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User talk:FoCuSandLeArN/Archive 5
Article re-submitted for editing approval / MydollsHello Wiki Reviewers, I have been waiting patiently for someone to review my entry on the Mydolls, since I have made necessary changes, can anyone help? ```` — Preceding unsigned comment added by Davidrad (talk • contribs) 00:14, 20 February 2013 (UTC)
Scimitar oryx and other copy editsFoCuSandLeArN, if you're going to copy edit at FAC level, please slow down and familiarise yourself with relevant aspects of MOS. Scientific names of Genus and Species names are itialicized. --Stfg (talk) 13:38, 20 February 2013 (UTC)
Eric Cutler (guitarist)You denied my article for not having reliable sources. I used the website for the record label Eric Cutler has been signed to for 20 plus years. I fail to see this as unreliable. You and wokipedia are lame. Necrosiceric (talk) 16:47, 20 February 2013 (UTC)
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articleplease what do i do, i need help how to improve this article, i just added more independent references . can you please review this article again. i need help to creat this articleAnaforlove (talk) 13:35, 25 February 2013 (UTC)
article2Hi Thank you for your time As you told I add source and refrences in my article would you please have a look at th enew one My name is Vuedemonde and my article is shannon bennett thank you so much Kind regards http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Shannon_Bennett — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vuedemonde (talk • contribs) 01:36, 26 February 2013 (UTC)
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Patent nonsense speedy deleteFoCu, just so you know, the patent nonsense speedy delete should only be used on articles that make no sense. Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Phoolan devi says "phoolan was a good woman" - that makes sense. However, there isn't enough context to determine who exactly Phoolan is, so I switched it to A1, no context. It is important to tag articles for the right reason, since patent nonsense is rather insulting to potential new editors. Ego White Tray (talk) 13:32, 1 March 2013 (UTC)
Zoogenetes articleNice one FoCuS! Well done. Invertzoo (talk) 14:19, 1 March 2013 (UTC)
HiThanks Focusandlearn. yeah, i am new on editing and not getting it easily, I'll Need your help, thanks for your kindness. :)  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Crandshaft (talk • contribs) 14:37, 1 March 2013 (UTC)
February 2013 Wikification awards
rejection of my articleThe content of my article is sourced from the person itself..i interviewed him few months ago..he is a kerala state award winner for best lyricist and has penned many notable and famous songs like 'chembaneer pooviruthu'..i'm a first time editor.I really like to know more about editing wikipedia articles and also like to know why u rejected my article. When u are free,please try to read my message and kind enough to reply back.. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Measwinkumar (talk • contribs) 22:36, 1 March 2013 (UTC)
Proof of HeavenI'm confused by the comments about the Proof of Heaven page. I've reviewed numerous Wikipedia pages that have no external refernces or links and are just very breif overviews about a person or event or the like. This is just essentially a write about a published book that is selling well on Amazon and other book sellers. Can you please provide information as to why you believe it sounds like an advertisement, rather than just a writeup about a book and why it is necessary to have verifiablility when many other Wikipedia postings do not have them? In fact, the page was modeled after the Eben Alexander, MD webpage, except that it's about the book and not the author. Please advise. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Proof of Heaven (talk • contribs) 21:47, 3 March 2013 (UTC)
Phinehas (band) pageHey FoCuSandLeArN, What do I need to do specifically in order to get this band's wiki page up and running? They are signed to a major label (Red Cord Records) and have a full length and an EP with that same label - do they need TWO full lengths in order to be notable? At the moment they are an up-and-coming band, but they are a big enough name where they will need a wiki page. They are touring nationally at the moment as well (They are CA native and are touring even through the midwest right now). They also have several music videos available for viewing http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Phinehas_(band) Just wondering if you had a specific for me in order to get this rolling! Thanks! Myollinir (talk) 16:30, 5 March 2013 (UTC) i've found a source that looks to be a real published source (Substream Music Press) - has physical copies issued, and had an article about the band - listed in my references on the page now Myollinir (talk) 17:39, 5 March 2013 (UTC)
