remember that only referenced part can be translated (see WP:V). Please let me know which course you want to assign those projects to (Everyday Life or Collective Intelligence?) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:22, 24 March 2024 (UTC)
I'm sorry, professor. I may have signed the wrong form. I'm a student of Introductory Course in Collective Intelligence and Sociology of Informationclasses. I don't have daily life. This class is causing trouble for the professor. Shuo1103 (talk) 05:10, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, professor. I edited the parts in the list you sent that I liked but were not translated properly. This is a famous Korean idol's song. However, I have a question. I would like to attach their album photos, but is that impossible even if it is for public use?
Hello professor, this is the translation assignment of Han Yuanyuan and Li Haochang. We have completed 50% of the translation assignment. Please ask the professor to check 1 and 2. If there are any shortcomings, please give your suggestions and we will seriously revise it. Thank you, Professor, for your hard work. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 12:08, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
@Hanyuanyuan613 This is a very good start. Please use Grammarly or similar service to check for the prose of your article in English. Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). You will also need to add more blue links to other Wikipedia articles. If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link
Hello professor, I edit two article. I have additionally translated the shortcomings in the documents here from English to Korean. And added new contents at here. Please check. Thanks! Cookinu (talk) 04:57, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, professor. I want to do this topic. This is because although it is widespread in Korea, I have never really looked into it in detail. Please check it.
Hello, professor. I'm Jiyoon Lee, taking Collective Intelligence. I deleted the dead external link for this article and added a reference.T-araJiyoon Leee (talk) 01:22, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
I noticed your edit for Casablanca film was reverted with an editor citing the WP:UNDUE policy. If you disagree, you can try to explain why your content is due (relevant) by making a comment on the talk page.
Here, you should make sure there is a reference for the final sentence(s). Right now your reference is in the middle of the paragraph, creating an impression the second half has no reference. In fact, those sentences were quickly removed as unreferenced - see here. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:46, 1 April 2024 (UTC)
Hello Professor, I would like to select the article "When China rules the World" and translate it from English to Chinese. The second article is "South Korean protest music" translated into Chinese. ChenGui (talk) 13:40, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, professor. I'm HUANG YANHAN, the student of Collective Intelligence in Practice. This week I translated "Film censorship" in the sandbox. This is my sandbox. Please check it. HYH031277777 (talk) 19:13, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
@Babaibiaobin I see. The link to Tatar wingceltis can be red and there is no need to remove it - see WP:RED. The link to Vietnamese painting seems more relevant than to Vietnamese calligraphy, although the latter is an important concept - but it (Vietnamese calligraphy) is linked from the article. Red links are reminders to readers and editors that those topics need to be written about.
I have corrected the article. Good job identifying that 楊凝式 has a Chinese Wikipedia article! Now it is linked from English. Perhaps you'd like to translate his article to English for extra credit? (Athough the zh wiki article, sadly, does not seem to be well referenced) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:03, 1 April 2024 (UTC)
@Hkm5420 I see. It looks ok for our class, but another editor disagreed and removed it here. I suggest you start a discussion on the talk page of that article and ask them for more details on why your edit was removed, Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:08, 1 April 2024 (UTC)
@Muqing112233 Good. But some of the content you added was removed - please see the edit history here. If you think it should be restored, please start a discussion on its talk page and notify the editor who removed that you wish to discuss it using the Wikipedia:ECHO feature.
Hello Professor, I'm Minji Kim, I'm taking life and social structure classes every day. I've completed the translation task, so please check it. Thank you.
Deadline4(Week5) - Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU
Good evening, professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.
I've done more than 50% of the translation editing of a single article. It's here.
And I posted a blog about my thoughts after reading Goffman's book "The Presentation of Self in Everyday Life". Please check it out and hopefully I can get some extra points.
@Csiiiyu Good job. To make the map useful, we should have at least one place with GPS coordinates in the article that would display on the map.
Regarding your translation to Chinese, it seems well formatted. I recommend that you ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审
@WYRRRR Your Chinese translation is a good start. Try to work on references next. When you are near finished, I recommend that you ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审
Hi professor, I'm a student in your class "Everyday Life and Social Structure". I edited and added references in here. please check. I used a citation template and make my reference have a title, author, publisher, date of publication and translated title. Chaekyo (talk) 06:15, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
Hi professor, I’m a student in your class “Everyday Life and Social Structure”. I uploaded my first licenced(free) image to wikimedia commons. This is my work. I’m not sure that if I do this correctly. I need your feedback. Thanks. Kimseoeun2023079825 (talk) 06:49, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello Professor, I am a student of Collective Intelligence. I have the main project topics tracked to my dashboard and have started working in the sandbox. I've also finished adding citations this week. You can check it. thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 10:42, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
@WSH0927 Good job, but some fixes are needed. Please check if your links work - for example, your reference 34 here seems to be broken (404). In addition, if the original reference has a Chinese title, you should include in the title= field, and add the English translation to the translated title= field. If you do not know how to do it, ask me in class or during office hours and I'll show you. Oh, and here you added just Chinese title but not the English translation. Both should be used. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:58, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
Good evening, Professor. For the history part of Xinxiang, I added the book information related to the history of Xinxiang. Please check it. Thank you！AYAO32269 (talk) 13:28, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
HI, Professor.I am a student in the Introduction to Collective Intelligence Practices and the Sociology of Information course.I've finished this week's homework. Please check it out.
Hi professor, I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice,Everyday Life and Social Structure, and Introduction to Information Sociology courses. I edited and added references in here. please check. I used a citation template and make my reference have a title, author, publisher, date of publication and translated title.Rachel.zrq (talk) Rachel.zrq (talk) 11:46, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
HI, Professor.I am a student in the Introduction to Collective Intelligence Practices and the Sociology of Information course.I've finished this week's homework. Please check it .Thank you. WYRRRR (talk) 13:16, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
@Wsw1357 That's a good start but the adding a reference activity needs to be completed on a live (public) page, not in your sandbox. Please try to add a reference to an unreferenced content in a real article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:11, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 4 (Week 5) - Everyday Life and Social Sturcture - Ha young Kwon
Hello, professor. I'm Kwon Ha-young, taking a course on Everyday Life and Social Structure. I've completed 50% of the translation assignment. Please check it. If there is anything lacking, please let me know. Thank you. Hayoung1 (talk) 15:03, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, Professor, I have already begun, my translation work has been translated into, Chinese translation has not been fully completed, please checkShuo1103 (talk) 15:11, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
@Shuo1103 It is a good start. But your sandbox is on English Wikipedia. You should copy it to Chinese Wikipedia - the code on English is not the same as on Chinese one. The sooner you start working in Chinese Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:28, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
Weekly wiki edits-ZHONG XIN
Hello Professor, I have completed more than twenty edits to the English Wikipedia this week (Week 4) (a total of more than eighty edits to the Wikipedia this month:12, as well as five blog post writings). please check.
Hello professor. I am Chaeyeong Lee, taking a course on Everyday Life and Social Structure.
I chose Beer in Japan and The Economist. Please check document allocation. Chaeyeong09 (talk) 02:27, 1 April 2024 (UTC)
Hello, professor. I'm chaeyeong Lee, taking an "Everyday Life and Social" structure. Additional explanation along with citation has been added to the mascot section.
Doosan Bears Please check if it has been completed properly. Chaeyeong09 (talk) 03:47, 1 April 2024 (UTC)
@Chaeyeong09 Good. There is one error to correct: the title of the reference should be in the original language (here, Korean). The English translation title should be moved to the translated title parameter. If you don't know how to do it, please ask me during or after class and I'll show you how to do it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:32, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
Deadline2(제3주) _손서현
Deadline 2, I submit the translation task. I wrote the translations of two articles at once. Please check. :)
@Seohyun S This is a good start. However, to avoid code errors, each of your articles should be in a separate sandbox. Please move one of them to a new sandbox. If you do not know how to do it, ask me during or after class.
Hello. I'm Gyeongmin Hong, taking Collective intellignece. I act for extra credit.
I found a Wikipedia article that should be deleted. I think that article have wrong information. Thus, I modify name of content. It was Sea of Japan after i fixed Donghae.(East sea) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hkm5420 (talk • contribs) 04:48, 1 April 2024 (UTC)
I also note that you have been adding unreferenced content to Wikipedia despite receiving numerous notifications not do so on your talk page, including one from me. Please note that only referenced content can be added to Wikipedia, per Wikipedia:Verifiability.
Unreferenced content is not allowed, and it does not count for extra credit or weekly tasks. If you keep adding unreferenced content, your account may be blocked from Wikipedia, making it difficult for you to complete tasks for our class. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:38, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
@KMJ0521 The outlines look good. If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Discord server Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:45, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
Deadline4(Week5) Kwon Jaeeun
Hello professor, I summarized the outline of promotion of anorexia, one of the two articles I translate, and the paragraphs by section. I couldn't do all of them, but I translated about 50% of the articles. There is [| my sandbox] Cookinu (talk) 13:42, 1 April 2024 (UTC)
Hello. Professor. I am Hong Gyeongmin, taking Collective intelligence class.
I've translated about 50% of the article. Here is the link. Please check it.
Good evening Professor.I am taking Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia class. Here's my sandbox edit, please check it, thankｙｏｕ．AYAO32269 (talk) 09:55, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
@Zhuo1221 This is a very good start. Please use Grammarly or similar service to check for the prose of your article in English. Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). You will also need to add more blue links to other Wikipedia articles. If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage linkPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:50, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
Hi professor. I chose the theme 'Cannabis in Japan.' https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cannabis_in_Japan I would like to translate into Korean and add to this document about Japan's cannabis which is illegal in Korea. And I'm going to do my work alone. Is it possible?
Hello Professor, I am taking life and social structure classes every day. I decided again to translate Overexploitation into Korean for my Week 3 assignment. I will upload the translation assignment soon as well. Please check.
I'm sorry for the mistake in the link. I have added these references as follows. 1,2,3,4,5. If there is any problem, please let me know. Thank you very much！TMXX0818 (talk) 00:41, 3 April 2024 (UTC)
@TMXX0818 Good, very good - using academic references is commendable. But please fix the URLs in your first reference. It should link to the specific article. Your first url link however goes to a general Google query. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:33, 4 April 2024 (UTC)
Deadline4(Week5) BAILINHAN
1.I've finished my Wikipedia edits for this week, please check it
2.This is my extension for this week, I don't know if this is how it was done, check it out
@Bai0926 Well done, your edits at Moon Man look good.
However, your edits to Chinese clothing need improvement and I have undone them. In here, you changed content without providing a reference, and your style is incorrect - Wikipedia does not address the reader like this: "If we examine". "Why did you remove the mention of "Ancient Chinese literature"?
This addition was ok and you can restore it, but the reference should be at the end of a sentence, not in the middle.
This edit added several paragraphs. All but the last one appear to have no reference and the last one was referenced to Baidu. Baidu is not allowed on Wikipedia as a reference, see WP:BAIDU
In this edit, you added a reference. But I do not see how the cited source has anything to do with the information in this paragraph?
This reference is fine, but you broke the paragraph in two parts.
Here, you replaced a paragraph with another one, without a reference and with no explanation why you deleted the old paragraph.
While you added a reference in your next edit, the URL appears to be broken, taking me to a 404 error page.
In your next edit, you added some ok content, but you removed, again without explanation, some other content without providing a reason in your edit summary as to why that content was removed.
Please add only content that is referenced to Wikipedia, and if you remove content, you should clearly explain in your edit summary and/or on article's talk why something was removed (was it wrong?). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:47, 4 April 2024 (UTC)
Deadline2（week3）Wang Tao
Hello, professor. I want to select "Corruption in the United States" as the translation task and translate it into Chinese. Wangtao626 (talk) 15:56, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
Hi professer, I'm a student in your class, "Everyday of Life and Social Structure". I translated my first article "political correctness" in my sandbox here. or here. please check if I've done my work well. (i'm not sure if i did it right) Did I complete deadline 4 on time? Kimseoeun2023079825 (talk) 07:22, 3 April 2024 (UTC)
@Kimseoeun2023079825 Since you are translating to Korean, you should work on Korean Wikipedia (so your second link is good). The outlines look good. Next, add references and blue links. If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:31, 4 April 2024 (UTC)
Hello, professor. I'm ZHANG QI, a student of Sociology of Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence in Practice. I translated "Hangzhou Daily" more than 50% in the sandbox. And i proved those mistakes that you told me last week. This is my sandbox. Please check it. i have another question in 'Sociology of Everyday Life', the blog is not necessary, right? Is it only an extra point? or do I need to write more blogs? ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 07:56, 3 April 2024 (UTC)
@ZHANGQI1066 Good progress. Some of your content still needs references, ex. all content under 'New Media' section. Once you add the references, you can merge your content (copy and paste) to the public article Hangzhou Daily. There is also content in the infobox that needs to be translated (ex. 机关报、日报). Do you need help adding the interlanguage links to articles that exist on Chinese Wikipedia but do not have an English version?
Hello Professor,, I am a student in Collective Intelligence in Practice, Everyday Life and Social Structure,Introduction to Information Sociology. I sorry for the late completion of my weekly editing project for March. Here's the editing page in Chinese and English, you can check it at here. Thanks. Rachel.zrq (talk) Rachel.zrq (talk) 06:36, 4 April 2024 (UTC)
Regarding your edits to English article here, please move your references from headings to the end of relevant paragraph. The headings should be in English, not Chinese. You can provide the translation and Chinese characters in the text body.
Hi Professor. I am taking Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia class. Here's my sandbox edit, and I'll continue to refine the content and add more references. Please check it, thank you Rachel.zrq (talk) 16:17, 4 April 2024 (UTC)
@Rachel.zrq Well done. Refer to my previous comment about how to get additional feedback for your work in Chinese. Once you get that feedback, and have translated all of the article, you can publish it (move it from draft to the mainspace). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:52, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
@Kim1357 This looks good, but remember that all content we add to Wikipedia needs a reference. If the original content you translate is missing one, you need to verify that it is correct and add a reference.
Hi Professor, I am a student in both Collective Intelligence in Practice, Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed the editing of 20 Chinese Wikipedia articles.please check itZHANGQI1066 (talk) 05:32, 4 April 2024 (UTC)
Hello. Professor. I am Lee jiyoon, taking Collective intelligence class. I've translated about 50% of the article. Here is the link. User:Jiyoon Leee/sandbox By the way, one of the footnotes says it can only be seen in the English text, do you know why?Please check it. Jiyoon Leee (talk) 03:50, 4 April 2024 (UTC)
@Jiyoon Leee The most important thing to do is to move (copy) your draft from English Wikipedia to Korean Wikipedia, since right now it is in the wrong place. The code on English is not the same as on Korean. This is likely relevant to your footnote error - it needs to be fixed after your project is on the correct Wikipedia. The sooner you start working in Korean Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:41, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
Hello, professor. I am taking a lecture 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. I have completed the Wikipedia Deadline 3. Please check my editing history through this link. I tried to comply with the citation rules as well.--Kim younggyun (talk) 14:01, 4 April 2024 (UTC)
@Kim younggyun Good. You should use the translated title parameter to split the English translation of the title from the Korean original. Ask me in class or during office hours for help if you don't know how to do it and I'll show you. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:47, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
I was going to ask you in person, but I was late to check. I use |trans-title= |, |language= |. I'd like to know if I applied it well.--Kim younggyun (talk) 06:22, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
@Muqing112233 Good, but please note some issues were raised at the talk. In particular, your edit to the deletion discussion had corrupted code, likely to due to the use of an aggressive translation script which you should be careful with.
Hello, professor. I'm HUANG YANHAN, the student of Collective Intelligence in Practice. This week I translated "Film censorship" in the sandbox. This is my sandbox. Please check it. HYH031277777 (talk) 12:55, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
Your translations look good and are close to being finished, very good. For articles that exist on English but not Korean Wikipedia, please use ko:틀:임시링크; if it is too hard please ask me in class or during office hours and I'll show you how to use it.
2.I translated 50% of Generation MZ's articles in the sandbox.Please confirm if the task I completed is correct, Thanks for your patience. 유신예 (talk) 16:30, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
@유신예 Your edits look good but there are some fixes needed. If you review your edits here, you will see that one of your additions near the end is not referenced. Your book references need page ranges (which pages contain the information that is being referenced)? And the academic reference (with DOI 10.1017/S0261143001001271) was not formatted well. Talk to me in class or during office hours and I'll show you how to quickly fix it.
Your Chinese translation looks good. Remember that all content needs to be referenced or otherwise it may be deleted once you publish it outside your sandbox. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:56, 6 April 2024 (UTC)
Weekly wiki edits - WANG YIHUA
Hello professor,I am a student in Collective Intelligence in Practice.
@왕예화 Your Chinese translation looks good. Remember that all content needs to be referenced or otherwise it may be deleted once you publish it outside your sandbox. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:57, 6 April 2024 (UTC)
As a swing-by comment, the Chinese translation looks good! Please make sure it is referenced. I find it helpful to use the source editor and copy every "ref" tag. You should use other templates in the original article, such as "see also". Cheers, --The Lonely Pather (talk) 16:14, 6 April 2024 (UTC)
Hello, this is my educational assignment. So far, I have only roughly translated it. I will add the references later and further improve it. thanks 왕예화 (talk) 09:17, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
Deadline2(Week3) ——FAN XINRU
Hello,professor, I am a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia.I'd like to expand this article, please check it out, thank you.The link is here. Jzhdylb (talk) 01:15, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
@Jzhdylb That article is already lengthy. I would recommend choosing a different topic. However, if you have located academic sources, you could use them to improve this article. Talk to me in class or during office hours if you would still like to edit this topic (and show me what sources you would like to use). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:30, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
Thank you, Professor. I have decided to change the topic. I would like to create an article with the theme of "Popular Mobile Software in China". Please review it. Thank you. Jzhdylb (talk) 14:57, 26 March 2024 (UTC)
@Jzhdylb I am afraid this topic can be difficult. Instead, how about translating an article (or articles, if they are short) from Chinese to English about popular Chinese software that does not have English article yet? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:12, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello dear professor. Regarding your proposal, I have carefully considered it but have not found any relevant articles on the topic in Wikipedia, so I am unable to complete the translation task for this topic article. If the difficulty of this question is relatively high, I would like to replace it with a new one, such as "Chinese style element trend in China". I feel confident that I can complete its creation task. I hope you can help me with the review. Thank you very much. Jzhdylb (talk) 05:16, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
@Jzhdylb I appreciate your desire to create new topics, but we have to ensure they are correctly named. What is Chinese style element trend in China? Is this about architecture? Fashion? Software? I strongly encourage you to translate content rather than write it from scratch. There are many Chinese Wikipedia articles missing in English. If you want to work on a specific area (software, etc.) but have trouble finding related articles, come talk to me during office hours and we will look for something together. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:33, 1 April 2024 (UTC)
Thank you for your suggestion! I think your suggestion is correct. I am planning to change the theme and would like to expand this article or translate this article . I hope you can give me some advice, thank you very much. Jzhdylb (talk) 15:05, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
Hello, professor. I'm LI LINLIN,taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' and
'Understanding Wikipedia'.
I completed the first translated articles for each of the two classes, from English to Chinese, and added them to my Chinese sandbox. You can check it here.
@Leeinm This is a good start, but you should split your translations into two separate sandboxes, one for each article. Ask me in class or during office hours if you are unsure how to do this.
@TMXX0818 Good progress. Please use a tool like Grammarly to check your prose. A lot of the content is hard to understand due to poor translation quality.
Some references in the translated article will need to be replaced with betters sources. For example, reference 71 is to a fan-wiki (Fandom (website)) and cannot be accepted. YouTube is also not accepted as a source unless we are linking to reporting by major news stations. , so references 31, 32, 55 and 60 will likely need replacing as well.
Due to poor referencing, I expect we may have to drop some parts of the content you translated (no worry, you will still get full credit from your work). I'll ping an experienced volunteer interested in Chinese topic who may be able to provide more feedback on some sources used and other issues: User:TheLonelyPatherPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here12:09, 6 April 2024 (UTC)
How much does this article and Mass media in Taiwan overlap? It is possible that some of this can be added into "Mass media in Taiwan", instead of being a stand-alone article.
Poor sourcing
if we writing about "Controversies related to Taiwanese media", we should seek sources (preferably academic sources) that systematically examine the controversies regarding Taiwanese media. Right now, a large proportion of this article stops at the phenomenal part of the subject and becomes an indiscriminate collection of information-something that Wikipedia is not (see WP:INDISCRIMINATE). We should also be avoiding WP:original research.
Let me be a bit more clear about this point: if we want to talk about how "Business purpose" is a part of the "Controversies related to Taiwanese media", we should seek sources that systematically analyses the topic, such as the prevalence of commercialisation in the news industry of Taiwan. It is not enough to list a bunch of examples (news reports that are of very bad quality) as "evidence" and claim that commercialisation is a problem of Taiwanese media. That constitutes original research.
Unfortunately this is the case of the "Business purpose" section (and many similar sections), where we have a 15-ref-long WP:overcitation, all of them are news of poor quality that the original author of the Chinese Wikipedia page "uses" to "prove" their point of "Business purpose". None of them are WP:reliable by content: they prove the point by their existence, rather than their content, which is a sign of original research.
On the other hand, the original article has some good sources. Maybe listing them could demonstrate what I mean by "sources that systematically analyses the topic".
Lin, Zhaozhen. "當前台灣近似媒體觀察組織的幾個盲點" [Several blind spots in Taiwan’s current similar media observation organizations]. 新聞學研究. 60: 171–176.
Chen, Zongyi (2006-09-01). "新台灣新聞週刊 - 假自由真侵擾 新聞公害猖獗" [False freedom is really intrusive, and news pollution is rampant]. web.archive.org. Retrieved 2024-04-03.
Wu, Tingwei (2017-08-28). "從《獨家腥聞》看台灣主流媒體：一場「即時新聞」與「爆料文化」的腥風血雨 - The News Lens 關鍵評論網" [Looking at Taiwan's mainstream media from "Exclusive News": A bloody storm of "instant news" and "explosive culture"]. web.archive.org. Retrieved 2024-04-03.
The original article has bad formatting. Specifically, it uses a lot of "note" templates, which I think is used to support blatant original research in the original article. They need to be discarded.
I am sorry for possibly being critical and sounding harsh, but these are my conclusion and my suggestions for potential improvement. In the future, please make sure the original article is good enough to translate. I will update User:TheLonelyPather/Essays/Guide for a translator accordingly–you might find it useful too.
Let us see how many these "good" sources we can obtain. If we have enough, then this topic merits a stand-alone article. Regarding the translation, I am afraid that the poor quality of the original article is detrimental to everything that follows. If this is to be published, a lot of extra work is needed, and a lot of the original information needs to be discarded. The original article was tagged with "Inappropriate tone" two years ago. Cheers, --The Lonely Pather (talk) 16:01, 6 April 2024 (UTC)
@TheLonelyPather Thank you for the feedback, TLP, with which I fully agree. There are some good parts in the original article, but yes, a lot of the low quality information needs to be discarded per your analysis.@TMXX0818: It is fine if the resulting article is short; short and good is better than long and bad. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:00, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
Good evening, Professor. My article has been outlined in the sandbox. You can check it. And I wrote a blog post this week, and it's here. thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 14:08, 6 April 2024 (UTC)
@WSH0927 This is a good start. Things to keep in mind: 1) the beginning of the article (WP:LEAD) should be a summary of concepts mentioned elsewhere. Right now your lead mentions many facts not repeated (and referenced) later, such as that she had a son An Di.
You will also need to format your references with missing metadata, including translated title (keep the Chinese title but add translated title in the dedicated citation field - ask me for help if you are not sure how to do it). Other missing metadata elements include information about publisher, dates and author information.
In the 'Cultural image' section, the Chinese title needs to include, well, the Chinese title, right now it has only the English title(s).
@Choisieon Good start. But I noticed that your sandbox is on English Wikipedia. You should copy it to Korean Wikipedia - the code on English is not the same as on Korean. The sooner you start working in Korean Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:34, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
Deadline4(Week5)TIAN XIAOYU
Hello Professor, this is my translation this week，
@Sephyy Good start. Remember that your translations will need to have references for all content. I will provide more feedback on the English translation once there are references; your prose seems fine. You will also need to add more blue links (see WP:BTW).
hello professor.i'm Chen zhitong from everyday life and social structure class.i have added references for the article zhongshan pleas check it.thank you. Orange-1203 (talk) 05:00, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
@Orange-1203 Unfortunately, your edit was not correct and has been removed. You did not add a WP:REFERENCE (which should be in a footnote format - see also our video on the LMS how to do so); instead you added unnecessary Wikipedia:External links .
Your second external link, while in the right section, was accompanied by a text that is not understandable in English ("SunWen XiLu WenHua LvYou BuXingJie).
You also changed the bullet points to less common number list without providing a Help:Edit summary.
@Babaibiaobin This is a good start. You have completed the current deadlines well.
Feedback for the future: For articles that exist on Chinese but not English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link; if it is too hard please ask me in class or during office hours and I'll show you how to use it. Your reference 1 needs to be changed a to a more reliable one, as WP:BAIDU is not allowed on Wikipedia. Many other references will need to be corrected for missing metadata (author, date, title/translated title, publisher, etc.). There is some content that is unreferenced - remember that each paragraph needs to have one more references that verify its content, including at the end. Lastly, please use a service like Grammarly to double check your English prose. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:44, 6 April 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor.We have corrected the errors in the work, is this correct?Another question is, if we do the homework in groups, should we just do one sandbox, or should we both do it？ Babaibiaobin (talk) 05:44, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
@Babaibiaobin If you work in a group, one sandbox will be enough (for one article). There is no need to duplicate a sandbox.
Hello Professor Piotr K. I am a student of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I enrolled in Training/Students, Wikipedia's dashboard system course. Also, I learned courses such as 'Special Topics', 'Exercise', and 'Discussion' for additional credits, so please check. Also, I took classes after the correction period and learned about the existence of deadlines late. So I am sorry for learning too late. I will do my assignments quickly and participate more actively from now on. Thank you. Kaldwl (talk) 10:53, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
Dear professor, this week I roughly completed the translation of the first article. The next step is to adjust and polish it. Please check it out. Mcx8202229 (talk) 08:52, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
@Mcx8202229 It is a good start. But your sandbox is on English Wikipedia. You should copy it to Chinese Wikipedia - the code on English is not the same as on Chinese one. The sooner you start working in Chinese Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move and some other content like images or references may display problems.
Thank you Professor, I have translated the article to Chinese Wikipedia. This is the link https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mcx8202229/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92
Hello Professor I'm Seungmi Lee and I'm taking the Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I've completed adding inline citations. Please check. Here's the Wiki link I added citations. [14] and [15].
Seungmilsm (talk) 13:30, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
@유신예 Good, but try to use more reliable references. WP:BAIDU is not allowed on Wikipedia. YouTube is also not a good source - unless we link to official videos. There are many bad (fan-made) videos which are not reliable. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:03, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
Deadline4 (Week5): ZENG WANTING&ZHANG RUIQING
Hello professor, this is our group translating project in class Everyday Life and Social Structure, please check it, thank you! Wantiin (talk) 04:49, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
@Wantiin Your Korean translation is progressing well, all the formatting looks good. If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Discord server. After receiving feedback you can publish your translation once all content is translated. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:04, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 5(Week 6) - Everyday Life and Social Sturcture - MU QING
Good afternoon, sir. Instead of editing ten times this week, I have translated an extra article this week. This is an article I translated from English to Chinese.You can check it.
@Seohyun S This is a good start for the outline. Next you need to add references and blue links to relevant Wikipedia articles. If a topic exists in English but not Korean, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (ko:틀:임시링크)
@Minis707 This is fine for the outline, but please remember that before publication you need to add blue links (hyperlinks) and correctly formatted references, as well as importing images. If a topic exists in English but not Korean, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (ko:틀:임시링크). If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Wikipedia Discord server. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:14, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
Good afternoon, sir. Instead of editing ten times this week, I have translated an extra article this week. This is an article I translated from English to Chinese.
@LIYULUN Well done. You should proofread your article (I recommend a tool like Grammarly). Some errors may not be caught by AI - please check yourself. For example, the second paragraph talks about the TV series premiere in the future tense, but it already happened. You also need to proofread your 'evaluate' section (which should probably be renamed to 'Reception'). It reads ok until "; the structure of the novel" - there is something unclear about that sentence, missing word/verb; please check with Grammarly. Also, what is "Douqi Continent"? Douqi is not in English. Is this a Chinese concept? Does it have a Chinese Wikipedia article?
Your 'game' paragraph is missing content, it is just an unfinished sentence. If there is a related game, you should provide information - what kind of game, who published it, what are the reviews.
For your references, some are missing English translated title. Others may be missing other metadata like author name, date, publisher, etc.
@LIYULUN Regarding your translation of the Happy Baby, what is needed is to show how this article meets WP:GNG (see also Wikipedia:Notability (television). You have to show the show is important by adding information on awards it won, or showing that it received reviews from major newspapers, magazines or in academic works.
Hello professor. I am a student of Collective Intelligence in Practice.I have joined the dashboard system. and completed the training. Ask the professor to check. Kikolipu (talk) 13:41, 16 April 2024 (UTC)
@Kikolipu Better late then never. Please note that completing assignments after deadline results in reduced grade. You will need to do more extra credit edits to compensate for not completing assignments during the first half of the course. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:35, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
@JINJINYAN You should leave your future messages in your own sections, not under those started by another student. The first article linked was Korean, not English, but if you meant Gender pay gap then it is ok. Your topics are good and have been approved. Good luck Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:40, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
hello professor! I am a student of Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence.
I have been finished weekly edits.please check it and here is chinese edits. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 07:37, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
Dear professor, I have completed the preliminary translation of the Chinese-English article. Next, I will search for more information to supplement this article.This is the sandbox linkUser:Mcx8202229/sandboxMcx8202229 (talk) 09:28, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
@Mcx8202229 Good start. Please use a tool like Grammarly to go over your text for vocabulary and grammar.
What is needed is to show how this article meets WP:GNG (see also Wikipedia:Notability (television). You have to show the show is important by adding information on awards it won, or showing that it received reviews from major newspapers, magazines or in academic works. You have a good start under "evaluate" section (which needs to be renamed to Reception), but you will need more. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:45, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 4 (Week 7)：ZHANG ZEHUA
Dear professor
I am a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia
@ZHANG0822ZH Well done. Double check the English prose added with a tool like Grammarly - there are small errors (ex. in the sentence " You must not eat anything in your mouth, or say anything unrelated to the salute while bowing" or "*Number of seats The seating order is). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:54, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
Translation of the article—ZHONG XIN
Hello Professor, I have completed 80% of my Chinese to English article translation assignment (中国史前文化). In addition,based on your suggestion,I have made a lot of additions to the original Chinese text of this article as well as the references, and I would appreciate if I could get some extra points.
@Zhongxxin Your work is progressing very well. Here are some comments:
Please note that the title should be "Prehistory of China" not "Prehistory in China"
If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. For example, the Donggutuo site should be linked like this: Donggutuo site [zh]
Hello, Professor. I am a student in the course " Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence ". My student number is 2023025414. the 3.29 assignment you assigned has both mp4 and pdf options for submission. I have prepared the manuscript format as well. In your lesson plan, there is a note that Form B can also be submitted for assignments. I sent the recorded video. I would like to ask what the problem is? Because the marks are really worrying. Wsw1357 (talk) 14:23, 20 April 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, this is my editor of the week and a dozen additional edits.I'd appreciate it if I could get your confirmation. 유신예 (talk) 17:59, 20 April 2024 (UTC)
@ChenGui Your Chinese translation looks good. Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:53, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 4 (Week 7)：DENG HUICHEN
Hello professor, I have finished the translation of The Coming Conflict with China article from English into Korean, please check it, thank you. This is my sandbox link(User:등혜진/sandbox) DENG HUICHEN (talk) 12:06, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
I completed the task of translating the English-to-Chinese article (80%), in addition, I added the missing literature of the original article(Organic food culture) in the Chinese article. Here is my sandbox, please check it out.
@CHENG SHIYI Your Chinese translation looks good. Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:56, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
MU QING(Collective Intelligence)
Hello, professor, this is an article that translates English into Chinese instead of the editor. I have added some citations. Can I get an extra score?
Hello Professor , I am a student in the course " Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence ". this is my English to Chinese translation of the Wikipedia sandbox of Anarchism in Korea .Is it okay for me to continue to complete this translation assignment as I am doing now?Thanks for the reply.my sandbox. Orange-1203 (talk) 05:49, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
@Orange-1203 It is a good start. But your sandbox is on English Wikipedia. You should copy it to Chinese Wikipedia - the code on English is not the same as on Chinese one. The sooner you start working in Chinese Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:53, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
@유신예 Good. When you add a reference to a Chinese page in English, you should provide both the Chinese and English translated title (so not just "Different styles of second-hand roses, is it rock or northeast two people turn? ", but also 风格迥异的二手玫瑰，是摇滚还是二人转？). If you don't know how to do it - ask me in class or during my office hours and I'll demonstrate, Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:55, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
Good evening Professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.
Let me report to you on my editing status on the wiki last month, except for the sandbox. This is my edit on English Wikipedia. In addition, I inserted the picture of the inner-painting pot on the Chinese Wikipedia, added content and added references. Wish I could get extra points.
@Csiiiyu Good. In here, try to use Template:Interlanguage link to link. If you don't know how to do it, stop by my office and I'll show you. And remember we need a reference as well.
You should also add reference(s) to the end of the first paragraph and second here here.
Hello Professor, I have made the modifications as you suggested. Not sure if what I linked is correct. I've added more references here. Please check. These activity is for the Everyday Life class. Have a good week. Csiiiyu (talk) 02:30, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
@Csiiiyu Well done. If the reference is in Chinese, then the title of the reference should be in the Chinese (ex. 羊肉是热性还是凉性 吃羊肉不能吃什么), while the English translation title (Is mutton hot or cold? What should not be eaten when eating mutton?) should go to the "translated title" parameter. If you do not know how to do this, ask me and I'll show it to you after class. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:49, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
@Kikolipu It is a good start. But your sandbox is on English Wikipedia. You should copy it to Chinese Wikipedia - the code on English is not the same as on Chinese one. The sooner you start working in Chinese Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:13, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 5 (week9): ZENG WANTING and ZHANG RUIQING
Hello professor, Our group in Social and Everyday life have finished our English to Chinese translation project, this is my sandbox link, can we publish it? Please check it, thank you! Wantiin (talk) 09:46, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
@Wantiin Your Chinese translation looks good. Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia.
Dear Professor, here are the images I uploaded on Wikimedia Commons with the relevant tags and picture descriptions, I hope you can check if they are correct.Hope I can get extra points for this.Thanks for your patience！ 1.241.68.131 (talk) 14:43, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
@Mcx8202229 Good job. Things to fix in your English article:
your article should have (in the lead and in the infobox) the name of the movie in Chinese. Compare your article to, for example, No More Bets or The Knockout (Chinese TV series)
File:3-2312251Q553329.png (image) will soon be deleted because it is not correctly licenced - there is no proof the image is free. You can upload such images to English Wikipedia, but not Wikimedia Commons, and you have to fill in the WP:FAIRUSE template. If you need help with that, stop by my office hours and I will show you how to do so.
Some references used are not reliable and should be replaced (3, 5-9). You can see this if you install the script we used in Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia class: User:Headbomb/unreliable . Please install it and check your references - red ones should be replaced.
As for your Chinese translation, it looks good. Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:32, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 5 (Week 9)- LIU XINRUI、MU QING
Good evening professor.Two translations of our group have been basically completed.
1. English to Chinese "Sexuality in South Korea" article has been posted to the Wikipedia page and will continue to add new references. Here is the link to the article.
2.Chinese to English“李克强之死”.The article is basically finished, here is the link to the sandbox.
@유신예 Your Chinese translation looks good. Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. For comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 .
Regarding your English project, good job, but there are still things to fix:
Please proofread everything, including the title, using a tool like Grammarly. The title is not correct (see different meanings of "pass").
There are also factual errors. For example, you write that "The "English Tiger News" reported, citing Weibo sources," - what is "English Tiger News"? You cite The Standard (Hong Kong). And it does not mention Weibo, but WeChat.
You will also need to format your references with missing metadata, including translated title (when citing Chinese sources, keep the Chinese title but add translated title in the dedicated citation field - ask me for help if you are not sure how to do it). Other missing metadata elements include information about publisher, dates and author information. For example, your reference 43 (""Hong Kong politicians recall that Li Keqiang is approachable and conscientious, Liang Zhenying posts condolences"") should also display the Chinese title ("港政界忆李克强平易近人做事尽责 梁振英发贴哀悼")
Hello professor, I finished this week's Wikipedia editing assignment.Here's the link, please check it out, thank you very much. Jzhdylb (talk) 16:07, 27 April 2024 (UTC)
@Muqing112233 Good. Remember that at least 5 of the weekly edits should be in English Wikipedia.
