User talk:Educationtemple/Archive 2
Lalji Singh and FAHello again, let me tell you about FA. Featured articles are considered the most finest articles that Wikipedia can provide the readers. There are more than 4,000,000 articles on Wikipedia out of which only 4K are featured articles. They are reviewed by more than 1 reviewers and they need to pass our WP:Featured article criteria. Unlike Good articles, featured articles are listed at WP:FAC (timing of the process are determined by FAC coordinators) where many reviewers review an article at the same time. If consensus reaches among the reviewers and nominators; The article is promoted to FA by the coordinators. Things you need to address before advancing for FA: Your article needs copyediting to make it read as professional as possible. As most of the reviewers are non Indians, the article should be free from Indian English. Another most important thing is the article doesn't mention anything about the subjects personal life other than the name of the subject's wife and children (not in-depth). FA articles need to be well researched and should not miss any important fact. As the subject is a living person, you need to find every major details. The prose of the lead must be more engaging. Source no. 28 is invalid, it should be used as note using templates like Template:Efn and it should be verifiable. You have to remove "Dr." from the article as per WP:CREDENTIAL. Thanks for commentary dear @Jim Carter:. I think, I would work on this! Shall I do this or rather than this I consider to move ahead and do couple of more GA at this stage? Educationtemple (talk) 12:31, 23 January 2015 (UTC) @Jim Carter:, I have corrected some issues that you highlighted above: Corrected source no 28, deleted the words - 'Dr' and 'etc' and corrected the spelling of 'fourth'. Cheers! Educationtemple (talk) 19:00, 23 January 2015 (UTC)
@Jim Carter:, I shall work on two or three small articles which are important in Indian context. Let the DYK for Lalji Singh pass. As for improving Lalji Singh even further, I dont think, I left any corner of internet to do research about him, and more than this is not available about him. I also dont think that any offline content is available that could shed more light on his personal life except 2-3 science books where he is one of the authors. If I understand correctly, these books can not be a good source on Wiki since these are considered as primary source? Am I right? So, I drop the idea of him nominating for FA at present until more detail is available about his in online and offline sources. Hope I continue to get your support here on wiki for my other works! Please let me know, if I could help for any of your tasks on wiki including the content improvement for any article on subjects of science, Indian history or Indian law. rgds. Educationtemple (talk) 07:38, 24 January 2015 (UTC) Your GA nomination of Sunil Kumar VermaHi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article Sunil Kumar Verma you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of AntanO -- AntanO (talk) 10:21, 28 January 2015 (UTC) Welcome!
Your GA nomination of Sunil Kumar VermaThe article Sunil Kumar Verma you nominated as a good article has failed ; see Talk:Sunil Kumar Verma for reasons why the nomination failed. If or when these points have been taken care of, you may apply for a new nomination of the article. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of AntanO -- AntanO (talk) 10:41, 28 January 2015 (UTC) GA review for Sunil Kumar Verma part IIDear friend @W.carter:, the article Sunil Kumar Verma was reviewed for GA. There were suggestions and now I had addressed most of them! I would love if you give a touch up to the article, please.....! Hope I did not mess it up completely! I shall request Philg88 for copyedit at the last! Educationtemple (talk) 14:43, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
You are wonderful @W.carter:! I liked all of your 'ce' changes. Much better now! Educationtemple (talk) 06:01, 31 January 2015 (UTC) @W.carter:, In the lead it reads -- Verma had done his D.Phil. in Medical oncology from the University of Oxford and has worked in the areas of Wildlife conservation and Signal transduction in cancer. It appears from sentence as if these two areas, 'wildlife conservations' and 'signal transduction' both belong to cancer. How to make it clear? Where to put comma? or say -- two distinct areas of 'wildlife conservation' and 'signal transduction in cancer' Educationtemple (talk) 06:09, 31 January 2015 (UTC)
Hello @W.carter:. All the edits done by Philg88 were wonderful! He just finished. I shall now apply for GAR. Educationtemple (talk) 08:31, 1 February 2015 (UTC) GAR for Sunil Kumar Verma initiatedDone WP:GAR for Sunil Kumar Verma initiated. All the senior editors are invited to please comment! Thanks. Educationtemple (talk) 09:46, 1 February 2015 (UTC)