Refugee Protest Camp ViennaGreetings, FoCuSandLeArN. I'm writing back about the article you declined. Your feedback was "This submission appears to be a news report of a single event and may not be notable enough for an article in Wikipedia." The "single event" has been ongoing since November last year. It has made headlines at least weekly in all the Austrian newspapers and been featured on the television news. It inspired a right-wing counter-protest and was featured on campaign posters by the far-right Freedom Party. Furthermore, Austria's president, Heinz Fischer, and highest ranking church official, Cardinal Christoph Schönborn, have both been in personal contact with the refugees. I didn't get into this in the article, but the protest is related to ongoing events in Afghanistan and Pakistan. I provided an account of the protest at the article for the Votive Church, but that has now been removed: http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Votive_Church,_Vienna&action=history: "The reference to the occupation of the church by asylumseekers - an unfortunate but minor event - took up a quarter (!) of the text." At the same time, there's a German language article on the protest that no-one seems to think is inappropriate: http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Refugee_Protest_Camp_Vienna. Please advise how to proceed. Thanks. Yours, Toanke (talk) 07:39, 6 March 2013 (UTC)
thank youI noticed you fixed some of my mistaken moves in AfC...or I should say Afc. { The Signpost: 04 March 2013
{{GOCEinuse}} and Cowboy BebopHello: you placed the {{GOCEinuse}} tag on Cowboy Bebop but then made no further edits. Per the template's documentation, I have now removed the tag. Regards, Orange Suede Sofa (talk) 00:07, 8 March 2013 (UTC) Ralph KotHi There, I have question about my article about Ralph Kot. You said, that submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Rafal is fresh in public, so he's not such a "talked about" person in media. I'm from his close circle of friends, I wanted to make this article about him whitch he approved. What I suppose to do to publish the article if there is no other reliable source than Ralph himself? Have a nice day! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ralphkot (talk • contribs) 13:14, 8 March 2013 (UTC)
Re: Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Discourse on Unified Field reconciled with General RelativityI have complied with external verification policy. I have put a message on the reviewers talk-p and one on my talk page. Please advise on my talk about what the next step would be. Thanks, oh, reviewer was Sphilbrick (talk | contribs) Regards --Jeffrey mcmahan (talk) 14:15, 8 March 2013 (UTC)
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Denied wiki article.Hi, I saw you reviewed my article for "Travis House (Producer)" - It says you declined due to lack of evidence. But all links provided are solid links showing evidence of my info and I check the "references for beginners" and can not figure out why this article was denied. Please help and explain what I can do to fix whatever is wrong with my publishing.
- Justin — Preceding unsigned comment added by JustinDRIP (talk • contribs) 07:27, 10 March 2013 (UTC)
Refugee Protest Camp ViennaHi, did you get my earlier messages? They seem to have disappeared or been removed. Toanke (talk) 13:37, 10 March 2013 (UTC)
Ah, I see my recent message is in Archive 5. An update: I reinstated the info on refugees in the Votive Church article - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Votive_Church,_Vienna#Refugees - but would prefer to make a separate article about the Refugee Protest Camp, now that it has moved into the Servite Monastery and continues to make headlines in Vienna (today's unfortunate example was about a fight that two of the men got into, resulting in brief hospitalization for both: http://www.xn--sterreich-z7a.at/nachrichten/Pruegel-Orgie-unter-Asylwerbern/97414394) Toanke (talk) 14:38, 10 March 2013 (UTC)
Hi, I didn't understand your comment "upupandaway?" on the draft of the article. I intend to approve it. —rybec 23:21, 10 March 2013 (UTC)
Regarding User:Deven94Good morning, Regarding Deven94 and this proposal: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Dev_spears_(pure.uk) You may wish to know that the user recently vandalised/inserted unconstructive edits to Hanley Castle High School both whilst logged in and also whilst logged out of WP. I've been keeping an eye on his edits and have tried to revert ones that I am aware he has/had made unconstructive/vandalising edits to the project, though I may have missed a couple. In regards to his proposal for the article, I believe that he is likely to have requested to create that article as a joke, or possibly just not understanding that WP doesn't accept biographies for people who are not 'significant' enough to be elegible for one in the opinion/view of WP (is that right?). I know has was editing for a while from a college (currently IP blocked for vandalism - I've notified college admin) possibly as a prank on myself. In cases where I knew this had happened I did revert his edits and posted a note on the talk page where possible, though a couple of other users (possibly using bots) already placed a warning before I managed to work out how to post one. I'll keep an eye out for him for now. Regards, Usual people in life (talk) 10:50, 11 March 2013 (UTC)
Rejection of article "Yahuwah"Please tell me why this article is not acceptable for WIKI. Cfc847 (talk) 14:22, 11 March 2013 (UTC)
Rejection of Yahuwah articleWith me being brand new at this, maybe you could give me some suggestions on how to meet these criteria. At the present I do not have a clue what you are talking about. Cfc847 (talk) 15:56, 11 March 2013 (UTC)
Denied article - Travis House (Producer)I have read what you had suggested and I still do not understand where you are coming from I guess. The article was written with only facts and no fluff. Billboard Mag has mentioned him (Referenced) His name is on countless albums (Referenced) and is a vital part of what created these artists in the first place so many people could enjoy their music. He is the guy behind the scenes creating what you hear. Not to sound like a brat but what does it take to get a Wikipedia if breaking into the music game with a major label artist and working with other major label artists is "nothing"?... I am just confused.\\ Sorry again but what do I need to do? — Preceding unsigned comment added by JustinDRIP (talk • contribs) 21:12, 11 March 2013 (UTC)