As for your Chinese translation, it looks good. Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:50, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 5 (Week 9)-ZHANG RUIQING
Hello, Professor. I am a student in the Collective Intelligence in Practice.
@Rachel.zrq Your Chinese translation looks good. Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:51, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 5 (Week 9) - Lee Yunjoo
Hello, professor. I'm Lee Yunjoo, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.
@등혜진 I see, ko:한국의 영화 검열 and ko:다가오는 중국과의 갈등 look good. I recommend you ask for feedback regarding translation quality from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Discord server
Deadline 3 (Week 4) - Sociology of Everyday Life - HAYOUNG KWON
Hello professor, I'm Hayoung Kwon, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life. This week I am editing "Yellow Journalism" in the sandbox. This is my sandbox. And I also added references and hyperlinks. Please check it. Thank you. Hayoung1 (talk) 14:46, 24 March 2024 (UTC)
@Hayoung1 Good start. You will need to fix some references - ask me during or after class for help and I'll show you how. Try to use ISBN for books to generate better citations instead of links to worldcat (for example, for Skull in the Ashes). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:24, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
@Hayoung1 It is better. But I noticed that your sandbox is on English Wikipedia. You should copy it to Korean Wikipedia - the code on English is not the same as on Korean. The sooner you start working in Korean Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:30, 1 April 2024 (UTC)
Thank you for your detailed answer. Thanks to you, my second edit is going on here. Regarding the first question, I will ask you in the next class. Thank you. Hayoung1 (talk) 14:44, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
Planning for project 2
Hello, We are a group of three people (Chaehyun Lee, SeoEun Kim, and NaKyung Kim). we are student in your course 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. Since we were unable to attend your in-person class today, we uploaded it to blog. This is our plan for Project 2. Please check it out! Chaekyo (talk) 06:11, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
Hello, professor. Translating the topic was a difficult process. However, I enjoyed the process of learning about topic I didn't know anything about. Studying the proto-globalization helped me a lot academically.
I will upload one more topic soon!
If there are any problems, please point them out. I will edit it. Thanks.
Hello professor, I am a student of Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia . This is my translation assignment 1 and translation assignment 2. I have roughly completed the translation. Please check it. Thank you for your time. WANGYIFAN2024 (talk) 08:17, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
@WANGYIFAN2024 Your Chinese translatio looks good. Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:04, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
@WANGYIFAN2024 Good. Regarding your Chinese project, note that a merge has been suggested - you may want to comment on that.
Regarding your English project, it reads well. When citing assessments like "As a successful example of Chinese dialect research, it has enriched" you can add attribution to the author or authors (ex. "According to professor Jon Smith from University of Washington", etc.).
Hello professor, I am a student of Collective Intelligence in practice: Understanding Wikipedia. This is my main project. I'm almost done writing this article. Please check it. Thank you! Ckdduq0919 (talk) 10:55, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
@Ckdduq0919 Good, but some content is unreferenced. Please add references for those parts. Only content that is referenced and verifiable counts for our class project (see also Wikipedia rules: Wikipedia:Verifiability).
Another minor issue to fix: your Korean language references should be accompanied by a title in English (use 'translated title' parameter in the citation table). If you are not sure how to do this, ask me in class or during office hours and I'll show you. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:20, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 5 (Week 9)ZHANGQI
Hello professor, I am a student of Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence. This is my translation hangzhou daily and translation 中国对日本文化的影响. I have roughly completed the translation. Please check it. Thank you for your time.I have another article, and once I finish uploading these two articles, I will start translating the third one. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 11:05, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
@ZHANGQI1066 Your Chinese translation looks good. One thing to fix: If a topic exists in English but not Chinese, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (see zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi). Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia.
Regarding the English translation, I do not understand the meaning of the sentence "The comprehensive strength of this newspaper ranks among the top in the national vice provincial city party committee organ newspapers". New Media section needs references. Once you have added the references, please merge your content (copy and integrate) into the existing article on Hangzhou Daily. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:29, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
Deadline5(Week9) - Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU
Hello professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.
Let me report to you about my sandbox editing. Currently two of my articles are translated and ready for review. They are at 1 and 2 respectively. At the same time I posted a comment in "Wikipedia:Peer Review" to let other editors correct my problem. I will check and modify it in time. Please check.
Classroom (Week8)Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU
Hello professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.
I'm sorry that I didn't attend the class last Friday because I wasn't feeling well. So regarding the classroom issues at that time, I drew pictures and published them on my blog. Wish I could get extra points. Please check. Thanks. Csiiiyu (talk) 11:44, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
Good evening, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
I completed the task of translating the English-to-Chinese article.Here is my sandbox, please check it out.Ask the professor to check and if there are no problems, I will post it to Wikipedia Shuo1103 (talk) 16:12, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
@Shuo1103 Your Chinese translation looks good. One thing to fix: If a topic exists in English but not Chinese, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (see zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi). Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:56, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
Weekly wiki edits-ZHANGMINGSHUO
Good evening, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
Hello professor,I am a student in the Collective Intelligence in Practice,Sociology of Everyday Life aka Everyday Life and Social Structure and Introduction to Information Sociology courses. I've completed my weekly wiki edits assignment for April, which you can check out here, please check it out, thanks. Rachel.zrq (talk) Rachel.zrq (talk) 06:42, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
Hello, professor. I'm LI LINLIN,taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' and
'Understanding Wikipedia'.
I have completed the translation of all the articles for the two courses. In addition to the two articles reported to you in Week 5, here are the other two articles, which you can check here （trs Women in South Korea into zh)and here (trs Women's history into zh).
@Leeinm Regarding your Chinese translation, it looks fine. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:05, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 5 (Week 9)—CHENG SHIYI
Good evening, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
I have finished the English to Chinese translation of Organic food culture, here is my sandbox,Please check that. If there is no problem, I will post the article.
@CHENG SHIYI Regarding your Chinese translation, it looks fine. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:06, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
Weekly wiki edits—CHENG SHIYI
Good evening, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
Hello Professor！I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.This is a change I made on Wikipedia this week, I fixed a lot of errors in the color of the links, please check, and some links still show purple instead of blue, please give a little suggestion thank you for a nice day! Hkiho (talk) 09:24, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, as you said, this student translated without approval, but I have already completed most of the translations. I don't want to make me choose other articles because of her mistake, other Chinese articles that meet the requirements are difficult to find, but in order to be fair, I will not plagiarize her article, so I choose to find a new article. Because the time to re-translate the new article is urgent, if there is any mistake, please help me correct it. I wish you a good day！ Hkiho (talk) 17:06, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
@Hkiho The topic is ok, but right now your draft is not close to the standards that are required for publication on English Wikipedia. It is primarily a plot summary with no information about the importance of the work; it is also not referenced. Remember that content added to English Wikipedia (and credited for our course) has to be referenced (as I mentioned above). For articles about movies or other works of arts, we need to provide information about awards and reception. Please see formatting and sections at Meteor Shower (TV series) or other entries in (for example) Category:2009 Chinese television series debuts, paying special attention to section(s) on "Reception".
Please also review Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Film, with special attention to "Critical reception" and the policy on importance (Wikipedia:Notability (films)) - right now nothing in your draft suggest the chosen production is important enough to warrant an entry in Wikipedia (for that, you need to include the said section on Reception, with reviews by reliable critics - in newspapers, magazines, or such, not social media) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:56, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
Weekly wiki editors-LI PEIYU
Dear professor
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice . I have completed the Chinese translation of this article on Chinese Wikipedia,I will search for more information to supplement this article.This is the sandbox link:https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kikolipu/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92
I finished this week's Wikipedia editing assignment.Here's the link：
@Kikolipu Thank you for translating your message. In the future, pleae also WP:SIGN your messages correctly.
Regarding your Chinese translation, when you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia.
Hello, professor.
I'm JIA MENGZHUO, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.
I have finished the translation of Chinese Academy of Cultural Heritage, here is my sandbox, please check.Zhuo1221 (talk) 09:11, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
@Zhuo1221 Well done, your article looks good. After you proofread everything (I recommend a tool like Grammarly) please publish it.
PS. There are few minor things to fix. Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). You will also need to add more blue links to other Wikipedia articles. If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link . There is no need to include French name in English. In the infobox, change China Academy to Chinese Academy. In the lead, the name of the organization is repeated twice (after the French name). Once is enough. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:39, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 5(Week 9)---ZHANG LINYUE
Hello, professor.
I'm ZHANG LINYUE, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.
I have finished the translation of Classical Chinese poetry,here is my sandbox,please check it.Thankyou!AYAO32269 (talk) 09:35, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
@AYAO32269 Your Chinese translation looks good. One thing to fix: If a topic exists in English but not Chinese, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (see zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi). Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:49, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
@Zhuo1221 I see. It is good you are editing Wikivoyage - I see you have received some feedback on your talk page. I'll also add that you should try to add information (listings) of things that tourists may want to see (museums, parks, monuments) rather than listing for hotels, which are not as useful and therefore will not receive as much credit as a well written entry on a museum or such would generate.
Hi professor as you suggested before I made an article of the book Postwar World written by V. Tihanov also known as Pak Noja who is very famous russian-korean scholar in south korea and professor of the University of Oslo. It is about Ukraine War and critcism to Leftist who sympathize Putin. I think you would be interested in my article so I leave the message. Thank you! Shinseongmin1917 (talk) 13:25, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
Hello, professor.
I'm JIA MENGZHUO, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.
I have completed 10 ditional edits to wikivoyage,please checkZhuo1221 (talk) 05:25, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
@KMJ0521: Please, don't use content-tranlsation tool if you are not familiar with tool. Actually, former page also has so many grammatical errors that it could be moved to draft page. Please proofread your pages one more time. LR0725 [ Talk | Contribs ]08:57, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 2(Week 3) ：HONGJIARAN，HUANGQIHAO
Hello Professor, we are students in the course Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia. @Hkihoand I wanted to form the same team to complete the task of translating the article assigned by the professorWe are going to translate the article Russian fashion from English to Chinese, and the article 2024年河北邯郸初中生杀人埋尸案 from Chinese to English, please check if we are feasible, look forward to your reply, if approved I will be grateful, and start the translation work as soon as possible. Redyeoni (talk) 09:19, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, Professor. I finished translating my project. This is my sandbox, please check it.In the course of my project, I found that a lot of content is not available in Chinese Wikipedia, so I used hyperlinks from English Wikipedia. And I didn't translate it completely, because I think his description is very strange, so I searched for content from other related Wikipedia and translated it instead of the original content, I don't know if it's OK. Please let me know if there is any problem, I am looking forward to your guidance, thank you, Professor. HYH031277777 (talk) 14:10, 4 May 2024 (UTC)
Also, remember that content we add (including translations) should be referenced (see zh:维基百科:可供查證).
Regarding the quality of your translation, when you think you are ready, you can also ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 .
Hello, professor. I'm XUE DONGXIN, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class. I completed my task of translating my Wikipedia article.This is my article Ming Dynasty Zheng family, please check it.Thank you so much. Donghem (talk) 13:15, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
@Donghem Your translation is a good start, but please use tools like Grammarly and AI to proofread it. There are many incomplete sentences, starting with the first sentence in lead, which ends in a comma, and the last in the lead, which is clearly missing a verb, if not more. There are some very awkward translations like "The extent to which he covered the sky with one hand can..." which do not make sense in English.
You should also double check the links from Chinese Wikipedia. Some have articles in English, such as the "Zheng Chenggong's family" which should link to House of Koxinga . If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link
Some of the references you use have incomplete metadata, or content only in Chinese. Please add missing metadata (author's names, titles, dates, etc.). If a title is in Chinese, please accompany it with an English title using the 'translated title' parameter in metadata. If you don't know how to do this, ask me in class or during my office hours. In other cases, you translated a title of a reference without leaving the Chinese original, ex. "Information on Zheng Chenggong's Activities in Chaozhou" - there is no such work. Please use both English and Chinese titles. If it is a book, it should have an ISBN number.
@왕예화 The formatting looks good.. For feedback on quality fo the translation, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 When you think you are read (when you have gotten the feedback, if any) you can publish your article (move it to mainspace). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:37, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
Deadline5(week9) : Soongki Kim
Hello Professor.
I'm about 90% done with the wiki main project.
Except for the remaining 10% (temporary links), I think I can create the translation page.
@Soongki Well done, you are close to finishing. One of your articles has an untranslated quotation that needs to be translated to Korean. In addition, If a topic exists in English but not Korean, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (ko:틀:임시링크) - if you do not know how to use it, ask me for help during class or office hours and I will demonstrate.
If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Wikipedia Discord server.
Deadline 5 (Week 9) - Sociology of Everyday Life - HAYOUNG KWON
Hello Professor, I have finished the first Wikipedia edit here, and the second Wikipedia edit is going on here. Please check it out. Thank you. Hayoung1 (talk) 16:12, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
@Hayoung1 I see. I think your translations need more blue links, preferably to Korean Wikipedia articles, but you can also link English ones like this: If a topic exists in English but not Korean, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (ko:틀:임시링크)
I also think that Korean Wikipedia translates names of people and organizations to Korean, instead of leaving them in Latin characters. If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose and translation, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Wikipedia Discord server. Once you address said feedback, if any, you can publish your articles in the mainspace. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:43, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 6(Week10) - Hong Gyeongmin
Hello, professor. I'm Hong Gyeongmin, taking 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.
Hello professor, we are students of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia.you have not yet reviewed the report on Week 9 for me and my team members.please check. Thanks☺️.Hhhlx (talk) 05:36, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
@Hhhlx Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left.
As for our weekly edits, please remember that the edits on your main project (here, Chinese clothing) do not count. Neither do edits such as leaving me messages, outside the very first weeks. Please see the syllabus for the details. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:48, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
About Deadline 5
Professor, This is an article that you couldn't check because there was a problem with the upload before. Now, I uploaded my article through translation correction, please check it.
I did the English to Chinese translation. Check, please. My team members did the translation from Chinese to English. Check, please.
Thanks for checking. We will make changes to your suggestions. Thank you for your hard work, Professor Lihaochang678 (talk) 05:34, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
@Lihaochang678 Your Chinese translation looks good. One thing to fix: If a topic exists in English but not Chinese, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (see zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi). Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia.
Regarding the English article, it shows good progress. Try to add more blue links - for example to Yellow River or Queshan County or State Council of the People's Republic of China. Some content in your article is unreferenced and will need to be referenced. For example, the first and third paragraphs in 'Origin' are missing references. Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese).
References 3, 5 and 6 are to low quality sources and should be replaced by more reliable sources. See Wikipedia:GLOBALTIMES and WP:CGTN. If you keep them, content used from them should be clearly attributed ("According to Global Times "). I will ping a friendly expert on Chinese sources on whether they think we can keep those sources in this article (the topic does not seem controversial): @TheLonelyPather
There are some minor grammar issues, for example in the sentence "During the Iron Flower performance, a six-meter-high double-layered flower shed was set up in an open space." why is the past tense used? The last sentence of that paragraph also has a number of errors which make it hard or impossible to understand ("he iron flower ignites fireworks and firecrackers, and then adds " The performance of "Dragon Wearing Flowers" is a spectacular scene, thrilling, festive and lively.") Try to use a tool like Grammarly or a more advanced AI tool to proofread your article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:50, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
@Hanyangprofessor2Global Times and CGTN indeed should be specified. @Lihaochang678 Some more thoughts: please see Dashuhua–there is quite some overlap between the two activities, although it seems that Dashuhua happens in Hebei, whereas Datiehua (or "iron flower") happens in the Henan and Shanxi provinces.
The article's lede needs to be clarified and strengthened. Describing it as "a traditional folk firework" is not accurate–please use a detailed description, such as "creating a firework by hammering molten iron". Cheers, --The Lonely Pather (talk) 20:24, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
@Bai0926 Please remember to log in before making edits to Wikipedia (only edits that are made while logged in are counted for class credit).
Regarding your article, it looks like you have made good progress. Your article is well written (as far as English grammar and vocabulary are concerned) and reasonably comprehensive. There are however a number of issues to fix:
some paragraphs are unreferenced. Make sure that each paragraph has a reference, of more if necessary to support all the claims made in it
your article is underlinked (it needs more links to other Wikipedia articles). See Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking . If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link . Ask me for help if you do not know how to use that tool and I will demonstrate.
please add pictures to illustrate various types of clothing. You should be able to find them following the instructions from our module on adding media (see Assignment 5 in particular)
there are small parts which have not been translated, like "襦襦skirt"
please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). If the source is in Chinese, add translated title (in English, do not replace to existing Chinese title - use the translated title parameter in metadata. Ask me in class if you need help).
reference 7 may be unreliable, see WP:BAIDU. If you think it is reliable, please tell me why - maybe it is a reprint (copy) or an article from a more reliable outlet?
Hello, professor. I'm Changyeop Jung, in the 'Collective Intelligence' class.
I accepted your feedback and added a reference to everything, and added a translated title to the reference title in Korean. Please check it. And I gave feedback to another student's article. Please check it.Ckdduq0919 (talk) 10:40, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
@Ckdduq0919 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left.
Regarding your article, please use Grammarly or AI tools to double check vocabulary and grammar. For example, this sentence contains errors: "After democratization in 1987, Yang's banned songs were all lifted and reevaluated as outstanding musicians." Songs cannot be lifted nor can be musicians. Many other sentences contain similar errors, in some cases making them impossible to understand (ex. " she became poor due to the tilt of her joining forces"). If your article has too many errors, the content you added may be removed due to being impossible to understand. One more example: " At the time of the release, the music label gave up promoting it because it was too heavy" - what does it mean for music to be "heavy"? I don't think she was doing heavy metal... Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:59, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 5(Week 9)—LIU RUOHAN/TANG JUNYUE
Hello, professor. We are students in everyday life and social structure.
@Han77720 Your translation to Chinese looks good. You can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 and publish your article if you receive no feedback or address issues raised in a week or so.
Regarding your article, please use Grammarly or AI tools to double check vocabulary and grammar. Right now there are too many errors in the article for it to be published, starting with the strange title ("Invest in coins to pray for blessings"). Other examples include phrasing such as "the eyes of money" or "enough to watch the Taoists spend a year" which make no sense in English.
Next, ensure that all content is referenced. A number of your paragraphs have references in the middle but not at the end, suggesting that their final parts are unreferenced.
However, there is a very major problem with your article. Many references used are bad or do not support claims made. For example, the section on 'India' has a pointless reference to a dictionary entry on blessing, then to Britannica on 'American Indians', then to a dictionary on disinfectant. In fact, from what I see, vast majority of the references used in your article are fake or unreliable. I am afraid I have never seen so bad collections of references - at this point I believe not a single reference you have is usable. This is particularly puzzling as the article you are supposed to be translated, zh:投币祈福, has many good references. Instead of using them, it seems you added links to random websites. Can you explain to me what happened? Where you using some AI tool?
@Yue03090616 Your translation to Chinese looks good. You can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 and publish your article if you receive no feedback or address issues raised in a week or so.
However, your English project has a major error, identical to the issues I describe just above regarding another project by your groupmate. All your references are fake and need to redone. Please tell me how did this error happened, I've never seen anything like this in my life and I am very curious (zh:天山大峡谷 has correct references).
In addition, you need to redo your internal links (hyperlinks); there are major issues of overlinking and linking to common (unnecessary) or wrong terms (such as the word various linking to Various Positions, a music album). See Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking. You should remove all links and re-add them one by one, probably replicating the link structure from the original (Chinese) article.
Regarding your Chinese translation, please make sure to complete it (right now it is missing references).
Your first draft contains numerous references to Chinese Wikipedia. Please replace them with references to reliable sources; Wikipedia cannot use itself as a reference.
Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). You will also need to add more blue links to other Wikipedia articles.
Hello professor, I am a student of Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence. This is my translation Wang Baiyuan and I have expanded another article "Eggy Party", please check it out. Thank you, professor! Yangpeifu (talk) 13:27, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
@Yangpeifu Regarding your first article (the biography), some content needs references (for example, second paragraph of 'stay in Japan' or 'Japanese authorities'). You also need to remove bullet points - content should be in prose format, not bullet point. You also need to proofread this for grammar and vocabulary (I recommend a tool like Grammarly). A number of sentences are in first person (ex. "during m stay in Japan". The entire heading 'Trivial matters and rumors' is strange - 'Trivial matters and rumors' are not encyclopedic (see WP:TRIVIA). Consider what can be merged into his biography and remove the "trivia". Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:46, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
PS. Another minor issue to fix: your Chinese language references should be accompanied by a title in English (use 'translated title' parameter in the citation table). If you are not sure how to do this, ask me in class or during office hours and I'll show you. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:49, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
@Yangpeifu I have reviewed your recent edits. This is good, but I am afraid there are still many errors. Second sentence of biography repeats the same content: "he met Xie Chunmu, with whom he later collaborated with whom he would later collaborate". A few sentences later, "After graduation, she taught at the" - is the subject a female? Please read your article carefully to remove such obvious problems.
I also asked you to integrate the "trivia" section into the biography - this has not been done. Wikipedia articles cannot have trivia sections. If some content does not belong to his biography, consider what sections can be created. See Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Biography.
Does Xie Chunmu has an article on Chinese Wikipedia? If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. From what I see, your article needs dozens of such links to Chinese Wikipedia - there are many people, places, organizations andconcepts mentioned that should be linked, and I expect they are linked in the Chinese article.
Finally, please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). This is another item that I mentioned before ("Another minor issue to fix: your Chinese language references should be accompanied by a title in English") that you have not done. So, no, you have certainly not "revised everything according to your requirements" - but you still have time to do so now. Good luck! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:59, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
@Yangpeifu Well done, this will count for a good amount of extra credit. Please pay attention to consistency; that article mentions in some places "Hsieh Chun-mu" - is this the same person as "Xie Chunmu"? Please copyedit the article for grammer; the sentence that continues from " doing As he was about to set off" is very hard to understand. I certainly cannot understand if this is a joke or something else. The sentence "Xie Chunmu slept and ate together with Wang Baiyuan" implies that they had a romantic relationship. Is this what you meant? There are many errors in the paragraph in the section "After going to China" Please use a service like Grammarly or some AI tools to correct such errors. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:33, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
Let me reiterate a principle from my essay that if the original article is not ideal, one must do extra work and make sure it fits into the criteria of English Wikipedia. @Yangpeifu I encourage you to cut down sections like "Comments from contemporary people and later generations" and "Other people's evaluations" because, long story short, English Wikipedia does not use this format or style. You should also be concise in writing your biographies. Cheers, --The Lonely Pather (talk) 12:28, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
@WSH0927 Good progress! Only one paragraph needs references now, the one beginning with "In 1390 (the 23rd year of Hongwu), ..."
Other things to fix:
it is good to have many blue links, but you link the same terms multiple times. This is called Wikipedia:OVERLINKING. Please ensure that there are no duplicate links outside the lead (introduction). You can use this tool to help you identify unnecessary links: User:Evad37/duplinks-alt
your article should mention the subject's name in Chinese. Compare your lead to that of, for example, Jiao Yu or Wu Cheng (philosopher)
while your article is written reasonably well, there are small grammar/vocabulary issues, for example - why is the word "Bridges" capitalized in the lead? I recommend using a tool like Grammarly to proofread your article. Similar small errors can be see in sentences "1375 (the eighth year of Hongwu in the Ming Dynasty) She" or "Ai Cui died. Because of her son's young age, she Xiang assumed". They need to fixed before the article can be published.
@Hanyangprofessor2 Hello Professor, I have modified my project article based on your suggestions. Are there any other errors I need to fix? Can I publish articles from the sandbox? WSH0927 (talk) 10:06, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 6(Week10) ——ZHANG QI
I have completed this week's task. My team members （Huang Yanhan） and I evaluated each other's translated articles. Please check it. Thank you. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 12:59, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
@Jzhdylb Good. Remember that all paragraphs need a reference; I see for example the first two paragraphs in the "Hsi Shih's hometown" section you added are missing references - please add references to them. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:13, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
Deadline6(Week10) - Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU
Hello professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.
I posted here seeking opinions on "Observer bias" & "Women's clothing in China". But after two weeks I still haven’t gotten any feedback, what should I do? Please give me some advice. Thanks.
@Zhangzhang111 Good. The article seems to have many good references and the structure and language are mostly sound. There are however several issues to fix:
please change the name of the subject from Lin Zhijian to Lin Chih-chien as this is the name his main biography exists under on English Wikipedia
please ensure all paragraphs have a reference (or more if necessary)
there may be some overlinking - please read Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking and ensure important terms are linked, but no more then once (not counting the lead/introduction)
the explanatory note section does not seem correctly formatted - if they are notes, they should work as notes. Please stop by my office hours and I will show you the code to fix this
please proofread your article for English vocabulary and grammar; I recommend tool like Grammarly. I see numerous errors such as unfinished sentences ex "National Taiwan University announced on July 6, 2022, that from that day, all master and doctoral students must use the original comparison of text similarity before leaving the" or unclear sentences such as "Of the 173 students, only five were in public electronic full text " that are hard to understand; another problematic sentence is the very long one here (it needs to be split into several, it is too confusing and hard to understand, and likely has several errors in vocabulary and grammar that further affect it): "The school received a report containing Lin Zhijian copying Yu Zhenghuang, Yu Zhenghuang copying Lin Zhijian, and two people copying each other three; according to the school rules, the Academy of Social Sciences approved the report on the July 17 approval committee, the dean of the Academy of Social Sciences Su Hongda convener, based on the information provided to the committee of the information, and the accused to the committee replied data approval (but not including the parties not submitted to the committee, data published in other places)"
I am overwhelmed by this article and I am afraid I don't have enough time to give a comprehensive review. Piotrus, very sorry for the late reply. Cheers, --The Lonely Pather (talk) 13:35, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Deletion discussions usually run for seven days and are not votes. Our guide about effectively contributing to such discussions is worth a read. The most common issue in these discussions is notability, but it's not the only aspect that may be discussed; read the nomination and any other comments carefully before you contribute to the discussion. Last but not least, you are highly encouraged to continue improving the article; just be sure not to remove the tag about the deletion nomination from the top.
If you have any questions, please leave a comment here and prepend it with {{Re|Remsense}}. And don't forget to sign your reply with ~~~~ . Thanks! Zhangzhang111 (talk) 00:46, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, I am a student of Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia . This is my translation assignment 1 and translation assignment 2. I have roughly completed the translation. Please check it. Thank you for your time. YZY2233 (talk) 06:06, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
@YZY2233 Good progress. Both articles need more hyperlinks (blue links) to another article. If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link . Ask me for help if you do not know how to use that tool and I will demonstrate.
Dear Professor, I have finished preparing the article on The Longly Warrior (Chinese: The Three Brigades). How should I move this article to my personal homepage?
Dear professor, I have changed all the problematic links. I want to delete the poster uploaded to Wikimedia Commons because I re-uploaded a new poster for the article in Wikipedia, but my current article is not in the sandbox. , what should I do?The Lonely Warrior#External linksThis is the current link Mcx8202229 (talk) 05:07, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor.I am Chaeyeong Lee, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life. Completed 50% of the assignment for Deadline 4, “Beer in Japan” Please confirm. hereChaeyeong09 (talk) 13:16, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
@Chaeyeong09 The formatting looks good. Once you are finished, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Discord server. Once you address that feedback of if you receive no feedback in two weeks, you can publish your articles in their current form. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:36, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
Deadline5(Week9)_Chaeyeong Lee
Hello professor.I am Chaeyeong Lee, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.I have completed the assignment corresponding to Deadline 5. (Beer in Japan) Please check and provide feedback. hereChaeyeong09 (talk) 14:42, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
Wikimedia Commons - Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU
Hello professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.
Regarding the assignment of Project 2 Public Space Observation, I uploaded the images I took during the observation to Wikimedia Commons in the hope of gaining extra points. thank you. Csiiiyu (talk) 04:17, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
Sociology of Everyday Life - HAN YUANYUAN LI HAOCHANG
Hello professor, this is my translation assignment after correction. It has been corrected according to your requirements. Please check it for me. If there are any deficiencies, I will correct it immediately. Thank you, Professor. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 04:22, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
@Hanyuanyuan613 I see some progress, but you need to follow my previous instructions. For example, I don't see that you have acted on my review from March (at #Deadline 4 (Week 5)LI HAOCHANG HAN YUANYUAN), later repeated at #Deadline 5 (Week 9)LIHAOCHANG HANYUANYUAN. Please reread my earlier feedback and act on it. You added references and rewrote one sentence, but many other errors I identified before remain (lack of links, lack of interlanguage links, poor reference formatting). The article still has unreferenced parts, and many strange grammar or vocabulary errors ("iron juice"?). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:48, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
@Wangtao626 Good progress. Please remove broken code ({{Use American English|date=April 2017}} found at the top of the article, and |group="Note" found in one reference.
@Kikolipu Good! But remember that only referenced content can be added to Wikipedia and counts for our assignment; some of the content you added does not appear to have references - please try to fix this shortly. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:37, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
Weekly wiki edits-CHENG SHIYI
Good afternoon, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
@왕예화 Good! But remember that only referenced content can be added to Wikipedia and counts for our assignment; some of the content you added does not appear to have references - please try to fix this shortly.
Also, references (footnotes) should not be added in headings. You need to add at least one sentence to the body of the heading and move your reference there. For example, if it is a list of stations, you should say so. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:41, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
@Csiiiyu Well done with your reviews. And since you got feedback and acted on it, I think you can publish your articles on Chinese Wikipedia - good job! Do monitor the Peer Review section to see if more comments appear there over the next few weeks. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:55, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 5 (Week 9)ZHANG BINGYI
1.Hello Professor, my main Wikipedia Lin Zhijian's paper plagiarism case, received comments like the following: This article was nominated for deletion. The discussion was closed on 20 May 2024 with a consensus to merge the content into the article Lin Chih-chien. If you find that such action has not been taken promptly, please consider assisting in the merger instead of re-nominating the article for deletion. To discuss the merger, please use the destination article's talk page.
But I am not very good at merging the content into Lin Chih-chien . I am requesting your help, or if possible, I would like to go to the office and ask the professor for help.
2. In addition to my main task, I also completed Draft:Su Hongda for extra points and asked the professor to check it.
@Zhangzhang111 We can discuss the merge in my office; but the short version is - you have to identify the most important elements of your translated to be merged article that are missing from the target merge article and copy them over.
Regarding your draft, please shorten the too long heading ("He said the Palace Museum's transformation policy was to eliminate the Palace Museum transfer"). And note that another experienced editor, User:Saqib, expressed concerns that your article reads too promotional. As they have not provided any specific details, please ask them on the article's talk page or their talk page for such details and then try to address the issues they raise. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:24, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 5(Week 9)-LIYULUN ,SHAOJIANUAN, group8(Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia)
Hello Professor, these are the two articles translated by our group, they are almost finished, please check them.
@LIYULUN Well done. Your Chinese article about intensive farming is almost ready to be published - try to ensure all content is referenced.
Regarding happy baby, please double check interlanguage links as they seem to point to ch wiki instead of zh wiki.
You don't need to link to unimportant concepts like characters that will never have their own article ("Happy Superman, Sweetheart Superman, Playboy Superman, Careless Superman, Caution Superman, Jialuo and the big monsters and little monsters").
Please ensure that the first letter of any heading is capitalized. Do not capitalize unnecessary words. What do you mean by "Division Introduction"? I do not understand this concept. It seems you mean "Episode summary"? Most of your other headings contain errors - please review Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Film which will tell you how your headings should be named.
Please ensure all content is referenced (in particular, in section about related works).
Hello, Professor. We have modified our article according to your suggestion, please check if it can be published. LIYULUN (talk) 17:49, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
@LIYULUN Your article structure is fine now, but you need to rewrite your work to be in understandable English. For example, the first paragraph of 'Douban Movie' section is next to impossible to understand. Please proofread your text carefully with tools like Grammarly, AI tools or ask for help from someone fluent in English.
Hello professor, we are students of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia. This is our assignment 1 and assignment 2. we have roughly completed the translation. Please check it. Thank you for your time. Hhhlx (talk) 01:42, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
@Hhhlx I did miss your message (post) here last time, apologies. Here is your feedback:
your Chinese translation looks fine, but please monitor it every week for the next few weeks to double check if Chinese volunteers leave any feedback or suggestions
regarding your expansion of Chinese clothing in English from early April (seen here), most of it lacked references and was removed or will be removed shortly. Each paragraph requires a reference (even if identical to a reference used in another paragraph). You can restore or save the content you added, but please ensure it has references. Only referenced content counts for our assignment. In addition, please double check your vocabulary. You talk about "deep clothing" but it seems you mean Deel (clothing)? There are also unencyclopedic sentences in what you wrote, such as "Let's delve deeper into the various characteristics and cultural symbols of deep clothing together." Please read the guide at WP:PRONOUN
Ok we understand.But if we re-edit the previously deleted content and add references now ,our score will count as a normal score or as a late score Thank you. 1eleven0086 (talk) 06:58, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
Hello, Professor. Shen Yi is not deel, It's Shenyi, I have corrected the mistake. Please check and correct. Thank you. Hhhlx (talk) 08:50, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
@1eleven0086 @Hhhlx Your score will count as regular score; you completed the assignment on time. Errors can be fixed now - do not worry. If you can complete the assignment by the late June, your score will be very good.
@1eleven0086 The reference looks good. Please add page range or ranges that support the information cited, and the translated title using the translated title parameter (do not remove the Chinese title). If you need help, stop by my office and I'll show you how. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:27, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
collective intelligence Week 11--MUQING
Good afternoon Professor, here are my 10 edits for the week, please check them out.
@WSH0927 Please use a tool like Grammarly to proofread your article or ask for help from someone fluent in English. There are some grammar and vocabulary errors resulting in sentences that are hard or impossible to understand, for example " Guizhou female Shui Xi soil department during the Ming Dynasty" or
"and developed into an Ai Cui moral wife" or "As she cohabitated with her spouse, She Xiang progressively enhanced the regent director's political acumen".
Or "She Xiang regency, just caught up with the Ming Dynasty and the Yuan army of the Yunnan war".
In " The man was well-known for his proficiency across several Shui West departments, adored by the clansmen, and recognized as "Tho Mu" (King chief)." - who is "the man"?
Please note that those are just examples from the beginning of your article. The errors continue later, ex. "She absorbed a lot of nutrients in Sinology"
There are too many errors in your article for it to be published in English (every second or third sentence is impossible to understand).
A different issue to be fixed is the lack of images. There are modern related entities such as She Xiang Museum - can you find freely licenced images of it or similar places to add to the article? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:48, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 5 and 6 ——LI MENGRU
Good afternoon Professor,
I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence course.
I have completed the translation from Chinese to English in my sandbox. I checked the grammar using Grammerly and removed the non neutral parts of the article, as well as modified and deleted references that did not meet the requirements. Please check it.
I reviewed a <Organic food culture> article by @CHENG SHIYI , and left a suggestion on her talk page.
As for your article in English, it is better than it was, but there are still issues raised in the last review that need replying. Have you read comments by TheLonelyPanther, concerning for example the section on 'Poor sourcing' at #Deadline4(Week5) LI MENGRU?
Some of my comments have not been addressed as well (ex. the blog pixnet is still used as a source). Reference 57 is to YouTube. Please remove all references to social media sites and blogs.
Much of the content in the bullet section ('Type and instance') seems like original research. This entire section is so poorly written and chaotic that I think it needs to be deleted wholesale. This is true for much of the article, which is often based on primary sources.
I am afraid that as I said before, much - most - of the article needs to be deleted as not meeting standards of English Wikipedia. As a rule of thumb, anything that is not cited to an academic journal, book, or major newspaper should likely be removed. You could use reliable sources like Zhaozhen (which is missing a url? how can I read it?) to expand the article instead.
Some parts of your article lack references and need to be removed if references cannot be found. Some references are in wrong / broken format (the ones that say note, like [note 13]). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:50, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
I'm sorry I couldn't find any academic references or major newspapers. Because I have referred to the original Chinese Wikipedia and the references cited seem to be original content. And I found that most of the content in the original text was based on personal comments posted on the internet, so my translation work was very difficult and it was difficult to prove that every sentence had reliable references. I am considering whether it would be better for me to change my article.
If possible, could I start my work again with a new article? Could I translate this article into English? Thank you for your reply!TMXX0818 (talk) 14:11, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
@Piotrus at Hanyang I fixed my article by using AI grammar tool. But Among the sentences you pointed out, "Yang's banned songs were all lifted" translates as "were all removed" or "were all revoked," indicating that a specific restriction or regulation has been removed. Ckdduq0919 (talk) 07:00, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
@Ckdduq0919 That would make sense. You can say that restrictions or bans on her songs were removed (lifted would be ok too). Restrictions or bans can be lifted, songs cannot be lifted.
You are making good progress - almost all grammar and vocabulary issues are fixed, and the article is now well written. Please clarify " various dictatorships in Korea". Was there more than one dictatorship? It would be better to clearly name the particular "dictators" or relevant governments.
Deadline6(Week10) - Sociology of Everyday Life - YUE ZIYI
Hello professor. I'm YUE ZIYI, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.
