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ArbCom 2019 election voter messageTahiti HutThank you for reviewing the page Tahiti Hut. It is now subject to what is, in my opinion, an overzealous editor who has nominated both Tahiti Hut and Tequila Mockingbird (song) for deletion. This has never happened in any page I have created in over ten years. Perhaps you might confirm your review of the page? A few more citations were added. Most appreciate it.Rosedelune (talk) 00:25, 19 November 2019 (UTC)
Help. Help add [citation needed]. Thanks you. Fonmi3 (talk) 05:26, 24 November 2019 (UTC)
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Mz7 (talk) 00:45, 27 November 2019 (UTC) Request on 03:35:56, 27 November 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by TTencza
TTencza (talk) 03:35, 27 November 2019 (UTC) Disambiguation link notification for November 27An automated process has detected that when you recently edited Belt & Road Industrial and Commercial Alliance, you added a link pointing to the disambiguation page Business association (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver). (Opt-out instructions.) --DPL bot (talk) 08:29, 27 November 2019 (UTC) Sock blockedFor the record, you original suspicions about User:Jennyissac were correct, as they have been blocked as a sock account; see Wikipedia:Sockpuppet investigations/AuthorWiki99 for more. Best. SamHolt6 (talk) 21:43, 27 November 2019 (UTC)
Autopatrolled grantedHi Sagotreespirit, I just wanted to let you know that I have added the "autopatrolled" permission to your account, as you have created numerous, valid articles. This feature will have no effect on your editing, and is simply intended to reduce the workload on new page patrollers. For more information on the autopatrolled right, see Wikipedia:Autopatrolled. Feel free to leave me a message if you have any questions. Happy editing! – Muboshgu (talk) 02:23, 28 November 2019 (UTC) Following up re Jodi KovitzA couple of things. Firstly, thank you for editing your input. It has been helpful and appreciated. I have made the ones suggested so far. If you need more changes, please let me know. Regarding notability and Wikipedia, I completely agree with the concept. In Jodi Kovitz' case she has been reported, interviewed and op-ed'd in the Globe and Mail (Canada's national newspaper - the Canadian Equivalent of the New York Times) and also but less so in the National Post (the Canadian equivalent of the Wall Street Journal), in Forbes Magazine Online and has been recognized as one of Canada's 25 Women of Influence in 2018 and recognized as one of WXN's (Women's Executive Network) Canada's 100 most powerful women in 2017 and again in 2019. Being one of 25 and 100 of say about 17 Million women in Canada I am hopeful passes the filter of Notability. Thanks. Jeff — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jeffkov (talk • contribs) 14:12, 28 November 2019 (UTC)
Recommendations for An Indigenous Peoples' History draft pageHi Sagotreespirit. I read your recommendation. Is there a Commons page that discusses the length of quotes? Would you say that only parts of one sentence, or one sentence is what is considered appropriate/acceptable within a Wiki page? I've shortened them to avoid copyright issues and welcome you to let me know if that's sufficient and thank you for alerting me to that problem. --PaulThePony (talk) 14:46, 28 November 2019 (UTC)
Thank you for clarifying about the Commons, Sagotreespirit. Much appreciated. I have substantively reworked a large portion of the page, hopefully producing something that is in keeping with Wikipedia guidelines, although my next task is to more carefully review it for quoted material. I am slightly confused about not using any quotes. May I presume that does not include snippets from other sites? I continue to await permission from Beacon Press and/or the artist who created the book cover for the paperback edition and may add other images, with appropriate permissions, down the road. With thanks for your assistance. --PaulThePony (talk) 21:00, 29 November 2019 (UTC)
Thank you so much for that clarification, Sagotreespirit . That is very useful info! PaulThePony (talk) 19:29, 7 January 2020 (UTC) Marco D'EliaIs Marco D'Elia page approved ?
