User talk:CyberGhostface/Archive 7
SheckleyHello, would you mind explaining your recent removal of material from Robert Sheckley? It wasn't me who put it there, but I thought perhaps a "citation needed" tag is required, not complete removal. Jashiin (talk) 18:26, 17 December 2007 (UTC)
Hi againI was wondering as the resident Saw expert if there had been any word or scene I missed that explained what was in that letter to Amanda in Saw 3. It's been bugging me for a year+ now and theres no explanation I can remember or theory that I can come up with as to what would need to be written to her.Darkwarriorblake (talk) 00:47, 18 December 2007 (UTC) Aw man, it can't be that easy to draw your own conclusions if I haven't got a clue. The only thing I can imagine (Because, though I might be wrong, I remember Jigsaw telling her about the letter) is that it says he knows she hasn't been offering people the chance to live but if he tells her that it kinda messes up the end of the 3 unless she was too far gone at that point.Darkwarriorblake (talk) 01:54, 18 December 2007 (UTC) Hello again, and thanks for the message. The article is definitely improving, but in response to your question there are still a few things to do (some that I left out of my GA review as I thought I had probably given you enough work already!). Before renominating at WP:GAN I'd recommend, if possible, adding further references. The GA criteria are pretty strict about this, probably more than anything else, and it tends to be the first thing picked up (although it depends to some extent on the reviewer you get!). As I said in the review, the minimum is usually regarded as one inline citation at the end of every paragraph that covers the contents of that paragraph, plus extra cites for quotations, controversial statements etc to prove they are not original research or editor commentary. You have all the quotations properly cited, but in much of the article there are very few citations for the actual text. To give but one example, the last paragraph of The Stand section makes the claims that:
I don't doubt that this is true, but it needs to be referenced - in this case, citing the relevant pages of both versions of the book would allow a reader to follow up these claims for themselves. The same would go for much of the rest of the article. In addition a copyedit is always beneficial; the prose is generally good so nothing major would be necessary, but it never hurts to get someone unfamiliar with the article to proofread. I noticed one or two small things while I was re-reading just now (I'm sure I saw 'it's' instead of 'it is' somewhere, but I've lost it!), and there are some phrases that come over as editor commentary that should be removed or reworded (eg 'oddly enough', 'Surprisingly, Walter looks hurt.' etc). The League of copyeditors may be useful here. Finally, the article layout could perhaps be improved. The lead (per WP:LEAD) should be a summary of, not an introduction to, the article. It needs to briefly mention every major claim made in the article, and should cover every section. Although I think this is mostly sorted, there is no mention of reader/critic reaction to the character (ie the Literary analysis and criticism section). It may also help the article flow to have the next section below the lead as a "Concept and creation" section that deals with how and why King developed this character (this would perhaps be a better place for the quotation currently in the lead). I first expected to find this in the Origins section, but confusingly this deals with Flagg's in-universe origin, not the character origin from King's perspective. Apologies for the long answer - hope this helps! EyeSereneTALK 11:25, 18 December 2007 (UTC)
Merry Christmas or Happy Holidays BIGNOLE (Contact me) is wishing you a Merry Christmas! This greeting (and season) promotes WikiLove and hopefully this one has made your day a little better. Spread the WikiLove by wishing another user a Merry Christmas, whether it be someone you have had disagreements with in the past or a good friend. Don't overdo it on the fudge! Spread the Holiday cheer by adding {{subst:User:Flaminglawyer/MerryChristmas!}} to their talk page with a friendly message. Screaming latkeNo problem -- your version is much better, thanks. NawlinWiki (talk) 05:11, 21 December 2007 (UTC) Thanks!You've made my day! SilkTork *SilkyTalk 23:27, 26 December 2007 (UTC) Hello, this file uploaded by you is listed for deletion: Commons:Deletion requests/Image:Malcommcdowellgnu.PNG. --GeorgHH (talk) 21:19, 29 December 2007 (UTC) RE: Dr. Gordon's fateI haven't listened to the commentary, but I definitely think it's worth noting that the actor himself believes Dr. Gordon to be dead. Jack Of Hearts | Miss A Turn 21:40, 30 December 2007 (UTC) I'm probably not entitled to comment it just so happens that JackofHearts' talk page is on my watchlist still. Certainly if it comes from the actor himself its certainly worth mentioning, however I think it's worth bearing in mind that it's not cannon and so not an official fate. Agent452 (talk) 21:54, 30 December 2007 (UTC) Mischa LecterPer this edit summary, the reason I didn't do it that way is it seems to me that one picture of her is sufficient, and the other one shows her better. —Angr If you've written a quality article... 