I posted here seeking opinions on "Social psychology (sociology)" & "Sailor tattoos". But after a weeks I still haven’t gotten any feedback, what should I do? Please give me some advice. Thanks. YZY2233 (talk) 04:29, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
Hello, professor. I'm LI PEIYU, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class, I have completed more than ten edits to Wikipedia this week.Please check it, Special:Contributions/Kikolipu
@Hanyuanyuan613 Good job adding interlanguage links, but not all changes were done. See my feedback above. For example, I told you to add a blue link to the State Council of China - this has not been done.
There are still language and vocabulary errors, some new. In the second sentence you repeat "national intangible cultural heritage" (perhaps you did not delete the content while adding the interlnauge link). The heading 'value meaning' is not understandable - please look at similar articles and see how this can be written in English. I do not understand what you mean by 'value meaning'.
Hello, professor.
I'm JIA MENGZHUO, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.
In May, I completed 80 additional edits on Wikipedia, check it out.Zhuo1221 (talk) 10:40, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
Good evening, professor. I have reviewed the feedback and made corrections based on the comments provided on the feedback page.Zhuo1221 (talk) 14:26, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
Sociology of Everyday Life——MU QING
Hello professor, this is the article I chose for this class. It has been posted on the page, please check it.
@Muqing112233 Good job. If you need help with the issue templated on top, stop by Chinese Discord or discussion forum. The categories seem to have been fine, there was just a stray nowiki code. Stop by my office if you need help. I am also not sure if you need to remove the links you have removed. They seem fine to me. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:10, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
Sorry Professor, I made a mistake in submitting the link last time and now resubmit it on this page.This is the Wikipedia article I edited, please check it out ,thank you. Jzhdylb (talk) 07:15, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice courses. I have translated the English version of Anti-Chinese sentiment in Korea into Chinese. Here is my sandbox，
@Kikolipu Good job. Regarding your Chinese article, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 and publish your article if you receive no feedback or address issues raised in a week or so. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:37, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
@Zhuo1221 Well done, you are almost done. Please check my feedback from few day ago at #Deadline 5(Week 9)---JIA MENGZHUO regarding references and metadata; some still are missing information, such as ""前进中的中国文化遗产研究院". 世界遗产: 144. 2014." which has no English title, etc. You can publish your work anytime, and then we can see if you will receive feedback from other volunteer reviewers. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:41, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello, Professor.
I am a student in the Collective Intelligence in Practice, Sociology of Everyday Life and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
@Donghem Well done, you are almost finished. Please double check my review from few days ago at #Deadline 5(Week 9)---XUE DONGXIN . Some references still need more metadata (such as English title in "台湾硏究所, 厦门大学; 编辑部, 中国第一历史档案馆 (1987). 郑成功滿文档案史料选译 (in Chinese). 福建人民出版社. pp. 55–58. ISBN 978-7-211-00169-9."; the English title should be in addition and not replacing the Chinese one. Please let me know if you need help adding it and I'll showy you ow to do so.). You can publish your article (move it to mainspace) anytime, and then we can see if you will receive feedback from other volunteer reviewers. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:44, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
Ps. Also, please ensure that all books in Chinese have a Chinese title, and/or ISBN. For example, Chinese title and/or ISBN are missing from this ref: "Zheng Xurong, "Information on Zheng Chenggong's Activities in Chaozhou", Chaoshan Historical and Cultural Research Center, 2007, pp. 390-391" Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:46, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
@Muqing112233 Good, but there is more needed. The English article you translated does not contain all the content from the Chinese article, as noted by the review message at the top. I can see that most of the content from the 'Resigned from party and government positions' section is missing. There are other omissions, for example reaction from Taiwan in your translation only covers that of DPP and not that of MC, and is unreferenced. Please ensure all content is translated and referenced. Also, add categories (see Wikipedia:Categorization). Here I will also ping User:Oblivy who reviewed your article during recent AfD discussion and mentioned it is in the need of cleanup - feel free to tell my student what else should be improved (TIA).
Thanks for the ping. As I said at the AfD discussion, it is a well sourced article and I have no concerns about keeping it, but it needs some revision.My concerns were very general but I can give a few examples for improvement:
the lead paragraph contains too much detail about his career and positions - he has his own article, in case anyone needs to know
check "location" in the infobox - there are red links and lack of proper word spacing
there is nothing called "English Tiger News" - the paper can be called the Hong Kong Standard or The Standard (HK).
the article has two sections - background and process - describing in detail his declining health, death, and announcement. This should be one shorter section. It also contains unnecessary details like the prevalence of heart disease among diabetes patients, and him waving to tourists during a visit to Dunhuang
many news sources and official sources appear in bold type which is usually limited to the article subject and related terms
there is a lot of overlap between "farewell ceremony" and "memorial events" and this could perhaps be collapsed into a single (shorter) section highlighting official events and spontaneous ones
I find the long "reactions" section to be a bit pointless but I understand why it's included and don't have a good reason to say it doesn't belong in the article
there were two more "process" sections at the end - one was a copy of material in "reactions" and the other was blank; I've gone ahead and removed them along with an extra paragraph that was a copy of material elsewhere
@Muqing112233 If you want someone other than me (here) to see your reply, please WP:ECHO them like this: @Oblivy
Regarding your edit here. First, you should make sure your edits do not create errors, for example there is now a word (missing space): "MedicineDongyuan"
the first paragraph in the section 'Ancient Chinese sacrificial rituals' needs a reference; and so does the content in the introduction ("In most Chinese restaurants, there is no tip required unless it is explicitly posted. Tea is almost always provided, either in advance of the diners being seated or immediately afterward. A verbal "thank you" (谢谢; xiexie) should be offered to the server pouring the tea.") Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:00, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
@ZHANG0822ZH Good. But you should try to link more complex terms, such as sacrifice, and do it the first time they are used (you actually link to sacrifice, but only upon this term third or fourth use - please move the link to the first use). And remember to add missing reference(s). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:41, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 8 — WANG YIHUA
Good afternoon Professor, I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice courses.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
I have finished adding the content of the English article ‘Organic food culture’, as well as the Chinese translation of that article, and have posted it.
@CHENG SHIYI Well done. Please monitor your Chinese article for the next few weeks to ensure any issues raised by Chinese reviewers are addressed. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 09:00, 7 June 2024 (UTC) PS. For extra credit, you can consider adding to that article (both in Chiense and English) a section on organic food culture and trends in China. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:01, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
Weekly wiki edits-WANG YIHUA
Good evening, professor，I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice courses.
I have completed ten edits on Wikipedia this week, please check.
@Jiyoon Leee Good but please revise your work with regards to Korean grammar and vocabulary; one of your articles has already been tagged for translation issues due to possible overreliance on machine translation and lack of proofreading. Please try to improve the prose of your translations to address such issues. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:05, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
Sociology of Everyday Life——MU QING
Good afternoon, professor.I have completed ten edits this week, please check.
Hello professor, I have completed the initial draft of the expansion task for this article, added a section about China, and established a relevant section for South Korea. Please review, thank you very much. Jzhdylb (talk) 14:09, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
@Jzhdylb Unfortunately, most of your additions have been removed from Wikipedia due to concerns over plagiarism and/or copyright violations - please see the information you received on your talk page. Content that is added to Wikipedia cannot be copied from other sources, but needs to be sufficiently rewritten and/or summarized to avoid being identical or significantly similar. The source you used link) is fine but you need to read it and summarize it, not copy paste content from it.
Please read the linked guides and instructions carefully. If you have trouble understanding them, please stop by my office hours and I will explain them more.
When you add further content to Wikipedia, please do it in your sandbox, not directly the public article. I will review it and let you know if it can be copied over to the public article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:20, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
Okay professor, I will correct the editing methods and add them to the sandbox. Thank you for your guidance. Jzhdylb (talk) 04:21, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, I expanded the selection of articles in the sandbox.We have expanded the section on "China" and "Korea", please check it out, thank you very much! Jzhdylb (talk) 07:18, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
@Jzhdylb Good job, your expansion looks good. Please use a tool like Grammarly to double check for English errors - there are some minor issues with vocabulary and punctuation. After you fix them, you can add your content to the main (public article). For references 2 and 3, please add translated English title and other missing metadata (author, publisher). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:37, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, I have added the expanded content to the public article according to your suggestion. Please check it out. Thank you very much! Jzhdylb (talk) 08:45, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
@Mcx8202229 Good. Regarding your English article, when you add references with Chinese titles, please add English translation of the titles using the translated title parameter. (If you don't know how to do it, ask me in class or during office hours).
Regarding your Chinese article, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 and publish your article if you receive no feedback or address issues raised in a week or so. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:23, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, I have published both articles on the corresponding Wikipedia and added cross-language links. I also decorated my personal homepage and changed my signature. Below are the two articles.
@Mcx8202229 Well done. For your Chinese article, as you can see, there is one small problem tagged with a warning template at the top of the article. This is because your article has links to English Wikipedia, but done without the proper use of zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .Please adjust your links to use this tool. You can easily find them in code editing mode, by doing a CTRL+F search for the string ":en". If you don't know how to fix this, stop by my office or ask me in class and I'll show you. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:33, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
Dear professor, my Chinese article has been revised.And my English article, am I right to revise it this way? Please help me point out the problem, professor. I would be very grateful. Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)05:58, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
@Mcx8202229 Please revise the links in the English article as follows: if an article exits in Chinese Wikipedia but not English Wikipedia, use Template:Interlanguage link to link to Chinese articles like zh:李乃文 . It should look like this: Li Naiwen [zh] .
Thank you, professor, I probably know, but I don't know what else I need to change right now. I'll ask you next Monday Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)12:07, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
Collective intelligence----MU QING
Good afternoon, professor.I have completed ten edits this week, please check.
@Muqing112233 Good! But remember that only referenced content can be added to Wikipedia and counts for our assignment; some of the content you added does not appear to have references - please try to fix this shortly. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:03, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
I have published article 1.2.4 and added translation code to the discussion page of the article in accordance with Wikipedia's rules. It has also been edited in wikidata to link the translated article to the original article.You can check it here.
PS. There is a minor error in two of your articles as indicated by the error message at top - some contain links to English Wikipedia, but done without the proper use of zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .
Please adjust your links to use this tool. You can easily find them in code editing mode, by doing a CTRL+F search for the string ":en". If you don't know how to fix this, stop by my office or ask me in class and I'll show you. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:33, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
I fix the contain which have linked to English Wikipedia.
Good evening, Professor. I have checked the progress of another member's work and commented on it. Please check it, thank you.AYAO32269 (talk) 12:35, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
I am Wang Siwen, a student of everyday life and social structure.My school number is 2023025414.Professor, my home network is not good, the submission of homework was postponed to 12 o'clock sharp, but when I submitted the homework, it was 11:59, I finished this homework.Just because the network is delayed by a minute without committing.But I did my homework carefully, and there were documentation and video formats.It has been sent to your Google and LMS mailboxes to demonstrate that job submissions failed at exactly twelve o'clock due to network delays.I'm really anxious.Please check.Thank you! 220.74.81.4 (talk) 15:32, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 8 (The Finals Week) - Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU
Hello professor.
I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.
I have revised and published the translations of the articles "observer bias" and "Women's clothing in China". I have also added relevant information to Wikidata. 1. 2. Please check it out.
Deadline 8 (The Finals Week)-LIYULUN ,SHAOJIANUAN, group8(Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia)
Hi Professor, we have completed and posted our two articles. But there seems to be a problem with the Happy Baby article, we have revised it according to the suggestions, and now I would like to ask you, Professor, to see what other revisions you can make. Thanks.
Sociology of Everyday Life - HAN YUANYUAN LI HAOCHANG
Good evening, professor. I have revised the article. Please help me check if there is anything else that needs to be revised. Thank you, professor. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 09:59, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
@Huejyi Good. For articles that exist on English but not Korean Wikipedia, please use ko:틀:임시링크; if it is too hard please ask me in class or during office hours and I'll show you how to use it. Please monitor your article to see if you receive any feedback from Korean reviewers over the next two weeks Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:31, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 8 (The Finals Week)—ZHANGMINGSHUO
Good evening, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
I have finished adding the content of the English article Anak Krakatoa,as well as the Chinese translation of that article, and have posted it.
@Shuo1103 Well done. Please monitor the article and check for feedback from Chinese editors. I see someone has proposed a merge of your article; you should take part in that discussion and try to explain why there are different (for example, English Wikipedia does not merge those topics). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:35, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 8 (The Finals Week)---JIA MENGZHUO
Good evening, Professor.
I'm JIA MENGZHUO, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.
Collective Intelligence in Practice wiki project-ZHANG RUIQING
Hello, Professor!
I have finished translating and posted my two Article Assignments. They are: 日本—朝鲜关系 (Japan-North Korea relations), 韩国的养老金政策(Pension policy in South Korea).
@Liangyiqiao2004 Regarding your Chinese article,you can now publish (WP:MOVE) your article. After that, please add WP:CATEGORIES: and link your article to the English one with the tool explained here Help:Interlanguage links . After that, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Chinese reviewers over the next few weeks.
Good evening, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Sociology of Everyday Life aka Everyday Life courses. I have three articles that need to be translated, which are hangzhou drily，中国文化对日本文化的影响， History of Chongqing. I have completed the first two articles, and due to sandbox limitations, I have just started translating the third article: History of Chongqing. I will complete the last article within the next week. Please review my first two articles and provide feedback, and I will make revisions accordingly. After completing the translation task for my third article, I will inform you again on the discussion page. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 14:25, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
@ZHANGQI1066 Regarding your English article, if a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. If you don't know how to use this tool, ask me in class or during office hours and I'll demonstrate.
Please also note that some of your content was removed as it was unreferenced. You can restore it with references added.
Deadline 8 (The Finals Week) - Sociology of Everyday Life-YUE ZIYI
Hello professor.
I'm YUE ZIYI, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.
I have revised and published the translations of the articles "Social psychology (sociology)" and "Sailor tattoos".I have also added relevant information to Wikidata.1. 2. Please check it out. YZY2233 (talk) 05:41, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
@Seohyun S This is a good start, but there are various fixes needed, including finishing the translation (Representative artists section). Make sure all links are included; if an article exists in English but not Korean, please use ko:틀:임시링크; if it is too hard please ask me in class or during office hours and I'll show you how to use it. In two cases, you link to external websites from your article - such links should be used only as references. Much of your translation is missing footnotes, please ensure that each footnote is present in your translation. Images should be added as well.
After you address those issues, you can publish (WP:MOVE) your article. I recommend you ask me for feedback before moving to avoid having your article deleted from Korean Wikipedia, as your project is significantly delayed (you should have submitted this for a review over a month ago at the current stage).
I'm ZHONG XIN, a student in your Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia course.
I have finished adding content to the Chinese article “中国史前文化”, as well as the English translation of the article, and have posted it.
However, when I posted it, I realized that the title of my original translation “Prehistory of China” had already been taken, so I changed the title of my article to “The Prehistoric Culture of China".
Please use Template:Main for linking "main articles"; see how I've done it here. Please also add correct WP:CATEGORIES to the article (check which ones exist in Chinese Wikipedia and try to add similar to your article; some may exist on English Wikipedia - check their interwiki links; if there is no identical category, try to add one or more of the relevant parent categories; if you don't know how to do so, ask me in class and I'll demonstrate). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:54, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello Professor, I have made some changes to my article according to your request, please check it again.After moving my article, one of the editors has been helping me to fix some of the errors, there are two places marked [clarification needed] but I don't really know how to change them, I would be grateful if the professor gives me some advice. Thanks. Zhongxxin (talk) 14:19, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
@Zhongxxin Well done! Please review the very useful comments you can see in edit history of your article left by volunteer @Folly Moxhere; I also expect it is that volunteer who asked for clarification - you can contact her on her talk page or see if they reply here, and I am sure they'll explain to you what needs to be clarified further. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:43, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
(summoned by ping) My apologies; I wasn't aware I was interfering with a class assignment. Zhongxxin, there's no need to open a conversation on my usertalk; we can discuss anything related to the article at Talk:Prehistory of China. The [clarification needed] tags were placed – in admittedly poor practice on my behalf – where I was not entirely understanding the translation, as notes to myself to peruse the Chinese language version of the article, which I have not yet done. I expect I'll be able to resolve them.Apologies again for my confusion. Folly Mox (talk) 04:38, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello, thank you very much for your many useful suggestions on this article, it has helped me a lot. I'm a newbie editor who just started learning Wikipedia not long ago, and since English is not my first language, there may be some things that seem to be translated strangely, so thank you again for correcting me! Zhongxxin (talk) 04:54, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
You're welcome, Zhongxxin. Your English is a good deal better than my Chinese, and the two languages are not always easy to translate between. I'm glad to have been able to help in some way, and hope my edit summaries did not feel unkind. Folly Mox (talk) 05:50, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 8 (The Finals Week)-HUANG LINGXUAN&LIU YUNXIANG
Dear professor.
We the student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice.
According to the comments you gave us before, we have made some modifications to the article and discussed with the administrator. This is our revised 1 and 2. Please check. Thank you.😊 Hhhlx (talk) 17:12, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
@Hhhlx Your Chinese article progress is good. However, your additions to the English article that had no references had been removed. Please see here. You can restore your content only if you can add references that confirm the claims made. Please see (read) WP:V. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:11, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
Professor, thank you for your advice. My team and I will add some necessary references to the article. thank you.Hhhlx (talk) 03:32, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
The Finals Week - Sociology of Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence in Practice wiki-ZHANG BINGYI
Hello professor, I am a student of the Sociology of Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence in Practice wiki.
2.Transferred the content I thought was important to Lin Chih-chien.
3. There may have been unfinished blogs in Blogging through Wikipedia and Blogging Through Sociology of Everyday Life, but now they are all completed.
4. I have completed the review in Blogging Through Wkipedia (Comment 1), and I have also completed the review in Blogging Through Sociology of Everyday Life (Comment 2).
@Zhangzhang111 Good. In Lin Chih-chien please ensure you use this name variant - in some parts of the text you still use "Lin Zhijian" instead. You can also expand his article from Chinese one for extra credit (translating referenced parts of Chinese biography into English one). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:45, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
Extra Credit
Dear Professor,
These are extra activities I do to not only strengthen my editing skills but also help me better understand how the Wikipedia community works.
I added four photos to Wikimedia Commons, two of which were also included in the monthly photography challenge. Through these activities, I not only enriched Wikipedia's multimedia resources, but also strengthened my photography skills and editing abilities.
Photos from June 10, 2024 and April 26, 2024 participated in the monthly challenge
Having polite discussions with other editors:
During the process of editing Wikipedia entries, I had many polite and constructive discussions with other editors. These interactions helped me understand Wikipedia's editorial policy and community guidelines, and also improved my communication skills.But the interface has been deleted after discussion, so I can't list the evidence.
I created my own user page on Wikipedia. Through this page, I detailed my interests and editing areas, and shared some personal information to let other editors get to know me better, thereby promoting cooperation and interaction.
Dear Professor,I'm HUANG YANHAN, the student of Collective Intelligence in Practice.I am writing to inform you that I have completed the editing of the article titled "电影审查制度" (Film Censorship System).Please let me know if there are any further revisions or additional tasks you would like me to undertake.
Thank you for your guidance and support. HYH031277777 (talk) 08:10, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
@Seohyun S I see that your work is progressing nicely. Your translations look good and are close to being finished, very good.
Your images need captions.
For articles that exist on English but not Korean Wikipedia, please use ko:틀:임시링크; if it is too hard please ask me in class or during office hours and I'll show you how to use it.
Hello Professor. I would like to report my progress to you.
1. I have completed all the extra credit blog questions. Please check.
2. I will make additional Wikipedia edits
3. My Wikipedia translation from English to Chinese is also completed. I have made modifications and added peer review according to your requirements and suggestions. Please check. Is my article ready to be published? I will continue to revise it after it is published. Looking forward to your reply. Thank you for your reply. Lihaochang678 (talk) 15:42, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
@Sangrok02 Your expansion is a good start, but remember to add references. Only referenced content counts for our assignment (unreferenced content can be removed from Wikipedia).
@Sangrok02 You have started, but you are not finished. You need to translate (add) all references (footnotes) from English to your Korean translations, not just a few. Right now, for example, ko:문화사회학 has just two references, while Sociology of culture, thirteen. Please ensure all content is properly translated and referenced, and note the issue has already been raised by Korean reviewers of your work (see templates added to the top of your translations). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:27, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
Weekly wiki edits-HUANGLINGXUAN
Good evening, professor.
I am the student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice.
Hello, professor I am taking life and social structure classes every day. I have completed the deadline 4 assignments. Please check and give me feedback. Sorry for the delay.
@Minis707 You are making good progress. Please remove stray content in 사용자:Minis707/연습장 under "제안" section.
After that, you can publish your article. After publishing (moving) your article, please add WP:CATEGORIES: and link your article to the English one with the tool explained here Help:Interlanguage links Now, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Korean reviewers over the next few weeks Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:39, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 8(The Finals Week)：Chen Gui
Hello Professor, I have completed and published my Wikipedia translation. Please check it out, thank you!
Dear Professor, I have revised the article. Is there anything else you need to pay attention to regarding the published Wikipedia entry? Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)08:07, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
@Mcx8202229 Good. In Lonely Warrior, can you attribute the negative review? Which 文汇报 do you cite - Wen Wei Po or Wenhui Bao?
It would be good if you could find more reviews from other newspapers, magazines or websites. A rule of thumb is that if a media has a Wikipedia article (in en or zh) we can cite it for such context (movie reviews). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:43, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
You are making good progress. Please remove stray content at the bottom of ko:사용자:Seohyun S/연습장.
After you have translated all content, you can publish your articles. After publishing (moving) your article, please add WP:CATEGORIES: and link your article to the English one with the tool explained here Help:Interlanguage links Now, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Korean reviewers over the next few weeks
Hello professor. I finished translating the first topic well and did the second translation. During this process, I received pointing out about the translation. So after that, I edited the translation myself and made it again. However, the translation content I created is deleted again. Even though I have clearly read and interpreted the content on the topic, this situation arises. So I write a question. Choisieon (talk) 15:51, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
@Choisieon Please post links to your deleted articles here. Have you read and engaged with people leaving you comments at your Korean Wikipedia's discussion page at ko:사용자토론:Choisieon? From what I see from the comments there and comments left by Korean volunteers, as well as your edit history there, your submission were declined due to poor translation, and you did not reply to concerns repeatedly raised there, which resulted in your account being blocked for refusal to communicate.
Learning how to communicate with others is an important part of learning about collective intelligence, new media and wikis., and we studied this in our Communication module, which I encourage you to revisit.
If you understand why your content was deleted and account blocked, please follow the unblock procedures at Korean Wikipedia and ask for your account to be unblocked there. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:15, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
�Wiki edits- Chaeyoeng Lee
Hello professor, I'm Chaeyeong Lee, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.Attached is a wiki edit for The Economist. Please check and feedback. hereChaeyeong09 (talk) 04:50, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
@Chaeyeong09It is good that you have started to work on this assignment, although you should have done so several months ago, per our deadlines. Missing deadlines will reduce the points you receive for your work, as explained in the syllabus.
Please add your content to the Korean article on The Economist. Please remember that all content you add should be referenced and proofread to avoid machine translation errors. Unreferenced or poorly translated content will likely be deleted by reviewing editors and will not count for our class credit. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:24, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 6-김민지
Hello, I am Minjee Kim, a student taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I left feedback on another classmate's post, so I completed Deadline 6. I'd appreciate it if you could check it out.
Hello, I'm Seohyun Son. I submit Deadline 6. I added the [suggestion] part to another classmate's post, so I wrote my comment. Please check and give me your feedback. Attached is the link. Thank you.
@Sangrok02 Please remember to translate references. Your submissions have been tagged by the reviewers as missing most references. Please remember that all content you add should be referenced and proofread to avoid machine translation errors. Unreferenced or poorly translated content will likely be deleted by reviewing editors and will not count for our class credit. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:30, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello Professor, I am Kim Min-jee, a student taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I organized the materials and pictures of the article as my 5th week assignment and organized the citations better. Please check and give me your feedback. Sorry for the delay.
Hello professor, I am Wang Yifan, a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia. Here are my Wikipedia edit records (photos, articles), about 200 times in total. Please check them.
I'm LI LINLIN, taking classes of 'Understanding Wikipedia' and 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.
Here are my wiki edits for the semester, over 200 edits in total. Please check here and here.
Article 1 ; Article 2 are assignments for class 'Understanding Wikipedia' and Article 3 ; Article 4 are assignments for 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.
@CHENG SHIYI Good. But remember that only referenced content should be added to Wikipedia (and only such content counts for our course credit). Some content you and @왕예화 have added has been removed as unreferenced (see here). You can restore it if you can find references to add to it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:09, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
+ 마감일 5 (제9주): 김민지 Minjee Kim
Hello Professor, I am Kim Min-jee, academic taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I posted the completed article in the public space. Please check it. Minis707 (talk) 03:12, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
@Bai0926 Good progress. There are several issues that need to be fixed:
Please review our module on writing the lead (introduction): User:Hanyangprofessor2/Module/Lead. Your lead contains content that is not mentioned elsewhere in the article, ex. about Dompamine style. Please move such content to the relevant section(s).
please review the guideline on which terms should have blue links (Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking). Your article contains many important terms that are not linked. In the lead, for example China's economy, Tang suit or Hanbok . This is not a problem in the lead, many other terms are not linked in other parts of the article (ex. Genghis Khan). If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link.
Is the international fashion week you mention the same as China Fashion Week?
Use AI tools or Grammary to double check for errors, such as repeating of "On the one hand" twice in the lead
Please ensure all content is referenced. There is no reference for the first paragraphs of 'Wei and jin dynasties' or 'Sui and tang dynasties' sections, for example
Please try to add more pictures, particularly for the modern fashion you discuss (remember to add only pictures already found on Wikipedia, or your own - see User:Hanyangprofessor2/Instructions/6)
Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). See User:Hanyangprofessor2/Instructions/2
Here is my answer to the question about World Fashion Week and China Fashion Week. World Fashion Week and China Fashion Week are not the same. China Fashion Week is an event organized by China Fashion Designers Association, abbreviation: CIFW. Bai0926 (talk) 08:02, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
@Bai0926 Regarding "China international fashion week", please ensure the name is properly capitalized. Is there a Chinese Wikipedia article for it, or for the China Fashion Designers Association? If not, please provide Chinese names in the right places, just as when we learned in the recent module on Manual of Style in class.
Please review my remarks above. You have not addressed majority of the issues raised. Your lead contains content that is not mentioned elsewhere in the article. You have added some links, but more are needed. I've listed specific examples above ("In the lead, for example China's economy, Tang suit or Hanbok") and you have not improved them. There are still unreferenced paragraphs; the references still have missing metadata, etc. Please address ALL of the issues I've raised CAREFULLY (not A FEW of the issues haphazardly), then ask me for the review again.
@Bai0926 Good. Next, please use Grammarly or similar service to check for the prose of your article in English. Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). For linking to other Wikipedia articles, if a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. After addressing those issues, you can can publish your article. After publishing (moving) your article, please add relevant WP:CATEGORIES. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:31, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
Professor, I don't know how to do interlanguage links, can I ask you for advice on Monday before uploading it? Bai0926 (talk) 11:55, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello, Professor
I modified and completed the translation of article based on your suggestion of modification, and other users' suggestions of modification.Please check. What else do we need to do?Thank you
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Hello, professor.
I have completed the translation.
Please check it. Thank you.
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@Jujuheee0408: Good progress, please publish your first article, and remember to proofread the content to avoid machine translation errors, which are a common reason to see submissions declined/deleted from Korean Wikipedia. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:57, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 8 (The Finals Week): ZENG WANTING&ZHANG RUIQING
Hello professor, we are students from Everyday Life and Social Structure, we already finished and pulished our wiki translate projects. Please checked it, Thank you!
@Wantiin Good progress. There are several things to fix in your English project:
If a topic exists in Korean but not English (such as ko:시화호 - Lake Sihwa) , please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. If you don't know how to use it, stop by my office hours or ask in class and I will demonstrate it.
please find the correct name of the "Hajja Engineering Company". There is no such entity ("Hajja Engineering Company").
some of your references are missing metadata; most often original data. For example, https://www.kyeonggi.com/article/201410150605456 is from 2014-10-15. Please add such dates. Another missing metadata element is the translated title (in English, do not replace to existing Korean title - use the translated title metadata parameter. Ask me in class if you need help
the "Conflict over artificial pump operating costs between municipalities" is based on news from 2014. Can you find more up to date coverage and update the article? You can also update the Korean one for extra credit
Hello professor. Thanks for your feedback, we are revising our article. Regarding your reference to "Hajja Engineering Company", I have not been able to find any information about this company either. However, "하자엔지니어링사" (the Korean name of this company) is mentioned inside the Korean article of this article. But the Korean Wikipedia page also does not have a specific link to the company. Therefore I was unable to locate the co-company. So I have removed the reference to "Hajja Engineering Company" from the English article. Rachel.zrq (talk) 07:45, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
@Rachel.zrq Good, I think this is the correct move. I think you can see why it is always important to use not only the translated title of something, but also the original. Here the error comes from the newspaper that reported poorly on this issue. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:53, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, we also added English translation of the title and dates in our article's references, please check it, Thank you! Wantiin (talk) 16:01, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
@등혜진 Your sandbox contains links to more than four articles, I count eight links. Please link each article you would like me to review here, directly (i.e. please provide four links to four articles you'd like me to review here). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:55, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
@등혜진 1. You linked the article in English. I believe you were supposed to translate it to Korean or Chinese?
2. zh:User:등혜진/东德的电影审查制度 this looks good. Please add links to English articles that do not exist in Chinese using this tool: zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . After that, you can publish your articles. After publishing (moving) your article, please add WP:CATEGORIES: and link your article to the English one with the tool explained here Help:Interlanguage links Now, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Chinese reviewers over the next few weeks
3. You again linked the English article instead of your translation
4. Regarding the draft at zh:User:등혜진 . It needs blue links to other articles on Chinese Wikipedia (and if the relevant articles don't exist, use interlanguage link tool I linked above to link to English ones). Please ensure all content is referenced. In some cases you split paragraphs into smaller ones, that's fine, but you should then copy the reference (footnote) to the end of each paragraph. After you do this, you can publish your article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:17, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
I have completed my translation work from Chinese to English and have published my article. I have linked my article to the Chinese article and added the categories. Please take a look.
Hello professor, I have linked "Zhengzhou subway flooding" to "Line 5 (Zhengzhou Metro)"and "Zhengzhou Metro".And I tried to add a template for interlanguage links, but because articles that only have Chinese but not English are included in the references，it seems like I haven't found a way to add interlanguage links to the references yet. Thank you for your reply.TMXX0818 (talk) 12:16, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
PS. The final item to improve is to link to articles that exist in Chinese but not English using Template:Interlanguage link. For example, zh:郑州北站 . There are several other articles that should be linked with this tool as well. Please compare the links in the Chinese and English articles and add missing links. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:22, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
Weekly wiki edits-WANG YIHUA
Good evening, professor，I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice courses.
I have completed ten edits on Wikipedia this week, please check.
Hello, Professor. I have completed your translation and I would like to ask you to check1、check2 it. I will seriously make corrections based on your suggestions. Thank you. ZixuanHE (talk) 03:14, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello, Professor. I used an article translation instead of editing this week. But I don't know why it can't be successfully connected to the English article.
Okay, I have realized the problem. There is no problem with my translation. It is because the author has set permissions to not allow others to edit, so that I can't link the two articles together. Muqing112233 (talk) 14:35, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
Professor, I'm sorry that my Wikipedia account has been blocked to 6.29.Now that I can't finish my homework, is there any other way I can finish my homework or do some other homework? Liangyiqiao2004 (talk) 05:22, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
I've checked the block and confirmed that it is correct. Admins including Manchiu (I believe) and me are willing to unblock once we are convinced that Liangyiqiao2004 understands why they got this block and how to avoid it. Translations from Wikipedias of another language does not violate copyright as long as they are properly tagged (see Template:Translated_page). It could be better for both your Liangyiqiao2004 and patrollers on zhwiki if their translations are done on draft pages or userpages. Translations under certain quality are subject to deletion on zhwiki while drafts and userpages are given way more patience. Tiger (Talk) 13:57, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
PS. In the meantime, you can earn extra credit by doing constructive edits on English and Korean Wikipedias, as well as Wikimedia Commons or Wikivoyage. Please see syllabus for details of extra credit tasks. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:07, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
@Liangyiqiao2004: Hello, you were blocked on Chinese Wikipedia due to copyright violation. Please note that you should not copy content from external websites (e.g. Baidu Baike) and paste on the article (e.g. your edits on zh:豌豆黄, zh:艾窝窝 these articles). You can discuss your unblock request with admins on your user talkpage on Chinese Wikipedia. Thanks.
Dear Professor, I am Huang lingxuan a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia. I have done English Wikipedia edits and Chinese Wikipedia edits about 250 times in total. And I have modified the problem of Hua you mentioned last time.Please check. Thank you. Hhhlx (talk) 02:19, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
Good afternoon professor, first of all, thank you for your reply. I added some links in the article, and answered the administrator's questions and modified the relevant questions, thank you. Hhhlx (talk) 16:30, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
@Hhhlx Good, but please fix the links - many go to wappass.baidu.com which is not a website most people can access.
Check for other requests for sources or clarification - I still see several at large. For example here:
"He successively served as the Governor of Yuezhou and Xuanzhou.[when?]"
※ In addition, after taking the quiz in the Quiz tab on the LMS, I tried to retake the quiz to correct the content, but the content of the quiz item changed. Is there any problem in this case?
Hello, professor. I would like to inform you that I have uploaded the main project for 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' course.
Originally, I was going to translate the Promotion of anorexia and Film censorship articles from English to Korean, but someone had already translated the film censorship article almost completely, so I translated the gaps in the Korean translation of the related article, Cinema of Japan, from English to Korean.
To summarize, I translated the promotion of anorexia and cinema of Japan articles from English to Korean.
The translated documentation is here. [[24]], [[25]]
@Cookinu Well done. Please monitor your work to see if there is any feedback from Korean editors over the next few weeks.
Since your second translation is relatively short, perhaps you could translate another short topic from English to Korean? You can chose any topic you like (anything you find interesting). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:01, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
Collective Intelligence in Practice courses —WANG YIHUA,LI MENGRU
Good evening, professor，I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice courses.
My team member @TMXX0818 and I have already published the translated article. This is my published article, please check it. This is my team member @TMXX0818's published article, please check it.
@Huejyi Your translations look good and are close to being finished, very good. For articles that exist on English but not Korean Wikipedia, please use ko:틀:임시링크 (you don't need to fix this in references, only in the main text). Please monitor your article to check for feedback from Korean editors. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:14, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, these are two Wikipedia articles that I have edited. Please review them. Thank you very much.1，2Jzhdylb (talk) 16:45, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, I am a student of your Sociology of Everyday Life class and Collective Intelligence in Practice courses studies, and I have completed two translations of Wikipedia,
@Sephyy Regarding your English article, it looks good but we need some fixes:
If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link . A sample term to link in this way is zh:豫章書院 (南昌), but there are others - please compare Chinese text to English and see what is missing
@Sephyy Good. Please monitor your work over the next few weeks to see if the reviewers mark any issues for fixing. The Chinese article already has one request at the top, from @暁月凛奈 - perhaps you can ask that user for more detailed feedback on what needs to be fixed. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:58, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia——WANG YUERONG
@WYRRRR Good, you are almost finished. Below are issues to be fixed:
Some of the content in your article is missing references - please add them. If they are also missing from the original Chinese article, you can add them there as well for extra credit.
If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link - for example this is how you should link to zh:瑞星 and zh:快视频
After that, you can publish (move) your articles. I recommend the following name Criticism of Qihoo 360:
Hello, professor I added references and intermediate language links. Could you check it out for me? Can I move this article out now? WYRRRR (talk) 13:27, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
Good evening, Professor. I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Sociology of Everyday Life aka Everyday Life courses. Last week, I submitted two translated articles and asked you questions in class. In the end, I completed the revisions to those two articles. And my third article was deleted, so I added some new references. This time it was not deleted, please check.
@ZHANGQI1066 I am afraid many of the references you have added are not good. References 11-14 are just meaningless text like "Reference for Ming Dynasty's control over Chongqing." - where is the actual reference? Links for references 21-32 to seem broken or lead to unrelated articles. Please fix them all, then format them so that they have correct metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). Currently they look like they've been generated by a hallucinating AI.
In addition, your article (history of) needs some improvements in its linking structure.
