User talk:Drew.P.Branch
Assignments #3Looks like you're well on your way with Wikipedia assignment #3. Awesome! - Sethant (talk) 05:47, 29 April 2013 (UTC) Review for assignment #5Howdy! For your first review for Wikipedia assignment #5, check out the proposed edits made at User:Nightingale8283/sandbox and leave a comment about something you like and something you think they could improve further! - Sethant (talk) 06:30, 20 May 2013 (UTC) Assignment #5Hey Drew, 1) I thought that you did an excellent job on expanding on how to reach a full reaction. It was really well thought out! :) 2) To improve your text, I would make sure to include links to other pages, so that people can get more information on certain parts of the text. I might simplify a few words, for the general public that are not chemists or if not simplify clarify what they mean. i.e. What is reduction? Oxidation? This was a very solid piece of work. Hannah — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hannah.dimich (talk • contribs) 03:26, 21 May 2013 (UTC) Assignments #5 and #6Assignments #5 and #6 are done -- that's a wrap! -- Sethant (talk) 06:28, 6 June 2013 (UTC) |