18:11, 15 January 2008 (UTC) RE:Hoffman deletionI made sure to copy the text from the article into my sandbox before it was deleted, but I don't have the time to do much editing on here today or tomorrow. Jack Of Hearts | Miss A Turn 00:09, 17 January 2008 (UTC) So which articles next...Saw itself?I guess from your comment on the current articles for deletion for the Pig Mask you're feeling like I'm feeling...pretty pissed off that despite the keep votes out-numbering the delete votes Hoffman was deleted anyway. And now the Pig Mask is up and so it will continue I guess. Think some soul should enter a petition to change the moto of wikipedia to "the Encyclopedia anyone can edit...provided they have a detailed knowledge of every single guideline, policy and discussion that has ever taken place." Anyway this rant was to pretty much say that I've voted keep but, like you said I hardly expect it to count...Agent452 (talk) 00:16, 17 January 2008 (UTC) Lemony Snicket Roll CallEli RothI think it's time to block this user: MrHaney, their comments on the talk page are inappropriate as well. Vrac (talk) 22:05, 26 January 2008 (UTC)
AfD nomination of Mischa LecterAn editor has nominated Mischa Lecter, an article on which you have worked or that you created, for deletion. We appreciate your contributions, but the nominator doesn't believe that the article satisfies Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion and has explained why in his/her nomination (see also "What Wikipedia is not"). Your opinions on whether the article meets inclusion criteria and what should be done with the article are welcome; please participate in the discussion by adding your comments at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Mischa Lecter and please be sure to sign your comments with four tildes (~~~~). You may also edit the article during the discussion to improve it but should not remove the articles for deletion template from the top of the article; such removal will not end the deletion debate. Thank you. BJBot (talk) 17:14, 27 January 2008 (UTC) RFI would put it up on the league of copy-editors requests page and maybe a peer review, letting people know what your goal is. It isn't too far from FA. Wrad (talk) 03:40, 29 January 2008 (UTC) Randall Flagg GACongratulations - you've put in a lot of work and it's well deserved ;) EyeSereneTALK 08:56, 29 January 2008 (UTC) USM Video Game Cannonsorry it took me so long to reply to your question, but Bendis announced he woul be writing an arc that covered and expanded upon the video game story after amazing friends. he made htis announcement in the Ultimate Previews mag that came out in the fall. Captaincanuck65 (talk) 00:19, 1 February 2008 (UTC) Rob Zombie filmsWhy are you bringing those back? The single characters do not have enough relevant information to warrant articles. Improve the film articles instead. TTN (talk) 00:08, 2 February 2008 (UTC)
You found one that mentions the character in a side comment. I'm talking about one recent interview where one single person, the whole cast, Rob Zombie, writers of the films, or anyone else important is interviewed about the character(s) and their impact on the horror genre, their ever lasting popularity, or anything like that. Those would be indicators of notability. TTN (talk) 16:54, 2 February 2008 (UTC)
FlaggThank you very much for the barnstar. I appreciate it, and I wish you the best of luck with the FA. I'll be keeping my eye out and cheering for you. Finetooth (talk) 05:02, 6 February 2008 (UTC) re: FlaggNot at all. It's difficult to give constructive criticism but I know it's even more difficult to receive it. I've been reading the R.F. article for a long time and I think it's ready for FA status. True that some sections are not terribly long, but if that's all the information available, it can still be considered comprehensive. Again, great work. --Laser brain (talk) 23:02, 9 February 2008 (UTC) The Flagg FACSo, I'm thinking this candidacy is going to fail over the secondary sources concerns brought by Awadewit. I have mixed feeling about it because on one hand, I see his point, but on the other hand I really doubt there is much out there in the way of serious academic papers about Randall Flagg. But, I am offering to help do the research. I have access to the MLA database and I can start pulling sources if you are interested in a collaboration. I can pull sources and provide the full text to you with bibliographies. As time allows I can also help add sources to the article but I can't commit to much right now. What do you think? --Laser brain (talk) 19:23, 11 February 2008 (UTC)