Oh! I am sorry @Jim Carter:. I added GAR tag since it was mentioned by @AntanO: (here) during previous review, while replying to one of your comment. I have now corrected the mistake as per your kind suggestions step-by-step and the article Sunil Kumar Verma is nominated again for GA review following the same procedure as it was done before. Hope I did not do a mistake this time! Hope, it has correctly addressed all the issues raised by AntanO during previous review and the article has improved now to GA quality! Cheers! Educationtemple (talk) 16:10, 7 February 2015 (UTC)
DYK for Lalji Singh
Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:01, 13 February 2015 (UTC)
Thanks @W.carter:, I am happy! I would like to see the click count tomorrow! This gives a confidence that hard work on an article can always pay and there are kind people around like you, @Philg88:, @Jim Carter: and many other senior editors - to guide! I wish, next DYK would be credit on the discovery of DNA barcoding! The news though got stuck, there are no updates from today's news papers. Educationtemple (talk) 12:27, 13 February 2015 (UTC)
Mashaallah, aap to achchi hindi bol lete hai janaab @Jim Carter: sahib! Jai Ho... Educationtemple (talk) 13:57, 13 February 2015 (UTC)
It is very difficult to read and understand hindi though! Specially the translated hindi! "Search" is "Talash" in hindi but on hindi wiki it says "Khoj" on the right top. "Khoj" is "discovery". Online hindi fonts are also in infant stage. Just "mangal" font! I like sanskrit but there are no many teachers left who could teach sanskrit. Happy week end to you all my dear virtual friends in the world of wiki.. I keep imagining, how you all look like in real world! Spending time on wiki's virtual world in though much better than chatting on chat engines - for example yahoo, where we dont learn anything and dont create anything.....(hope Yahoo is not reading and listening to this!) Educationtemple (talk) 14:32, 13 February 2015 (UTC)
Amazing! If a person does anything great, notable job, wiki is the place for them. But wiki editors do notable, marvelous job everyday. @W.carter: and @Philg88: have written more than a dozen (may be more) wonderful articles. You have done thousands of editing, written articles, to the extent that if they all club together, it will become a wonderful book and I now notice that I myself by all capacities of head and heart try to contribute on wiki as much I can. No one asked me to do this. Yesterday, in my overjoy, I just mentioned to a friend that the article expended and researched by me is on the front page on wiki. The friend was happy and as a usual way, she started congratulating me. WOW, you will also become famous due to this, she said. How to explain her, that it is not to become famous, it is not a book which may bring bookers prize one day for its author. I just smiled and kept quite. Why we, as an editor of wiki dont thrust and lust for name, fame etc as in real life - I know the answer partially, but this is an unexplored, unresearched human behavior. Natural human instinct is to be known, to be popular but here, that natural instinct seems to be at the lowest stage of its evolution! I write a letter to that actor, or nobel laureate, it may never even reach his or her office and it would be a millennium's event if I get a reply. But here, the same actor, the same nobel laureate give instant reply, instant comment, extend instant help if it is required. The one who is doing this is not that actor, or nobel laureate or professor, he is someone else inside him. Who is he. This is a matter of research. The question is - can we enhance that "Unknown" inside us in our real life too? If yes, this world will become a beautiful place to live - no egos, no violence no fights and no crime after all (not good for my profession of law - LOL). Educationtemple (talk) 05:36, 14 February 2015 (UTC)
Agree! For the light side - I want to be father of two daughters now, quickly! Educationtemple (talk) 12:26, 14 February 2015 (UTC) @W.carter: I share a funny thing with you. During DYK session yesterday for Lalji Singh someone changed the word "father" to "grandfather of DNA fingerprinting". This was later corrected by another editor. The IP who did this change was from Bangalore of India (see). There were few more minor corrections. Educationtemple (talk) 12:34, 14 February 2015 (UTC)
DYK... that when you approve a hook (such as Old Love) you have to apply an icon found on top in editing mode, green for all verified, blue for accepting sources AGF, - otherwise it will not be handled. Compare others. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:06, 16 February 2015 (UTC) Done. Cheers! Educationtemple (talk) 13:34, 17 February 2015 (UTC) More on DYKsThe Wikipedia article traffic statistics is up and running again. :) You got a very nice 2541 views for the DYK on Lalji Singh. w.carter-Talk 12:56, 17 February 2015 (UTC) That is a good news dear @W.carter:. This is a good number. Today is Mahashivaratri festival in India. Lord Shiva married with Godess Parvati on this day. People do fasting and they eat only fruits on this day and whole night too for tonight. I too fasted and prayed to Lord shiva and mother Parvati. Now after taking shower, I will decorate the temple with flowers and pray to Lord. Educationtemple (talk) 13:32, 17 February 2015 (UTC)