another producerHi, I saw you reviewed my article for "Ill Slim Collin / Oliver S. Huehn" - It says you declined due to lack of evidence. But all links provided are solid links showing evidence of my info and I check the "references for beginners" and can not figure out why this article was denied. Please help and explain what I can do to fix whatever is wrong with my publishing. - Just noticed the comment stating he is "non-notiable" .... but when in reality I believe that is false, the man has produced for and worked with some of the top people in the music industry and all this artists on wikipedia too! — Preceding unsigned comment added by LA Angel 1 (talk • contribs) 21:41, 11 March 2013 (UTC)
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Ben Moore (Aritist)I was wondering why my article on Ben Moore was rejected. The links I have included many are interviews with him by national newspapers and articles about him. I was wondering what more evidence do I need to support my claim before I re submit. As I have seen articles on much less note worthy individuals on hear. Ben is a big name in the London arts scene and his company art below has help many up and comming and contemporary artists get there work out there as well as causing quite a bit of controversy while he has been at it. Also the image of him as the pink stormtrooper did go viral if you do bother to go google it you will see pretty much every image of a pink stroomtrooper is him and there are many articles mentioning him. Yours Thom
Ben Moore (Aritist)I was wondering why my article on Ben Moore was rejected. The links I have included many are interviews with him by national newspapers and articles about him. I was wondering what more evidence do I need to support my claim before I re submit. As I have seen articles on much less note worthy individuals on hear. Ben is a big name in the London arts scene and his company art below has help many up and comming and contemporary artists get there work out there as well as causing quite a bit of controversy while he has been at it. Also the image of him as the pink stormtrooper did go viral if you do bother to go google it you will see pretty much every image of a pink stroomtrooper is him and there are many articles mentioning him. Yours Thom — Preceding unsigned comment added by Welovethom (talk • contribs) 11:10, 13 March 2013 (UTC) Joseph and his DreamsHi, thanks for your quick feedback on the article. I decided to merge just the last part (dreams as motif...) into the Joseph wiki article. Do you think what I have there is sufficient, or do you think it could be expanded upon? Sflax91 (talk) 18:18, 13 March 2013 (UTC)
NeverHi FoCuSandLeArN, I've been experiencing some issues with the creation of this page: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Never_Ever_Do_This_At_Home I included references to support the article, but my revision was deleted for some reason (a result of my inexperience to be sure) Understanding that you are under no obligation to help me, but could you please help me? References and support links below. (Distributor) DRG Format (UK): http://www.drg.tv/ProgramDetails.aspx?ProgramDetail=12009 ROUGH TRANSLATION (Originator of Format) NRK (Norway): http://www.nrk.no/vitenskap-og-teknologi/1.7629123 Playback article: http://www.hollywoodreporter.com/news/norwegian-format-never-ever-do-371127 (Official) Bellmedia press release (my name is on this release): http://bellmediapr.ca/discovery/releases/release.asp?id=15699&yyyy=2012 Insight Prod (talk) 15:49, 14 March 2013 (UTC)
FYINone of your AfC Reviews are showing up at:
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Talkback Message added 22:44, 14 March 2013 (UTC). You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{Talkback}} or {{Tb}} template. Shearonink (talk) 22:44, 14 March 2013 (UTC) Creation page Alain Kirili declinedHi, I understand that you have declined the page for Alain Kirili because it was blank. There has been an error in saving the text. As suggested in the message that I received, I have clicked "edit" and removed the text above, then "saved". Will this article be resubmitted automatically? Thank you very much in advance for letting me know.Annaluka (talk) 19:07, 15 March 2013 (UTC)
villaDear FoCuSandLeArN, I sincerely beg you to have a second look at this prospective submission: Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Mónica Villa Perhaps not being familiar with our environment and culture, you may not have noticed the true scope of accomplishment of actress Monica Villa. I will spot just a few things that may have passed overlooked: 1) one of a true artist's gifts is MODESTY, which is why she did not submit a life-size CV that would take long lists of names and dates that may say very little to a foreigner. 2) Monica Villa is the FIRST Argentine actor EVER to have obtained a Master's degree awarded by the University of Buenos Aires, a world renowned house of studies that produced talents of the statue of Nobel laureates César Milstein, Adolfo Pérez Esquivel, Luis Federico Leloir, Bernardo Houssay and Carlos Saavedra Lamas ( http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_Nobel_laureates_by_country ) and where, among many others, writer Jorge Luis Borges once taught Anglo-Saxon Literature. Her accomplishment sets a precedent that paves the way for future performing artists to imitate and is totally unprecedented in our country of more that 40 million inhabitants. 