Thank you so much--MinaGamal11 (talk) 19:28, 28 November 2019 (UTC) Pepper Group Comment Question
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Article for deletion@Sagotreespirit: I see one the articles I'd created (Lauren Zeitels) was reviewed by you. Now, it's been nominated for deletion for the subject not being notable. The person who nominated does not seem to have researched very well. The subject clearly passes the Wikipedia:Notability (doctors), WP:GNG, WP:SIGCOV. Could you please take a moment to review Lauren Zeitels and participate in the discussion to share your research. Siddhesh.gaikwad (talk) 08:34, 29 November 2019 (UTC)
11_11_Taobao_Shopping_festivalHey @Sagotreespirit:, is there a way to see a deleted page? Some of my ESL students were making wikipedia articles as a class project, and one group had their page was deleted, as you can see here: Wikipedia:Articles_for_deletion/11_11_Taobao_Shopping_festival. I'm not disagreeing with wiki deletion policy on this one. But, as this was a course assignment, I need to see the page briefly to grade their work. Would it be possible to see a previous version of the article? I need to finish their semester grades in the next 5-6 days. The content also briefly was available Thanks, Jim37hike (talk) 14:13, 29 November 2019 (UTC)
Hi! Thanks for reviewing my article draft. If you have a moment, I'd love to clarify a few items in case it's helpful knowledge here or in my future work: 1. Neutrality: I've made some updates to the wording in the article that may help address this. Generally speaking, there isn't much WP:BLP-compliant criticism of Starr available in sources, excepting his salary, which is included in the draft. I've tried to ensure all positive data points are grounded in facts and the sources. If you have further suggestions for how to ensure neutrality, I'd love to hear them. 2. I know the documentation on Thank you for your time! Mary Gaulke (talk) 01:55, 30 November 2019 (UTC)
San Francisco English adviceHi there! I was the creator of the new Wikipedia page for San Francisco English and saw that you had it approved. I first just want to say thank you for that! I've been working on that page for quite some time now. I also saw that it was given a grade of C. What is the page missing that I could add to it? I just want it to be the best that it can be. Thank you! EagleyeB101 (talk) 08:58, 30 November 2019 (UTC)
Review of FreshworksGreeting. Regarding your review, the citations I included except one were secondary sources. The number of citations are less I agree but it satisfies WP:NCORP, so the tag {{Notablity}} you did is quite baffling. Regards Beastranger (talk) 05:04, 4 December 2019 (UTC)
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Women Lawyers for Social JusticeHi, I don't know how I can implement your suggestion, given that everything in the article is sourced from court documents, news articles, Government documents (official minutes of parliament meetings, for example), official reports and not a single press release... If there are particular statements you object to I would appreciate you letting me know and I can rephrase them, but I looked over the article again, and everything is factual. Almost every court case addressed by this organization created a legal precedent on the civil rights front, and that is not sensationalism, it is pure fact and not disputed by anyone. TMagen (talk) 12:58, 4 December 2019 (UTC)
Muslims in British mediaDear editor, thanks for you scholarly opinions on my article, please help me to improve it both in form and content. I hope one day I reach your highly prestigious position. Anonyeader (talk) 15:16, 4 December 2019 (UTC)
Your advice is highly appreciated.Anonyeader (talk) 15:23, 4 December 2019 (UTC) regards,
Sure, a lead will be added to the text, how about tone of the speaker? did you find it sarcastic, it's very important for me, if yes please tell which parts should be re-written to make it unbiased? Anonyeader (talk) 07:30, 5 December 2019 (UTC) Lalbagh moved to draft space:Appreciate your work but I know " (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia)" and that is the reason I had put google books verification links. Were you able to visit the same ?Bharat1 (talk) 17:16, 4 December 2019 (UTC)
Hi Sago. I notice you just patrolled GoLance. This had been previously deleted as G11 and then identically recreated. First did you consider G11? Second which sources did you feel met NCORP? One reason I tagged it G11 was that in addition to being promotional I did not feel the company was notable (at least by the sources present in the article - I didn't do a BEFORE because I felt it was G11). Best, Barkeep49 (talk) 21:09, 6 December 2019 (UTC)
Knowledge Lens ReviewHey, Sagotreespirit I am really thankful to you for reviewing my 1st-page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Knowledge_Lens. I removed advertisement contents which I feel it should not be there. Can you please review once more by which I can get more context and will not repeat this type of thing again in my Wikipedia journey, And If you find this good, then please let me know. Love from India Aviralrdb (talk) 12:08, 10 December 2019 (UTC) Aviralrdb (talk • contribs)