I'm distracted, but will have another look during the week. You are actually very fortunate to be engaged with Awadewit, who is probably the most insightful reviewer we have onsite. Ceoil (talk) 13:59, 24 February 2008 (UTC) Thanks!Thanks for the barnstar! Galena11 (talk) 22:30, 15 February 2008 (UTC) AfD nomination of Lady Murasaki (Hannibal)I have nominated Lady Murasaki (Hannibal), an article you created, for deletion. I do not feel that this article satisfies Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion, and have explained why at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Lady Murasaki (Hannibal). Your opinions on the matter are welcome at that same discussion page; also, you are welcome to edit the article to address these concerns. Thank you for your time. ≈ The Haunted Angel 23:37, 21 February 2008 (UTC) Flagg PDFHey Cyber, I got that journal article about Flagg today. They sent it to me as a PDF. Do you want me to email it to you? If you use the e-mail link and drop me a message, I'll reply with the PDF. I don't know how else I could get it to you. --Laser brain (talk) 03:50, 22 February 2008 (UTC) RE:Prison Break photosI didn't save them. Sorry, I can't be of help. Regards, Ladida (talk) 03:41, 24 February 2008 (UTC) Hi!That's nice that someone finally added Suzie to Sid's page! Very cool of you. But her last name is (was) Oberg, not Olberg. I think she uses Sid's last name now though (the real one). Just wanted to let you know, but you know, because of *someone* getting the page locked, I can't do it myself... —Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.82.58.52 (talk) 06:30, 26 February 2008 (UTC) No, I mean his real name. Mosesian. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.82.58.52 (talk) 05:12, 27 February 2008 (UTC) She signs her emails with that name, and has it changed in her IMDb page. You can also ask her on his MySpace page if you don't believe me. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.82.58.52 (talk) 06:15, 28 February 2008 (UTC) I would AfD....in a whileThere is an injunction on all fiction articles concerning character articles and episode articles. I would consult Deckiller on this, to see if they think this page falls into that character category. To me, this page is redundant to the Category:Fictional serial killers, and similar categories. The page goes partial coverage of like six characters, and then just plainly lists about 20 or 30 more. Most of those characters either have their own page, or don't have a page at all. I don't see why the category that we already have in place can't suffice as a "List of", especially since we probably couldn't cover all of those characters fairly without creating an overly long list. But, like I said, consult Deckiller about whether it falls into the injunction. If it does, then you'll have to wait till the ArbCom is over before you do anything. BIGNOLE (Contact me) 19:20, 29 February 2008 (UTC)
Randall FLagg FAI'll give it a look. I've just caught up with all the LOST hoopla (I'd never seen an episode before this year, but on the urging of a friend, I rented the first 3 season... now I can't miss a new episdoe), and I think it'd be worth mentioning a flagg/john locke connection. There's a LOST producer out there who said something like "We are definetly attempting to make Locke a Flagg-esque character, etc." and it might be a worthwhile add. Artemisstrong (talk) 02:18, 4 March 2008 (UTC) HorrorIt looks like the type of list that would be better done as a simple category entitled "Category:Horror film killers". — Deckiller 18:14, 8 March 2008 (UTC) "The source"That's actually sort of a disappointing amount of material.. I was hoping that article would be a "treasure trove" of scholarly analysis about Flagg. Alas, alack. I will look at it this week and make some notes about where it might go. Are you thinking a separate heading for scholarly analysis, or working it into the plot summaries? --Laser brain (talk) 04:53, 11 March 2008 (UTC) Man Behind the CurtainSorry for stealing this off Helen (I have her talk on watchlist) - I've got a sandbox version here, so we don't have to work on parallel versions. Will (talk) 15:45, 12 March 2008 (UTC) The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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