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User talk:Atulsnischal/archive 1
WelcomeHi Atul, Nice to see your work on the Asiatic Cheetah page. I can understand your passion, but note that you may have to change your style of writing to match the general encyclopaedic content style. So for instance it not generally accepted practise to publicise websites, projects or authors on the article pages. The current content is not in line with general practice of articles so do note that if you do not edit it to the desired expectations, someone else will. Let me know if you need help. best wishes Shyamal 05:14, 11 September 2006 (UTC) Your edits to Asiatic Cheetah appear to consist largely of copying material from other sources, such as [1]. Unfortunately, as per Wikipedia's copyright policy, Wikipedia cannot accept copyrighted content from other sources, unless that material is provided under a free license. There is apparently usuable user-created content in the article, but it's entwined in the edit history with copyvio material. At some point, we'll want to remove the copyvio material from the history. Until then, I suggest you work with other editors on rewriting the article in your own words (I notice BenPhil has a rewrite in progress in a personal sandbox) and refrain from adding further copyrighted material to it. --Slowking Man 10:29, 11 September 2006 (UTC)
Asiatic Cheetah Please note: Any Copied material is under "Fair use" and is properly cited in the referenceThis is no littreary attempt by me, the idea is to save this almost extinct cheetah subspecie. Atulsnischal 11:17, 11 September 2006 (UTC)
Some guidelinesPlease check out Copyrights, unless you own the website or content being quoted you need to worry about copyright violation. Information may be reorganized and presented in your own form with citation and that would fall under fair use, but verbatim text usage is allowed only for purposes of short quotations only. Copyright is automatically granted and does not require the display of (C) symbols. Regarding the general guidelines for mammal related articles you might want to see/join Wikipedia:WikiProject_Mammals and check out the sample articles there. cheers Shyamal 12:15, 11 September 2006 (UTC) ridiculous titleNo thanks, "A detailed account of the critically endangered “Asiatic Cheetah”, what is being done for its conservation and the importance of modern technologies like cloning in wildlife conservation today." was not wanted. Please abide by consensus as to what should be said about this beast. -- RHaworth 01:18, 13 September 2006 (UTC) You promptly re-created it. I have blocked you for 24 hours. -- RHaworth 01:21, 13 September 2006 (UTC) Reply to your commentsI think you should feel free to edit the article. Remember only that there needs to be some clear form and substance in the content. It needs just a basic writing principles which are easy to learn. The objections of all have not been on the subject, but in the form. It cannot be a mass of material with some parts in capitals, long headers etcetera. I edited the diet, but since you are the expert on the subject perhaps you could cite the relevant research papers and make the article more technically sound. See for instance Russell's Viper for style of a technical article. Shyamal 10:25, 18 September 2006 (UTC) Hi Shyamal Following is the correct info on Diet of Asiatic Cheetah and I have mentioned the quoted references: (1 see below) Diet: In Iran Asiatic Cheetah's diet consists mainly of Jebeer gazelle, Goitered Gazelle, wild sheep, wild goat, and cape hare. (2 see below) The Asiatic cheetah’s range is restricted to the Central Iranian Plateau, with an estimated population of 60 adult cheetahs remaining. The main threat to the Asiatic cheetah is loss of their primary prey species, gebeer gazelle (Gazella dorcas), goitered gazelle (Gazella subgothrosa), urial sheep (Ovis orientalis) and wild goat (Capra aegagrus), due to poaching and grazing competition with domestic livestock. Habitat loss from mining development and poaching of Asiatic Cheetahs also threaten their populations in Iran. "Wildlife Conservation Society (WCS)" and the "Department of Enavironment , Iran (DoE)" hope to begin collaring Asiatic Cheetahs in the fall of 2006. Reference on Diet: (1): See bottom of this page for above Diet info quoted: http://cheetah.irandoe.org/asiatic/index.html (2): See bottom of this page for above Diet info quoted: http://savingwildplaces.com/swp-home/swp-explorationandsurvey/239531 Thanks Atulsnischal 22:39, 18 September 2006 (UTC) Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia! We welcome and appreciate your contributions, such as Mair Rajputs, but we regretfully cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from either web sites or printed material. This article appears to be a direct copy from http://mairrajputs.tripod.com/today.html and http://mairrajputs.tripod.com/notable.html, and therefore a copyright violation. The copyrighted text has been or will soon be deleted. If you believe that the article is not a copyright violation, or if you have permission from the copyright holder to release the content freely under the GNU Free Documentation License (GFDL), you can comment to that effect on Talk:Mair Rajputs. Then you should do one of the following:
It is also important that the text be modified to have an encyclopedic tone and that it follows Wikipedia article layout. For more information, see Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. Thank you, and please feel welcome to continue contributing to Wikipedia. Happy editing! -- ReyBrujo 11:41, 30 November 2006 (UTC) Whatever it was you were trying to enter with this diff ([2]) it makes no sense. One of the entries is a duplication of the line above (people who work with gold are Goldsmiths, whichever country they are in) and the entry about caste links incorrectly, is in the wrong place and doesn't make much sense. I've reverted. Please reconsider and feel free to replace if you can do so more accurately and meaningfully. --Dweller 10:25, 1 December 2006 (UTC) |
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