Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MatthewVanitas was:
Good start so far, but you have some format issues to fix:
Your article is one big mass of text, please divide your content into clear WP:Sections
You need to apply WP:Wikilinks to other articles within the encyclopedia, those clickable blue links that connect Wikipedia together.
Your intro isn't encyclopedia style; it's not necessary to kick off with your personal musings about the importance of water. What we need for the first paragraphy is an extremely direct and clear who-what-why-when-where.
Please make these fixes, then click Resubmit for next review
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Hello, Certus UT!
Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! MatthewVanitas (talk) 19:14, 6 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted because it included copyrighted content, which is not permitted on Wikipedia.
