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Thanks, BracketBot (talk) 02:07, 24 May 2013 (UTC) I wrote it after viewing their collection from 2008. To write about their online collection, is it required to search other source? I am new and need to learn many thing. Sorry for it. Jibanananda (talk) 10:11, 24 May 2013 (UTC)
Matt Segal Article Declined QuestionI used the existing Wikipedia Sonnie Trotter page as a baseline for creating Matt Segal's page. The only "reliable source" on Sonnie's page is a link to his Patagonia Ambassador Page. I Included Matt's North Face athlete page as a reference in his article. This seemed like an equivalent source to the Patagonia page Sonnie used. Just curious as to how Sonnie's page made the cut as far as reliable sources. I referenced Sonnie's Wikipedia page (Matt Segal is mentioned in Sonnie's article) in Matt's article. Thanks for any guidance you can provide. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Un5table (talk • contribs) 20:34, 24 May 2013 (UTC)
Illinois Woman's Press AssociationHi, Thanks for taking the time to comment on my article on the Illinois Woman's Press Association. I'm a newbie here and would value your help. If you visit my sandbox, you'll find I've rewritten the article. I now see another volunteer administrator has posted there are copyright infringements.... I'm slightly confused here. I'm currently the historian of this organization. I just completed serving two, two-year terms as the organization's president. I have boxes and boxes of material in my work space from which I've gathered the history of the organization. There is no one to grant permission for me to use the material. We own it. I have it. I'd be asking myself for permission to use the materials. I don't mean to be funny here. But really, as past president I'd be giving myself permission. Our organization has asked me to write the history of this 128 year old Illinois based organization and see about getting it on Wikipedia. I would appreciate your advice. Blondewolf (talk) 15:35, 25 May 2013 (UTC) Antisemitism in 21st-century Hungart - CommentDear FoCuSandLeArN, thank you for you latest review of the article "Antisemitism in 21st-century Hungary". I couldn't quite understand the reason for your comment "Original research has to be removed, and analysis needs to be third-party based, neutral and notable". The article isn't based on an original research of mine and is completely based upon third-party researches. Further more, in my opinion, those researches that the article is based on, aren't partial nor biased, they are based on sociological analysis, and were conducted by notable researchers and were publish in notable journals. I would truly appreciate if you could please be more specific so I could improve the article. Respectfully yours, ScottyNolan (ScottyNolan (talk) 08:29, 25 May 2013 (UTC))
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Please review my articleHello Sir, I have edited the refrence for my article submitted, I have added a reliable source. Please review and aprove. The article status is here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Boutique1 Regards Boutique1 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Boutique1dubai (talk • contribs) 08:22, 26 May 2013 (UTC)
About Peronosclerospora imagesI am not familiar with Talk here, so I will just respond here. I apologize for the delay, I got caught up with finishing school. Thank you! It was a lot of work. I have pictures, but I'm still figuring out how to upload them and link them in via this site. I made this article for a class wiki and they encouraged us to share the information to the actual Wikipedia. This was my wiki for class if that helps any: http://128.143.14.99:7890/mediawiki/index.php/Peronosclerospora_philippinensis Thanks, ScorpCoronado May 26, 2013 — Preceding unsigned comment added by ScorpCoronado (talk • contribs) 01:03, 27 May 2013 (UTC)
You already have an account on Commons?Ganesh seems to think you already have an account on Commons? is that so? Invertzoo (talk) 13:31, 28 May 2013 (UTC) Edge Hill Students' Union pageHi FoCuSandLeArN I wrote the article and saw your comment regarding the sources, do you have any suggestions? I have worked for the organisation for the last 5 years, and that is the basis of most of the knowledge on that page. Thanks Cgibbo89 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cgibbo89 (talk • contribs) 11:40, 28 May 2013 (UTC)
Mabotec BVDear FoCuSandLeArN, Many thanks for your review on my article "Mabotec BV". You have been reviewing my second trial to get this article uploaded. (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Mabotec_BV) As suggested, I read the instructions about references. But I got stuck here, because I really don't know what to do else. Are there some references to take away, or must I put more references? I added some independent reports concerning Mabotecs growth, revenues and way of operation. I also have been refering to pages in their website (which I have noticed to be common practice within other Wiki pagen. Could you be so kind as to helping me out here? Thank you so much and have a nice day. With kind regards, Raoul Tak (Raoultak (talk) 12:13, 28 May 2013 (UTC))
tony seton page submissionHello, I'm Tony Seton. I asked an editor-friend of mine to produce a page on me since I'm not allowed to. I gave her a lot of information, including my bio page and a bunch of links. The information she used was accurate. It wasn't a hype job. What can be done to allow it to be posted, please? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tony7281seton (talk • contribs) 23:20, 28 May 2013 (UTC)