Alas, most of the time I dont understand what is said!! I may be a creature of other planet! Educationtemple (talk) 07:54, 18 February 2015 (UTC)
Thanks my friend, I am touched! Educationtemple (talk) 14:58, 18 February 2015 (UTC) Breakthrough from Sweden et alDear @W.carter:, glad to share with you the latest finding from a Swedish university. My robot just posted this in my inbox. A new new bacteria has been discovered interestingly from the gut of disease causing mosquitoes. Scientists are thinking that this bacteria protect mosquitoes from diseases that they spread in human and other animal hosts. They think that they can exploit this bacterial to fight against malaria! Interesting! More interesting for me is the name of the family, which is Thorselliaceae, after the name of a great Swedish Prof. Thorsell, who discovered mosquito repellant for Swedish army in 1970s! He is now 95 yr old! I dont see any article about either of these two on wiki - neither professor Thorsell, nor the Thorselliaceae (of course it is discovered yesterday only). I wish, if we both could work on this project and let the world know about Prof Thorsell and his life time work for the world! Views? Educationtemple (talk) 15:06, 18 February 2015 (UTC) @W.carter: - last minute Update: WP is much faster than me! A dedicated article on Thorselliaceae has been initiated already today at 10 O clock. But still there is nothing about Prof. Thorsell. Educationtemple (talk) 15:11, 18 February 2015 (UTC) Correction: And Prof. Thorsell is also available on Spanish Wiki here. Spanish???
Oh! Good to know that Prof. Thorsell is a woman. I could not guess it from name! Yes, please do this, translate and I will enhance it to the max, I can. This is the way we can know more about her! Is she alive? Educationtemple (talk) 15:29, 18 February 2015 (UTC)
Well, it's up and running now. Unfortunately, since it is a translation of a Swedish article the references are rather scrawny (as is very commons in SweWiki). It would be very nice if you could start by finding some proper ones to add. I'll be AFK for a while now, but I'll be back later. Cheers, w.carter-Talk 18:21, 18 February 2015 (UTC) DelayI am extremely for delayed response. Some personal issues were blocked me for editing at Wiki and I was unable to review your article. Now I am happy to see that review on progress. Still I watch your article and I would help you as per reviewer's suggestion. --AntonTalk 17:01, 24 February 2015 (UTC) Thanks Antano. Jethro is giving me tough time at present. Lets see! Educationtemple (talk) 19:31, 24 February 2015 (UTC) Hello! Just wanted to drop a line and say that I am following your progress on Talk:Sunil Kumar Verma/GA3. You are doing fine! Don't loose heart, sometimes these reviews are harder that the others, but having a Good Article makes it all worth it in the end. All the best, w.carter-Talk 11:25, 27 February 2015 (UTC) So nice! Thank you @W.carter:. Educationtemple (talk) 12:41, 27 February 2015 (UTC)
Dear @I JethroBT:, though it was tough, I really enjoyed entire exercise! Many of the things you highlighted were really educational for me, not only to learn and understand "Wiki" in a better way, but also to learn about my subject. You were intelligent to point out each and every line where "I was lazy" and did not do enough home work as per the standard of "Wiki". You indeed made me to do this, and I am grateful to you for the same. I am sure, I learned a lot from this exercise. A big Thank You!! You can see that I have now tried to address all the points you have highlighted. Hope, I am going to have a "good day", some times this week and celebrate with my friends on "Wiki" my second GA! Educationtemple (talk) 02:07, 3 March 2015 (UTC) Thank @I JethroBT:. I did address the latest comments too in line to your suggestions. Hope all well now. It was great that you could conclude the entire UPT/DNA barcoding dispute just in 2 sentences! I did very minor modifications in those specific sentences, hope they are OK. Cheers! Educationtemple (talk) 12:19, 3 March 2015 (UTC) It was okThe edits at Lalji Singh really was ok, once I understood what the editor had done. It is indeed a streamlining, not something that all editors would use, and I would not recommend it in the future since many editors might react in the same way that we did. In those cases where there was a WP article about the paper, this user simply combined the "publisher" and "website" into one parameter since the "website" is stated in the article about the newspaper. So it is in fact included after all. Elegant, but a bit unusual. Best, w.carter-Talk 15:05, 3 March 2015 (UTC) Oh! Got it! It is all right, though. We thanked him. How are you by the way! I really enjoyed working on new GA nominee article. It is almost done, but it was so tough!! Anything challenging at your end? Educationtemple (talk) 15:11, 3 March 2015 (UTC)