1) Some links you added are to Wikipedia:Disambiguation pages like Yuzhou. Which Yuzhou did you mean? To identify and fix the problem, go to your Preferences and activate the gadget called "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange". After you save your preferences and refresh (reload) your article, the wrong links will be in orange. Please fix them.
ok！I will correct it right away. Since there are a lot of parts that are in our national history textbooks, I didn't think the part about the Ming Dynasty needed any special detail. Sorry I will zai ci for the modification. I used ai in the revision process, because this article originally had English content, only due to the fact that the Chinese translation is very much after. So I used ai to combine my revised content in the sandbox with the original English of this article. This process may have caused a lot of errors, which I will fix right away. 14.34.103.171 (talk) 09:32, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
I have completed the modifications. Firstly, regarding the reference citations of 11-14, I have removed some of the text and references, and changed the text references that I believe can continue to be retained into the form of external link references.
Secondly, I have made modifications to the citation section of 21-32. Due to some of the original citations being related to Dai Li, I have replaced those citations with a unified format and removed unnecessary ones. And regarding the reference to the Anti Japanese War section, my original text was deleted, so I found the link to this book on Amazon. I am not sure if this is feasible. And I had a link before that described an article about the North Korean government in Chongqing, but after clicking on it, it was an article about insects, and I also made modifications to this section.
Due to the fact that there have been English articles on this topic before, but the English section is only about one tenth of the Chinese section and the content does not overlap. So I have many problems when transferring translation content from Shahe to specific web pages. I asked AI if they could help me sort and combine my translated article and original text in a reasonable order, but this caused many citation issues. I'm sorry for the result.
Regarding the structural issues of the article:
1) I have completed the identification of 'yu zhou' and searched again for the most suitable website, so I did not use the method you proposed. I hope you can take a look at my results. And the specific Chinese characters for 'yu zhou' are mentioned in the next paragraph of the original text, so if you think it is necessary, I can make changes to the article and remind readers here.
Hello, professor! I'm Jeongha Ahn and I'm taking the Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I've finished editing deadline 3 and 4. Please check it! Thank you.
@Jeongha1 In here, please note that terms in headings are not usually linked, and links should go to other Wikipedia articles, not wiktionary. I recommend that you expand ko:문화 충격 directly, while keeping in mind that only referenced content can be added. Unreferenced content (or poorly translated content) may be removed by reviewing Korean Wikipedia editors, and it will not count for class credit - so make sure to add references together with your translations, and to proofread them carefully. Good luck! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:28, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 7: 손서현 Seohyun Son
I submit Deadline 7. Before submitting my final assignment, please give me feedback. Thank you
@MouFengcoo I will check your final issue soon. I hope the other student finds your feedback useful; please remember that assignments completed late are awarded only some of the points you'd get if you complete them on time. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:57, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
@Lee Wooyeon Your translations are a good start but they are not finished. Please ensure that you translate all content - there are still untranslated parts, including most references. Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Korean).
For articles that exist on English but not Korean Wikipedia, please use ko:틀:임시링크 .
Hello professor, I'm Chaeyeong Lee, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life. Left a feedback on my friend's Wikipedia edit. Please check. hereChaeyeong09 (talk) 05:13, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
@Hayoung1 Good progress. Your translations look good and are close to being finished, very good. For articles that exist on English but not Korean Wikipedia, please use ko:틀:임시링크
Make sure to include full bibliographical references for books and other sources cited at the bottom of your article.
Hello, Professor. I am a student in the Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I would like to report my final progress:
1. I have successfully published my article. It has been rated as Start-Class articles. And the language link has been added. Please check. Although there are still some shortcomings. I will work hard with the Wikipedia administrator to revise it. Thank you for your valuable suggestions on this article.
2. I have also completed all the extra credit activities for the blog. Please check it.
3. I will edit some additional English Wikipedia. The main edited article is this. Please check it.
@Lihaochang678 Well done. Please note that several Chinese editors have reviewed your work and some have asked for additional fixes, you can see who they are here. I recommend you contact them on their talk pages and ask for detailed feedback.
Regarding your additions to the English article here, remember that all content added should be referenced, otherwise it can be removed form Wikipedia and will not count for course grade. Please add references to the content that is missing it to ensure your effort is not wasted. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:35, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
OK, professor, I understand. Thank you for your advice.
1. I have communicated with those administrators. I basically know where the problem is. We will work together to revise this article.
2. I will continue to add some references to the additional edited Wikipedia. And make appropriate changes.
4.Here are the images I uploaded on Wikimedia Commons with the relevant tags and picture descriptions.
5.Here are the translations of two articles that I and my team member MU QING have completed.One is a Chinese translation into English.One is translated from English into Chinese. Both articles have been revised and published as recommended.
That's all I've done this semester.I hope to get your confirmation. Thank you for your help this semester. Thank you once again for your time and attention.Wishing you all the best and have a wonderful holiday! 1.241.68.131 (talk) 19:54, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello, Professor. I am a student in the Everyday Life and Social Structure class.Here's my translation of Wikipedia. Check it out. [26]This Wikipedia is very new to me, so there are very many things that are not done well. The professor worked hard this semester, thank you. Orange-1203 (talk) 22:24, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
@Orange-1203 Regarding your Chinese article, it seems ready. You can publish (move) it. After moving (publishing) your article(s), please add categories (see bottom of the original English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list)
But please keep in mind that if you are translating from English to Chinese for this assignment, you need to carry out TWO translations. Anarchism in Korea is one. What is your second one? If you have not chosen it yet, how about Anarchism in Poland? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:53, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
@Seungmilsm Good. Now please monitor your work over the next few weeks to ensure that any feedback from Korean reviewers is promptly addressed. Remember to proofread your translations to eliminate any machine translation errors, for example. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:54, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
@Wsw1357 To use a picture, click "add image" on Chinese Wikipedia and add the picture name, or copy the code from "use this picture" option from the image page. You should be able to use File:Censorship of Tik Tok.svg and File:Banning of TikTok on state devices in the United States.svg on Chinese Wikipedia without any problems, although you may have to ask Chinese experienced editors on how to copy the advanced caption (legend) code from English - I recommend doing so here: at zh:维基百科:Discord交流群
Hello professor.I have successfully inserted this photo through your explanation.But for the last link, I don't have this option because I implemented the wrong upload a few weeks ago and the administrator has restricted my permissions on this. Can you delete this permission?Or maybe there are ways to solve it. 211.36.149.43 (talk) 05:38, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
Just driving by because this edit triggered the edit filter, which I am patrolling, but you seem to be logged out, which is uncommon for a student editor. Maybe fix that? Also IP editors can't upload images if I'm correct. Anyways, I'm sure that if an image is protected from being uploaded, I'm sure people with appropriate permissions can do it. Also a drive by note that I've modified the archiving interval for this page since it's getting too laggy to patrol. ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 05:50, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
Well I've encountered problematic student edits before, but they're more uncommon than you think, as much as an IP forgetting to log in during a discussion and causing a patroller to revert the comment because they thought a completely different person was replying. I had to get an administrator to protect an article from being made to prevent 4th recreation of CSD-worthy mess once, but that was about it. By the way, I've modified the archive date to 14d for the convenience of other people and myself as the page was getting too heavy, but I hope you don't mind. ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 06:05, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
Oh well. Anyways, @Wsw1357, I'm going to intervene but only autoconfirmed users can upload messages in Wikipedia and you have 9 edits to both ZH and EN versions, which regrettably is not enough for the status. ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 06:10, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
@AlphaBetaGamma Sure. I was trying to keep more content here on the off chance some students would read it and learn from my comments to others, but, a, I've never seen any indication this happens, and b, yeah, this page is too big and I am having trouble loading it myself, so - good call. Cheers, Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:42, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
@Wsw1357 You will need to publish (move) your article before you can link it to the English article. Please publish it first, then link it. Hopefully this will fix the issue you are having. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:01, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
@Hanyangprofessor2Professor, I don't have the option to move, which means I can't publish, I can only publish in my own sandbox.I tried but couldn't find a move option.If I can't publish it means I can't join the link, what should I do with the tasks I did earlier? Wsw1357 (talk) 06:47, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello Professor, I am Kim Min-jee, academic taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I am attaching an article, so I would appreciate it if you could check it and give me feedback.
@Minis707 Good progress. Please finish your translation ASAP (for example, your Korean article on Overgrazing is missing more than half the references). Information overload is also missing many. Once you are done, you can move (publish) your article. Then please add categories (see bottom of the original English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list). After that, please update me linking to your published articles, and monitor them to see if there is any feedback from Korean reviewers. In particular, make sure to proofread your work correctly to remove any errors from machine translation; too many errors can result in your article being deleted and the assignment failed. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:03, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
@전진이 Good start, although you should have done so months ago, per our deadlines. Please try to finish your work ASAP, right now this is just a beginning that needs links and references and other advanced elements like images. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:40, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
The deadline is 7,8 submissions.- 2022071194 Jeong Da-yeon taking <Everyday Life Story> class
Originally, I tried to edit Korean translations on two topics: 1. The Wave of Democracy document and 2. The censorship document of Korean movies. 2. Someone else has already translated the censorship document of Korean movies into Korean, so I translated the document on "Latin America's History" as a Wikipedia-recommended editing document into Korean.
I was going to visit the lab today Friday and talk to you in person, but I'm sorry to talk to you late because you didn't come today.
If there's anything I need to change, please let me know Jeong dayean (talk) 08:10, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
However, your translations have a number of errors. You need to add references in the form of footnotes to appopriate places. For articles that exist on English but not Korean Wikipedia, please use ko:틀:임시링크 to link articles from English Wikipedia. Remember to proofread your translations to eliminate any machine translation errors, for example - your articles have already been tagged as having translation problems. Please correct the issues promptly; poorly translated articles can be deleted and that would negatively affect our assignment.
@LIYULUN Good job. To finish your English article, please Please the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Korean).
@Seohyun S I am glad to see progress. Here are some final issues to fix:
Some of your links go to English Wikipedia.For articles that exist in English but not Korean, please use ko:틀:임시링크 to link articles from English Wikipedia.
Then please publish your articles. After moving (publishing) your article(s), please add categories (see bottom of the original English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list).
And please monitor your work over the next few weeks to ensure that any feedback from Korean reviewers is promptly addressed. Remember to proofread your translations to eliminate any machine translation errors, for example. Poor translation can lead to your articles being deleted and that would negatively impact your grade, so please make sure to proofread them carefully before publication.
@Minis707 Good. Please publish your articles as I described in my previous feedback (moving them, adding categories and linking to the English original). And please monitor your work over the next few weeks to ensure that any feedback from Korean reviewers is promptly addressed. Remember to proofread your translations to eliminate any machine translation errors, for example. Poor translation can lead to your articles being deleted and that would negatively impact your grade, so please make sure to proofread them carefully before publication. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:51, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
About Blog
Hello, Professor
I am LI MENGRU, a student in the Collective Intelligence in Practice course.
I have completed all the blog assignments on time, please check them out.
Thank you very much for your help this semester, which has helped me gain a lot. I wish you a happy holiday！TMXX0818 (talk) 04:27, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
in Eggy Party, please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). If you don't know how to do this, ask me in class or during office hours
in Taiwan Daily News, please add categories (look at Chinese article and its categories, then try to add similar categories to your English translation), and format references with metedata.
in Liu Shuqin, format references with metedata. That article can also use more blue links, for example to Tsinghua University. See what other terms can be linked and link them. For articles that exist in Chinese but not English use Template:Interlanguage link.
Zhang Wenhuan needs categories and metadata fixing in references
Wang Baiyuan can be moved to mainspace after you add categories (most references there are well formatted already with metadata). After publishing it (moving it), please link it to the Chinese article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list).
Please add links to your other articles in the same fashion (see how they are linked to in Chinese then try to add links from existing English articles)
Wu Kunhuang needs ref metadata, and addressing the orphan issue
I have been completing the above tasks these days, and I added "Guo Qiusen"'s article to solve the orphan article of "Liu Shuqin". I have moved "Wang Baiyuan"'s article and the cross-language links of the above articles. Please check, thank you!
My blog1 and blog2 assignments are also all completed, And commented on classmates' blogs more than a dozen times, please check, thank you, professor! Yangpeifu (talk) 06:59, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
@장로아 You are making progress, but please use a proper infobox template. Look at the infoboxes used in other similar articles (ex. Zhou Shen), and copy one of them and add it to your article, then modify accordingly.
After that, focus on adding references (and ensure they have the correct metadata - author, date, publisher, and title; if the source is Chinese the title should be both in Chinese and English). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:02, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
Professor, this is my revised translation, please check
@장로아 Good,but there are still many issues to fix. Some are the ones I mentioned before - For links to Chinese articles like "The Coming One 2 please use tool: Template:Interlanguage link. Some link to articles that do not even seem to exist on zh wiki like 见面吧!电台 .
Also, please add Chinese name of that person to your lead and infobox - again, compare your article with Zhou Shen "Zhou Shen (Chinese: 周深; pinyin: Zhōu Shēn; born 29 September 1992), also known as"
Your three references do not have correct metadata, and the biggest problem still remains - most of your article is still unreferenced. In order for you to be able to publish your article and complete the assignment,all the content needs to be referenced to reliable sources (see Wikipedia:Verifiability); as mentioned in our syllabus, only referenced content counts for our assignment. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:45, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
Semester Summary—ZHONG XIN
Hello Professor,
I am ZHONG XIN, a student in the Collective Intelligence in Practice course.（Wikipedia ID: Zhongxxin）
I will give you a report on all the course tasks I have completed this semester:
1. I have added a lot of new content to the article "中国史前文化", and have translated the Chinese article into English (Prehistory of China) and then published and revised it.
2. In this semester, I have edited the English Wikipedia more than 340 times (on average, more than 20 times per week), the Chinese Wikipedia more than 50 times, the Wikivoyage more than 20 times, and the Wikicommons more than 50 times.
3. This is a total of 17 blog posts I wrote this semester. In addition to the weekly blog assignments, there were also blog discussions in Collective Intelligence in Practice course. And I have commented on my group member @CHENG SHIYI's blog post more than ten times.
These are all the tasks I have completed this semester, please check them. I hope I can get some extra marks from these.
I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.
Thank you for your hard work this semester, Professor. Thank you very much for your constant teaching and help. Zhongxxin (talk) 21:01, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
Good evening, professor. I don't know how to add citations to some Chinese abbreviations, such as "dragon through flowers"（龙穿花）. So I changed it to a description of the meaning of the word. And the sentence "exudes a unique charm" means that the iron flower has unique characteristics, which are displayed in front of the audience. How should I add citations to this sentence? Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 16:44, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
@Hanyuanyuan613 You should check which of your existing sources confirms those facts, such as says that the iron flowe has unique characteristics, and add it to the relevant sentence. If none of your current sources contain that assertion, you need to find a new source to add or remove that sentence as unverifiable. See also Wikipedia:VerifiabilityPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:51, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello Professor！
I am WEN JIAYAO（2023087238）a student of the Everyday Life and Social Structure.WANG SIWEN（2023025414）and I will finished our homework in a group. Our project is to translate a Wikipedia article about the license plate number of civil motor vehicles of the People's Republic of China. https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/中华人民共和国民用机动车号牌 In addition, We will complete a research on the identity and social status of car owners reflected by Shanghai license plate policy in recent years.！
What do you think, professor? I hope to hear your reply.
.My student numbeWen Jiayao and I finished our homework in a group. Her student number is202308723. Our project is to Wjyy1212 (talk) 06:10, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
@Wjyy1212 Very good job with the pictures. For your images, can you add the description in English? You should also add categories (they are like tags). See Commons:Categories .
This is my sandbox link, which contains the content I translated.The description and classification of the picture is a little difficult for me, because it has been uploaded. If you want to change it, you need to use coding. I am not very good at using it. I’m sorry, Professor. Wjyy1212 (talk) 14:14, 4 April 2024 (UTC)
@Wjyy1212 This is a good start, but please use tools like Grammarly to improve your grammar; many sentences are hard to understand. Next, work on adding blue links (hyperlinks) and correctly formatted references, as well as importing images. If there are any code issues, talk to me during class or office hours, and I'll help you solve the problems. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:23, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
Professor, I didn't have time to visit you in the office on Friday because of the exam. I have slightly modified the translation. Do you have any questions?The translation is in my sandbox. Wjyy1212 (talk) 07:05, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
@Wjyy1212 You are making good progress. Remember that all content added should be referenced, otherwise it can be removed form Wikipedia and will not count for course grade. You can publish your work (WP:MOVE it to the mainspace) anytime.
To identify and fix the problem, go to your Preferences and activate the gadget called "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange". After you save your preferences and refresh (reload) your article, the wrong links will be in orange. Please fix them, then you can publish (move) your page.
Hi professor, I'm a student in your class "Everyday Life and Social Structure". I edited and added references in here. please check. I used a citation template and make my reference have a title, author, publisher, date of publication and translated title. Kimseoeun2023079825 (talk) 15:17, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
Umm.. actually it’s not an error. I edited because the company’s official spelling is Haimarrow. Not the Haemaro. You can see here. Also, when you search haemaro in google, you cannot see the company that take over mom’s touch. When you search haimarrow, you can find the official site. Haimarrow and Haemaro, both can read “해마로“, its not a problem in korean, but i think it have to be more correct in enlglish wikipedia.(because it is a korea company, enlgish users can have a problem when they search it.) 210.98.151.244 (talk) 16:09, 29 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello, Professor. I have completed your translation and I would like to ask you to check1check2 it. I will seriously make corrections based on your suggestions. Thank you. JINJINYAN (talk) 07:28, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
To identify and fix the problem, go to your Preferences and activate the gadget called "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange". After you save your preferences and refresh (reload) your article, the wrong links will be in orange. Please fix them, then you can publish (move) your page.
After moving it, please add categories (see bottom of the original Chinese articles for Chinese categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the Chinese article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list).
@Han77720 Good, but please try to address the Orphan issue I mentioned above. If you do not know what it means, read the linked article explaining this in detail (in short, it means you need to indentify other articles on English Wikipedia that should mention yours and link it from them). Good luck! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:00, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
You should add some images to your article. If there are none on Chinese Wikipedia, try to locate them on Wikimedia Commons by searching it in English and Chinese for related terms.
To identify and fix the problem, go to your Preferences and activate the gadget called "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange". After you save your preferences and refresh (reload) your article, the wrong links will be in orange. Please fix them, then you can publish (move) your page.
After moving it, please add categories (see bottom of the original Chinese articles for Chinese categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the Chinese article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list).
Regarding your Chinese article, you can publish it as well, following the same advice as I gave you above.
@Yue03090616 I see. Your article has one major problem - compared to the Chinese article, it has more references, but most of them seem to be fake / garbage such as links to irrelevant pages. Please remove all fake references from your article immediately, and ensure that the remaining references are properly formatted with metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:37, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
@Yue03090616Your English article still contains many fake/wrong references, likely a result of using a malfunctioning AI tool. Please remove ALL references from it, then add references from Chinese Wikipedia. Otherwise your English article will be deleted from English Wikipedia shortly, as it is not only effectively unreferenced, but it has fake/wrong references. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:43, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
Your Chinese article was published correctly. Please monitor it over the next few days to check for reviews from Chinese editors. Remember to proofread it to avoid errors introduced by machine translation - if the quality of the translation is too poor, the article may be deleted, which would cause the assignment to fail. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:45, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
PS. Please send me an email with a link to your blogs or link them here; I cannot locate them. I also encourage you to consider translating additional content for extra credit. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:01, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
BAILINHAN
Professor, I may be in trouble, I had a problem with the article I posted, Chinese Fashion redirected to Chinese Clothing, the Chinese Fashion I wrote could not be named, and after being warned by the Wikipedia administrators I tried to move back to my home page but found that I could not do that either. I left a message on Wednesday but it didn't go out because of the internet, I'm sorry for the trouble, please show me how to solve it, thanks.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bai0926/Fashion_in_ChinaBai0926 (talk) 14:46, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
At this point I recommend that you try to merge the parts of the article that are referenced and not plagiarized into Chinese clothing, and to try to earn extra credit by translating some article(s) from English to Chinese Wikipedia, as we are running out of time to do further research on your chosen topic. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:26, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
Professor, I have compared and blended the content of my article with Chinese clothing, check it out!
If I want to translate an article into Chinese, should I just find a random article or should I choose from the original topic? Bai0926 (talk) 06:28, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
Professor, I apologize for the many interruptions. But I would like to explain that I did not plagiarize others' content, my article and the Chinese clothing are not the same in terms of citing articles and content although they are both strung together with time development. You can compare and check. Bai0926 (talk) 08:34, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
Your contributions to Chinse clothing will be recognized as part of your main project, so your effort will not be wasted. As for translating content to Chinese, you can chose any content you want, although if you want some suggestions, how about this? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:12, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
I checked the translation assignment, is the score for this assignment an extra score or is it a score for my big assignment? It seems a bit difficult to complete in a short period of time.Also I have completed 20 more Wikipedia edits please check.
But try to address the Wikipedia:Orphan problem affecting your two translations. Check what articles link to the Chinese articles, then try to find similar articles on English Wikipedia and add link to your new English translations in them.
1. I discussed with the administrator. The administrator said that there are some unclear definitions in the English article itself. The administrator said: (The bigger problem is that the English version itself did not make it clear that when the media used the term "biohacker", they were referring to DIY biology in a broad sense or just body hacking in a narrow sense. In particular, the relevant reports of the Washington Post have a paywall, and it seems that it is impossible to verify without paying them a little money). So far, my translation has been completed. In terms of content, I will correct it with experts in this field based on the changes made in the English article.
2. My team member has also completed the translation. She sent it to you for inspection before. She also successfully published it. And completed the editing. Please check.
3. Professor, in order to facilitate you to check my blog directly. I added the link. Please check.
I am very willing to do so. It will be my honor. Learning more will also be a kind of improvement for me. Thank you, professor. You have worked hard. Lihaochang678 (talk) 05:17, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
4. for extra points, I created an entry for New Chinese Style and finished compiling it.
I'm sorry that I don't have an accurate memory of the number of POINTS gained from the class, so please confirm.
This is all I have done this semester, thank you for your help this semester and I hope to receive your approval. I wish you all the best! Bai0926 (talk) 05:14, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
HI, Professor.I am a student in the Introduction to Collective Intelligence Practices and the Sociology of Information course.I have started to make translation homework Please check it.Thank you! Redyeoni (talk) 15:08, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
@Redyeoni It is a good start. But your sandbox is on English Wikipedia. You should copy it to Chinese Wikipedia - the code on English is not the same as on Chinese one. The sooner you start working in Chinese Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:28, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
@Redyeoni This is a good start, which you should have completed over a month ago. You need to move it to Chinese Wikipedia, fix errors resulting from interwiki move, then publish it. After moving it, please add categories (see bottom of the original English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list). Remember to proofread your translations to eliminate any machine translation errors, for example. Poor translation can lead to your articles being deleted and that would negatively impact your grade, so please make sure to proofread them carefully before publication.
You will need to complete much extra credit work in addition to raise your grade to satisfactory levels, since you have not carried out most of the other assignments and missed most deadlines for the main one. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:23, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello Professor！I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.I have already started my translation work, I translated the first paragraph before it could be quoted and inserted, if there is any grammar problem, please give me your opinion, I will change it in time, thank you! Hkiho (talk) 14:59, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
@Hkiho This is a good start and the grammar is fine. However, as it happens, another of our students has translated this very article without discussing this with me - I assume this was done for extra credit although I have not heard from them yet. See User:Muqing112233/Handan Junior High School Student Kills a Student . As such, while you have successfully completed all assignments so far, and I will credit your work as well, I recommend that you change your topic. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:24, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, as you said, this student translated without approval, but I have already completed most of the translations. I don't want to make me choose other articles because of her mistake, other Chinese articles that meet the requirements are difficult to find, but in order to be fair, I will not plagiarize her article, so I choose to find a new article. Because the time to re-translate the new article is urgent, if there is any mistake, please help me correct it. I wish you a good day！ Hkiho (talk) 17:14, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
The topic is ok, but right now your draft is not close to the standards that are required for publication on English Wikipedia. It is primarily a plot summary with no information about the importance of the work; it is also not referenced. Remember that content added to English Wikipedia (and credited for our course) has to be referenced (as I mentioned above). For articles about movies or other works of arts, we need to provide information about awards and reception. Please see formatting and sections at Meteor Shower (TV series) or other entries in (for example) Category:2009 Chinese television series debuts, paying special attention to section(s) on "Reception".
Please also review Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Film, with special attention to "Critical reception" and the policy on importance (Wikipedia:Notability (films)) - right now nothing in your draft suggest the chosen production is important enough to warrant an entry in Wikipedia (for that, you need to include the said section on Reception, with reviews by reliable critics - in newspapers, magazines, or such, not social media)
Professor, can I meet the final requirements of the article now, because the previous article others choose, I can change the topic to meet the requirements of the article very few, I hope you can tell me what else to do, thank you very much for your reply Hkiho (talk) 01:59, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
@Hkiho I am afraid I do not understand your question. Just above I told you what you need to do to bring your work up to acceptable quality. If anything I wrote is unclear, please let me know here or you can come to my office hours or talk to me after our class. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:30, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
Professor, thank you for helping me in class, I'm looking for a new topic now, I'll finish it as soon as possible this week if I can, thank you! Hkiho (talk) 14:02, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
Thank you for your reply professor, so I decided not to focus on TV series anymore, this is my new article should meet the requirements, if possible, I will finish as soon as possible, thank you for your reply, wish you have a nice day！ Hkiho (talk) 02:47, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
@Hkiho This is an interesting topic. I have moved it to a better title. Here are items you need to fix:
please review the grammar and vocabulary with a tool like Grammarly. Some concepts are not translated properly' for example, you use the term Demonization but I am pretty sure you mean Discrimination
Your article needs a proper lead (summary) at the top. You can try to create one by asking an AI tool like ChatGPT to summarize your article - but please proofread the outcome and ensure it has no errors (hallucinations)
Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese).
please add categories (see bottom of the original Chinese articles for Chinese categories and try to add similar one to your article)
Please ensure all content is referenced. I see several sentences (half-paragraphs, etc. that do not have references.
Thanks to the professor's guidance, I corrected a lot of grammatical errors and corrected them according to your requirements, if it passes, I will upload it as required, thank you for your reply! Hkiho (talk) 14:48, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
@Hkiho Good progress. For Xinyang Incident, please add a link using the Template:Interlanguage link. Ditto for 黄泛区, 苏北, 王士性 and 炒作 (double check first if they don't have English article, I fixed one link for you - 中国大陆 has an English Wikipedia article (Mainland China).
You also moved the article back to the previous title, despite my note above that I have moved it to a better title. Please move it to the title I used unless you have a good reason no to?
Thank you professor for your opinion, I have revised the title, as well as the use of a lot of technical terms, and added a lot of blue links, but now the only problem is that there is no English article about the Xinyang incident, I tried to use Template:Interlanguage link.I would appreciate it if you could help!Thanks for your reply and I wish youEnjoyable day Hkiho (talk) 06:31, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, thank you for fixing the link for me. After checking, it is correct. Thank you very much! And I fixed the link to Six Central Provinces and uploaded the English version of my translation for the original text. This is my assignment. Thank you for your reply and I wish you a pleasant day!! Hkiho (talk) 06:09, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
@Hkiho Well done. For extra credit, now that your wiki skills have improved, you could consider finishing your old work from last year (still available in the history of your sandbox here).
Hello professor, about zh: Handan junior high school student murder to English this topic was written by other students before, you asked me to change the topic may you forgot, it is in the dialogue above. I have been unable to contact my team member, so I can only try my best to complete my own task. Thanks to the professor's affirmation, I learned a lot of skills in using Wikipedia in this class! Although there are many shortcomings, I will continue to work hard! I hope I can take your class again next time！！ Hkiho (talk) 16:50, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
@Liangyiqiao2004 Good progress. Regarding your Chinese article,you can now publish (WP:MOVE) your article. After that, please add WP:CATEGORIES: and link your article to the English one with the tool explained here Help:Interlanguage links. After that, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Chinese reviewers over the next few weeks.
Regarding your English article, it needs much more work. Much of it is is unreferenced (see (WP:V and recall that only referenced content is allowed on Wikipedia and counts for our class credit). Next, your article needs throughout proofreading as right now it contains numerous grammar and vocabulary errors that make reading and understanding it very difficult. I am afraid that almost every sentence has errors or is written in unencyclopedic style (see Wikipedia:Writing_better_articles#Use_of_pronouns). Please have your article reviewed by someone who is fluent in English; you can also try to use tools like Grammarly but I am afraid the amount of errors I see will make any automatic tool struggle with fixing this.
Also, please let me know when you have asked for and gotten permission to translate this topic from Chinese in English? I cannot locate it in my records. (The topic is probably fine, but I need to know the name of the Chinese article you are translating to offer you more feedback and to ensure you have chosen a topic that is not already covered in English; like Siheyuan, which already is, and has some coverage under Siheyuan#Layout_of_Beijing_siheyuan) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:18, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
Professor, I have corrected the syntax error with grammarly, please check it.I'm sorry about the changed theme. I changed the theme to Beijing Courtyard because there were many themes that didn't have proper translation in English. Liangyiqiao2004 (talk) 10:10, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
@Liangyiqiao2004 Good that you are improving the language. You should clarify the topic of your article - I assume it is about a type of a building?
@SU YIQI I am afraid your work was declined from Chinese Wikipedia by a reviewer to due to poor translation (翻译品质不佳、格式不符，在草稿空间改善 ). Please improve it (fix the problems raised) and then ask the reviewer (@TimWu007) for a new review. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:51, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
@Sangrok02 Good progress, but some content of those articles is still not fully translated. Please ensure all is translated, included references (footnotes). Many references are not yet present in your translation. 생활임금 has 24, but the English version, over 90. (The other article is 11 vs 13) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:28, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
FAN XINRU
Hello professor, I have completed the editing task for Wikipedia and hope to receive an additional score. These are five Wikipedia articles that I have edited: 1,2,3, 4, 5. This is the article that I corrected and marked as incorrect: 67. Please review, thank you very much. Jzhdylb (talk) 20:04, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
Dear student @Linziyu1823. Remember to sign (Wikipedia:Signatures) your messages, otherwise you cannot be notified of my replies.
Your article (currently at HAHAHAHAHA (Chinese program）which is a bad title, due to wrong bracket and ambigious term in the parenthesis - it will be renamed shortly) has a number of problems.
First, you should have asked me whether this topic is a good one to translate - this is required in Deadline 2. I do not see that you have ever done so, and the article you have chosen is problematic. It does not appear to meet Wikipedia:Notability, because it lacks sections on awards (reviews) and reception (awards), which are used to demonstrate that the topic is important. You can rescue your article by adding such sections. For example of how this should look, see IPartment#Reception and Awards below, or much better Friends#Reception.
Please add Chinese name to the top of the article (see how it is done in iPartment).
Your article needs more blue links. Please compare it to the Chinese article and link all the important concepts (see Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking). If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link.
Ok Professor, there is a question do I need to re-translate an article or improve this one? In addition, is my other translation OK?Please check itLinziyu1823 (talk) 07:07, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
@Linziyu1823 Regarding HAHAHAHAHA (Chinese TV series) as I noted above, you need to show the importance of this topic by adding information on reviews and awards. Otherwise it will be deleted and will not count for much course credit. If you find such sources and add them to the article, please also say so at the relevant deletion discussion (a Wikipedia reviewer has already nominted that article for deletion due to lack of importance).
Regarding your other work. zh:捷克建筑发展 was deleted from Chinese Wikipedia by a Chinese reviewer @Manchiu who explained the issues in their deletion comment (red box). Please read them carefully and improve your draft there so that the issues raised (ex. poor translation) are fixed before publishing it again.
I see you have chosen another topic for translation, Five thousand years of Chinese civilization. It is an good topic (notable) and I don't think it will be deleted. However, it has a number of problems that need to be fixed (as the Chinese article is simply not finished). Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). Then you should add references to unrefenced paragraphs and sentences. The article is also pretty short. Please expand it using the following high quality sources: one, two. If you cannot access them, ask for help in our Hanyang ERICA library. You can also use Chinese sources such as the ones found here (link). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:18, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
I've finished editing the wiki. As you gave me the feedback on The Economist, I've added my editing to the Korean document, and I've also added a citation for it. Please give me your feedback. '이코노미스트' here and '일본의맥주' This is my page. Chaeyeong09 (talk) 05:26, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
And please monitor your work over the next few weeks to ensure that any feedback from Korean reviewers is promptly addressed. Remember to proofread your translations to eliminate any machine translation errors, for example. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:57, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
As the professor gave me the feedback, I changed the 'The Economist(이코노미스트)' to natural Korean after reviewing it to avoid machine translation. Regarding the 'Japanese beer(일본의 맥주)', I added my editing content to the original document and quoted it, and changed it to natural Korean sentence to avoid machine translation. Please check it. The Economist(이코노미스트) is here and Japanese beer(일본의 맥주) is hereChaeyeong09 (talk) 17:52, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
@Chaeyeong09 Well done. You are almost done. For articles that exist on English but not Korean Wikipedia, please use ko:틀:임시링크 to link articles from English Wikipedia. (for example, for :en:John_Ralston_Saul). See if there is any more content to translate from English for The Economist. I'll update your grade shortly Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:16, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
To accommodate the feedback, I linked the English wiki for the contents that are not in the Korean wiki regarding the 'economist'. Also, for more information, I added the part that corresponds to 'censorship'. Please check. hereChaeyeong09 (talk) 08:36, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor. I'm Jeongha Ahn and I'm taking the Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I've finished editing deadline 5. I added a lot more content than what I edited on Deadline 4 and uploaded it supplemented. Please check it! Thank you.
hereJeongha1 (talk) 12:25, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
@Jeongha1 You are now approaching the point your assignment should have reached in late April/early May. Remember the deadline to complete assignments is today. You have to finish translation, including adding blue links, properly formatted references and related media like images, and publish your work (see bottom of the English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list). Remember to proofread your article, as content that is machine translated and not proofread will be quickly deleted from Korean Wikipedia, causing the assignment to fail. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:53, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Final Week:LI PEIYU
Hello Professor,
I am LI PEIYU, a student in the Collective Intelligence in Practice course. I would like to report on all the course tasks I have completed this semester. Here is a summary:
@전진이 I don't see your content merged to ko:문화전쟁 and ko:매체 편향 which you were supposed to expand?
You need to copy your content from your sandboxes and merge it (integrate it) with the existing articles on Korean Wikipedia. Be careful not to remove any existing good content. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:18, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
extra Credit_review_chen zhitong
Hi professor, I'm a student of your class 'everyday life and social structure'.This is the three extra times I've posted the blog1,blog2，blog3，so hopefully I'll get some points in it, thanks. Orange-1203 (talk) 09:31, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Unfortunately, while you have enough credits now for a passing grade, the system indicate you have insufficient attendance to pass. If you retake this class with me, you can get extra credit for your work that you submitted yesterday. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:26, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
Extra Credit - Jeon Jin E
Hello professor. I wrote four blogs for extra credits. Please understand that I used the 2023 blog I used last year because I couldn't access the 2024 blog. These are the blogs I wrote.
1234전진이 (talk) 11:23, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor. I am a student in the course (Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia). This is an extra Wikipedia translation I made. Please check it out. Hope it can help me get extra credit in this course.Thank you. Linziyu1823 (talk) 14:42, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, I'm a student in your class 'everyday life and social structure'. I created 2 English Wikipedia articles, Wan Guopeng and Wang Ziwei. In addition, I also translated and expanded an English article from Chinese: The Tale of Rose. Please check it out. Hopefully, I can get extra credit, Thank you~~！
With the summer break approaching, I hope you have a restful and enjoyable time filled with relaxation and good health.
OK, professor. Because I later modified the content and republished it, I accidentally deleted the signature information. I will pay attention to it next time. Thank you, professor. Wangtao626 (talk) 03:04, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
FAN XINRU
Hello professor, I have edited two more Wikipedia articles because I want to achieve higher scores. Please review it, if possible, thank you very much! 1. 2. Jzhdylb (talk) 06:38, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Thank you, Professor, for your review. However, my grades seem to have not been updated yesterday, and there have been no other changes since the last update from 93 to 98. I'm sorry to disturb your vacation and wish you a pleasant one. Jzhdylb (talk) 03:09, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
Deadline1: BAISHIQI
Dear professor:
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link (https://imgur.com/a/s1tC22B)please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for the two registered professor courses. Here is my link(https://imgur.com/a/hSjmKCE) please check it out Thanks! --BAISHIQI (talk) 04:34, 9 September 2024 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 白诗棋 (talk • contribs)
@白诗棋 This is a good start but you need to try again as you made two mistakes: first, you incorrectly signed your username as BAISHIQI when in fact it is y 白诗棋. Second, you incorrectly placed your message at the top of my talk page (it should be at the bottom). Please read the guide on how to leave messages again and try once more. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:40, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
Deadline1: WANGRUITONG
Dear professor:
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link (https://imgur.com/a/EQeZzNF)please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for the two registered professor courses. Here is my link(https://imgur.com/a/Cc5nSAV) please check it out Thanks! --WANGRUITONG (talk) 04:34, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor:I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
1.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link ,please check it out Thanks!