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OK we choose an indipendet source to give you, http://www.psa.ac.uk/psa/news/science-europe-publishes-position-statement-open-access-%E2%80%93-sets-out-ten-principles Do we have to publish it on the page (where?) or just send it to you? Thanks, — Preceding unsigned comment added by ScienceEurope (talk • contribs) 09:41, 29 May 2013 (UTC)
AfC JewinthecityHi, I saw your comment about the article I submitted. Do you have any suggestions about how the article can be improved? For NPOV am I supposed to add some criticism or disagreements? Not all wikipedia articles include any if they are just describing something so I'm not sure what you mean... Do I need more sources? I took all the information from a variety of newspaper articles which I believe are good sources, I don't think type of sources is a problem here. I'd appreciate if you could clarify what you meant about "tone" so I can make changes if needed. I've been editing wikipedia for a long time but this is the first article I've created from scratch so I am willing to learn. Lismet (talk) 19:26, 29 May 2013 (UTC)
The Cavaliers Series - deleted for copyright infringement?Hi, you reviewed my article for creation "TheCavaliersSeries" and it was rejected and deleted due to apparent copyright infringement. As it's gone completely, I unfortunately can't link back so I hope you can remember it - which bit was copyrighted? Was the rest of the page okay, as I don't want to just resubmit minus the copyrighted parts if there were also other problems - best to try and redo it all in one go. Thanks, Seraphina Seraphina22 (talk) 20:17, 29 May 2013 (UTC) Nomination of Sean Kelly (footballer) for deletionA discussion is taking place as to whether the article Sean Kelly (footballer) is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.
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Sexual Selection in frogsFoCuSandLeArN. I wanted to thank you for reviewing my article on sexual selection in frogs(Achandhoke (talk) 12:41, 7 May 2013 (UTC)) Your submission at AfC Nawan Shehar, Hafizabad (June 2) Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit if you feel they have been resolved.
Regarding Submission declined on 3 June 2013Hi FoCuSandLeArN, Thank you for your comments regarding my submission of last week's article. I'm working on improving the quality of the references before resubmitting it. Could you kindly explain a little more in detail which aspects of the article should be improved so that it doesn't read highly promotional? Thanks in advance for your help! Have a nice day. :) Vzuloaga (03.06.2013) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vzuloaga (talk • contribs) 11:11, 3 June 2013 (UTC)
Hi, I've added an independent and reliable reference to the intro. Let me know if you see anything more that requires attention. Thank you for your comment ! 16:30, 3 June 2013 (UTC)
Thank you for your comment. The English article is fully sourced from corresponding Japanese page (no independently sourced item included). Description is correct as far as I checked external web pages referred in the article including the museum's web site. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Meguritai (talk • contribs) 16:26, 3 June 2013 (UTC)
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Some press releases for Bow & DrapeDear Sir, Could please check press releases regarding this company? TechCrunh, VentureBeat, Business Insider, Technorati, Mashable, etc. have written on this company. http://www.bowanddrape.com/home/press Arifhasan23 (talk) 02:29, 6 June 2013 (UTC)Arifhasan23
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AfC: AudienGreetings FoCuSandLeArN, I hope this message finds you well. I am having some trouble getting my article for the DJ Audien accepted due to not having "reliable sources". I am sure that my sources such as Beatport and Dancing Astronaut are creditable and notable EDM blogs/websites. With that being said, if you could please provide me with some help/direction to get this article accepted it would be much appreciated! Thanks in advance! http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Audien Best, Myamnicky (talk) 19:24, 6 June 2013 (UTC) myamnicky
Please let me know what may still need to be corrected to post my article and attached images.I hope this e-mail finds you well. I am new to Wikipedia. If you would, please let me know specifically what all still needs to be verified with my article and what specifically may still need to be edited or deleted in order for my article to finally be submitted. This has been a very frustrating process thus far. My business, Rebecca Lindsey, LLC is already listed on a Wiki forum and an article about my Producer, Charlie Craig, with a link to an article written about me is already on Wikipedia. Last night I submitted the requested evidence as well to show copyright ownership. Submitted references: Referenceshttp://www.lyricsfreak.com/r/rebecca+lindsey/ www.rebeccalindsey.net Rebecca Lindsey on CMT: http://www.cmt.com/artists/rebecca-lindsey/discography/1375940/ https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/headlights-on-the-highway/id219923770 http://www.allmusic.com/album/headlights-on-the-highway-mw0001901253 http://www.artistdirect.com/artist/credits/chris-latham/656427 http://www.artistdirect.com/nad/store/artist/album/0,,3828743,00.html http://www.emusic.com/browse/album/all/label:141588/?sort=downloads http://www.7digital.com/artist/rebecca-lindsey http://www.ncadv.org/takeaction/VoicesAgainstViolence.php http://mi2n.com/press.php3?press_nb=97010 http://iacmusic.com/songs.aspx?SongID=46616&ArtistID=74417 http://www.rootsmusicreport.com/index.php?page=reviews&search=single&id=2 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Joseph_F._Knipe http://www.amazon.com/dp/B000N3AMSY/ref=tsm_1_fb_lk Charlie Craig Wikipedia: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charlie_Craig