You are brave and our best wishes are with you. In India, whenever we have problems, we pray to a tree, older the tree, better it is. Trees can help resolve the problems easily. I know you are smiling.... Educationtemple (talk) 15:28, 3 March 2015 (UTC)
Dear @W.carter:, good to know this! Thats why your country is great! In India, everyone is hungry for money, and for that they can do anything, even destroy the trees, sell them, cut them, steal them and finally put the forest in fire to finish all evidences and show in the register that trees burnt in forest fire! I see that Sunil Kumar Verma is GA now! congratulations to you! All the hard work, we have been doing on this since last almost 5-6 months! I remember you were always with me. Thank you again. I will write thanks to everyone, @Philg88:, @I JethroBT:, @Jim Carter: and all other editors who contributed to this article. Special thanks to @I JethroBT: and @AntanO: for expert comments. Without their time, this article cold have not be in this shape today! Thanks everyone, thank you very much. My main computer crashed and that was the reason, I could not respond immediately. Still, I am working from my old tiny laptop to write this message. Tomorrow whole day with computer technician to get my PC repaired! I also see that some wrong message came that article failed. I know it is a mistake and it would be corrected soon. Cheers! Have a great time ahead. Educationtemple (talk) 18:24, 3 March 2015 (UTC) Your GA nomination of Sunil Kumar Verma
I cant stop laughing now after reading this @W.carter:. Not the heart, but my PC had an attack!! Educationtemple (talk) 18:30, 3 March 2015 (UTC) Your GA nomination of Sunil Kumar VermaThe article Sunil Kumar Verma you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Sunil Kumar Verma for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already been on the main page as an "In the news" or "Did you know" item, you can nominate it to appear in Did you know. Thanks again for your hard work, and I hope you'll continue building articles. Sorry that above message! I, JethroBT drop me a line 18:22, 3 March 2015 (UTC) I have no words to praise for the depth of your knowledge, GK, patience and 'willingness to help' attitude! Thanks @I JethroBT:. If I was near you, I could have hugged you. Thank you! Educationtemple (talk) 18:33, 3 March 2015 (UTC) A barnstar for you!Moved to User:Educationtemple/things I have received Wow! Thank you Dear @Ugog Nizdast:. Truly speaking, I do not deserve this, it is for them whom I have written about! I humbly accept this honor!! Thank you! Educationtemple (talk) 10:01, 5 March 2015 (UTC)
Oh thanks @W.carter:. This will be indeed a great favor! I also need your quick advise. I want to propose another DYK with the following hook: "...that in February 2015, a credit dispute between universal primer technology and DNA barcoding came to light" Will it work? GA is very new, so there will not be a technical problem. Educationtemple (talk) 12:35, 5 March 2015 (UTC)
Thank dear! I look forward for a beautiful user page for me too! Wow! I am excited about that! If I remember correctly, @Philg88: said once that 2nd DYK is possible if the article gain GA status at some point (of course within 7 days of becoming GA), even if it had made a DYK before. I request "Boss" to comment again on this?? Educationtemple (talk) 12:54, 5 March 2015 (UTC)
@W.carter: - Simple.....! Let the colours of these beautiful Barnstar(s) speak that are given to me by peers here. Is it possible to put all stars rolling from right to left (above the description), or very small size of them near the GA badges which I see in the right side, and as I get more, it appears there automatically, or manually with link to full size star. Just my imagination....bu you are free to do it the way you like. Educationtemple (talk) 14:20, 5 March 2015 (UTC)
Hay...I already owe you for your friendship. Dont please say that I revert it. I know, whatever you do for me, would be great and I like it. Please go ahead, but have dinner first. OK. Educationtemple (talk) 14:57, 5 March 2015 (UTC) FixedI have moved your awards from the archive to the new page User:Educationtemple/things I have received. If you look in Archives 1, you will find the text: Moved to User:Educationtemple/things I have received where the award used to be. As your talk page gets archived, you will have to cut and paste the awards from the archive to that subpage. I have placed the oldest at the bottom, but you can arrange them as you like. Remember to have two lines between them, otherwise they will stick together. Hope the user page is not too hideous. The color is from the barnstars as requested and I thought that the books formed a sort of "temple of education" with an opening into all that knowledge. You can tweak it all as much as you like. :) Codes for the colors are at Web colors. There's plenty of room for expansion with new things you might want to put on the page in the future. I don't think you'll have any trouble figuring out how it is built. Cheers, w.carter-Talk 21:18, 5 March 2015 (UTC) This is just wonderful dear @W.carter:. Just beautiful. Thank you very much. Educationtemple (talk) 12:53, 6 March 2015 (UTC)