2..I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks! Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 07:41, 4 September 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 1(Week 1) :YUE ZIYI -Media Trends and Globalization
Dear Professor:
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, I also completed the Chinese at Wikipedia: Online Training/Student Edition (link) for extra credit. please check it out Thanks!
Deadline 1(Week 1) :YUE ZIYI -Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis
Dear Professor:
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, I also completed the Chinese at Wikipedia: Online Training/Student Edition (link) for extra credit. please check it out Thanks!
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link , please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link Cite error: There are <ref> tags on this page without content in them (see the help page). , linkplease check it out Thanks! Jeong Ahram (talk) 04:38, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor:
Hi. I am eunyeong. I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link (https://imgur.com/a/kLoWbfD)please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for the two registered professor courses. Here is my link(https://imgur.com/a/9cF2AtH) ,(https://imgur.com/a/0DNd2Y2)please check it out Thanks! Guoying1 (talk) 05:49, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my https://imgur.com/a/wnnUIC3, please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my https://imgur.com/a/wnnUIC3 ,please check it out Thanks! WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 08:02, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor: I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link https://imgur.com/a/GXLQbIr please check it out Thanks! .I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link https://imgur.com/a/0rDjmTD please check it out Thanks! 주영영 (talk) 08:09, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 1: TANG YINI---Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis
Dear Professor: I am taking Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis from a professor.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link https://imgur.com/a/28ID5Fk please check it out Thanks! . I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link https://imgur.com/a/Jw4yDIA please check it out Thanks! Tyuni06 (talk) 14:06, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor:
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link(https://imgur.com/a/V6gTLL5), please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link(https://imgur.com/a/6tbKNJr) ,please check it out Thanks!
—Kylo09 (talk) 15:26, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
WANGYIZHE---Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis
Dear Professor: I am taking Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis from a professor.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link https://imgur.com/a/lImENmj ,please check it out Thanks! . I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link https://imgur.com/a/lImENmj ,please check it out Thanks! WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 15:32, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 1: JIHAIYUN --Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis
Dear Professor
I am taking Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis from a professor.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my (https://imgur.com/a/5pmyetm) please check it out Thanks! . I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link (https://imgur.com/a/WdQHoaq) please check it out Thanks! Jihaiyun (talk) 16:21, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
JIHAIYUN— extra credit Wikipedia:Training/For students/Training complete
Dear Professor:
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
I have completed the additional Wikipedia:Training/For students/Training complete Here is my link (https://imgur.com/a/c7rZd4S) Please check it Thanks! Jihaiyun (talk) 08:02, 7 September 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor：
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link(https://imgur.com/a/TwWRTjn)please check it out Thanks!!yeomll(talk)
--Yeomll (talk) 12:35, 7 September 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor:
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
1. I have completed the Wikipedia training. Here is my link
2. I have registered for the dashboard system for both courses. Here is my link
Please check it out thanks! WSH0927 (talk) 11:05, 8 September 2024 (UTC)
@Kdjdxx208 Good but you made an error - you did not start a new section properly (you either replied to your friend Jeong above, or you forgot to enter a heading). Please do it again, this time with a proper heading for your message. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:16, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
XU KEYING
Dear Professor:
I am taking Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link [1]https://imgur.com/a/01y3yEI, please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link [2]https://imgur.com/a/01y3yEI ,please check it out Thanks! Xukeying2022039098 (talk) 04:09, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
Hello again from some months ago, it seems that some unregistered IPs you are probably related to are triggering edit filters and getting stopped from posting in this talk page. Viewing the abuse log of this page should bring up some of them. Thanks. ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 05:22, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
I am taking Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis from a professor. 1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
Dear Professor
I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' and 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' from the professor.
1. I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
2. I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link, please check it out Thanks! PMH-121 (talk) 05:25, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor:
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is myhttps://imgur.com/a/anEj2dn , please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my ,please check it out Thanks! RiansLu (talk) 05:26, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
Hello Professor:
I am taking two courses, “Media Trends and Globalization“ and ”Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis.”
1. I have completed the Wikipedia Training. Here is my linkI also completed the Chinese at wiki pedia:Online Training link
2.I have enrolled in the dashboard system for those two courses.link [link]Babaibiaobin (talk) 07:56, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor:
I am WANG YIKE. I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis".
1. I have completed the Wikipedia Training. [Here is my link]
2. I have enrolled in the dashboard system for those two courses. Here is my link
Please check it out. Thank you. Alexk27 (talk) 01:16, 11 September 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor: I am CHEN HEBING. I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis". 1. I have completed the Wikipedia Training.2. I have enrolled in the dashboard system for those two courses. Here is my link Please check it out. Thank you. CHEN HEBING (talk) 03:44, 11 September 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor: I am SHAOJIANUAN. I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis". 1. I have completed the Wikipedia Training.2. I have enrolled in the dashboard system for those two courses. Here is my link/Here is my link Please check it out. Thank you. SHAOJIANUAN (talk) 13:44, 11 September 2024 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sssnuan (talk • contribs)
@Hhhlx As we discussed in class, those articles are pretty similar in both English and Chinese, so they are not good for the main project (you can still translate the content from them for extra credit). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:33, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
@CHEN HEBING @LJY2455 I am afraid 对百度的争议 has already been chosen by and reserved for another group. As for your idea to translate between Russian-South Korean relations and 俄羅斯—韓國關係, I see the content of the articles is pretty similar. There are small differences, but you can translate those for extra credit. For your main projects, however, you will need to choose other topics - please tell me your new ideas (or come see me during office hours for suggestions). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:47, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 1:Ma Chenxiao
Dear Professor:
I have chosen two of your courses, 《Media Trends and Globalization》 and 《Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis》. Here is the link to my dashboard.
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my [https://imgur.com/a/PU5cMWR]https://imgur.com/a/PU5cMWR, please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my https://imgur.com/a/xcot6Vk, please check it out Thanks! Xjx921 (talk) 13:47, 13 September 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor:
I have chosen two of your courses, 《Media Trends and Globalization》 and 《Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis》. Here is the link to my dashboard.
and I have completed the training.Please checkHYH031277777 (talk) 13:53, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
I have introduced my homepage for you to check out! Thank you！
I have selected the Wikipedia article translated from Chinese to English - 何德来, and I have also selected the article （Wang Baiyuan）translated last semester to expand it.Please check it out! Thank you!
Hello, Professor. I am taking the course "Media Trends and Globalization". This is the article I selected translated from Chinese into English: 北京电子科技大学
. Please check it, thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 08:36, 15 September 2024 (UTC)
@WSH0927 Good choice, but the Chinese article is pretty short - you will need to expand your translation (you can get extra credit for expanding the Chinese original article, too). You are working by yourself (not in a group), right? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:55, 18 September 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 2(Week 2-3)-LI LINLIN
Dear Professor:
I am LI LINLIN taking Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis class.
Dear Professor:
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".
1. I have completed the training on Wikipedia. Here is my link https://imgur.com/a/x7QIuO4
2. I have registered for Dashboard Systems for both courses. Here is my link https://imgur.com/a/JEJvQz3
Please check it out, thank you!Minazhuang777 (talk) 04:20, 10 September 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor:
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".
1. I have completed the training on Wikipedia. Here is my link https://imgur.com/a/x7QIuO4
2. I have registered for Dashboard Systems for both courses. Here is my link https://imgur.com/a/JEJvQz3
Please check it out, thank you!Minazhuang777 (talk) 04:20, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
@CHEN HEBING Since you are a group, you need to find a topic to translate from Chinese to English, not English to Chinese. You already have one English to Chinese project approved (Bronisław Malinowski and Abortion in Japan - you should choose one of those; you don't need to translate both unless you do so for extra credit). Each group needs to translate one article from en to zh, and one from zh to en. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:13, 19 September 2024 (UTC)
@Mcx8202229 Those are good topics for "Media Trends and Globalization" (you can even get some extra points for them). But for Big and Small data you need to choose to expand a location article on Wikivoyage, not an article on Wikipedia.
Dear Professor:
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link ,please check it out Thanks! Buryab0ne (talk) 04:05, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
Dear professor: I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data. 1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link (https://imgur.com/a/cmQoDDO)please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for the two registered professor courses. Here is my link please check it out Thanks! -- Aaiiuuu(talk) 04:34, 9 September 2024 (UTC) Aaiiuuu (talk) 05:00, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
This is the link to the article translated from Chinese to English：蒋中正日记 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E8%94%A3%E4%B8%AD%E6%AD%A3%E6%97%A5%E8%A8%98
Dear Professor I have selected this article (* Film censorship Korean is needed/Chinese needs expansion zh:电影审查制度)to translate from Chinese to English.
My group members and I chose this topic and translated it from English to Chinese. [Tattooing in China Korean is needed/Chinese still needed]
@HYH031277777 The topic is fine to translate, but it is very short and poorly referenced. You will need to improve the article (make it much longer) or select one more (or a different) topic to translate.
@RiansLu I am not sure what you mean regarding Dianbai First Tan - there is no such article. Your selected topic for English translation is zh:中国第一滩 (China's First Beach). Dianbai, Maoming seems like a short article, but you can expand it for practice and extra credit.
Regarding your edit at Chinese Wikipedia here, you can see from the history that it was reverted by Chinese Wikipedian @Shawwww . They did not provide a rationale for their edit - you can ask them on their talk page. Perhaps they did so because most of the content you added was unreferenced. You had a single footnote to hltv.org, but it was in the wrong place. A footnote should be added after the sentence it is referencing, not at the bottom of an article. Please remember that our class policies as well as Chinese Wikipedia rules require that you only add referenced content. See zh:维基百科:可供查證Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:52, 21 September 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 2 :WU WENHAO
Dear Professor, in the course "Media Trends and Globalization", I chose to translate (Unemployment in China) from Chinese to English. And I chose to translate (Global North and Global South) from English to Chinese as a bonus to get extra points.
Hello Professor, I am sorry to report to you over the weekend. Group 13 of the globalization class includes students Jong-min Kim and Tae-ho Kang, and the translation assignment topics were confirmed as English-Korean translation: Brantford and Korean-English: Jeong-hyo Lee.
We received feedback from the professor that there were not enough references on the 'Lee Jeong-hyo (KO)' page, but we decided to add references to Lee Jeong-hyo ourselves. :) Thank U for ur feedback!
And after the professor gave good feedback, we decided to develop the Wikivoyage (ENG): Pocheon, Gyeonggi-do page as an assignment topic for the data class of Kim Jong-min and Kang Tae-ho (Team 4).
Dear Professor:
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, I also completed the Chinese at Wikipedia: Online Training/Student Edition for extra credit. This is my link https://imgur.com/a/gQ5XiN5 please check it out Thanks!And this is my wiki dashboard link https://imgur.com/a/4hNDR87 Please check it out,Thanks! Linlin406 (talk) 13:00, 21 September 2024 (UTC)
I am taking two courses "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki" with @liuziye.
1. We have chosen this article 【Freedom Of Speech】 to expand and translate from English to Chinese. And we also chose this topic 【Giant Wild Goose Pagoda】 to translate it from Chinese to English.
2. Also, we chose Yanbian to complete its expansion on Wikivoyage .
Dear professor:I am learning one course from professors on media trends and globalization.
Here is my link.And i have completed the wiki for registering to teach the course.Here is my link. ZAIWEI0328 (talk) 04:18, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
We are taking the course "Media Trends and Globalization" .
We want to pick Minorities in South Korea for English to Korea and '유동열 (류동열)' for Korean to English. Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 07:40, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
I am studying a course called “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis”and this is a screenshot of my first week of study.
May I ask you a question about the wiki dashboard? After the first week of class, I entered my password and successfully joined the Wikidashboard. However, when I opened the confirmation again today, an error was displayed. Here is a screenshot of the page. I want to know what I can do to get it back to normal, and I would appreciate it if you could give me an answer. 유신예 (talk) 09:05, 22 September 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor:I opened the wiki dashboard again today and it no longer shows errors and can enter normally. Thank you for your help! 유신예 (talk) 10:39, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 3：TANG YINI
Dear Professor
I am talking two courses，For this class "Media Trends and Globalization" ，I translated my choice of "Anarchism in Korea” .For this course on Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis,I expanded on the theme of Hanzhong
@Xuan6699幸福到万家 has very little content. In order for this to be accepted on English Wikipedia, you will have to add a section about reception, which discusses reviews of this show in reliable sources (newspapers and such).
Dear Professor:
I am talking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki"with my group members @Yeomll
1. We will select this Wikipedia article to expand and translate them: [[35]]
Dear professor, I chose this article and added some references. There are some characters on Baidu but no specific references have been found. Is this okay? Is there anything else that needs to be modified?About diff, I read the tutorial, but I don't know where to find oldid.1908 in ChinaWjyy1212 (talk) 10:49, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
I am talking two courses, For this class "Media Trends and Globalization," I selected the theme of translating "Anarchism in Korea" into Chinese.For this course on Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis, I chose to expand on the topic of "Hanzhong."
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about 佛得角签证
I added citations and some summaries for Cape Verdean visas. I found a summary of this visa on the website of our Ministry of Foreign Affairs and uploaded it on it.
Dear Professor
I have selected this article (* Film censorship Korean is needed/Chinese needs expansion zh:电影审查制度)to translate from Chinese to English.
My group members and I chose this topic and translated it from English to Chinese. [Tattooing in China Korean is needed/Chinese still needed]
@白诗棋 First, you need to talk to me after class and sign our spreadsheet, I don't have your username recorded there so I do not who you are.
Second, the topics of translating film censorship to Chinese was already completed last semester by another group; of course there is no point in translating it the other direction. Likewise, tattoing in China was translated as well. Please stop by my office on Monday and tell me your new topics or I will help you select good articles. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:58, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor,
I registered the name BAI SHIQI because I couldn't type Chinese , but the real username is 白诗棋. Could you change it for me，please？ My group member and I chose this topic and translated it from English to Chinese. Global financial system. We have selected this article to translate have selected this article translate from Chinese to English. 社会学史白诗棋 (talk) 04:25, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
@白诗棋 I fixed your name. Global financial system is approved, but you need to find a topic to translate from Chinese to English. The New York Times obviously has a better article in English than in Chinese - but if you are interested in media, look at the pages of Chinese newspapers. I expect many have not very good articles in English, or no articles at all. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:13, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
@1eleven0086 Since you have two people, and for your first, approved, topic you chose to translate Gender inequality in North Korea from English into Chinese, for the second topic you need to choose something that has a much better Chinese article then English (since you need to translate good content from zh wiki to en wiki). zh:中国和平崛起 does not appear to be such an article. Please chose another topic. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:53, 18 September 2024 (UTC)
@1eleven0086 Since you are a group, you need to find a topic to translate from Chinese to English, not English to Chinese. You already have one English to Chinese project approved (gender inequality in NK). Each group needs to translate one article from en to zh, and one from zh to en. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:11, 19 September 2024 (UTC)
@1eleven0086 The topic is good but the execution is bad. You can translate it but remember that only referenced content is accepted on English Wikipedia, and most of the Chinese article is unreferenced, as indicated by the article itself (see the orange warning template at the top). So yes, you can translate it, but first you will need to add references to the Chinese article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:10, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor: Thank you for your reply！I listened to your suggestion and chose another city in Yunnan as my extended task. Here is the link. Please check it, thank you. 유신예 (talk) 10:36, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
I re-selected a city in Henan Province, China, as my extended article. This is the link.Sorry to trouble you. Please check it again.thank you！ 유신예 (talk) 17:43, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
@Dbinni The subject is good but that article is missing footnotes. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Korean article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability On the bright side, you can get extra credit for adding footnotes to the Korean article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:38, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
CHEN HEBING
Hello professor, I am CHEN HEBING who attended your class 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' yesterday. After class yesterday afternoon, I showed you an article called Shangrao in Wikivoyage that I had modified myself. The content and article skeleton were all newly created by me during class yesterday, and the historical records only show the content that I modified. However, the student in front of me yesterday found this article and used the theme for himself. Is this inappropriate? CHEN HEBING (talk) 04:42, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
@CHEN HEBING I am not sure what you are asking. But since you have not chosen your project for this class, how about you and that student work together to improve this article? This assignment can be done by a group of two. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:42, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
Thank you for your response, but this is a new article I created myself. Someone saw it during class and set it as their own topic. This is plagiarism. CHEN HEBING (talk) 05:26, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
@Hanyangdaxue Unfortunately, no. Please watch the LMS video on adding references, or revisit the part about adding references in the training tutorial. Or check how your friends have completed this assignment. Or ask me how to do so during the office hours. What you have done is to add an external link, not a reference (and Wikipedia does not include external links in article body, see Wikipedia:External links). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:47, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
Deadline3:HONG HAOTIAN
Dear Professor:
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Chan Ho Park
Dear student(s). Please do not delete older messages. Please do not edit older messages changing their content. Please ensure your posts are signed. Please talk to me in about your project during my office hours. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:18, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
Dear professor:
I'm sorry to delete older mhaessages.
We changed our article and country of main project.
We plan to create 'Yecheon' travel guide for main porject.
We have selected the wikivoyage article about Andong.
Because Andong is Gyeongsangbuk-do area like Yecheon.
Therefore we think it is an article related to the main project topic.
Dear Professor:
Hello. I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Song Jia
Thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 10:45, 28 September 2024 (UTC)
@Zzzxxxrrr Please note your edit was reverted, as it was deemed to add unimportant information to a wrong section of the article. Please try again and make sure the content you add is relevant to the place it is being added to. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:59, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
@Hanyuanyuan613 First, please remember to log in before making edits. I assume this was your edit. Note that it was rejected by another editor as your first reference was to an unreliable source (Namuwiki is a low-quality source with many errors), while your last reference was added to an already referenced content. Your middle reference to BBC might have been fine - I'll ping @Barry Wom to hear their rationale for removing it as well. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:54, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
I removed the link to the BBC recipe because it refers to a British version of the dish, and the "Composition" section into which it was inserted has been tagged as not providing a sufficiently worldwide view. Barry Wom (talk) 14:32, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
@Hanyangdaxue I have reverted your edit, as the reference cited does not seem to support text added. Please note that adding false or misleading links as references can result in your account being blocked from Wikipedia, which will make it hard for you to complete our course. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here14:00, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
Hello Professor
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"This is my blogging assignment 1Babaibiaobin (talk) 12:09, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
Hello, professor.
I'm taking "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis".
I want you to review about my article.
According to syllabus of 'Understanding small and Big Data with Wikis',
the content of Deadline 3 is 'Showing my draft'.
I'm not sure if that's the same as saying of "I'm going to review my particles.". But I'm posting what I've edited because you told at Deadline 3 "Please inform me through the Wikipedia system by leaving me a message on my talk page at User_talk: Hanyangproposer2 that your particles are ready for review."
Dear Professor:
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Small and Big Datawith Wikis"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Janie (2006 film) Please check it. Thank you. Buryab0ne (talk) 06:50, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor:
I am taking one course "Media Trends and Globalization"
Me and my group members @WANGTAO
his is the link to the article translated from English to Chinese.
This is the link to the article translated from Chinese to English.
Please check Thank you ! ZAIWEI0328 (talk) 15:40, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
@ZAIWEI0328@WANGTAO Please stop by my office hours as you did not sign the spreadsheet and I cannot record your choice.
World Values Survey is accepted for translation to Chinese.
Dear Professor: I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about [弗拉·蒙雷亚莱][叶临之]Please check. Thank you! 白诗棋 (talk) 02:33, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor：
I am taking two courses "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".
1. This is the link to the article translated from English to Chinese: 「Korean rock」「Climate change in North Korea」
2.Also, i chose JinCheng to complete its expansion on Wikivoyage .
@Kang Taeho Good, but that article is missing footnotes. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Korean article that has no references needs to be referenced; otherwise it may be removed from English Wikipedia. See Wikipedia:Verifiability On the bright side, you can get extra credit for adding footnotes to the Korean article Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:26, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
@Shuo1103 While the topic of 铠甲勇士 is interesting, the underlying zh wiki article is very bad, as seen from multiple warning messages at the top. If you want to translate it, you will need to start by referencing all facts (right now the zh wiki article has no references, and they are required both by our class policies - see syllabi - as well as Wikipedia:Verifiability policy), and by adding a section in awards and reception (reviews).
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox.Here are all the links：1、https://en.m.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Menghai#Safety 2、https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:WANGYIZHE1124
Dear Professor: I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about.
This is the link:https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=馬洛尼山&oldid=84414121
Thank you for your checking.
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" Among the Deadline 4 task, I've translated an article in Chinese and added references to my personal sandbox.
Professor here are my 40 Wikipedia edits from last month pleasecheck.
This is the blog invitation I received but it seems not from Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis, is it correct please?
I'll submit the sandbox draft separately before the deadline Thanks! Bai0926 (talk) 06:33, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor:
I'm taking your "UnderstandingSmall and Big Data with wikis " course. This is the first draft I completed. Please check if it is qualified. Or where improvements are needed.Thanks for your patience.Have a nice day！ 2001:2D8:E206:B2E4:807E:8BCB:ED59:ED5C (talk) 08:30, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" Among the Deadline 4 task, I've translated an article in Chinese and added references to my personal sandbox.
Dear Professor:
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Siu Mei
Please check it. Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 06:48, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
@Cuicuizan Please note that your edit was reverted for copying content without permission from other sources (@AlexLeeCN can add further comment, perhaps). Please be careful to avoid repeating such mistakes, or your account may be blocked, which will make it hard for you to complete assignments for our classes. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:58, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".
on media trends and globalization, I will choose two English Wikipedia articles to translate into Chinese. The first theme is resource mobilization and the second is abortion in Poland. The two articles are linked below.
Dear Professor:
This is the subject of translating from "Media Trends and Globalization": Asiacentrism.
This is the subject of expansion from "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki"：shangrao. Jiayyyyy (talk) 05:13, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
@Aaiiuuu I am afraid your reference was removed, as you have added a low quality reference as a source - see the explanation in the edit summary here. Please try again.
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
Lesson 1: "Media Trends and Globalization" This week I edited the topic: Resource mobilization.
Lesson 2: "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis" This week I have added content to the topic: YangJiang.
@Zzzxxxrrr Good. Please format the references so that they have an English title (in addition to the Chinese), and other information (author, date, publisher).
@Bai0926 Very good. Your article has a good structure, but you need to use better references. Please make sure all your references clearly state the author, date and publisher.
Your first reference is optilingo. What is this website? Who is the author? Why do you think we can trust that site, particulary in the context of the author's understanding of Korean culture?
Your second reference, culturalatlas, is fine, as it is associated with reliable platforms and the author is known (see About — Cultural Atlas (sbs.com.au)).
Your reference #3 is fine as well, as koreatimes is a reliable newspaper. But make sure to add author, date, and spell the newspaper name corretly (The Korea Times).
Your references 4 and 5 are good too.
Please add references to the first paragraph of the 'The rise of the nuclear family' and the ending of the first paragraph of the 'Changes in marriage and fertility', which currently do not have them.
Regarding "a modern family dynamic similar to that of the Australians has been adopted" - please rewrite it, as Australian family structure is not particularly unique or special. The source you are using is suffering from Australia-centrism.
To finish your paper, please read and use some academic sources like
Dear professor, regarding Project 2, we are a group of four people, the others are Han yuanyuan, Zhang qi, Chen hebing, my question is when we submit the assignment, do we need to write our four names in the PDF? Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)07:12, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
"Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis" This week I have added content to the topic:HohhotShuo1103 (talk) 07:35, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor:
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".
The theme of "Media Trends and Globalization" is Asiacentrism.
The theme of "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki" is Shangrao. Jiayyyyy (talk) 04:41, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
@Jiayyyyy Good, but remember to choose one more article to translate from English to Chinese in addition to Asiacentrism. How about Indocentrism ? It is a bit short but if you can add a short section on views of Indocentrism in Chinese literature, this should be fine. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:31, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
@Jaeyun01 Dear students. Please remember to add your new messages at the bottom of this page, not in the middle (unless you are continuing a previous discussion and replying to my comment). Your topics are approved and recorded. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:29, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 4 : CHEN HEBING
Dear Professor, Our group is working on the Deadline 4 assignments "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data".
We have done some exercises to add to the sandbox. This is my English translation of the article Abortion in Japan, and this is my group@LJY2455 member's Chinese translation of the article Hong Kong media controversy
@CHEN HEBING @LJY2455 Those are good starts, but you need to add references (footnotes to reliable sources). Currently, both of your articles are missing footnotes. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being published. See Wikipedia:Verifiability for more information. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:33, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
Deadline3:LIU ZIFU
Dear Professor,
I am taking a class on understanding small and big data. My classmate ZHANGQI and I decided to use "Longquanyi" as our homework. "Longquanyi" is an administrative district of Chengdu city. I have briefly made some preliminary introduction to this entry so far, if the professor agrees with us on this topic, my classmates and I will revise the layout and then officially start the assignment.
Dear Professor:
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" Among the Deadline 4 task, I've translated an article in English and added references to my personal sandbox
@Minazhuang777 This is looking very good. Now, we need to fix errors with references. Please install this wiki tool (User:Headbomb/unreliable). Then you will see which references in your article are marked in red (are unreliable). They need to be replaced by better ones. For example, several sources in your article are to Wikipedia:GLOBALTIMES, which has been banned from Wikipedia due to too many fake news and propaganda. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:48, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 3(Week 5)-LI LINLIN
Dear Professor:
I'm taking "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"
The first draft is here. At the same time, I've done one extra edit and showed it to you in class, you guided me to publish it. You can check it here.
Please make sure to add your content as proper listings, with addresses, GPS coordinates, and names in English and Chinese. Right now much of the content you added reads like AI-generated hallucinations that are hard to verify. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:03, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
Deadline4:SHAO TIANYI &ZHONG QI
Dear Professor:
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" with @Kylo09
@Yeomll This is a good start. Please make sure to add English title to your book titles using the 'translated title' parameter, and quote the relevant book range (which pages contain the information cited?). Please try to use high quality English references on this topic found here. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:06, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
Deadline3:SHAO TIANYI &ZHONG QI
Dear Professor,
I am taking a class on understanding small and big data with @Kylo09 .
This is our job.
@Buryab0ne Good start. Please improve your references:
Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability On the bright side, you can get extra credit for adding footnotes to the Korean article
Please format the references so that they have an English title (in addition to the Chinese), and other information (author, date, publisher).
I'm taking "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization".
I am working on two topics, and I have completed the sandbox editing for Media Trends and Globalization， which is one of the topics that I need to translate.
Dear Professor:
I'm taking "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization".
I have completed the sandbox editing Underground Gardens
Please check it. Thank you! 白诗棋 (talk) 05:22, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
I assume this is an extra credit project, as I don't have 'underground gardens' recorded in your main project information.
Is this a translation of a Chinese article or your own work?
In either case, please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability On the bright side, you can get extra credit for adding footnotes to the Korean article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:18, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
@HYH031277777 Good start. Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:VerifiabilityPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:28, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
@Laoxinyi Please add some properly formatted listings, as well as the introduction paragraph, then publish your article in the mainspace by moving it or copying the content to a new article, correctly named. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:14, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
Thank you for the professor's advice. I will make modifications according to the professor's advice and then publish the article in the main space. Thank you~~!Laoxinyi (talk) 09:14, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
@Laoxinyi It looks good. Per my previous comment I suggest you work together with another student to finish this - once you think the translation is done, you can publish your work by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:13, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
@Hanyangprofessor2Ok, Professor, I have received your reply, and after discussion with this student, I have decided to form a group to complete the Chinese translation of this Wikipedia article about "Multicultural families in Korea". Please confirm. Laoxinyi (talk) 12:33, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
Deadline4: YUE ZIYI
Dear Professor: I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"
I am translating the article "Future" and have finished the outline.
@YZY2233 Please make sure to address the issues raised in the top (in the banner) on your Chinese article. I see you have also received a message on your Chinese talk page. You should try to fix those issues soon, otherwise your content could be deleted and/or your account banned, which will make it difficult for you to finish your project.
Got it. Seems like some Chinese external websites used enwiki texts in their content, so the Future article is similar to other external websites. Thus, as long as it is from enwiki orginlly, the article should be fine. Sincerely ZhaoFJx(T)23:22, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
Please sign your posts properly - your username is @Parkjeongeun0430 not @Parkjeongeun430 . Please sign using the button, not manually
For deadline 3 for Globalization class, please add a reference to an unreferenced content, not as a general reference to a related article. Please find a sentence that has no reference and add a reference to it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:03, 2 October 2024 (UTC)
@Parkjeongeun0430 Unfortunately, this is still not correct. You added an external link in the body (see Wikipedia:External links) and a footnote at the bottom of the article. Please watch our video in the LMS on how to add references, and/or check the Training for Students module on this, then try again. Or come see my in my office and I'll demonstrate. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:13, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
Professor, I modified deadline 3 of Media Trend and Globalization.
@Jihaiyun @Laoxinyi I see. It seems that there is an error in our assignment of articles, as both of you are listed in my spreadsheet as translating this article to Chinese . To keep it simple and easy, I recommend that the two of you work together on translating this as a group. I will allow it as an exception to the group projects that require each group to translate an article into English. Instead, you can just translate this one together and finish your second translation individually.
@Hanyangprofessor2 @LaoxinyiOk, Professor, I have received your reply, and after discussion with this student, I have decided to form a group to complete the Chinese translation of this Wikipedia article about "Multicultural families in Korea". Please confirm. Jihaiyun (talk) 12:26, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
@Pineappleq 2014 Mount Ontake eruption is already covered sufficiently on zh wiki, and I have already approved your proposal to translate Derrick Rose, so I don't see the need to change.
Translating of World Tourism Day from Chinese to English is pointless, as it is already better in English than Chinese, so this is denied. If you cannot choose a topic by yourself, please stop by my office hours. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:39, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
@Pineappleq Hmmm, this is a bit outside my usual area of expertise, and it translates badly using machine translation, so I am not sure if this has an English term and whether this is notable (important) in Chinese. I'll ask some experienced Wikipedians fluent with Chinese whether they think this meets Wikipedia:Notability: @TheLonelyPather @Folly Mox
Hello professor. My computer was down last week but I made it up this week. I have translated about 1600 words of the project article in the sandbox. I will continue to expand this article. Please check it, thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 14:57, 8 October 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor:
I'm Study "Media Trends and Globalization"
In the Deadline 4 mission, I've attached an outline from the sandbox. This is my link.Please check it out. Xjx921 (talk) 04:03, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
@Xjx921 I see. If you are translating the content to English, please move it from Chinese to English Wikipedia. You should work on it in your sandbox on English Wikipedia. By working on it in the wrong language project, many errors can occur. After moving, please fix errors in links and references. It cannot be published until those errors are fixed. I will give you a new review after the content is moved to English Wikipedia - pleaes ping me when you have done so. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:13, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
Hello, Professor!
I have moved the article from the Chinese Wikipedia to the English Wikipedia sandbox. This is the link, please check! Thank you! Xjx921 (talk) 06:04, 11 October 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
Lesson 1"Media Trends and Globalization" : I edited my topic "Unemployment in China" in the sandbox (converted from Chinese to English). Additionally, I checked the terms of service on the Chinese government's website, and only articles with specific authorship require copyright fees. Since my citation is from publicly available information, there is no need to pay. However, I still followed your suggestion to change the language order, and after rechecking, the similarity rate has been reduced to 7%.Thank you for your guidance.
Lesson 2"Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis" :I have completed part of the editing for the topic on Dazu
Regarding the English article: You will need to fix errors in the references; if the automatic generation does not work, you will need to fill in the citation templates manually - please let me know if you need help.
If a term exists in Korean Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it.
Hello professor, I have completed the expansion of some of the content in this Wikitravel article. I made this editing in a public article. If allowed to do so, please help me review it. thank you very much. Jzhdylb (talk) 07:06, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
Sorry professor, I made a mistake in my homework before, and created a sandbox aboutFamily in South Korea. Later I changed it to edit the Wiki Travel of Taierzhuang. Is my editing correct? If there is an error, I will correct it immediately. If there is no problem, I will expand more content. Thank you. Bai0926 (talk) 13:58, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
@Bai0926 This is ok, but you should add elements we learned in class - listings, maps, climate graph, banner, etc. Right now your article does not look well formatted. I have removed content that was poorly written and of little interest to the tourists. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:11, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 3: MUYE
Dear Professor: I have completed deadline 3 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' from the professor.
Dear student. Please remember to log in before making edits, otherwise you cannot sign your posts and I cannot ping you.
For your draft, please add properly formatted listings, and fix GPS errors in your current locations, which as you can see are not correct (see map). Then please add the climate section with graph and a banner, as we learned in class. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:15, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 4---FAN XINRU
Hello professor, these are the 20 editing tasks I have completed for two Wikipedia articles. Please review them. Thank you very much.1.2. Jzhdylb (talk) 14:18, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
I hope this message finds you well. I apologize for interrupting your busy schedule. I have sent you an email regarding a matter that is quite urgent. I would greatly appreciate it if you could take a moment to review it.
@ZAIWEI0328 Please let me know which article you edit for Deadline 3, you linked your entire history. Also, please note that the content you added here will not count for credit for our class as it is unreferenced. According to our syllabus, only referenced content is accepted, see also Wikipedia:Verifiability . Please remember that Wikipedia:BAIDU is not accepted as a source. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:59, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
@Ydaeun0306 Good progress. Please remove unnecessary bolding from your article (compare your article to others, like Ansan or others). A lot of content in your article is using bullet points, which is not always good; it makes your article look like an
AI-generated text that was not formatted properly (again, compare your article with other good articles on Wikivoyage). Please rewrite content that is not listing into prose, adding listings / markers with GPS coordinates as needed. If you are not sure how to fix this, stop by my office and I will show you. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:28, 15 October 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 4 : Jo HyeonSeong
Dear Professor.
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" Among the Deadline 4 task. I did it with Jeong Aram, a member of group. @Jeong Aram
I've done some exercises to add a Director's experience to the sandbox and I've also inserted that into the actual Wikipedia minorities in south korea Please check this linkJo HyeonSeong (talk) 06:09, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
@Jo HyeonSeong Good. Your article is developed nicely. I see it was draftified to ko:초안:한국의 소수민족 @Ykhwong , presumably because your version from back then was not yet good enough for main space. Now, I hope it can be published - Ykhwong, do you agree? Or are there still issues you would like the student to fix? Thank you for taking time to inspect our work. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:24, 15 October 2024 (UTC)
I have reviewed this article and confirmed that there are no significant issues with its quality. I've just moved it to the main namespace. ko:한국의 소수민족 Thank you. --ted (talk) 01:42, 15 October 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 4 : Lee jisu
Dear professer,
I have completed Deadline 4 of "Media Trends and Globalization".
@Xisuux Please double check your content. It seems you translated content of the wrong article (something related to the Russian invasion of Ukraine?), not about the Russian election of 2024. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:21, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
When I chose the topic, I told them that I would translate from English to Korean, so I asked them to choose two topics.
So I told Deadline 2 that I would do "2024 Russian presentation" and "China and the Russian inspection of Ukraine".
I'm telling you again because I don't think it was delivered properly.
@Jiayyyyy Very good. Please note that some concerns were raised at zh:亚洲中心主义 (see banner at the top). Please start a discussion at that article's talk, and ping the editors who expressed the concerns (you can see who they are in the article history), then ping them when you start a discussion, just like I ping you here. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:39, 17 October 2024 (UTC)
Hello. I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about JinChengHua Thank you. SHENZIHE (talk) 02:55, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
@Xuan6699 This is a good start, but there are many issues to fix. First, all content (outside a brief plot summary)
that is not referenced cannot be published - you need to find references for This means you need to find references for information in the sections: Broadcast time, Cast list, Original Soundtrack, Differences from the original novel, , and fragments of the Honorary Awards (some have footnotes, but not all).
Second, Wikipedia prefers WP:PROSE to bullet points list. You should remove bullet points in your sections.
Section 'Propaganda' has a strange title. What is it about? The word Propaganda is not mentioned in the body. This reads like some random Wikipedia:TRIVIA
Section 'Differences from the original novel' seems like a case of WP:FANCRUFT and should be removed, unless you can find reliable references for this. Often, minute differences between modern novels/movies/comics are a topic that people talk about on social media, but nowhere else, and as such, they are trivial and not important enough to be discussed in an encyclopedia
Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:55, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
@WANGYIZHE1124 Please post your messages in the new sections. Please post your work in your sandbox, not in the main Wikipedia space, for my review. See video guide in our LMS or come to my office if you are unsure how to create your sandbox. Your current work is not good enough for publication in public space - see also messages on your talk page. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:36, 17 October 2024 (UTC)
Regarding your Chinese translation, I see some content still needs to be translated. Please let me know when you finish translating all content.
Regarding your English translation, you need to fix a number of issues:
If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it
Please use a proper Wikipedia:INFOBOX. Copy one from an article about a similar Chinese TV station, then change the parameters.
Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being published, or deleted if it cannot be verified. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
Please fix errors in your citations (in red). It seems you have entered data into wrong fields, as well as made other errors (for example your reference #1 has Chinese characters in the data).
Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field.
If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so
Regarding your Wikipedia translation, please fix the following:
Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being published, or deleted if it cannot be verified. See Wikipedia:Verifiability .
If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it
Hello, Professor. I am very sorry. I just found out that my blog has not been added and there is no way to publish it. Please invite me again. My email address is z2730151905@163.com.
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".Here are two translations of my “Media Trends and Globalization” course:"Anarchism in Poland"and“Anarchism in Korea”.
Here's my map extension to learn about "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki"course:HanZhong。
@Tyuni06 Good. Please note there were concerns raised regarding the quality of the Korean article (see maintenance templates on the talk). Please see in the editing history of the article who added them and ask them if they are resolved in your newest version.
Your Hanzhong article needs a map, climate information with the graph template, and properly formatted listings with GPS coordinates. Right now this is just a start. Please improve it to the standards we learned in class in the last two months. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:57, 21 October 2024 (UTC)
Deadline5-FAN XINRU
Hello professor, I have edited these two articles on Wikipedia a total of 20 times. If possible, please help me check. Thank you very much. Here is the links.1.2. Jzhdylb (talk) 16:11, 20 October 2024 (UTC)
Please improve the grammar and vocabulary of your translation. Right now it contains too many errors to be published.
Next, please improve your references:
Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability On the bright side, you can get extra credit for adding footnotes to the Korean article
Please format the references so that they have an English title (in addition to the Chinese), and other information (author, date, publisher).
@Honghaotian Please read my remarks above carefully. You have added English names to sources, but I said they should be "in addition to Chinese" - please restore Chinese name for Chinese sources (English name should be added to the "translated title" parameter - please stop by my office if you don't know how to do it and need a demonstration).
Additionally, much of your content still does not have references and cannot be published (and does not count for course credit). Please add references to all unreferenced content. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:41, 21 October 2024 (UTC)
I wanted to say that our project '대한민국의 소수주민' was a draft page not a main page in wikipedia. But we requested to move our draft article to a general article.
So, wikipedia accepted our request and moved it to general article.
@Bai0926 Your article needs climate information with the graph template, and properly formatted listings with GPS coordinates. Right now, this is just a start. Please improve it to the standards we learned in class in the last two months Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:58, 21 October 2024 (UTC)
Regarding your Chinese article (translation), once you think the translation is completely done, you can publish your work by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this). Then we will see if the Chinese reviewers have any comments.
@Parkjeongeun0430 This was not done correctly. I do not see any of your edits in the linked page. You should expand that article with your content from 세계 체제론 - 위키백과 (wikipedia.org) . I will also ping @Ykhwong who redirected your page (I see there was some trouble with page moves and redirects). Parkjeongeun0430, please add your content to the existing article - your task is to expand the existing article with content from English Wikipedia, not to create a WP:CONTENTFORK. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:59, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
Hello Professor, I am very sorry, I just realized that my blog has not been added yet and I cannot post it, please re-invite me, my email :wangtao020626@sina.com Wangtao626 (talk) 03:34, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
Hello Professor, I am very sorry, I just realized that my blog has not been added yet and I cannot post it, please re-invite me, my email ：weizai653@gmail ZAIWEI0328 (talk) 16:24, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
@Hanyuanyuan613 Good progress. When you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this)
read WP:WTA and consider which words in your article may need removing as promotional (hint: masterpieces, for example)
"and are expected to become" - this needs attribution. Who is expecting that? A newspaper? A politician? A professor?
why in your infobox "CHINA" is capitalized?
Please add references to paragraphs that are missing them, for example first paragraphs of "Building List" and "Construction process". There are several others later on.
If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. Currently you link to the Chinese Wikipedia in a simpler way that is confusing to readers who may click the links, expecting to go to English article, but will arrive at Chinese
If the reference is in Chinese (ex. "城市随笔：珞珈樱花"), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
Also, please ensure all references have filled in metadata - author name, date of publication, title and publisher are very important
Dear professor ，I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class， My original article is ’Gender inequality in North Korea‘ from English to Chinese ，Can i change my article to ’history of chocolate‘？, Because the previous article still does not allow me to edit, I translated the article on the web page but not allowed me to save it，And there's no record of my editing on the web.
Hello professor, I have edited these two articles on Wikipedia a total of 20 times. If possible, please help me check. Thank you very much. Here is the link.1.2. Jzhdylb (talk) 09:47, 27 October 2024 (UTC)
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis." I have finished deadline 5, my article is ready for review.全球金融体系Also, the link to the blog invitation is invalid , can you re-invite me to enter? Email: baishiqi1011@gmail. 白诗棋 (talk) 05:22, 28 October 2024 (UTC)
@白诗棋 Regarding the blog, that email is registered as an author, you just need to log in to the blogger portal.
Regarding your translation, it has some errors due to copying code from English Wikipedia. Your blue links should link to Chinese articles if they exist. If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:38, 30 October 2024 (UTC)
Deadline5 WANGYIZHE
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
@WANGYIZHE1124 Regarding your translation from Chinese to English, please move it from Chinese Wikipedia to English Wikipedia (to your sandbox at English Wikipedia). What is the Chinese name of the article you are translating?
Regarding your Wikivoyage article, it needs much improvement. For starters, you should add more listings to see and do - right now, see just have three, and only one is correctly formatted. You should also add a banner, a climate chart, and expand the understand section, as we learned in class in the last two months. Right now your project is far from ready, and behind most of your collegues. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:44, 30 October 2024 (UTC)
Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Korean article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being published, or it will be deleted if it cannot be verified. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
Dear Professor:
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".
Here are two translations of my “Media Trends and Globalization” course:Indocentrism，Asiacentrism. Here's my map extension to learn about "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki"course:ShangraoJiayyyyy (talk) 04:38, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
@Jiayyyyy Good. I see your 亚洲中心主义[编辑 | 编辑源代码] article has a number of issues tagged in the warning box at the top. Please work with editor or editors who added this warning to resolve them. You can identify them by looking at the history of your article, and then you should ask them for explanation if you don't understand the issues mentioned, or asked to check if they have been resolved if you have already tried to address them.
Please translate the short section on China from Indo-centrism from Chinese to English (you will get extra credit for that).
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".Here are two translations of my “Media Trends and Globalization” course:"Anarchism in Poland"and“Anarchism in Korea”.
Here's my map extension to learn about "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki"course:HanZhong。
@Tyuni06 Good. I see your translation articles have a number of issues tagged in the warning box at the top, primarily related to the low quality of the translation. Please work with editor or editors who added this warning to resolve them. You can identify them by looking at the history of your article, and then you should ask them for explanation if you don't understand the issues mentioned or asked to check if they have been resolved if you have already tried to address them.
Regarding your Hanzhong article, it is missing a major element: all your entries in see and do should be in a listing format, with GPS coordinates, as we practiced in class on many occasions (if you forgot how to do it, see my during my office hours and I will demonstrate). Also, your see is too short - it should include some of what you list at do. Wuhou Temple is for example listed in both places. Please clean up your work. There are also many other issues; for example, you mention Nanhu Scenic Area in 'get around' but not in see or do. (This is just one of many similar errors). Please copyedit your article carefully. Please make sure to add Chinese names to each location mentioned, as well as an external link (like with Wuhou Temple) confirming that this place really exists and is not an AI hallucination/invention. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:08, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
Deadline5 :SHAO TIANYI&ZHONG QI
Dear professor, We are taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".
We have completed the Wikipedia entry on Chinese superstitions.
Please check it. If there is no problem, I will publish it on Wikipedia.
@Yeomll This is a good start, but there is much cleanup needed. Some of your content is still missing citations and cannot be published (For example, in the section 'Characteristics of Chinese superstition' you have references for points 2, 3 and 4, but not for 1 and 5)..
For many other cases you cite a book, but without a page range. Please specify which page numbers or which short range contain information that you are citing for a given sentence.
Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
I see your work is progressing on zh:性别薪酬差距. Please carefully proofread your work, I see some unfinished parts (English text remaining). If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it.
Regarding your edits to https://zh.wikivoyage.org/wiki/%E8%8D%94%E6%B3%A2 , this can count for extra credit, but remember that your main project is to improve the English Wikivouyage article, not Chinese Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:19, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
Deadline5 : YANGPEIFU
Dear Professor
I'm taking Media Trends and Globalization class.
I have completed the Chinese to English translation of the Wikipedia article, here is my He Delai please check it out.
@Yangpeifu Good, but please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
@Buryab0ne First, please remember to log in before making your edits (including posting messages). Only content from logged in accounts counts for our course credit.
Regarding your translation, there are many errors in the references. Please edit them carefully and fix all the fields like author, title, publisher, etc.
Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
Please copyedit your text - there are unncessary double footnote numbers like [1]. Please copyedit the text to more neutral - statements like "And will continue to enrich people's understanding of the history of Chinese civilization" are not neutral, not encyclopedic and arguably, poorly written (please proofread your article with a tool like Grammarly to ensure it reads well).
Are there any images of this that we can add? Please check the Chinese article for images.
Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability On the bright side, you can get extra credit for adding footnotes to the Chinese article Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:16, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
Deadline5：XI JIAXIN
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
Understanding Small and Big Data through Wikipedia: We have completed the editing Meizhou Mazu Temple
"Media Trends and Globalization": I completed the translation of all my articles in the sandbox
Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability On the bright side, you can get extra credit for adding footnotes to the Chinese article.
Regarding your translation, there are many errors in the references. Please edit them carefully and fix all the fields like author, title, publisher, etc.
Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
Then you need to fix English grammar and vocabulary. There are many badly translated parts like ("The building is dressed like Mazu."). Please use a tool like Grammarly or other AI tools to fix those issues. Many sentences are impossible to understand. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:21, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
Deadline5：QIANZIYI
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis." Understanding Small and Big Data through Wikipedia: We have completed the editing Mohe "Media Trends and Globalization": I completed the translation of all my articles in the sandbox Thank you for your checking. 218.235.241.134 (talk) 07:02, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki". Here are two translations of my “Media Trends and Globalization” course:Future，Spaghetti.
Here's my map extension to learn about "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki"course:Fuding
I see some issues raised in the warning banner at the top of the article. Please work with editor or editors who added this warning to resolve them. You can identify them by looking at the history of your article, and then you should ask them for explanation if you don't understand the issues mentioned, or asked to check if they have been resolved if you have already tried to address them.
Your Fuding article looks good. At the top, please add a sentence or two advertisign the town - why would people want to go there?
@1eleven0086 Regarding your 巧克力的演變史 article, I see some issues raised in the warning banner at the top of the article. Please work with editor or editors who added this warning to resolve them. You can identify them by looking at the history of your article, and then you should ask them for explanation if you don't understand the issues mentioned, or asked to check if they have been resolved if you have already tried to address them.
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".Here are two translations of my “Media Trends and Globalization” course: Resource mobilization, Abortion in Poland
Here's my map extension to learn about "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki"course: Yangjiang
Regarding your Chinese article (translation), once you think the translation is completely done, you can publish your work by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this). Then we will see if the Chinese reviewers have any comments.
Your first article was published. I see some issues raised in the warning banner at the top of the article. Please work with editor or editors who added this warning to resolve them. You can identify them by looking at the history of your article, and then you should ask them for explanation if you don't understand the issues mentioned, or asked to check if they have been resolved if you have already tried to address them.
Regarding Yangjiang, please add GPS to the listings at See and Do that are missing them. The ones at Do, about festivals, seem to not be listings at all - please convert them into listings.
@Bai0926 I see some progress. Your map is broken - please try to add a working one (copy one from another article then adjust the GPS coordinates). Your article is missing a 'see' section (some content from 'do' should be there). Please review the guide at Wikivoyage:Article skeleton templates/Sections – Travel guide at Wikivoyage to understand better what should be in each section.
Hello professor, I have edited these two articles on Wikipedia a total of 20 times. If possible, please help me check. Thank you very much. Here is the link.1.2. Jzhdylb (talk) 09:20, 3 November 2024 (UTC)
I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class.These are two articles translated by our group@LJY2455.This is an article translated from English to Chinese, and this is an article translated from Chinese to English.
Regarding your Chinese article (translation), once you think the translation is completely done, you can publish your work by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this). Then we will see if the Chinese reviewers have any comments.
Regarding your English translation, we have to fix the following issues:
Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability On the bright side, you can get extra credit for adding footnotes to the Korean article
Please format the references so that they have an English title (in addition to the Chinese), and other information (author, date, publisher).
Please add blue links like in the Chinese article, linking to other important concepts.
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
Lesson 1"Media Trends and Globalization" : I edited my topic "Unemployment in China" in the sandbox (converted from Chinese to English). I have finished editing, please review it.
Lesson 2"Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis" :I have completed all the editing of the Dazu special topic.
Your content in English looks good. Please proofread it with a tool like Grammarly, then add it to the relevant article.
Regarding your Wikivoyage article, For the get around section, you could mention if there are rental bicycles in the area, and what apps can be used?
For Festivals, I recommend moving this to the 'do' section, and converting each festival into a listing, with information on where it is happening (GPS) and when. See for example how this is done in the Wikivoyage article on Ansan.
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis".I'm translating the global financial system, please review it.全球金融体系白诗棋 (talk) 05:28, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, the article I previously chose to translate has already been selected by another classmate. This is the article I have re selected, do you think it's okay? Aaiiuuu (talk) 04:17, 25 October 2024 (UTC)
OK, professor. Besides, I'm sorry, but I haven't blogged yet. Could you invite me again? My email address: baishiqi1011@gmail 白诗棋 (talk) 04:30, 25 October 2024 (UTC)
Hello Professor,
I just realized that my blog has not been added yet and I cannot post it, please re-invite me. My email address:fjy1033151159@sina
In either case, your work looks good. Good progress. If you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:48, 6 November 2024 (UTC)
PS. In your case, you should not move the article but merge it with the existing one at 德國經濟 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".Here are two translations of my “Media Trends and Globalization” course:"Climate change in North Korea"and“Korean rock”.
@SHENZIHE: Hello, I am the patroller on Chinese Wikipedia. As Iming and UjuiUjuMandan mentioned on your talk page, using machine translation is disallowed on Chinese Wikipedia, and it is recommended that you rely on your own language skills to translate the article. You can also refer to the Translation Guideline and "Translationese" essay for further guidance.
@SHENZIHE? Please be careful while editing. Why did you remove the important message above?
Please improve the quality of your translations, then ask the Chinese editors to review them. Only when they are approved by the Chinese editors, they can be published and will count for course credit. 
Regarding your Jincheng articles, I do not see any map. Your article also needs a climate information with the graph template, and a banner. Please improve it to the standards we learned in class in the last two months. If needed, you can find our instructions for activities where we were learning those elements here: User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
Because there is no way to change the name of the sandbox, the contents of the sandbox can only be copied to a new page. But why was it identified as machine translation. SHENZIHE (talk) 03:42, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
I'm terribly sorry, Professor. I've already asked about SCP-2000 on the discussion page. Many of the things I don't know much about are actually generated by the machine because of the direct copy of the translation content, and I will change my translation content again. Can I delete my topic and submit it after re-changing it? Looking forward to your reply. SHENZIHE (talk) 09:54, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
@SHENZIHE You should be able to make fixes in your published articles, unless they have been deleted. SCP-2000 should be able to explain things to you; but unless your account is blocked, you should be able to edit those articles (the sooner, the better). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:52, 6 November 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."Me and my group members wushengyu Lesson 1: "Media Trends and Globalization" This week I finished translating from Chinese to English is the link:User:Xukeying2022039098/法拉盛草原可乐娜公园的历史Xukeying2022039098 (talk) 06:25, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
Your Chinese to English translation should be for zh:中国第一滩 .
(although it is too short to be valid for a full project - as I told you in class, you still need to choose one more short article to translate from Chinese to English, or expand t)
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."Me and my group members wushengyu Lesson 1: "Media Trends and Globalization" This week I finished translating from Chinese to English is the link:User:Xukeying2022039098/法拉盛草原可乐娜公园的历史Xukeying2022039098 (talk) 00:28, 5 November 2024 (UTC)
I have completed deadline 4 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis". I left my feedback in the article of Menghai – Travel guide at Wikivoyage. Please check it here.
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
I have completed Deadline 5, which involved translating two articles in my sandboxes: one from Chinese to English and the other from English to Chinese.
Regarding your English translation, you need to separate references from footnotes. See Help:Footnotes#Footnotes:_predefined_groups It seems you already have some, badly called 'Annotations'. Please format them all using the guide provided above, or come to my office for help.
Your current references 1-4 are footnotes, not references, and require references of their own.
Your other references should be formatted correctly with citation templates. Some are mostly in Chinese and as such cannot be understood by me or other English readers. This applies to ref 5, 6, 8 and 9, for example.
Next, if the source is in Chinese (such as your current ref 7 and probably 10 and others following), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
Some content in your article has no references. Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
Regarding your Chinese article,if you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:48, 6 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Limengchen2777 Good progress, but there are still some parts that are missing references. Each paragraph needs at least one reference (or more, if one is not enough to verify all the claims made in it). I still see several paragraphs that do not have a reference - please double check your article.
There is also strange content here: "Explosion incident Main article: Burst".
There are places where links are missing, ex. "Main article: Pandownload § Author arrested" or "Baidu Japan".
I see you tried to link Chinese articles using the interlanguage template I requested, that is good, but the code is incorrect - the links are broken. Please fix them or stop by my office and I'll show you how to do it.
I don't see that anything was fixed; all the issues I've pointed out still remain.
Much content is still missing a reference and needs to be either deleted or referenced. There should be a citation (or more than one) at the end of each paragraph.
The link at "Main article: Burst" does not make sense and the context is missing.
i'm taking‘ Media Trends and Globalization’ class.I have completed the task of deadline 6, here is my related link[63], please check. Thank you. Hhhlx (talk) 10:15, 1 November 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, I'm taking the course ''Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis''. I've finished deadline4. Please check it .Thank you. 유신예 (talk) 13:42, 6 November 2024 (UTC)
@유신예 Your review should be at the article's Wikivoyage talk page, not Wikipedia talk page, since our assignment for that class in on Wikivoyage, not on Wikipedia. Please move your comment there. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:54, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, I have transferred the comments to Wikitourism, please check it, thank you for your assistance. 유신예 (talk) 09:59, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
I am currently taking the courses "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wiki." I have completed the translation of two Wikipedia articles: "Multicultural Families in South Korea" and "Corruption in India." My Wikivoyage expansion topic is "Ruili." In addition, because the original teammate gave up the translation task of this article, the current Wikipedia topic is "Korean multicultural family." This article will be completed by myself. Both the Wikipedia translation and the Wikivoyage expansion tasks have been completed. Please kindly confirm. Thanks! Jihaiyun (talk) 17:05, 7 November 2024 (UTC)
@Jihaiyun Good progress. Please note there are some issues raised at zh:Draft:韩国多文化家庭 in the warning box at the top. Please work with editor or editors who added this warning to resolve them. You can identify them by looking at the history of your article, and then you should ask them for explanation if you don't understand the issues mentioned, or asked to check if they have been resolved if you have already tried to address them.
印度的腐败 looks good for now, but please monitor it to see if any issues are raised by the reviewers.
For your listings, some are missing the Chinese name - please add them. See also comments on talk and fixes by other editors in the history of your article, to learn how your work has been corrected. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here00:51, 11 November 2024 (UTC)
Deadline6 : JI HAIYUN
Dear Professor,
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
I have completed the deadline of 6. I left feedback and suggestions on the discussion pages of other students' articles.
The class I am taking is Media Trends and Globalization.
I would like to inform you that I have completed the assignment for deadline 5. However, I must apologize for changing the topic without prior notice. The original topic, "The History of Chinese Clans," (中国宗族史)involved too many classical Chinese texts, which I found challenging to translate. Therefore, I took the liberty of modifying the topic to "The Four Talents of Wu."(吴中四大才子) I have ensured that the basic content for the new topic has been completed.
@HYH031277777 Good start. Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
Your existing footnotes need to be formatted properly using citation templates, and content needs to be translated to English. Actually, right now only one footnote (5th) looks correct, if abberviated; the others seem to be comments, not references.
Dear professor,in p4 we choose the World Bank Group (WBG),My team members are ZAIWEI,WangTao,HuangYanHan, and we are three people in total. ZAIWEI0328 (talk) 18:31, 7 November 2024 (UTC)
@Cuicuizan Your work looks good. Good progress. If you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say. If you are expanding an existing article, you should not move the article but merge it with the existing one. See 维基百科:合并页面 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for advice on how to merge pages Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:07, 11 November 2024 (UTC)
Deadline6:SHENZIHE
Dear Professor,
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
I have completed the deadline of 6. I left feedback and suggestions on the discussion pages of other students' articles.
@Hanyangdaxue Your work looks good. Good progress. If you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say.
Please check all your links first, however. I noticed at least one error in links (a link to Wikipedia rather than to the right movie, namely Vicky the Viking), and may small errors such as "edit" text. Please proofread your text carefully, 
My team member【LIU ZIYE】@Poeyal and I 【GUAN YUE】would like to change the selected city for the Wikivoyage project from Yanbian to Shaoxing. Some content has already been added to the previously selected Yanbian page. We will start over with the Shaoxing Wikivoyage page.
Deadline 5 and 6：WU SHUHAN（Media Trends and Globalization）
Deadline 5: I have completed the translation of the project article and expanded it. Please check it.
Deadline 6: I have already evaluated another student's essay, please check it.
Thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 10:03, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
Your work looks good. Good progress. If you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say.
Lastly, if a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it
Dear Professor:
I've done deadline5 in Media Trends and Globalization course. Please check it out. Here is the link.
Thank you for your checking. Dbinni (talk) 14:59, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
@Dbinni Your Korean sandbox appears to contain two different articles. You can publish them both to get extra credit; please send me links to them once they are published - then we will see what Korean reviewers will say. In either case, your work looks good. Good progress. If you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see ko:위키백과:문서 이동 on how to do this).
Your Englis article looks well, but you need to fix errors in the references with metadata; please stop by my office or talk to me in class and I can show you how to do it.
Dear Professor,
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
I have completed the deadline of 6. I left feedback and suggestions on the discussion pages of articles.
Media Trends and Globalization: 1
Learn about small data and big Data through Wikis: 2
Please check. Thank you 白诗棋 (talk) 04:29, 11 November 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor,
I am currently enrolled in the "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" course.
I’ve completed Deadline 4(peer review) for this course and have attached the link for your review. I would appreciate it if you could kindly check it.
Thank you! Dbinni (talk) 10:18, 11 November 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor.
I am studying “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis” and “Media Trends and Globalization”.
This is the first article I translated, and this is the sandbox link. Translated from English to Chinese, please check.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MUYW/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92
Also, my blog invitation has expired, can I be re-invited? I have sent an email to your email address MUYW (talk) 10:25, 11 November 2024 (UTC)
@MUYW Very good, your work looks good. Good progress. If you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say.
more listings with GPS coordinates; many of the current listings don't have GPS information
a section on climate (with text, you already have the graph - good)
the first sentence should be longer, with a bit advertising on why tourists would like to visit that city
main local bus station should have a GPS address, just like the main tran station does. The names of the bus and train stations should be clearly marked. Airport needs a GPS marker.
One entry (Kanas) is duplicated in see and do, chose one and merge the other into it.
Buy section needs to be expanded with more information.
In particular, please expand the first sentence, and add a bit more detail to the get around. Are there taxis or rental bikes? What apps can people use them to catch taxi or rent a bike?
Additionally, please expand the first sentence so that it tells the reader why they should visit the city, and write up the get around section. Are there buses? What apps can people use them to catch taxi or rent a bike?
@MUYW Your work looks good. Good progress. If you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say.
@Caizzz Good start. Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
@Caizzz Good, but please check your links. Your url for reference 1 leads to Chinese Wikipedia, instead of the book in question.
Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:18, 8 October 2024 (UTC)
@Caizzz Good progress. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced before being published. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
Also, please add links (and Chinese title, if the source is in Chinese) to references 5, 13 and 15. If the reference is not online, please add other information that allow confirmation that the source exist (link to library catalogue entry for the position or such). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:44, 21 October 2024 (UTC)
@Caizzz Ok. Please carefully check all references one by one to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
Please correct a link to Baidu in article body in the 'Folk commemoration' section, it should link to Wikipedia instead.
The Chinese title and English title have been written. The Baidu link in the folk memorial has also been replaced with a Wikipedia link. Then there are only 24 references in the original article, and I have already made 24。This is my new linkCaizzz (talk) 04:39, 15 November 2024 (UTC)
The Chinese title and English title have been written. The Baidu link in the folk memorial has also been replaced with a Wikipedia link. Then there are only 24 references in the original article, and I have already made 24。This is my new linkCaizzz (talk) 04:42, 15 November 2024 (UTC)
@Caizzz The references look better, but you have not fixed metadate for most, despite my request above. As such, more fixes are still needed. Reference 5 for example needs a Chinese title, date and publisher and the link is wrong - it leads to a generic table of contents that does not mention anything about the topic. Similar issues are present in other references
What is reference 23 ("Mass media and Tiananmen square")? Is this a book? It probably needs Chinese title. All books should have ISBNs as well as information what particular page we are citing. For example, reference 6 is to a book. Which page in this book is being cited? It needs to be identified.
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Please make sure all entries have some description, for example Wuhai People's Park has none; the first store listed likewise.
You can zoom in and recenter the map to make it more useful
@Babaibiaobin A lot of people on the Internet steal content from other websites, ignoring (breaking) Copyright. I don't know if people who run chinawiki.net have permission to use Baidu content, I expect they are just stealing it. But we cannot steal it from them; two wrongs do not maker a right. Also, please note that copyright works like this: EVERYTHING IS COPYRIGHTED UNLESS IT IS VERY OLD OR RELEASED UNDER A LICENCE THAT EXPLICITLY STATES OTHERWISE (read also: Copyleft). So unless you see a message on a page saying that a content is free (such as a note saying Creative Commons license is used - visible for example at the bottom of each Wikimedia Foundation-affiliated page), the content of that page is copyrighted and cannot be used without receiving explicit permission from the owner. Read also: Wikipedia:Copyright violationsPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:20, 18 November 2024 (UTC)
@Babaibiaobin Good. Please carefully check all references one by one to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 走进布达拉宫广场-四川经济网-经济门户".), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:21, 18 November 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, these are the three Wikipedia articles I have recently edited, totaling 30 edits. Perhaps you can help me check, thank you very much. Here is the link.1.2.3.Jzhdylb (talk) 07:24, 16 November 2024 (UTC)
Regarding your translation to Chinese (WVS), if you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say. If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it.
Regarding your English translation, please add references to all content. I still see unreferenced paragraphs. Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:VerifiabilityPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:41, 18 November 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 5：XU YAN
Dear Professor:
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization.
This is my Chinese to English translation project: The Long Night
This is my extra English-Chinese translation project: Asian Pride
@Xuan6699 Please convert the bullet points into prose, which is the preferred way of writing in English. The award section should have all awards in the table, not just one.
And for that table (The 3rd "Asian Content Awards) the reference is only about nominations. Please find a reference that confirms that this movie won the "Best OTT Original" award (and was nominated for others - they are not even mentioned in that reference, ex. 'Best Idea').
The section on 'Publicity Fun Facts' seems to be random WP:TRIVIA and should be rewritten, moved aroud or deleted so that it is not random trivia (read the linked guideline).
Please proofread yoru article carefully, and compare it to the guideline at Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Film#Primary_content . Please ensure your heading (section titles) are named accordingly with that guideline.
Regarding your translation to Chinese (Asian Pride), if you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say. If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:49, 18 November 2024 (UTC)
@WANGYIZHE1124 Regarding your translation to English, please move it from Chinese Wikipedia to English Wikipedia (to your user sandbox here) ; then work on ensuring all content is properly referenced. Good start. Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability . Also, if a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. If you don't know how to use that tool, come to my office hours and I'll demonstrate
Regarding your Wikivoyage article:
Please add more information to Get in, such as the listing (with GPS) for the bus station. Is there no train connection? Look at how it is done in other articles (ex, Ansan, etc.)
You need many more listings for see, as well as the do section (in which you can mention local festivals, for example).
You have a climate infobox, but you should add a section explaining it in words. Look at Ansan or similar articles.
Regarding Mohe, it looks good. Please try to find and propose a new banner (see our instructions at https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Banners ) .
Regarding your Chinese translation to English, about the diary, please proofread it carefully (you can use AI or tools like Grammarly). Right now, there are many grammar or vocabulary issues, and the article is very hard to read because of numerous errors. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:57, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
@Zzzxxxrrr You can upload only the pictures you have taken yourself. Please show me proof in class that this picture was taken by yourself; otherwise, it will be deleted as stolen. 
Regarding your English translation, please proofread it carefully with AI or Grammar tools - if you have done so already, this was clearly not sufficient. There are many grammar or vocabulary errors, and it is difficult to read; many sentences have errors and are confusing. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:40, 13 November 2024 (UTC)
@Zzzxxxrrr The picture is not formatted correctly - it is obviously unnatural. Please reupload it with proper aspect ratio, then upload another version for the banner using the tool here: https://croptool.toolforge.org/ You need to CROP the image, not stretch it.
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Additionally, please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Add a GPS listing for the port in which the ferry arrives, similar to the raiway and bus station.
@YZY2233 To receive feedback, you need to follow my instructions. You created a section with a heading but no content, and you did not link it from the noticeboard for linking such requests. Please re-read my instructions at the bottom of my instruction page. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:30, 17 November 2024 (UTC)
Regarding your translation to Chinese (biodiversity), if you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say. If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it.
Regarding your translation to English, please proofread it carefully - for example, "The search engine fills in the volunteer event" - is event the correct word here? Or "Finding the official volunteer entrance is complex" - what do you mean by entrance? Or in another section: "Most stickers were banned". There are many such errors in the text, making reading and comprehension hard. The 'In 2015, the main owner of the fleet collection bar was replaced' section is another example, I read half of it and I don't know what it is talking about. Is this a forum for people collecting ship models? Please work with an AI tool or preferably a real person fluent in English to carefully proofread your text. What is a bar? See bar - usually it means Bar (establishment)Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:29, 18 November 2024 (UTC)
As for Wikivoyage (Putian):
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Get around section is missing.
For festivals, can you add location, time and homepage information? A Chinese name would also be useful
You can zoom in and recenter the map to make it more useful
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special. Right now you mention some names of attractions, but they need to be explained a bit more to make them appealing.
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."Me and my group members LINYUYANG@l01yy11
Your translation at User:WANGRUITONG is a good start but needs much more work. There are untranslated Chinese characters (see infobox).
The image at the top is malformatted, with caption outside it. Move it to the middle of the article and adjust the placement of the caption.
References are malformatted - please edit them so that they contain no red errors, and instead have the correct metadata (author, title, date, etc.). Books should have ISBN numbers. Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 费正清,崔瑞德. 剑桥中华民国史(下卷)), please use both the Chinese and English titles. All references should use citation templates. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. Again, if you need help with this, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate.
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Please note there are some issues raised at 性别薪酬差距 in the warning box at the top. Please work with editor or editors who added this warning to resolve them. You can identify them by looking at the history of your article, and then you should ask them for explanation if you don't understand the issues mentioned, or asked to check if they have been resolved if you have already tried to address them.
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The banner for Libo is bad - it just shows the top of some tree? Please use a different picture that shows something more interesting.
You can zoom in and recenter the map to make it more useful
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
For get in section - is there no train connection?
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
for your Wikopedia translation, please try to add WP:CATEGORIES to your articles if they don't have any; see categories at the bottom of the original articles for ideas and try to find similar categories in Chinese. Then we will see if the Chinese reviewers have any comments
Hello professor, these are the three Wikipedia articles I have recently edited, totaling 30 edits. Perhaps you can help me check, thank you very much. Here is the link.1.2.3. Jzhdylb (talk) 15:24, 22 November 2024 (UTC)
@Jzhdylb Your edits are good, but please make sure to add citations to your text. For example, what is the source for the claim that "Jade Girl Peak, with an altitude of 625 meters, was formed during the Paleozoic Era. The name of Jade Girl Peak comes from the fact that Jade Girl Peak stands tall and tall for dozens of feet, and looks like a graceful girl from a distance." ? Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:43, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
Deadline5 : Yujin Jang
Dear professor.
I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data' class.
This is my final draft Hongseong for main project.
I added a bus terminal and added a festival category in the do part to list the festivals of Hongseong. Also, I made additional modifications by referring to the talk page.Thank you! Yujin0203 (talk) 17:00, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Please add listings for the main bus and train/subway stations, with GPS coordinates, so they'd show up on the map
@Wjyy1212 If you are translating from Chinese to English, please do so in your English Wikipedia sandbox, not on Chinese Wikipedia. Let me know when you have added blue links (hyperlinks) and references.
lease remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
Please carefully check all references one by one to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
@Xjx921 Your first comment should be moved from your friend's sandbox talk to their main user talk. Please copy it there.
Regarding your second comment (on Wikivoyage), someone asked for you to clarify what you meant - please explain it there in more details.
Regarding your article translation (MM Temple), the following fixes are needed:
Remove the Chinese characters from the beginning of each heading. They can and should be present the first time you mention a Chinese proper name (for a person or place) if that entity has no Wikipedia article that can be linked to
if a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. If you don't know how to use that tool, come to my office hours and I'll demonstrate.
Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability. A lot of your content has no references and cannot be published.
I am studying your Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis course.
This is the link to Deadline 5. I will continue to enrich this article.Please check it. Thanks for your patience. 1.241.68.131 (talk) 14:47, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
Dear student. Please remember to WP:SIGN your posts; otherwise I cannot notify you that you received a response here.
The following fixes are needed for your article:
Your article needs a climate chart
Is there a local intercity bus station, like the Ansan Express Bus Terminal in Ansan? If so, please mention it in the 'get in'.
Zoom out your map a bit and perhaps recenter it so that more listings are shown.
For listings in the Do section, please asdd GPS coordinates. Also, please add a subsection about local festivals, if there are any in this area.
Also, add GPS coordinates for restaurants mentioned.
@HYH031277777 Good. The following fixes are needed:
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
please write up a short (2-3 sentences) explanation of the local climate (you have a climate graph already, good, but it should have a text section. See articles on Ansan or Beijing or such for examples)
In Get in, please add listigns with GPS coordiantes for the main railway station, and the main intercity bus station.
Dear Professor. I am studying “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis” and “Media Trends and Globalization”. Here's my edit link to Wikivoyage, check it out。BAOTOUShuo1103 (talk) 10:12, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
please write up a short (2-3 sentences) explanation of the local climate (you have a climate graph already, good, but it should have a text section. See articles on Ansan or Beijing or such for examples)
Your article needs a climate section with a chart
get around section is missing
do section is emtpy. Please add some suggestions there. Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
@Laoxinyi Good progress. Your article needs a banner, a climate section with a chart, and your listings need to be expanded with GPS coordinates and other content (description, address, websites).
Dear Professor. I am studying “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis” and “Media Trends and Globalization”. Here's my edit link to Wikivoyage, check it out。JinchengSHENZIHE (talk) 03:02, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Your banner needs to be formatted the correct ratio. Please upload a new image based on the current one using this tool: https://croptool.toolforge.org/ then use it as a banner instead of the current one
Please add a GPS coordinate for the Penglai train station
Please recenter the map - right now most of the listings are hidden on the edge. We probably don't need to show the location of the outlying restaurant or the airport
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Hello,I am xiong chaoli.I am from Media Trends and Globalization.
My topic is the North Korean military parade, and I've finished editing the English-to-Korean translation of this article on the sandbox.Here is the link.
Hello Professor! I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class.I have completed two translation assignments, English to Korean and English to Chinese, please check it:
Hello, professor,I am xiong chaoli. I am from Media Trends and Globalization. My topic is the North Korean military parade, and I've finished editing the English-to-Chinese translation of this article on the sandbox.Here is the link.Please check it, thank you ! XIONG CHAOLI (talk) 15:20, 29 November 2024 (UTC)
You can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say.
Hello professor, I continued to edit Wikitravel, re-corrected the GPS and added introductions to attractions and GPS, and also edited other content, please check itBai0926 (talk) 05:19, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
please write up a short (2-3 sentences) explanation of the local climate (you have a climate graph already, good, but it should have a text section. See articles on Ansan or Beijing or such for examples)
Please add a see section and popualate it. Please split entries between see and do - see for example how this is done in Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
Professor, I added content based on Ansan's do, but since Taierzhuang does not have a separate festival, no festival was added. Please check it Bai0926 (talk) 13:45, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
Additional Edits, Kang eun yeong-Media Trends and Globalization
@Kang eunyeong Good. Please try to add WP:CATEGORIES to your articles if they don't have any; see categories at the bottom of the original articles for ideas and try to find similar categories in Korean
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
All entries under see should be converted into listings, right now only the first two are done correctly
I have added the festivals section as requested and already asked for reviews. I also have made changes based on the suggestions provided. Please check it！Thank you so much！ Uuueol (talk) 17:53, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
I took two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
I have completed Deadline 6. I wrote feedback on GUO YING's article, Abortion in Poland.