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COPYRIGHT REQUEST: Rebecca Lindsey <rebecca@rebeccalindsey.net> 3:19 AM (16 hours ago) to permissions-co. Johan, With the exception of submitted photos Rebecca 3.jpg, which is a public newspaper article, and 1275_63647791368_7553_n.jpg, which is an Orlando Matters public news article, the authors and photographers for all submitted photographs were employed by Rebecca Lindsey, LLC through work-for-hire, and as such Rebecca Lindsey, LLC owns all submitted work (photos: Rebecca 1.jpg, 1275_63642536368_6299_n.jpg, 1275_63644226368_3291_n.jpg). To note, Rebecca 2.jpg was an article my work-for-hire Publicist (a Rebecca Lindsey, LLC employee) wrote about me performing at Charlie-palooza. Because the article written was by an individual employed as work-for-hire by Rebecca Lindsey, LLC, Rebecca Lindsey, LLC owns the work. Photo Rebecca 4.jpg: The photographer was employed by Rebecca Lindsey, LLC through work-for-hire. The work is the product of the entity (Rebecca Lindsey, LLC) who hired it to be done. Thus, the work-for-hire concept is an exception to copyright law, in which the work is owned by the creator. Therefore, the employer—not the employee—is considered the legal author. In regards to Rebecca 3.jpg, which is a public newspaper article, and 1275_63647791368_7553_n.jpg, which was an Orlando Matters public news article, the "fair use" exemption to (U.S.) copyright law was created to allow things such as commentary, parody, news reporting, research and education about copyrighted works without the permission of the author. That's vital so that copyright law doesn't block your freedom to express your own works. Fair use is a complex doctrine meant to allow certain valuable social purposes. Under the fair use doctrine of the U.S. copyright statute, it is permissible to use limited portions of a work including quotes, for purposes such as commentary, criticism, news reporting, and scholarly reports. There are no legal rules permitting the use of a specific number of words, a certain number of musical notes, or percentage of a work. Whether a particular use qualifies as fair use depends on all the circumstances. See FL 102, Fair Use, and Circular 21, Reproductions of Copyrighted Works by Educators and Librarians. Revised: 02-Apr-2013
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Regards, Samantha Beddingham (talk) 00:52, 8 June 2013 (UTC) Rebecca Lindsey I looked at the files and it seems you are not the copyright-holder ( = photographer / author of article ) of any of the files. Only the copyright-holder can release a photo or article into a free license.
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RedirectsHi, just to let you know, Wikipedia:Articles for creation/Redirects is full of junk and I need your help to revert to a good version. Thanks, Citrusbowler (talk) (contribs) (email me) 18:56, 9 June 2013 (UTC) Nomination of Stu Klitenic for deletionA discussion is taking place as to whether if Stu Klitenic should be deleted or not. The conversation will be held at the Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Stu Klitenic until a consensus is held and everyone is welcome to join the conversation. However, do not remove the AfD message on the top of the page. Ashbeckjonathan 04:15, 10 June 2013 (UTC) Submission still in reviewHi FoCuSandLeArN I recently contributed a wikipedia articles on Dr. David Sabatini, but it has been in review for a while. How can I check the status of this article? Mtor (talk) 22:33, 11 June 2013 (UTC)Mtor
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Carnegie Cricket Club articleHi there, I have just received a message to say my article has been rejected because it contains copyright material. It does not. It is my own work. Now I can't find it -- has it been deleted? Glenn Cartledge (user: CreativeEngine) — Preceding unsigned comment added by CreativeEngine (talk • contribs) 23:18, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
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Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Gauri AyyubThank you for your suggestions. I had already included several independent sources - which you may have seen under References and Further Reading. There is an entire book (memorial volume) written on her, to which several well known Bengali and Bangladeshi intellectuals have contributed. This is No.1 in Further Reading. Most of the other sources are in the Bengali Language. Do you suggest; (1) I includes more such sources from Benagali newspapers, periodicals and books?, or (2) Add references to more articles written by the subject herself? Please help... Pushan a (talk) 06:40, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
Review Josef Kote?Hi FCSL If you have a chance could you review http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Josef_Kote ?? — Preceding unsigned comment added by LeCorbu1987 (talk • contribs) 17:13, 25 June 2013 (UTC) Your commentThanks for you comment. For something that is supposed to be so great, I was forced into being an established editor to combat bullies. It is similar to someone learning about how to catch crocodiles by being thrown into water that is infested with them. SL93 (talk) 01:10, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
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