Dear @W.carter:...my friend...though the words I have in my dictionary to praise your kind gesture are not enough, but I have tried to express whatever I had in my heart! Hope you like this in its current state. Educationtemple (talk) 18:48, 6 March 2015 (UTC)
@W.carter: Wow! Do you also know how to read minds? Or we have some telepathy going on? Educationtemple (talk) 19:53, 6 March 2015 (UTC) Sunil Kumar Verma - In the NewsDear friends - @Philg88:, @I JethroBT:, @Jim Carter:, @I JethroBT:, @AntanO:, and @W.carter:: Sunil Kumar Verma is now GA. Previously it made a DYK. Thank you all for help at different stages to bring the article to current status. Special thanks to the "tough", but "kind" reviewers I_JethroBT and AntanO who were not only fair and reasonable at all points, but bold too in taking decisions! Thanks! Between DYK and GA, more interesting things happened that appeared in literature and in media - and most interesting was "DNA barcoding in credit dispute" and priority of UPT over DNA barcoding. This new section has been added in the article after thorough discussion in GAR. I would like to ask if "DNA barcoding in credit dispute" could go in "In the News" section? If yes, how and what is the procedure? Any help would be highly appreciated. Cheers! Educationtemple (talk) 03:24, 4 March 2015 (UTC)
Thanks Dear @W.carter:. I am still stuck in recovering data from my PC. Whole day wasted, still no success. Seems to be a big heart attack! But I am sure, I will do it. Tomorrow again going to see expert. Educationtemple (talk) 18:46, 4 March 2015 (UTC)
Oh God! It is not that much rotten yet! Found a software from acronis. It is on the job. Recovered 82%, hope data would be OK. Educationtemple (talk) 19:49, 4 March 2015 (UTC) Good hear your hard work towards GA, DYK, etc. You have patient and passion, and you are good listener too that makes you more better. The following article milestones display your passion:
I like your spirit of hard work. Best luck! --AntonTalk 08:33, 5 March 2015 (UTC) Thanks @AntanO:. I look forward for your continuing support and guidance. Thanks again! Educationtemple (talk) 12:37, 5 March 2015 (UTC)
Have a pleasant restEnjoy your days of rest and relaxation. Go and find a very large tree and sit under it. We will all be here when you return. All the best, w.carter-Talk 09:30, 7 March 2015 (UTC) Nomination of Vijender Kumar for deletionA discussion is taking place as to whether the article Vijender Kumar is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted. The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Vijender Kumar until a consensus is reached, and anyone is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines. Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article. CorporateM (Talk) 15:33, 7 March 2015 (UTC) DNA barcoding and Universal primer technnologyDear @W.carter: Nominated this it "ITN" I know it will not pass - Educationtemple (talk) 20:27, 6 March 2015 (UTC) Dear @Philg88:, @W.carter:, @Ugog Nizdast:, @I JethroBT:: I have nominated this for "In the News" section. Please review if possible, and help. Thanks. Educationtemple (talk) 21:30, 6 March 2015 (UTC)
Done. Thanks! First time, I am feeling happy on oppositions - Since I knew it will be opposed heavily at present! Educationtemple (talk) 22:08, 6 March 2015 (UTC)
Thanks a lotThanks a lot for including the poem on the Delhi rape article. My opinion is that if India's Daughter can be mentioned there, so can this. :) Keep up the editing, cheerio, --Rsrikanth05 (talk) 09:34, 18 March 2015 (UTC) Thanks Dear @Rsrikanth05:. Since you have moved it above and liked too, I suggest to include the following as a subsection within the article at an appropriate place (feel free to edit the text). This will explain what the audio is all about. Educationtemple (talk) 10:07, 18 March 2015 (UTC) Wo Desh Ki Beti (Nation's Daughter) On 5th of September 2014, Bandaru Dattareya - Member of Parliament and BJP National Vice President inaugurated "Wo Desh Ki Beti (Nation's Daughter)" a social event at Hyderabad showcasing the poetry written by Sunil Kumar Verma, depicting the pain of nation at the gang rape of its daughters.[1][2] Educationtemple (talk) 10:06, 18 March 2015 (UTC)
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