@Jiayyyyy Good. Please ask User:糯米花 if their concerns over 亚洲中心主义 have been resolved.
For Shangrao , please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Also:
please write up a short (2-3 sentences) explanation of the local climate (you have a climate graph already, good, but it should have a text section. See articles on Ansan or Beijing or such for examples)
For main train/subway/bus stations, please add listings with GPS coordinates
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class.
I have completed the modification up to feedback from Deadline 5:
- Expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
- Add some festivals that could be discussed under the do section.
- Add listings for the main bus and train/subway stations, with GPS coordinates.
@Dbinni I am afraid your edits have been declined, but I see you received explanation and you read it (User talk:Dbinni – Travel guide at Wikivoyage). Please ping me again when you restore your edits with the improved content.
Hello Professor, I have chosen to expand the article on Cangzhou as my task. This is my second time editing and I have expanded and added it according to your requirements. Can you help me look it up? It would be even better if you could point out the issues that need to be changed. Thank you very much, looking forward to your reply. Jzhdylb (talk) 08:58, 16 November 2024 (UTC)
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
You need more listings. The middle one (Cangzhou zhan) is unfinished - what is it?
For festivals, can you add location, time and homepage information? A Chinese name would also be useful
Hello professor, thank you for your guidance last time. I have modified and supplemented according to the guidance. If you can, please help me check the newly revised article again. I want to do better. Thank you very much for your time.Attached article link again. Jzhdylb (talk) 14:56, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
@Jzhdylb Good. You still need to convert mention of Cangzhou Iron Lion (新滄州鐵獅子) into a listing with GPS coordinates. Festival and Expo should have GPS coordinate as well.
Hello Professor, thank you for the reference article you provided me last time. I've changed and added a lot along the lines of this and each template comes with GPS coordinates. If there are other areas that need improvement, please point them out for me. Thank you very much. Link. Jzhdylb (talk) 15:54, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
@Jzhdylb Good progress. Please add GPS for the Cangzhou Passenger Terminal.
Thank you Professor, this is an interesting suggestion. This picture is the ‘Cangzhou Iron Lion’, the landmark building of the city introduced in this article, but it looks a bit lonely due to the shooting angle. Unfortunately, I couldn't find a more suitable one among the images currently available on Wikimedia Commons. I hope to apply for copyright by contacting users who own Cangzhou beautiful photos, but due to IP reasons, this may take time, please understand. Jzhdylb (talk) 14:13, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
@Xuan6699 Good progress, but we still need to fix more content. I fixed headings for you, but you need to add references to the plot synopsis and 'differences from the original novel' (each paragraph needs a reference, right now the latter section only has a reference for the first paragraph).
The sentence "iQiyi's self-produced suspense short series "The Long Night" has attracted the attention of many overseas media, including The Guardian, The Economist, South China Morning Post, Content Commerce Insider, SupChina, Radii, SixthTone" should be expanded with a short summary of what those sources said, and at the very least, each of those mentions should be linked through its own reference (footnote). Here, for example, is a reference for the Sixth Tone: Short Show ‘The Long Night’ Offers Quality Over Quantity
@CHEN HEBING @LJY2455 I Regarding your article in English, as you can see, it was declined because the sourcing is insufficient. I already outlined this and other issues in my feedback to you from last month (November 4th: User_talk:Hanyangprofessor2/Archive_4#Deadline_6_---FAN_XINRU). I can only assume you forgot to read it then, since I do not see that anything I wrote then has been fixed.
Regarding Suqian, the following fixes are needed:
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
I am taking 'Understanding Small Data and Big Data' course. My topic assignment is Burqin, you can check the link. And I also made an extra credit, Qianjiang. I will continue to enrich this article.
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
We are taking the Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis class.
We have completed the modifications based on the feedback from Deadline 5:
-Expanded the first sentence by adding 2-3 sentences describing the most interesting aspects of Sanmenxia, highlighting why people would want to visit and what makes it special.
-Added a short (2-3 sentences) explanation of the local climate to accompany the climate graph, using examples from similar articles like Ansan and Beijing for reference.
-Included listings with GPS coordinates for the main railway station.
Thank you very much for your suggestions. I didn't make such a diagram, but I marked the areas in the map. I wonder if it could be used as the same effect. Please take a look. HYH031277777 (talk) 14:13, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
@HYH031277777 Very nice, it's an advanced way of editing that will be awarded extra points. However, I wonder: two places (gray one and blue five) seem to have pins outside the area. Do they belong to a different city? If so, please move them to the right articles. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:20, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor. I am studying “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis” and “Media Trends and Globalization”.Here's my edit link to Wikivoyage, check it out。BAOTOU。I have added the changes you have suggested。Thank you. Shuo1103 (talk) 06:16, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Understand section should have a short section on history and another one on climate, with a climate chart (see how it is done at )Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or Sanmenxia – Travel guide at Wikivoyage . I see you have a climate section elsewhere - you should move it to the understand as a subsection and rewrite to it looks similar to those in the linked articles.
Please remember that you can only add your own work to Wikipedia -that includes images. Please show me on your computer how you made the File:Baotou Climate Map.jpg image - otherwise it will be removed as copied from another website (plagiarized)
Get around section is totally wrong. That section should discuss how to travel in Batou (what are the local public transportations and like). The content you currently have there should be moved to see/do as listings
Your do section is also wrong; it reads like generic useless AI generated text. Please replace it with proper listings about specific attractions that can be taken part in (ex. festivals)
Please ask for your article to be reviewed as discussed in our assignment at the bottom of the page here: User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage, then in few days check what was written and carry out any changes based on advice there and report back to me.
@Shuo1103 I can show you how to add climate chart in my office (just copy the one from Ansan, for example, then correct the numbers).
Please re-read my comments above. I do not see, for example, any improvement to the lead. I do not see a history section. Whatever you did it clearly ignored most of my comments above.  Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:00, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
Deadline6 : Parksungeun
Dear professor.
I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class.
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
I revised the professor's feedback on Sollmae Village(Not solmoi holy site. It was my mistake). In addition, I attached a link to the festival and attached a short history part. Please check. Thank you. Jeong Ahram (talk) 02:26, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
I checked and corrected it. More specifically, I changed from Sinri holy site to site of bishop St. Marie Nicolas Antoine Daveluy in dangjin sin-ri. Please check. Jeong Ahram (talk) 00:15, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
@Hyodong318 Good. Please note that this topic was accidentally translated by another student in our class for extra credit a bit earlier. Can you combine two existing articles into one? See the notice on the top of your translation project Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:32, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
Professor, I have confirmed and registered with you before confirming the article, so how can I merge the two articles into one? I don't know how to operate. Hyodong318 (talk) 05:14, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
@Hyodong318 Compare the two articles, then if you think any part of your article is better (better language, grammar, links, etc.) replace the part in the older article with what you have done. You can get extra credit for that (your main project is finished successfully). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:56, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
@Kim jong min (hanyang) Regarding your translation to English, there is much unreferenced content (with no footnotes). Please remember that only referenced content can be added to Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
Hello, dear professor, my team member hong jiaran and I are in the two courses of Media Trends and Globalization and Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis. After discussion, we want to modify our Chinese-English and English-Chinese translations as well as wikivoyage. The topic, although time is very tight, but we will complete it as soon as possible without delaying the final time. This is the original title after we changed it, Chinese to English, English to Chinese,wikivoyageHkiho (talk) 11:33, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
@Hkiho It is good that you have chosen the topics. zh:静寄山庄 seems like a good choice to translate, but remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
When translating, please make sure to add blue links to related articles on English Wikipedia. If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. Again, if you need help with this, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate.
Baaghi (1990 film) is fine to translate to Chinese, but it is rather short, and since you chose your topics late, you missed some required deadline reducing your final points. As such, I suggest you also translate another article for extra credit. How about With Fire and Sword (film)?
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Understand section should have a climate subsection with a chart, and your listings need to be expanded
See and do sections should have listings (with GPS coordinates and other content (description, address, websites).
Get in section should have listings for the main local bus and train stations
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Please try to find and propose a new banner (see our instructions at https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Banners ) .
Dear professor, my teammates@Redyeoni and I have completed the Chinese-English translation and two English-Chinese translations, as well as the editing of Wikivoyage. Please check.User:Hkiho/sandbox
@Hkiho Good progress. In your Jingji Villa I've added [citation needed] to all parts that need footnotes.
Regarding your translations to Chinese, once all content is translated, you can publish them by moving them (see zh:Help:页面重命名 if you need help with that).
Hello professor, my teammates@Redyeoni and I have already posted the three articles and Wikivoyage, but the Chinese encyclopedia needs time to wait for the administrator to upload, and we cannot move the pages ourselves on the Chinese site. Hkiho (talk) 03:58, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
@Mcx8202229 Good progress. The following fixes are needed:
Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability. Currently, Game content, Background setting and Development have no references.
The review section should summarize the reviews; but they seem to be just translations . We cannot copy and translate someone's review, we have to summarize it, or quote briefly. Please rewrite this to summarize what the reviewers said. For example of how this should be done, see The Elder Scrolls V: Skyrim - Wikipedia or Genshin Impact - Wikipedia
@Mcx8202229 Please read my comments again, I don't see significant changes. The references are still missing for the Game content and Development sections, and reviews still read like direct translations without quotations . We cannot just copy parts of the review and translate them. You have to summarize what the reviewer said, or attribute them with clear quotations like this: "Reviewer ABC writing for website XYZ said 'I like this because blah blah'." Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:16, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
@Mcx8202229 I noticed that the Chinese Wikipedia article about the game has an interesting but unreferenced section about account trading (Treasure Chamber). Can you find reliable sources to verify the content there and add it to your article here? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:03, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
Professor, as far as I know, because a large number of players are using other account trading platforms, the trading platform in the game is almost not used. Now it seems that even the official has forgotten this setting, and I have not found any relevant news on the website, so I have abandoned this part and have not translated it. Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)08:40, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
Deadline7: Jeong Aram & Jo HyeonSeong
Dear Professor:
We're taking Media Trends and Globalization. I've completed articles.
Very good. Some issues to fix in your English translation:
if a topic exists in Korean but not English, please link it using this tool:틀:임시링크 - 위키백과. If you don't know how to use this, come to my office and I'll demonstrate
Please carefully check all references one by one to remove errors and to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Korean, please use both the Korean and English titles. Use Korean title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
See your reference one for correctly formatted footnote
@송여근 Good. Make sure to translate some text like 'democratization after 1918' and the text in the see also (you can just remove that section, it is not needed). If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool 틀:임시링크 - 위키백과 to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it.
Then if you think your translation is good (proofread it to make sure there are no errors), please move it to mainspace and then we will see what Korean reviewers will say.
After the move, please try to add WP:CATEGORIES to your articles if they don't have any; see categories at the bottom of the original articles for ideas and try to find similar categories in Korean. Also, please add the interlanguage (interwiki) link by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button and link the other language articles. If this is unclear, ask me in class or during my office hours and I'll demonstrate. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:19, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
Wiki edit:CHEN HEBING&LIU JUNYU
Hello, Professor. This is the Chinese-English translation of our group. It has been translated. Since there are two problems in the Chinese article, although we have submitted the English manuscript to mainspace, it has been rejected. How can we solve this problem? CHEN HEBING (talk) 06:27, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
@CHEN HEBING You need to ensure all content in your article is properly referenced. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability . See how your collegues have properly referenced their article on Criticisms of Baidu (they just started few weeks ago, asked me for feedback several times, and finished last week). You need to find references for all claims in the article, or remove the content that cannot be verified. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:39, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
Week 15---FAN XINRU
Hello Professor, I have recently completed 30 Wikipedia edits, including these three articles. Please check them out. Thank you!1.2.3. Jzhdylb (talk) 08:35, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
@Minazhuang777 Good. I still see some unreferenced content, however. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit ("On the same day, a Facebook page named "Release Simon Cheng" uploaded...").
Also, reference [29] is bad ( "警方提供郑文杰与不同女性进出会所房间以及嫖卖双方忏悔的视频" ). See WP:Huanqiu. It cannot be used - it has too many fake news. We need to remove it and replace it with another better reference, or remove claims made by that outlet.
If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. If you need help with this, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate.
After you fix those issues, you can publish your article (see Wikipedia:Moving a page). After the move, please add the interlanguage (interwiki) link clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button and linking the Chinese article. Also, please add WP:CATEGORIES - see what categories are used on zh wiki and add similar ones here. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:46, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 7: Dabin Kim
Dear Professor,
I take "Media Trends and Globalization" course, and work on the main project with Eunyeong Kang.
However, I have encountered some difficulties in translating the document titled "Press room and press corps of the South Korean government" into English, particularly with the challenge of locating citation sources. Despite seeking your assistance in your office last week, I have found it difficult to properly complete this task.
Following your suggestion last week that it would be fine to switch to a different document, I have decided to change the final project document to "The 1st Korean Music Awards" for the Korean-English translation. The translation of the previous document, "Press room and press corps of the South Korean government," will be kept as an extra credit assignment.
Both the completed translations—of the original and the new document—are available in my sandbox. Please find the link below for your review:[Sandbox link]
@Dbinni Your press room... article is almost finished. It would be a shame to waste your effort. I think you can publish it. Same for your work on the 1st Korean music awards. Just make sure to split them before publishing. Please let me know when you have published both.
You can publish your article (see Wikipedia:Moving a page). After the move, please add the interlanguage (interwiki) link clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button and linking the Korean article. Also, please add WP:CATEGORIES - see what categories are used on ko wiki and add similar ones here. Stop by my office if you need help. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:49, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
ZHANG BINGYI
Hello, Professor.
When I was discussing with my friends today, I suddenly realized that I joined the Blogging through Media Trends and Globalization (2023) invited by the professor, but my friends joined the Blogging through Media Trends and Globalization (2024). My blogs were all published in 2023. Will it have any impact?
Dear professor,"Media Trends and Globalization": I finished translating my article in the sandbox, and modified it, please check.This is my link. Buryab0ne (talk) 05:00, 19 November 2024 (UTC)
@Buryab0ne Regarding your translation, it reads well. Please fix the following issues:
Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
Please carefully check all references one by one to remove errors and to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
Regarding your wikivoyage article, the see section is full of generic content that reads like it was generated by AI. Please convert information there into proper listings, with GPS coordinates, descriptions, url links to the websites of the museums and such. Compare this section to the much better section on do (although it is still missing any info on festivals). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:05, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
Regarding your Wikipedia article, the references are still in pretty poor shape. Several of them are to Wikipedia article, which is not allowed (see Wikipedia:CIRCULAR). There is still a lot of errors and metadata that is missing - the only thing you fixed is adding English title translations. Please reread my comments above - much more is needed to fix your work. Stop by my office hours if you need more help Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:08, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear professor, this is my understanding of small data and big data homework.I modified it.This is my link. Please have a look, thank you Buryab0ne (talk) 06:32, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
@Buryab0ne Good progress. To finish this assignment, please fix the following:
Please find and add more see locations, currently there is just one - this is way to little. Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage has over 30. I am sure you can find a dozen or so interesting things to recommend to tourists in Pu'er - monuments, landmarks, etc.
Pu'er Tea Culture Exhibition Area entry should be converted into a listing, with GPS coordinates and an url.
@HYH031277777 This is a good start, but many fixes are needed:
Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
For example, first and last paragraph of Tang Yin are not sufficiently referenced
Please add a reference for the term "Four Talents of Gusu," being used; I could not locate it. I have added examples for the use of other terms you mention in the lead.
Please carefully check all references one by one to remove errors and to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
Also, if a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. If you don't know how to use this, come to my office and I'll demonstrate
PS. Please try to add WP:CATEGORIES to your articles if they don't have any; see categories at the bottom of the original articles for ideas and try to find similar categories in English to the ones you can see in Chinese Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:43, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor, I am taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data' class.I added a few images to make the Wikivoyage article more beautiful. Please review the final draft.YuzhouHanyuanyuan613 (talk) 06:37, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Good, but we cannot copy random images from Baidu (or similar) and claim that "This file is licensed under the Creative CommonsAttribution 4.0 International license". It is very unlikely any of the files are licensed in such a way, and that means we are stealing them - they will therefore be deleted shortly. You can only use files already on Wikimedia Commons or upload images you took yourself or from websites where the authors have clearly indicated they are using free license.
Some things to fix/improve:
Please ask for your article to be reviewed as discussed in our assignment at the bottom of the page here: User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage, then in few days check what was written and carry out any changes based on advice there and report back to me.
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
@Hanyuanyuan613 Good progress. The expanded lead is encyclopedic-style rather than a tourist guide. Please add something to it that tells people why this is a fun or interesting place to visit.
Please expand the first paragraph by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special. Right now it talks about industry - but why would tourists want to see the city?
Please try to find and propose a new banner (see our instructions at https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Banners ) .
please expand 'understand' section. It should have a paragraph on history and another one on the climate. See for example Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or Nonsan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage. If there are districts/neighborhoods, discuss them in the 'orientation' section.
For main train/subway/bus stations, please add listings with GPS coordinates
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
In the buy section, discuss briefly what are best things for tourists to buy (special local gifts, food, etc.)
Remember: if a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it.
your history section is way too long for Wikivoyage, which is not an encyclopedia. Please condense it to two paragraphs (cut by 75%)
in get around, mention whether rental bikes are available
some of your listings under 'see' need a description, likeCheongpungho Lake Observatory (there are others). Others, like I mentioned in class already, seem to have strange names (badly machine translated?) like "a small garden". We do not translate place names
are there any festivals in the city? If so, mention them in the do section
@CHEN HEBING As you can see, your submission has been speedy declined by the reviewers as insufficiently sourced. I can see, in five seconds, numerous paragraphs missing references. Please read my prior comments / reviews and carry out all the fixes requested first, before asking me for another review. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:38, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
Additional credits——Wangtao626(Media Trends and Globalization)
please add a lead to your article, explaining why the city is interesting to see for the tourists. I removed the text that was there because it was terribly written
please make sure all your listings have descriptions which likewise explain why the location is worth visiting. For example, your first listing there is "Korea's 15th national park. No cooking, smoking, or bringing in flammable substances. No tents or parasols." That sounds terribly uninspiring and almost funny in a bad away. Your second listing just states that the place is "A historical landmark.", which is even more unispiring. Having read those, almost all tourists would be convinced this place is very boring.
@주영영 Good progress but many of your references were not translated correctly and some are plainly wrong (they are just links to English Wikipedia). Please ensure each footnote for translated content is in the correct place and contains correct information. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:56, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 7: SHU YING
Dear Professor,
I am taking the course “Media Trends and Globalization”and 'Globalization' and 'Data'.
I've published two articles with links to deadline5 comments that you've already seen and are now reposting as deadline7 in the discussion page.
I take Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis and would like to submit the Final Draft.
I checked what you left in the discussion, but there are some issues to correct the article in Seoul/North divided into East and West:
Relatively, there's little information in the northwest (Eunpyeong) compared to the northeast(Gangbuk, Seongbuk, Dobong, and Nowon). If you make a separate article in the northwest, it will be an article with extremely little information. Therefore, I think it is a better option to merge with Seodaemun-Mapo next to Eunpyeong in terms of location. Seodaemun-Mapo articles are as follows. Seodaemun-Mapo
I have been faithfully adding and revising information to articles in Seoul/North for a semester. As I suggest above, the article in Seoul/North is my current result. Seoul/North
To make Seoul/North better, I'd suggest the following fixes:
add the 'Understand' heading above climate, then add a tiny section on 'history' and 'orientation' (that would explain the map issues). See how it is done in Ansan
Please expand the first paragraph by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special. Tourists don't care about boring encyclopedic details like population.
You cannot copy maps from the Internet, upload them to Wikipedia and claim they are your own work. Please create your own map for the districts, in English. See examples of how this can be done in Ansan or Sanmenxia
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
@Hyodong318 Ok - where is the new map? I only see the old one in the article. Festival section looks good. And don't forget to ask for feedback and follow recommendations, there is not much time to compelte this step. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:50, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
Please try to add WP:CATEGORIES to your articles; see categories at the bottom of the original articles for ideas and try to find similar categories for your articles in English
OK, professor, I have re-added the translation of the popular culture in the Spaghetti, and I have made some changes to Fuding's article according to the suggestions on the discussion page. Please review it again. Thank you. YZY2233 (talk) 10:29, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
@Kim jong min (hanyang) @Kang Taeho Good, but make sure all content is referenced. For example, what is the source for this: "After receiving attention through this tournament, he joined Daewoo Royals (now Busan I'Park), the parent company of Ajou University." or "However, towards the end of the first half of the season, he suffered a serious injury and it became difficult for him to continue playing." ?
Hello, professor. As I accepted your feedback, So I added a short subsection on history to understand, and also added a short description to listings that are missing it.
And you said that I have to fix the issues mentioned in "Nonsan discussion page", but I already fixed already!(Deadline 5)
@주영영 I am afraid your English contributions are not at an acceptable level; I have hidden them in the article's history. Please read specific reasons below:
Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
your footnotes were links to Chinese Wikipedia. This is not correct. Read Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking . Footnotes are used for references, not links to other Wikipedia articles. If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage linkI to link it. f you need help with this, stop by my office during office hours and I'll demonstrate.
You also removed the existing WP:LEAD in the article, which was correctly formatted. Do not replace existing good content with lower quality one.
I had to hide your Chinese contributions as well because they also did not have proper links/references.
@Fifi623623 @주영영 It's better but still not fully fixed. There are still several footnotes to Wikipedia that should be converted to internal links (I count twelve). I also see some paragraphs that have no reference (outside the incorrect links to Wikipedia). You should also add a source for the claim that As described in Jinling Langu (A Glimpse of Ancient Jinling): “From afar, the two peaks compete in height, resembling ox horns.”
I corrected it as you requested, could you please check if this change is correct?
I couldn't find the source, so I deleted ‘Jinling Langu (A Glimpse of Ancient Jinling): “From afar, the two peaks compete in height, resembling ox horns.”’.
@Fifi623623 That is fine. If we cannot find a source for some claims, they should be removed as they can be false (read also: Zhemao hoaxes).
@Adakiko (re: unexplained content removal) - the removed content was discussed above (unreferenced or badly referenced content). Feel free to give more feedback to the student (she is trying to improve that article; it's a class assignment I am supervising). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:12, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear professor，
The article has been corrected，please check again.
Among the Deadline 5 tasks, My article finished in my sandbox. I'm attaching the link, so please check.
I've finished both topics. I'll work hard on the rest of it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 송여근 (talk • contribs) 13:55, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
송여근 (talk) 06:25, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
@송여근 If you have finished your translation, please publish it, by merging it with 근대화 이론 - 위키백과 . Then see if there is any feedback from the Korean reviewers. When copying your text, make sure not to delete the existing referenced content (it should be incorporated into your expansion). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:20, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
Extra credit blog：HONG HAOTIAN
Hello, Professor. These are all the additional blogs I have completed. Please review them.
Dear Professor
I revised the article and added the missing parts in the original article. They are notes 6 7 8 13 20 22 23
Here is the linkCaizzz (talk) 04:50, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Please format the see and do properly - see how this is done in Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage . Each tourist location should have a separate listing, with GPS coordinates, address, description, and if possible, URL.
Hello,professor.I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' and "Media Trends and Globalization" class.
Deadline3:Media Trends and Globalization
I have completed the task of referencing once, please check.The referenced link is here.
Deadline3:Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis
My partner LIU ZIFU and I completed the Wikivoyage task last month. After your feedback, we have added Chengdu Shuangliu International Airport and Chengdu Tianfu International Airport. I think there are still areas for improvement in our work, so I will continue to improve our assignments this week and report back to you at any time. Looking forward to your feedback.
Deadline4&5 :Media Trends and Globalization
I have completed the translation work for Wikipedia, 100% done. Please check(1)
Deadline4:Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis
I have completed the task evaluation for other classmates.I have completed the modifications to our group's Wikivoyage based on your feedback to LIU ZIFU last month. By modifying the content of our group, I have gained some experience, which I have used to complete the peer review. Please check.
Deadline5:Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis
I have completed the modifications to our group's Wikivoyage based on your feedback to LIU ZIFU last month. Please check.
Deadline6 :Media Trends and Globalization
I have completed this task and provided suggestions for HUANG YANHAN's article in his translation task. Please [[Talk:Four Scholars in Wuzhong#Suggestions:ZHANG QI[edit source]|review]].
Deadline8 :Media Trends and Globalization & Deadline7 :Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis
When I was completing my translation task, the person who posted the photos was officially banned by Wikipedia, so two of the photos could not be accurately synchronized to my translation task. Please forgive me. And when I was doing the translation task, I used templates to reference both of the following templates in my article, and corrected any links that did not display correctly using templates like this.[[:zh: en| zh]]
May I obtain additional scores by completing these two templates.
@ZHANGQI1066 Good. For references, if the source is not in English, the title should be in the original language (here, Chinese), and the English translation of the title is added to the 'translated title' parameter. Stop by my office hours if you want me to show you how to do it.
Listings in 'get in' should include the main train and bus station (with GPS coordinates)
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Please ask for your article to be reviewed as discussed in our assignment at the bottom of the page here: User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage, then in few days check what was written and carry out any changes based on advice there and report back to me.
Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability. There are numerous paragraphs in your article that have no references. Please add references to them.
Please carefully check all references one by one to remove errors and to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese, please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
First of all, I have completed your first suggestion - I have translated the Chinese materials in the citations and checked all the citations. I also deleted several inappropriate citations and citations whose pages were deleted.Battle of Weixian
Secondly, I completed the modification of Wikipedia. I added the historical background of Longquanyi and the climate and climate map. And I also added the train station. Finally, according to your suggestion, I also found the local festivals and put the festivals after the history. Please check.[70]
However, I don’t quite understand this paragraph: Please ask for your article to be reviewed as discussed in our assignment at the bottom of the page here: User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage, then in a few days check what was written and carry out any changes based on advice there and report back to me.Because I am in the same group as LIU ZIFU, he has already completed the review, but you may have deleted the previous information. You can check whether you have modified his and my grades to know that we completed this assignment ahead of schedule last month, but only he left a message on the page, so you may not know. Please check
Regarding Battle of Weixian: I added a few citations and checked and modified the previous ones. The citation I added is the Battle of Huaihai. I don't know if you can understand what I said. Because the Battle of Weixian is the beginning of the Battle of Huaihai, they are related, so I quoted some citations with titles similar to the Battle of Huaihai. Finally, I completed your last request: Next, if the source is in Chinese, please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so. Please checkZHANGQI1066 (talk) 08:30, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
@ZHANGQI1066 Very good progress. I see only one paragraph now missing a reference ("In terms of tactics, the PLA emphasized "steady and methodical" attacks..."). Can you add a reference to it (otherwise it should be removed)?
The only other thing to improve is to address the Wikipedia:Orphan issue of this article not being linked from others. See what articles link to this on Chinese Wikipedia and try to see if this is mentioned in similar places in corresponding English articles, and if not, add a mention of your new article to them. Compare Pages that link to "Battle of Weixian" - Wikipedia vs 链接至“潍县战役”的页面 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书
@Leeinm Good. Check feedback on talk of Burqin and Qianjiang and my comments on how to improve them above in other sections.
Good job with your weekly edits. Regarding your extra credit translation, please add reference to it (also you can add a reference ot the Korean original article for extra credit). Please remember that only referenced content can be added to Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. See Wikipedia:Verifiability - in zh wiki that's 维基百科:可供查證 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:07, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor,
I checked the discussion pages of burqin and qianjiang and made some modifications based on comments from other users.
For extra credit translated articles, references are also added. Please check it here.
I also translated a english article Separate spheres to Chinese and added references. Please check it here.
@Leeinm Good. Regarding your book article, I think you should translate the claim in German that "In China, A Dog Called Money has been the most successful German children's book in recent years, selling 1.5 million copies within a year. ", with a reference. If you could add some Chinese reviews to your article, it would be very useful to the readers too. You could then translate it to English for even more extra credit. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:57, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
Deadline8：ZHANG MINGSHUO
Dear Professor,
I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."
I have completed our final project. This is the article I translated from Chinese to English, and it has already been published.
Battle of Baotou(CN->ENG) (ENG->CN)戈佐岛体育场 Please review them.
Thank you, Professor Shuo1103 (talk) 17:49, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
@Shuo1103 Your English article has been declined because the translation is not finished - it is missing references. Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
If the source is in Chinese (ex. 中国抗日战争年度焦点: 醒狮怒吼,1937-1939), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
The last paragraph still needs a reference.
Please finish translating the content from the infobox (Chinese commander names are not translated) and other links are broken.
Many other links to relevant articles are missing from your translation (ex. Fu Zuoyi) in the background. Others are wrong, for example "Chen Bingyi" links to a wrong person (artist born in 1975...).
If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. If you don't know how to use this, come to my office and I'll demonstrate. For example, "Eighth War Area" should be linked to 绥西三战役 (and the correct name in English would likely be the "Third Battle of Suixi").
Dear professor, we have revised our translation of Hong Kong Media Controversy, but we are still unable to submit it. The reason given by the administrators is that the reference sources of our article are unreliable, but the information sources in the Chinese article are also unreliable, so we are unable to successfully upload it now. This is the reply given by the administrators. CHEN HEBING (talk) 08:26, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
@CHEN HEBING That is a good response, but see also my last comment to you from few days ago. The references you currently have in the article are ok, but a lot of the content in your article has no references. You need to either find references for them, or delete the unreferenced content from your translation. Per our class policies, only referenced content is accepted for this assignment.
For example, you have the following short section, which cites no source: "In 2000, Next Magazine published an article titled "Addicted to the Top Scholars Exam", in which the first interviewee said, "It's so boring to go back to work every day. If I don't take exams, I will feel tired all over." The interviewee complained to the Privacy Commissioner's Office and the Hong Kong Journalists Association that the content was fabricated." Either find a reference to prove this is true or delete this. You can likewise delete this from zh wiki for extra points, with the rationale that is has no references. If someone cares and can find a reference, they can restore it. Otherwise we cannot host such information on Wikipedia - it may be false. See also this case study: Zhemao hoaxes - WikipediaPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:50, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
Deadline8：白诗棋
Dear Professor, I am taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization." I have completed our final project. This is the article I translated from English to chinese, |全球金融体系]and it has already been published. 白诗棋 (talk) 08:27, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear professor, this is my revised content. Regarding the citation of the part about "differences from the original novel", citation [15] contains all the sources of this part. So can I just add it to the first paragraph? Xuan6699 (talk) 19:17, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
@Wjyy1212 Good, but you still need to fix the following issues, many of which I mentioned in my previous reviews of your work:
Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
@Parksungeun Well done. That article seems fine. Double check the feedback from its talk page. If you have acted on it and fixed the issues mentioned there, please reply there to the editor who reviewed, pinging them and thanking them for their review, and tell them all has been fixed so they can double check. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:59, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
Hello teacher, I have wikied and modified the article according to the administrator's request, but the administrator did not allow me to move and publish the article Hanyangdaxue (talk) 12:00, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
you need references for most content (See Wikipedia:Verifiability). Only referenced content can be published.
the translation quality is very bad and not complete ("It is made of iron, and is made of iron." or "complicated and varied in 栱."). Please proofread it carefully. Poor translations cannot be published.
@Linlin406 You have changed content, but you still need to add references - see my first comment above.
Unreferenced content cannot be published on Wikipedia and cannot be accepted for our project. Please add footnotes to all relevant content verifying the information stated. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:58, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
@Linlin406 I am afraid this is not revised enough, or at all (in a good way). All you have added are some badly formatted links to other Wikipedia articles. This is not correct. Please read the following guidelines:
Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
your footnotes were links to Chinese Wikipedia. This is not correct. Read Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking . Footnotes are used for references, not links to other Wikipedia articles. If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage linkI to link it.
@1eleven0086 Very good. Please add a reference to the text marked with citation requests ("More than 2700 teachers in Zhejiang Province have been selected to participate in the evaluation of the college entrance examination. They are all university teachers with higher professional levels in their respective disciplines, or in-service high school teachers with three years or more of teaching experience, and the title of first level teacher or above in secondary schools") Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:16, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
If the source is in Chinese (ex. 中国抗日战争年度焦点: 醒狮怒吼,1937-1939), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
In the website name parameter, please use the name of the website, not URL like jxyk.zisu.edu.cn. It should instead say something like The New York Times or Chinese Ministry of Education
I am taking the 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class. This is my final editor. This is my blog post.Please check, thank you. Thank you for your help during the semester. Best regards and thankyou! 유신예 (talk) 07:12, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
convert entries in the 'do' section to listings, with GPS addresses
add description to listings that are missing them (ex. Huanyuan Garden)
add addresses to all listings, but make sure not to add to much (Common error to avoid: you should add an address (street, building number, etc.) to your listing BUT do not repeat the city name. For example, if your listing is in Ansan, the address does not need to contain the city name.)
for the do section, add listings for festivals
zoom out your map so that it shows more points of interests (listings)
@Jeong Ahram @Jo HyeonSeong Good. Can you add the link for the "Minister Hyochunghoe"? This does not seem like the correct name for that presumably imporant person in English - it exists only in your article. There is also some unreferenced content; I've marked it with [citation needed] for you. Please add references for the claims made in these sentences. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:29, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
Hello, Professor. I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."These are all the additional wikipedia，thank you.
Regarding your English translation, please make sure to link it to the translated original article clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button.
It also has some uneferenced paragraphs. Please add references to them. Only referenced content is accepted for our class (unreferenced content can be deleted from Wikipedia at any moment).
For Modaomen Waterway, please make sure to link it to the translated original article clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button, and do the same for your other translations.
Dear Professor, this is the content that I have modified in response to your opinion, and this is the link, please check! Thank you very much! Xjx921 (talk) 14:19, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
@Xjx921 Good progress. Reference 14, 16, 24 and 25 to Baidu Baike need to be changed per WP:BAIDU (Baidu has too much low quality content to be accepted as a reference).
Please add more links to your article - the first time an important topic like Meizhou Island is mentioned, it should be linked.
Please carefully check all references one by one to remove errors and to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 福建省"), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
After that, you can publish your article (move it to mainspace, see Help:Move). After that, please make sure to link it to the translated original article clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button, and do the same for your other translations. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:31, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
Deadlin6: Yeogeun Song
Dear Professor i'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"
I am afraid it is too late for you to complete the assignments for that class; you should have started months ago and completed them on time. Please try again next semester. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:48, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
Deadline7：XU YAN
I am currently taking the course "Media Trends and Globalization".
Good progress. To finish, please add the interlanguage (interwiki) link clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button and linking the Chinese article. Also, please add WP:CATEGORIES - see what categories are used on en wiki and add similar ones here Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:56, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, I have moved the Jiangxi Provincial Library article, but the low-power broadcasting that article can not find the moving button, which is very distressing to me Kdjdxx208 (talk) 18:50, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
Please ask your students to leave edit summaries
Would you please ask your students to leave edit summaries? There are three request to the student in question to leave edit summaries. While the latest edits are on talk pages and an ES may not be as much of an issue, that student has not left any ES. It seems few of your students are leaving ES.
Edit summaries are useful for searching the wp:page history to find specific edits. Please ask your students to leave edit summaries - see WP:FIES. People doing wp:RCP would rather not have to analyze edits when an ES could get to the point. Briefly describe your changes and a link to its help page is right there just above the "Publish changes" button. Please ask them to leave their reasoning especially if removing citations. Thank you Adakiko (talk) 19:35, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
Then please don't complain when they get reverted for not explaining deletions? I, and I suspect many other wp:RCP, would appreciate more edit summaries. ES are very helpful so that complex edits can be glossed over rather than having to analyzed in depth. I get that complaint often . Maybe have your students to check the Preferences -> Editor -> Prompt me when entering a blank edit summary box as the first thing after registering? I have it clicked or I would often forget to leave one.
@HonghaotianWikipedia:BAIDU , as explained in the link here, is not considered a good source (it steals a lot of content from Wikipedia without attribution and has very low standards for guarding against fake information). Please look for better, more reliable sources (newspapers, books, journals). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:41, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
@1eleven0086 I am afraid those projects are far from finished; you should've asked me for review weeks ago.
Garzê needs a climate and history sections, get in section needs listings for train and intercity bus station, a map, all entries in the see and do section need to be reformatted into listings, do section should list festivals.
Jishou is little better, but at least it has some properly formatted listings and a map (but it is not zoomed in correctly).
Please note that currently the poor state of your Wikivoyage articles and lack of relevant Wikidata activities and weekly assignments mean that you and your team grade for that class is passing at best.
Dear Professor I’ve updated the See and Do sections for Garzê into listings and added festivals under Do. The Buy section is also reformatted with more details about local products. A map has been added showing key locations. Let me know if anything else needs to be adjusted! Alexk27 (talk) 04:42, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
SHAO JIANUAN&WANG YIKE
Dear Professor Piotr, Our course is: Media Trends and Globalization.