Thanks for your Help Aviralrdb (talk) 12:08, 10 December 2019 (UTC) Aviralrdb (talk • contribs) NEXTCLINICSThank you for check of NEXTCLINICS draft. I changed the texts fo negative point of view. Is article OK now? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ondrejpisa (talk • contribs) 12:47, 11 December 2019 (UTC)
Draft: InfoBeansThank you for reviewing the Draft: InfoBeans. Related to the comment of submission declined, could you please take a moment to review it again and suggest if any changes needed as I have made some changes. Everything in the article is sourced from news articles, official reports of the company. If there are particular statements you object to I would appreciate you letting me know and I can rephrase them, but I looked over the article again, and everything is factual. Need help on this as I am new to Wikipedia. Thanks in advance. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 1994vd (talk • contribs) 11:02, 13 December 2019 (UTC)
It would be helpful if you can suggest specific changes required. Is it related to references or the content flow as I noticed some pages also have similar content and references https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Persistent_Systems https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/HCL_Technologies — Preceding unsigned comment added by 1994vd (talk • contribs) 12:29, 24 December 2019 (UTC) Could you please take a moment to review it again and suggest if any specific changes required. Thanks in advance! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 1994vd (talk • contribs) 14:00, 3 February 2020 (UTC) Disambiguation link notification for December 15An automated process has detected that when you recently edited Porome language, you added a link pointing to the disambiguation page Bird of paradise (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver). (Opt-out instructions.) --DPL bot (talk) 07:48, 15 December 2019 (UTC) New Page Review newsletter December 2019
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Patrolling of articlesHello! Colleague, could you please to patrol this and this articles? Thank you. — Green Zero обг 17:07, 6 January 2020 (UTC)
improved draftSaravicca (talk) 07:45, 10 January 2020 (UTC) 10/01/2019 Thanks for your suggestions to improve the Wikipedia draft page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Reinhart_Ceulemans. I rewrote large parts of it (following some examples from other scientists' wikipages). Can you have a look if this is acceptable now, or tell me what parts need improvement? Best regards, Sara
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(Opt-out instructions.) --DPL bot (talk) 09:05, 24 January 2020 (UTC) Hello Sagotreespirit (talk), Please can you check out my draft Draft:Martin Fayomi, would like to move it to article space --Goldie19 (talk) 23:19, 26 January 2020 (UTC)
lumpingJust curious. You repeat the claim by Foley that the following Namla and Tofanma words are cognates. ‘eat’ sa dimisipe ‘eye’ lɪle yei ‘moon’ pei min-yaku ‘stone’ sou kəlo ‘water’ nomu basu ‘1pl’ mani ngu ‘2pl’ yuka dule He says that "not much more is available for these languages", so how could he have possibly established these sound correspondences? — kwami (talk) 00:09, 1 February 2020 (UTC) Given the context, it's obvious this is just another table of common vocab, parallel to his other tables, and so has no business being in our family article. — kwami (talk) 04:25, 1 February 2020 (UTC)
I don't think it was a claim, just an error. I did move some of the others to the individual articles. I hesitated in this case, because we don't normally provide word lists on WP per DICT. Such lists really belong on Wiktionary, which we can then link to from the language article. — kwami (talk) 11:10, 1 February 2020 (UTC)
I did that with some, but it requires me to rewrite your tables in triplicate. I assume you're going off a DB and so could generate individual tables. Could you just add vocab to the individual language articles unless they'er actually cognates or reconstructions? — kwami (talk) 22:40, 1 February 2020 (UTC)
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Are you a Brit by any means by the way ? DishitaBhowmik 10:40, 4 February 2020 (UTC)
And if you come to India some day, I would be glad to introduce you to "the champagne of teas", the Darjeeling tea DishitaBhowmik 12:49, 5 February 2020 (UTC) Draft : Winston PriceHi Sagotreespirit ! Can you please review my draft Winston Price?
Notability reference for Article Punit SoodHi @Sagotreespirit: - Thanks for taking time and reviewing this article (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Punit_Sood). I have added notable references on subject and removed passing mentions. It should be good to go now. Suggest and I will look into further. regds.. RufinaSmith (talk) 07:27, 4 February 2020 (UTC)
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