3) She was the ONLY ONE actor in the cast of "Waiting for the Hearse", an all time cult movie in the Spanish Speaking Americas and Spain, to be awarded an international prize (Huelva, Spain) shared with American Actor William Hurt, at the same level of relevance and peer competence. 4) In the Wikipedia's page dedicated to that movie five (5)other actors of the cast, not at all above her in terms of notability, have links to a biographical Wikipedia page. Villa is, at least, as accomplished as any of them, and rightfully deserving equal treatment. And this is surely an omission that must be redressed. Please see for yourself http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Waiting_for_the_Hearse 5) Maintaining a dignified professional attitude in a most hostile environment, such as Argentina's, chronically corroded by flawed democracies and military interventions, is in itself a feat that deserves praise. So much so if the person involved embraces study as a means of self assertion and example for the younger, comparatively weaker generations. I do ask you to reconsider this submission and offer myself to facilitate all other information that you may think is required. Jorge Roca Jorgeroca (talk) 22:24, 15 March 2013 (UTC)
Remember to check for CV. This is/was a direct copypaste from the "source" listed. Danger High voltage! 07:06, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
singerHi, we submitted page about singer Eduard Romanyuta today and got a rejection. Can you please let us know why is that? And how can we correct our mistakes? Thanks 777ideas (talk) 19:28, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
Your recent AfC reviewHi, you've placed a Declined review template on my talk page after you reviewed Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Schooling the World: The White Man's Last Burden but this is a mistake, it is not my draft. I only helped the actual article creator to fix a minor problem. The creator of the draft is User:Casenns. I'm not sure how to fix this. Roger (talk) 15:45, 18 March 2013 (UTC)
Rejection of new musical in LondonHi, while I'm very impressed with your speed, I don't understand why you placed a rejection template in "The Perfect City", an article of a legit production of a new musical in London. Any pointers how to improve the article? Many thanks, --Phoniker (talk) 15:59, 18 March 2013 (UTC)
sourcesYourGarageSale (talk) 21:31, 18 March 2013 (UTC) Hi FoCuSandLeArN I am contacting you because you declined our page page wikie because of unrealible soruces. Can you help me understand how I fix this? I am new to wikipedia and do not know what to do next. I appreciately your time and effort while I learn how to use this wiki
Okay, I am talking about the YourGarageSale company page. I copied it from a couple other sites and changed all the refereences. Are you able to tell me what needs referencing? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 70.199.64.87 (talk) 21:47, 18 March 2013 (UTC)
Response: Request For Reliable Sources On Fractal Art CompositionHello FoCuSandLeArN, I received the message you sent me on citing reliable sources. I'm unable to do so because as far as I'm aware I'm the only one that is doing that type of fractal manipulations (It actually goes beyond that). That's why I decided to start the wiki to get the word out and to provide a central place where people can go to answer the question that they have on how I create the images I do using fractal elements. Besides my website xzendor7.com, my type of fractal artwork isn't being produced by anyone else. I've looked around the net since I first started doing this about 2 years ago and I haven't found anyone else that does my kind of art. If you chose to see what I mean the links below are the best examples to my digital art approach: The Angel Wing Sword Of Arkledious Imperial Wings Xzendor7 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Xzendor7 (talk • contribs) 00:45, 20 March 2013 (UTC)
Article of Sándor TirpákDear FoCuSandLeArN! Thank you for reviewing my Wikipedia article about Sándor Tirpák. I was sorry to read, that you didn’t find him a notable person as he is one of the best nature artist in Central-Europe both in oil paintings and porcelain painting and a recognized nature and bullfighting painter in Spain. I wanted to add pictures about his award winning works, but it seems that I still can’t add photos (Message of Wikipedia: Your account has not become confirmed yet.) I’m still working on the article before asking for a second review. Could you please give me some tips how it could work? I am new on Wikipedia.org so I would be pleased if you could help me. Thank you in advance. Jannamaria (talk) 12:59, 20 March 2013 (UTC)
I see you accepted this article a few months ago. It is, in fact, nonsense. Lord Harmar-Nicholls was in fact created a baronet in 1964, as the article states, but all actual sources indicate that the title became extinct upon his death in 2000. Brothers and nephews do not, in fact, get to petition for special privilege to succeed to baronetcies. Since you approved it, the article actually metastasized and became much more ridiculous, with imaginary titles going back several centuries, connections to royalty, and so on and so forth. I've turned it into a redirect to Harmar Nicholls, but perhaps it should be deleted entirely. The lesson, I guess, is to be careful about approving articles without checking out the details. john k (talk) 13:52, 20 March 2013 (UTC)
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