Your Chinese translation was deleted due to very poor translation (see explanation at https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Alexk27 ). You can ask @Wcam to restore it to your sandbox and fix it there, and ask them to review it again but please remember the deadline for this assignment ends in 24-48h. You should have tried to complete it weeks ago, per the deadlines in our syllabus.
Regarding your English translation, please make sure to link it to the translated original article clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button.
I am sorry that we missed the deadline, but we have worked hard to revise the article translated from Chinese to English. Thank you for reading. I am really sorry. Here is our linkAlexk27 (talk) 04:11, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor,Our course is: Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis. I’ve updated the See and Do sections for Garzê into listings and added festivals under Do. The Buy section is also reformatted with more details about local products. A map has been added showing key locations. In the section about Jishou I adjusted the map and modified the exact coordinates. Let me know if anything else needs to be adjusted!@Sssnuan@1eleven0086Alexk27 (talk) 05:22, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
SHAO JIANUAN&WANG YIKE
Dear Professor Piotr, Our courses are:Media Trends and Globalization.I am sorry that we missed the deadline, but we have worked hard to revise the article translated from Chinese to English. Thank you for reading. I am really sorry. Here is our link and my team members @SssnuanAlexk27 (talk) 04:06, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
@Fifi623623 Good. But the links to Chinese Wikipedia need to be fixed. If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. If you don't know how to use this, come to my office and I'll demonstrate.
For example, Bao'en Temple should be linked to that temple's article in English if it exists, and if Chinese if not (if it exists in Chinese).
If the source is in Chinese (ex. 景区概况), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:46, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
I corrected it as I understood it, and I don't know if it's correct.
@Fifi623623 Please read them manuals again. There are still some wrong links like " Xuanyang Gate (now Zhonghua Gatezh：中华门)," or "uddha’s parietal bone reliczh：舍利"
There are still some places in the article that need references (footnotes). I marked them with [citation needed].
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class.
Here is my final draft for the Wikivoyage article on Pyeongtaek. I have incorporated all the feedback you provided in Deadlines 5 and 6.
Please let me know which parts should be further revised or improved to achieve an A+ grade.
add a short 1-2 paragraphs subsection on 'history' to the 'understanding' section
Pyeongtaek Bus Terminal should have a proper listing with GPS coordinates
see section should have at least 10 entries. Can you find some other landmarks in the area to recommend to tourists? Some old historical buildings, or natural landmarks? How about the two museums I see mentioned at THE BEST Pyeongtaek Specialty Museums (2024) - Tripadvisor ?
Have you seen the feedback you got at Talk:Pyeongtaek – Travel guide at Wikivoyage ? If so, please reply there to the editor who reviewed, pinging them and thanking them for their review, and tell them all has been fixed so they can double check.
As per your suggestions, I have made the necessary adjustments. Here’s a summary of the changes:
- Added a 1-2 paragraph subsection on the history of Pyeongtaek in the "Understand" section.
- Included proper GPS coordinates for Pyeongtaek Bus Terminal.
- Expanded the "See"(and other) section with additional recommendations, including landmarks, historical buildings, and natural spots. I’ve also added two museums mentioned on The Best Pyeongtaek Specialty Museums (2024) on TripAdvisor.
- Responded to the feedback on Talk:Pyeongtaek – Travel guide at Wikivoyage, thanking the reviewer and informing them that all suggested changes have been made.
Please feel free to double-check the article. Let me know if further revisions are needed to achieve an A+ grade..
Thank you for your helpful suggestions. I attempted to fix the issues pointed out by reviewers at the top of my published press article, but I found it difficult to do on my own and was unable to make the revisions.
Since this is an edit for additional credit rather than the main project, I was wondering if not being able to make these changes will have any impact on my score.
I appreciate your understanding and would be grateful for your guidance.
@Buryab0ne I am afraid the currently submitted extra credit assignments in English are too poorly written to be accepted. The references in the first one are unreliable (Wikipedia). Two out of four references in the second one link to Wikipedia as well. The references are not properly formatted (metadata errors). The last submission has no references. Your Chinese drafts are not even on zh wiki, but on en wiki (wrong website).
Currently all your work is at an early draft level and would be deleted if published. You can try to fix it within the next 48h, but I am likely going to too busy to be able to offer you detailed feedback.
I recommend you use Wikipedia live chat help and ask volunteers to review your work and give you feedback using Wikipedia:Discord - Wikipedia , Wikipedia:IRC or Wikipedia:Teahouse - Wikipedia , If the volunteer or volunteers reviewing your work accept it and it is published within the next 48h or so, please let me know and I'll give you extra credit.
For review of Chinese work, ask Chinese volunteers at one of the live chat options listed here: 维基百科:Discord交流群 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书
Also, note that currently you have a passing grade in the Globalization class, but not in Big and Small data. Please see my review of your work for that class from few days ago above, and fix the issues raised ASAP.
Dear Professor, I am taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization." Here are 4 of my blogs. The extra points blogs I have completed are also here. please check them. Thank you Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 12:09, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
Extra credit Blogs：CUI ZAN
Dear Professor, I am taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization." Here are all the blogs I have done. The two extra credit blogs are also included in this link. please check them. Thank you！ Cuicuizan (talk) 12:55, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
Extra credit Blog：GUAN YUE
Dear Professor,
I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization." I’ve included all the blogs I’ve completed, including the extra credit ones. Please let me know if there’s anything I need to revise. Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 12:55, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 7: Sarang Yoon & Jisu Lee
Dear Professor,
We are taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data' class.
We completed the final draft reflecting the feedback you gave us. Here is the link.
@Ysrfield @Xisuux Please double check that you have fixed all the issues raised on talk; I've received a message from a Wikivoyage reviewer (@Ground Zero) that you have not done so on time. Please make sure not to readd any errors.
Things to fix in your article (which is overall looking good):
please add a short (2-4 sentences) subsection on history to understand section
your get in and get around section should clearly specify which bus stations are intercity and which are local (local bus stations do not need to be listed). Are there any train or subway stops in the city? They should be listed. See how this is done in Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
@Xisuux Very good. Your grade for the Data class is A/A+. For the Globalization class I'd recommend som extra credit assignment to make it similar. Please note we only have about ~24h for submitting extra credit work; I cannot guarantee that I'll have time to grade on or after XMAS. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:43, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
Extra credit Wikipedia : Dabin Kim
Dear professor.
I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class. I edited the Wikipedia article for extra credit.
I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' and 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class.
I have completed my contributions for this week's project(regularly edit): Wikipidia, Wikivoyage and would appreciate it if you could review my edits when you have a moment. I’m seeking feedback to ensure everything is on track and to earn the extra credit for the month.
@송여근 I am afraid your content was declined from publication by the reviewer due to reasons explained in their edit summaries: 근대화 이론: Revision history - 위키백과 , 근대화 이론: Revision history - 위키백과 . If you can fix those issues, you can republish your work but please note we have only 24h for submission of extra credit work; I may not have time to review work submitted later
I submitted the Deadline 5 assignment on time; however, I was unable to incorporate Professor's feedback to move it to the mainspace. Therefore, I am resubmitting it here. Please check the link.
(Since I couldn’t reply to the original topic, I am creating a new one instead.)
@SoeunK Good, but I see your article was declined (without any rationale I can see, however) by @Aspere .
Please ask that reviewer why the declined your work; if they do not reply you can publish your article again.
After publication, please add the interlanguage (interwiki) link clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button and linking the Chinese article. Also, please add WP:CATEGORIES - see what categories are used on en wiki and add similar ones here. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:55, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
@SoeunK I am afraid the reviewers still do not see your work as ready to be published, and it was declined again. Please ask them for explanation (I do not see it) and then fix whatever they ask you to fix. @Jeebeen
please note we only have about ~24h for submitting extra credit work; I cannot guarantee that I'll have time to grade on or after XMAS.
Hello professor, my blog invitation is not accessible Please send me another invitation, I will give you the homework right now.Thank you！！ Linlin406 (talk) 06:08, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
@Linlin406 Dear student. I do not have any data for LIN AIJIA, Wikipedia account Linlin406, in my grading spreadsheet. This also means I do not have your email on file (please send me an email and ask to be invited to the blog; do not post your email here).
However, given that you have no points recorded in my spreadsheet, it appears that you have not completed any in-class activities. The only activity you completed was the Hofstede Project, which means your current score is <10 points. Considering that your main project is unfinished (Wuliangbao Pagoda), I am afraid it is too late for you to complete sufficient tasks to get sufficient score to pass this class this semester.
You are welcome to try, but there is less than 24 remaining (I may not have time to grade anything after today). I recommend you take my class again next semester, and try to attend the class and complete all assignments on time. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:32, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization." I’ve included all the blogs I’ve completed, including the extra credit ones. Please let me know if there’s anything I need to revise. Thank you! Shuo1103 (talk) 07:24, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
Extra credit blog:SHENZIHE
I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization." I’ve included all the blogs I’ve completed, including the extra credit ones. Please let me know if there’s anything I need to revise. Thank you! SHENZIHE (talk) 07:46, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
We are currently taking courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."
We have completed our final projects. The articles we translated have already been published. One is from English to Chinese[言论自由], the other one is from Chinese to English[Giant Wild Goose Pagoda].
This is the city we chose for Wikivoyage, and the content has been completed. Please review it.[Shaoxing]
About 言论自由 I have revised the article according to the requirements. For the part about the Giant Wild Goose Pagoda, I’ve added references for the sections I contributed to. However, the "Surroundings and History" section was already there before my edits, so I’m not sure about its sources. As for Wikipedia, I have also asked for a review. Please check！Thank you！ Uuueol (talk) 17:53, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor, I was wondering if there’s anything else I need to revise for my assignments on Wikipedia and Wikivoyage. Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 11:11, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
@Uuueol I recommend extra credit work on Wikipedia to improve your grade to B level or higher, but please note we only have about ~24h for submitting extra credit work; I cannot guarantee that I'll have time to grade on or after XMAS.
I have also personally completed two additional bonus articles for Wikipedia. One is translated from English to Chinese[白色恋人], and the other from Chinese to English[Broadway Circuit]. Please review them. Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 05:52, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
@Uuueol Good. Regarding your translation to English, please add the interlanguage (interwiki) link clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button and linking the Chinese article. Also, please add WP:CATEGORIES - see what categories are used on en wiki and add similar ones here.
Also, please double check the name is it "Broadway Circuit." or "Broadway Circuit"?
The infobox provides yet another name: Suntech International Management Limited
I’ve added the categories and interlanguage links. As for the name, "Broadway Circuit" is already being used for another article on English Wikipedia, so I had to include the "." to make it distinct. However, the correct name should be "Broadway Circuit," but I’m not sure how to change it. Please let me know if there’s anything else I need to adjust. Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 06:58, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
@Uuueol I see. The naming issue has already been fixed by other volunteers. Your score should be A or A+ for the globalization class; you can make some extra edits to wikivoyage to ensure similar grade for that course. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:46, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
Deadline 8 ：WU WENHAO
Dear Professor Konieczny,
I am taking the course “Media Trends and Globalization”and 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis‘.
Media Trends and Globalization：My topic is Unemployment in China (Chinese translated into English). Here is the link.
Blogging through Media Trends and Globalization (2023). My blogger link.
Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis：My topic is Dazu. Here is the link.
For the final step, ask experienced Wikivoyage editors for feedback by 1) starting a discussion on the discussion page of your article (make sure to have an appropriate heading and a comment below it) and 2) linking it from here with a comment: "please review my article" or similar. Please check for replies every few days (and before the final grading), address any issues raised (if you don't understand them, ask me for help) and after fixing them, reply to the people who reviewed your article telling them you fixed the issues raised. (Ping them by mentioning their name using the + button, see Wikovyage:Echo). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:05, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
Hello Professor, I have placed the link for Dazu at the bottom of the webpage. Thank you for your guidance this semester. I am pleased to have the opportunity to edit content about my hometown, increasing its appeal to more people. Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 11:33, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
I wanted to let you know that I just tagged Yangqi acupoint for deletion, because it's a redirect from an article title to a namespace that's not for articles.
If you don't want Yangqi acupoint to be deleted, you can contest this deletion, but don't remove the speedy deletion tag from the top.
You can leave a note on my talk page if you have questions. Thanks!
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Dear Professor,
I am taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."Here are all the blogs I have done. The extra points blogs I have completed are also here please check them.
Thank you
Syouziiye (talk) 08:48, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
You can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say.
Remember: if a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it
I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."
I have completed our final project. This is the article I translated from Chinese to English, and it has already been published.Chiang Zhongzheng's Diary
This is the city I chose for Wikivoyage, and everything has been completed. Please review it.[77]
Dear Professor, I have made revisions to my article on Mohe based on the questions you raised, and I have also requested a review of the article. Please check it, thank you. Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 07:29, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor, . My article translation (Chinese to English) has been completed and has been published, and you said there were no other errors. But I was wondering because I saw that the final grade was F, I also completed all the tasks and even did the extra credit, so I'm confused about the grade.so I wanted to ask.This is my article.Thanks professor Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 15:20, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
@Jiayyyyy Ok. Your current score for the Glob class is C. Please ensure that your main translations are published and accepted by the reviewers. For the other class, your current score is D as your Wikivoyage article is not finished (it needs a short history section, several more listings for see and do, and listings for the main intercity bus station or stations). Your wikidata link there for Shangrao Station is wrong and needs to be fixed. Fixing this can improve the score for both classes to B. Good luck Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here16:55, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
I have sent a message to the auditor's discussion page about my Asian centralism, but I have not received a reply. The auditor's home page said it was temporarily unable to process information due to physical reasons.
@Jiayyyyy Please fix the issues reglated to Shangrao – Travel guide at Wikivoyage : " Your wikidata link there for Shangrao Station is wrong and needs to be fixed. " and add "listing for the main intercity bus station"
Is the GPS for Shangrao Museum correct? It shows some unihabited part of land. Please double check your coordinates, and also add URLs to the museum listing and those of other organizations. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:44, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear teacher, I have changed according to your question. All GPS is based on latitude and longitude at the entrance to the attraction. In addition, the list of major intercity bus stops has been added. The official website of all the attractions is also posted. Please check it out
@Jiayyyyy Good. I recommend extra credit edits (adding more listings to this or another city article) to improve your grade to B or higher (but we only have 24h or so before I am going to be finalizign most grades). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:43, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor, I have done the additional credit editing for Wikipedians:
What else can I do to get an A in both of ”Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis“ and ”Media Trends and Globalization.“ Jiayyyyy (talk) 10:58, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
Your grade in both classes is now around B-A. You can still improve it by doing more extra credit work, but please note we only have about ~24h for submitting extra credit work; I cannot guarantee that I'll have time to grade on or after XMAS. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:47, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor, thank you very much. I have a question, if I want to make sure it's all A➕, do I need to keep doing extra credits? Jiayyyyy (talk) 11:52, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
@Jihaiyun Good, but please fix the issues related to your main translation topics (Multicultural families in South Korea to zh, corruption in India to zh) and publish them on zh wiki.
@Jihaiyun As you can see, your first draft (multcultural familias) has been declined; please work with the reviewers to get it accepted, but please note we only have about ~24h for submitting extra credit work; I cannot guarantee that I'll have time to grade on or after XMAS.
May I ask about my current grades for the two courses? So far, I have successfully published 11 Wikipedia articles, excluding the one about Korean multicultural families. Additionally, I have completed 4 extra blog tasks.
I would like to know how many points I can earn for creating an additional qualified Wikipedia article or Wikivoyage entry. Also, could you let me know how much more content I need to produce to achieve an A+?
@Jihaiyun Your grade for the Glob class should be around B-A. For the other class it is a bit lower and I recommend doing more Wikivoyage extra credit edits in the next 24h.
It is hard to tell you exactly how much you need to edit to improve the grade, as score received depends on quality of the edits (that also means that low quality machine translation / AI content added that gets removed by reviewers quickly does not generate any meaningful credit).
Could you kindly let me know my grade for the second course? Additionally, I would like to inquire how much extra credit I could earn by completing one Wikivoyage article and one Wikipedia article. I would greatly appreciate it if you could provide an approximate range of the minimum and maximum possible points I might receive for each.
@Jihaiyun Your score for that class, based on my current calculations is 73=C. You can improve it to B or maybe even A by improving content related to another town (or towns). Depending on quality and quantity of edits, the extra score you can receive that way can range from 1 to 20 points. I recommend focusing on adding new listings for see and do with GPS, as well as missing elements such as maps or images, as well as expanding the lead and understand (with history and climate). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:20, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor,
I hope this message finds you well. I have completed a new WikiGuide article titled "Western Yunnan."[[78]] I kindly request you to review and assess the score for this article. I will continue to work hard and strive to improve my score as soon as possible.
PS. I see some of your content was removed because it belongs in the city article(s), not province. You can rescue your work and credit by moving such information to the relevant city articles. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:40, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor,
Thank you very much for your prompt feedback on the article I published. As far as I know, the "Western Yunnan" article I wrote does not refer to a province or a city but rather a regional division within a province, which includes multiple cities.
Additionally, I have reviewed the comments left on the discussion page and the revision history. Following their suggestions, I have already made adjustments to my article. If you still find any issues with it, I would greatly appreciate it if you could provide more detailed feedback. I will continue revising the article until it is perfect. Jihaiyun (talk) 11:51, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor, I have completed a new wiki guide article titled "Jinhua". I implore you to review and evaluate the score of this article. I will continue to work hard and try to improve my performance as soon as possible. Thank you for your time and help. Look forward to your feedback! Jihaiyun (talk) 20:29, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor, I have completed a new wiki guide article titled "Mangshi". "5 I implore you to review and evaluate the score of this article. I will continue to work hard and try to improve my performance as soon as possible. Thank you for your time and help. Look forward to your feedback!@Hanyangprofessor2Jihaiyun (talk) 16:21, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor, I have completed a new wiki guide article titled "Tongchuan". I implore you to review and evaluate the score of this article. I will continue to work hard and try to improve my performance as soon as possible. Thank you for your time and help. Look forward to your feedback! Jihaiyun (talk) 13:01, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor,
May I kindly ask if my score has reached an A+ after completing these four WikiGuide bonus projects? If not, I will continue editing to improve.
@Alexk27 Ok. Please format your references (add URLs, Chinese titles, etc) Also, please add the interlanguage (interwiki) link by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button and link the other language articles to connect them to the original you have translated. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
Please carefully check all references one by one to remove errors and to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles.
Also, please note that your current score is not sufficient to pass either class (please try to fix issues related to your main projects I've mentioned in reviews above in the last few days, regarding your articles Jishou / Garzê and Mass mobilization to zh Hangzhou Cultural Radio Television Group from zh to en. You can complete more extra credit projects but there is only 1-2 days left before I will be finalizing the grades. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:48, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
I see you removed the links to articles on zh wiki. Instead, you should link them using this tool: If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it.
I will update your score to reflect your activities, but please note that edits which introduce errors or do not improve content significantly will not receive many extra credit points Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:37, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
I am sorry to tell you this, but I have already revised the assignments for Ganzi and Jishou in the course Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis. Since I am already a senior, it would be great if you could look at our revised records and revise my grades for me. Thank you. Alexk27 (talk) 08:11, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
@Alexk27 I have graded your blogs for Globalization class (thank you for the links, it was indeed a wrong blog), but right now you still need points to compensate for activities you missed in class in order to get into the passing (D) range.
I do not see any recent revisions to Jishou.
In Garzê, please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Convert all POIs mentioned in Scenic spots to proper listings, like the one above it (with GPS coordinates).
Festivals should have a dedicated subsection under Do (see how it is done in Ansan, again).
Note that even after fixing this and completing the main assignment, you do not have sufficient points to pass due to lack of in-class activity and homework. You can try to improve another city article to get extra credit, but please note there is very little time remaining. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here12:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
Thank you for your reply. I have revised the content about ganzi. Please check it. I will complete the Wikivoyage of other cities in a moment. Please wait. Thank you. Alexk27 (talk) 14:41, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
@Alexk27 Please move history and climate under heading, where they should be lower level subsections. The scenic spots section is not merged into see. For festivals, please add URLs to their pages, and information when and where they happen, so tourists can find them. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here15:07, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
@Hanyangprofessor2 Dear professor, thank you for taking the time to reply to me. I have been working hard on revising it, and I will be on the plane home in a few hours. I am already a senior, so it may be very necessary to pass it, otherwise I may delay graduation in the future. Of course, if there is anything else that needs me to revise, please let me know. Thank you for reading. Alexk27 (talk) 15:52, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear professor, hello, because I have to catch a flight, I may not be able to add extra tasks now. I don't know if what I have done now is enough to modify my grade. Please. Although I am embarrassed to say this, I don't want to fail to graduate, please. Alexk27 (talk) 02:48, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
@Hanyangprofessor2Hello professor, this is an extra Wikivoyage I completed: Wuhu, I hope you can check it out. This is very disturbing to you, because this is my senior year, so I am very nervous. Can this situation change my grades in two courses?(After you also read my blogs) Alexk27 (talk) 15:13, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
Hello, teacher. I am your student, LYU YANGCHENG2021008895. I went to your office to ask for your test score in the last class. You said it was 80 points. I just saw the results you sent. Teacher, did you make a mistake in the score? Teacher, please review it again Hanyangdaxue (talk) 07:35, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
@Hanyangdaxue Unfortunately, you have skipped most activities for the data class. Your main project (Penglai https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Penglai) is unfinished, and you have very little activity in class recorded for that class and no evidence of weekly homework. The good news is that it is still possible to get a passing grade, but you need to complete your activities as soon as possible; I cannot be sure I can grade any work during or after XMAS. To finish Penglai, do the following: 1) add a short written subsection on climate and another on history (a few sentences each) to 'understand' 2) add at least five more listings, including converting the 'speedboat wharf' entry into listing 3) for do section, add a subsection on local festivals. Then I recommend doing extra credit editing - for example, try to create an entry on Longkou (but you can also choose any other town). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:17, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
I am taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization." These are all the Wikipedia and wikivoyage pages I have translated additionally.
Hello professor, my name is Zhang Bingyi, student number 2022011867, Wikipedia name is Zhangzhang111, and my blog has been sent to the blog via Sociology of Daily Life (2023) not 2024! Remember to check there! I've also written a lot of Wikipedia articles that have been well received by reviewers.
I wonder why my score is 0. Is it because of attendance? If so, I have submitted my leave request to the professor's email. .....but the professor has not read the mail, so please confirm! Thank you. Zhangzhang111 (talk) 17:19, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
I am LI LINLIN, taking 'Understanding Small Data and Big Data' course.
According to your suggestions in the email:
1. I solved the problems raised by the reviewers in the main project, replied to them on the talk page, and checked the usage of "burqin" in the article again.Please check here
2. I also edited the bonus article again, added some listings, and addressed questions raised by other reviewers of this article. Please check here
Dear Professor,
I am taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization." These are all the Wikipedia and wikivoyage pages I have translated additionally.
I'm sorry that for some reasons the reading content edited is still in the review process
The content of wikivoyage has been revised as requested. This is the modified link：JINCHENG
Thank you! SHENZIHE (talk) 04:54, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
PS. Because you skipped the Wikidata segment of that class, your current score for Big and Small Data class is low (at D). You can improve it to B with extra credit work (chose and improve another city guide on Wikivoyage, similar to Yangjiang) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here17:18, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
@Guoying1 I will update your grade with your new score. Doing more edits/translations/etc. for either class can raise your grade, but please note we only have about ~24h for submitting extra credit work; I cannot guarantee that I'll have time to grade on or after XMAS Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:58, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor, I made additional edits again. I would like to know whether my grade will remain A➕ after the change of the cut-off grade. Guoying1 (talk) 16:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
@Linlin406 Good job on progressing to a publishable state. There are still many problems that need to be fixed for the grade for this to reach max score (Which is 25 for the main project). I have added an interlanguage link - in the future translations, make sure to do it yourself (by clicking "add interlanguage link" button and connecting the article to the original, here, zh wiki) 南充白塔
Dear Professor:
I'm taking "Small and Big Data with Wikis" class.
On the Chinese Wikivoyage, I expanded the content of Saipan and created an entry for Penglai.
In addition, on the English Wikivoyage, I expanded the contents of the these entries: Jiuzhaigou, Zhangjiajie, Nanchong, Nanjing, Xi'an, guilin,xiamen，sanya.And I created an entry about Sanya Phoenix International Airport.
@Laoxinyi I see you are working hard. I am not sure if airport articles are accepted on Wikivoyage. Much of the content you add (history, geography) is more encyclopedic than tourist-guide style. Most useful and simplest edits would be addng more listings for see and do. I'll update your score to reflect your efforts. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here16:39, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
@Laoxinyi Yes, editing Chinese Wikipedia is ok, and your Wikivoyage edits can give you cred too. However, remember that Wikivoyage is not Wikipedia and it does not need long sections on history or such. Best activity is to add listings to 'see' and 'do' sections', as well as 'get in' for transportation. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:25, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
@Bai0926 Please let me know what is the status of your main project for the Globalization class. I have it recorded as "family in South Korea in english" but I am not aware of your work on this project (if you completed that project, please link it here).
On Wikivoyage, your main project (Taierzhuang) is not well developed. Your current score for that class is D. Please see the review at https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Talk:Taierzhuang , read it carefully and fix all the issues that the expert reviewer raised . Additionally, you should do the following:
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Get in section needs listing for main train and intercity bus stations
Do section should list major local festivals or recurring events
Professor, I don't have the first class on Mondays and Fridays this semester. I only have Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis. But at the beginning of this class, I thought I was going to edit Wikipedia and create an article, so I chose Korean family and submitted the outline. But later I asked you and learned that my homework was to edit Wikitravel, so I didn't continue editing Korean family. In the end, I finished editing Wikitravel and posted a discussion, and also finished editing Wikipedia every month and edited it 80 times more. I am really sorry for not deleting the content of the first class. It was a misunderstanding and wasted your time.This is my second class homework, please check it againBai0926 (talk) 17:19, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
@Bai0926 I see. I will move your extra points for this semester from Globalization to Big and Small Data. Your grade for that class is now at B, and if you fix the issues raised, you should be able to get an A. Good luck! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here17:24, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, I have carefully read the suggestions in the discussion area and made changes one by one. I added Chinese for each important area and deleted some content that I thought was unnecessary. I added the area and brief introduction of each scenic spot in get in. I wrote some restaurants and hotels according to the popularity of Chinese tourism apps. But unfortunately, Taierzhuang is not a very developed city, so there is almost no nightlife, and there are not many coffee shops and bars. I only filled in two. In addition, I also added transportation content according to the suggestions. Please check it out. I want to get a higher score. In addition to this assignment, can I continue to get extra points by editing Wikipedia?If possible, I would like to continue editing Wikipedia. Looking forward to your reply. Bai0926 (talk) 18:25, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
@Bai0926 Good, I have added more points to your Wikivoyage score. You can also get points for the other class that way, but lease note we only have about ~24h for submitting extra credit work; I cannot guarantee that I'll have time to grade on or after XMAS. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:57, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
Sorry professor, when I saw this message, I found that my grade was already A+, and I didn't continue editing after getting the grade I was satisfied with. But when I woke up this morning, I found that my grade became A, so I edited 70 Wikipedia again, hoping to increase my score through additional editing. I added new topics, but you can also view my edits directly.Bai0926 (talk) 12:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
Professor, I edited a Wikivoage article and added some content to it, such as a climate map, GPS of transportation hubs and GPS of entertainment venues. Can I get extra points for this?Bai0926 (talk) 16:48, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor,I am QIAN ZIYI(2022022551) the core and final score of the course "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" is zero. Is there anything wrong with it and what can I do to make up for it?This is my link.I'm sorry to bother you, but thank you very much. Buryab0ne (talk) 21:56, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
@Buryab0ne You need 10 more points for a passing grade in that class. Your Pu'er article needs a proper banner, and more listings - at least 5, preferably 10. The three entries under 'do' belong to 'see'. Instead, for see, add information on Festivals. For good measure, I recommend extra credit work improving another town article.
@Buryab0ne Please convert Pu'er Tea Culture Exhibition Area to a listing, with a GPS coordiantes and URl to their official page. In the 'do', move Pu'er National Park to see and convert it itnto a listing. Theo ther two listings should be moved to 'go next, and I am pretty sure "Western Union Rainforest: Western Union is a county in Pu'er City" is incorrect - counties in China do not have English names. Convert festivals into listings, with GPS coordinates and links to their official pages (in URLs).
And I asked you to add preferably 10 listings to see, I am still not seeing that many. This town has a population of 2.5m. Ansan which is 1/5 of the size has nearly 10 times as many listings. Surely you can find something more for tourist to see there? Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
Teacher, please review it!https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Penglai This is another city improvement entry https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Weihai#Eat Teacher, I'm sorry for opening my email late and disturbing your time! Thank you! LYU YANGCHENG 2021008895 Hanyangdaxue (talk) 10:50, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear professor, I am taking Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis. This is my understanding of small data and big data assignment. Please check it. Thank you！ Cuicuizan (talk) 16:16, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
@Cuicuizan Good job. Please add a listing with GPS address for the main local bus station (in get in) so that it appears on the map.
@Cuicuizan I see. Please check that section again - why is "Zibo Railway Station " discussed under bus section? It should be under railway (train). And check if the link works, this one seems to be not for the train station but for some commercial ticket service at tickets.airportsupersaver.com which also seems to not work.
I have revised the section on major bus stations, specifically Zibo Railway Station, based on your request. Regarding this part, the bus station is located near the railway station, which is why it is named Zibo Railway Station. Typically, people traveling by train will first take a bus to this bus station.
Additionally, I have added the URL for the museum, the URL for the festival, and the Wikidata URL. Please review these changes at your convenience. Thank you for your time and assistance! Cuicuizan (talk) 17:49, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
Thank you for your reply! I have added an explanation in the article regarding the two different Zibo Railway Stations. Please take a look! Thank you! Cuicuizan (talk) 10:14, 20 December 2024 (UTC)
@Cuicuizan Good,. Please double check your listings' links to Wikipedia and Wikidata. Zibo Railway Station has a broken link to Wikipedia. Zibo North Railway Station links to correct Wikidata item, but Zibo Train Station links to a listing of stations (a category) - please correct it.
Thank you for your reply! I have updated the listing link for Zibo Railway Station to point to the correct Wikipedia and Wikidata pages. Additionally, based on further research, it has been agreed to standardize the name as "Zibo Railway Station." Regarding the other listings, most of them only have Chinese Wikipedia pages available, so it is not possible to add links to English Wikipedia or Wikidata. Is there anything else that needs to be revised? Thank you for reviewing this! Cuicuizan (talk) 18:12, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
Thank you for your reply. I understand what needs to be done! I have added links (Wikidata and Wikipedia) for them and, based on the administrator's suggestions, included the hotel information in the sleep section of the listings. ziboCuicuizan (talk) 10:25, 22 December 2024 (UTC)
@Cuicuizan Very good. I removed the links from the bus station (they were incorrect). For the Sheraton Zibo Hotel we should link to the Wikidata page on that particular hotel, not company, or remove the link. Very good job overall, your score for that class is A/A+ Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:02, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
Thank you for your reply! I understand what needs to be done. As I couldn’t find specific links for the hotel, I have removed the link for Sheraton Hotel. Thank you for your review！ Cuicuizan (talk) 04:04, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
Teacher, please review it!https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Penglai This is another city improvement entry https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Weihai#Eat Teacher, I'm sorry for opening my email late and disturbing your time! Thank you! LYU YANGCHENG 2021008895 Hanyangdaxue (talk) 10:52, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
@Hanyangdaxue Good. I will update your score. Can you fix the errors in Weihai GPS listings that have been made by someone else? I looked at some added to Weihai and they are wrong - many are in water. That cannot be correct. Happiness Gate, Cat Head Mountain and Vienna Hotel. There are also two listings for beaches that do not seem to be on the edge of the sea but inland - can you check them? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:20, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
Additionally, this article seems very underlinked. If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it.
Hello Professor, I have completed the links. I would like to inquire that the articles, weekly edits, blogs and extra credit blogs have all been completed, but the grade is still not good enough to get a B. Wangtao626 (talk) 16:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC)
Merry Christmas, Professor., some of the issues raised earlier have been addressed.
Here are the links to my two articles.Link 1，Link 2
You can try to translate extra credit article or articles, but the final grade confirmation is tomorrow, and I will not be able to grade work submitted later on that day.  Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:02, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
Hello professor, I am sorry to trouble you. This is additional editing and supplement. I wish you a happy life.
@Wangtao626 Good, but much of the text you have added is unreferenced. Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references can to be referenced first for extra credit too. See Wikipedia:VerifiabilityPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:05, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
Extra credit blog and Wikipedia (WANGYIZHE）
Hello, Professor. I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."
These are all the additional blogs I have completed. Please review
@WANGYIZHE1124 Regarding your extra credit wiki drafts, please remember that ONLY REFERENCED CONTENT is accepted.
You can publish your work IF it is referenced. Please make sure to link it to the translated original article clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button.
Content that is unreferenced or only in sandbox will not be graded. Content that is deleted because the translation quality is too low will also not be accepted.
@WANGYIZHE1124 I am afraid your translations to English Wikipedia are of too low quality to be accepted - they are poorly translated and formatted, and very poorly referenced. I am afraid they will likely be deleted shortly by the reviewers. Regarding your translations, please make sure to link it to the translated original article clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button.
Your Wikivoyage edits are better, but please make sure all listings you add are properly formatted with GPS data. Some, particularly in Hailar, look like very bad translation or AI hallucinations. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:34, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
Good, but more items need to be fixed to prevent those articles from being deleted, which would reduce the credit given:
The lake article is titled "Lake Seema" but the lead says "Xima Lake". Which is correct? Which used in English sources? Please find an example. We cannot invent names.
When translating, please make sure to add blue links to related articles on English Wikipedia. If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. I see many blue links in Chinese version of the Blossom and NAME articles, but not in English. Please fix that too.
I've finished linking and fixed some errors.but“ Also, please add WP:CATEGORIES - see what categories are used on zh wiki and add similar ones here.” I don't quite understand how to do it. WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 06:52, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor, . My article translation (Chinese to English) has been completed and has been published, and you said there were no other errors. But I was wondering because I saw that the final grade was F, I also completed all the tasks and even did the extra credit(Fang Lina,Yang Qi-dong )I'm confused about the grade,so I wanted to ask.This is my article(Chiang Zhongzheng's Diary).This grade is very important to me, so I had to bother you.
I have followed your instructions and submitted the article for review on the Wikivoyage page for Mohe.The link.
Thank you very much, Professor. I have completed the revisions for the Mohe assignment on Wikivoyage as per your requirements and have applied for a review of the article. However, I have not yet received a response from the administrators. Do you think this could improve my grade?[82]Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 12:11, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
Thank you very much, Professor. I have made revisions to my article based on the feedback and added new content. Please review it, thank you![83]Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 06:34, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
Extra homework LIMENGCHEN
Dear professor：
I made additional edits to Ningde Wikivoyage, hoping to get extra points.
@Honghaotian Your English article is very good, well done. This is true for both of them.
But your Chinese article still needs to be improved - see reviewers' comments there. Please try to fix the issues raised there within the next 24-48h. If you are unclear what to do, please ask the Chinese reviewer for more information @Talimu0518 You can also ask for instant help here 维基百科:社群媒體 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:52, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
Hi Professor,Thanks for contributing to Chinese Wikipedia.
I recently checked your student's article and noticed some problem from The page.That page seems like writed by Machine Translate and it doesn't looks like similar Chinese.Please rewrite or Re-translate that page.when your work is done please told me so i can accepted your draft. Talimu0518 (talk) 07:15, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
Also,Using machine translate to edit Wikipedia pages is prohibited here,Please tole your students don't do it.If we warned that User again and again and he still using machine translate to contributing,He'll be blocked.So Please told them don't to do that,Thank you. Talimu0518 (talk) 11:38, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
Professor, I have made every effort to revise the English to Chinese translation of the article before the deadline. Please check！ Honghaotian (talk) 17:06, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
I recommend making some extra credit activity for the Wikivoyage / Wikidata class (for example, add some listings to a city article) to improve your score in this class from B to A. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here17:28, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
Hello, professor. I made changes to Putian. Population introduction, urban area introduction, weather introduction and history section were added. Can I get an A in this way? Limengchen2777 (talk) 22:34, 21 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear Professor，I am taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."
I would like to improve my grades in these two courses, so for the article translation tasks, I have completed four additional articles,（Xu Shuzhen，Wujiaquan，Li Family Fist，Erlongquan） making a total of six extra credit items.
For the Wikivoyage task, I have completed my basic task on Mohe and requested the administrator to review the article. Based on the feedback from both the administrator and yourself, I have made the necessary revisions. Please kindly review the updated article. Additionally, I have done extra work by supplementing content on Ganzhou, and this is reflected in my editing record.
I have also completed the survey you posted on LMS and have sent it to your email. I am wondering if this can help improve my grades in these two courses.
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