User talk:Batcheld

Hi

Hi Hunter, I see nobody has left you a message yet.

Your classmate, Ryder

--Rfwh (talk) 17:39, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi, peer comments on your article

Hello, I liked your article. I am working on ATP7A and I have a few comments:

• In the section of Role In Copper Homeostasis, maybe you want to give a brief description of ALS symptoms and how CCS mutations may result in ALS if this information is available. Or a new section can be created to briefly explain this.

• "As well as SOD1, CCS (gene) has been shown to interact with APBA1."----- gene name CCS should be italicized.

Thank you. Daamoy (talk) 18:53, 26 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Constructive criticism

Dear Batcheld,

My thoughts on your CCS article:

• missing s at the end of C. elegans. Actually there's a few typos. No biggie
• Great subheadings.
• Consider adding an inset equation or diagram of the active site under the mechanism section
• Just generally a bit more explanation of the most important points of the mechanism.

A question: Where did you manage to get that image for the GeneAtlas expression data. I can only assume it was already made cause I can't seem to find where you get those small size images from the Geneatlas website. On mine I just settled for putting a link.

Keep up the good work Rfwh (talk) 20:59, 2 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback

Nice work on your draft article. Just one minor thing - section headers aren't normally capitalized in Wikipedia, so for example it should be "Structure and function" not "Structure and Function". As I said, that's a minor quibble - overall, nice work. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:34, 18 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]