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User talk:Cerebellum/Archive 3
Desert Tech MDR Request for AssistanceHello Cerebellum, I have been trying to put up a page on the Desert Tech MDR for months now but it seems I am missing something critical. I saw your name on the Wikiproject Firearm and saw you listed as a specialist in Modern Rifles. I would like assistance figuring out why my submission keeps getting removed it seems almost random at times where some pages are able to use certain sources and others not (and I checked the wiki page source reliability page and made sure all my sources were allowed). It has come to the point where I can't use any sources that weren't published by a news organization (which results in pretty much all of the firearm history and problems (and this particular rifle and its follow on generation and upgrades, MDR gen 2 gas block redesign and MDRx which is the gen 3 rifle). I would appreciate any help or insight you might have in what I can do to get this page working. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Desert_Tech_MDR Thank you, FrozenIceman — Preceding unsigned comment added by FrozenIceman01 (talk • contribs) 17:49, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
Thank you, it was definitely frustrating playing wack a mole over months with seemingly random directions! — Preceding unsigned comment added by FrozenIceman01 (talk • contribs) 22:25, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
"506th Heavy Panzer Battalion" PageGood evening, Cerebellum You recently declined a page I drafted as I neglected to include inline citations. I've corrected this oversight and would like to know what steps (if any) need to be taken to resubmit for review now that the appropriate changes have been made. Thank you for your time! Herr514 (talk) 02:08, 24 March 2020 (UTC)
Might I ask what ought to be done to the article to improve the 'C' rating; I assume page numbers for citations are needed but anything beyond that? Would I need to do anything beyond edit the page to submit it for re-evaluation? Thanks in advance Herr514 (talk) 22:58, 25 March 2020 (UTC)
All Due Respect, But Would You Like To FIGHT Me?Hey, recently you deleted my Dinosaur Fighting Club as Hoax. I find this to be extraordinarily disrespectful as you do not attend my school and cannot deny the validity of this club. I understand you may not affiliate with the logic required to recognize this club, but it is real and not "hoax", so I would appreciate if you did not dismiss it as such. On another note I spent a long time contracting our club's page. If you could restore or recreate my page and approve it I would be most appreciative. If not, please catch these hands. Respectfully, VeryNicePerson — Preceding unsigned comment added by Veryniceperson (talk • contribs) 21:55, 11 November 2017 (UTC)
Couldn't find the button you were referring to but would actually love a copy of the page. Thanks!! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Veryniceperson (talk • contribs) 20:23, 12 November 2017 (UTC)
Thanks Man!! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Veryniceperson (talk • contribs) 00:24, 14 November 2017 (UTC) How do i contact you about a page you helped remove?Hey i set up a article for Freshly Squeezed Music, but along with another you deleted it. I was just wondering how i could contact you for further information on the reasons why? And how to correct the article? - Electroswing770 13:42 04/01/2016 Hey, Thanks so much for the helpful tips! I've compiled a list of further sources that i have found, and i believe they correspond to the notability guidelines. If you have the time, could you glance at them to confirm notability? It would really help. Mentions of FS in UK national press/established publications: THE INDEPENDENT http://www.independent.co.uk/arts-entertainment/music/features/electro-swing-tonight-were-going-to-party-like-its-1929-2276174.html Also The Correspondents, White Mink, Nick Hollywood Paragraph 9 LONDON EVENING STANDARD http://www.standard.co.uk/lifestyle/hail-the-kings-of-hip-hop-swing-6525511.html Also The Correspondents, White Mink, Nick Hollywood MIXMAG - Bygone Beats article is not online BUT: (Journalist Rahul Verma’s Blog:) reproduces text: http://vermarahul.blogspot.co.uk/2010/05/wot-do-u-call-it-bygone-beatsvintage.html And there’s a magazine Scan on the WM site: http://www.whitemink.co.uk/mixmag1.html > > > THE TELEGRAPH (Nick Hollywood, Freshly Squeezed, White Mink) http://www.whitemink.co.uk/page25.html Notable radio play: BBC RADIO 6 - Craig Charles Funk and Soul Show: https://www.google.co.uk/search?q=BBC+Radio+6+Craig+Charles+Freshly+Squeezed
- Electroswing770 11:05 11/01/2016 A tip of the hat.
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Per WP:CIVIL, You don't ever badmouth annother editor. You have a complaint with my reviewing, you bring it to me. You see a persistent line of problematic reviews you bring it to WT:AFC you don't make your passive agressive remarks to someone else. Your wikilove has been truncated to remove the offending statement. Do it again and I will comb through your reviews and nitpick them to death. Hasteur (talk) 15:12, 15 August 2014 (UTC) I would love it if you worked on the Edward Mann Lewis page - Thanks so much for the help and suggestions! Kevinakling (talk) 08:49, 16 August 2014 (UTC) I created EML's timeline tonight by hand, using the sources listed. Would love it if you could look at it, and make any needed corrections... Thanks! ==== — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kevinakling (talk • contribs) 01:17, 18 August 2014 (UTC) The next page I will create is EML's son, Maj. Gen. Henry Balding Lewis, would appreciate your review when I submit it. thanks for all your help! ==== — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kevinakling (talk • contribs) 11:20, 19 August 2014 (UTC) I just created it - needs a little help if you have the time! Thanks!! Kevinakling (talk) 23:23, 19 August 2014 (UTC)
Thanks. I just fixed the "bare URL" warning for https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Paul_F._McManamonThanks for your help. I fixed the problem of "bare URLs" warning Kautilya1 (talk) 14:04, 16 August 2014 (UTC) 00:37:34, 18 August 2014 review of submission by Shesaninja
Shesaninja (talk) 00:37, 18 August 2014 (UTC) hi cerebellum, i changed the first line to be more clear. can i resubmit now? here is my draft: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:VJ_Um_Amel thanks okay - resubmitted. thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Shesaninja (talk • contribs) 16:50, 21 August 2014 (UTC) Teleological argumentThank you for the conscientious and efficient way you reviewed and then passed this article as GA. It is very much appreciated. Myrvin (talk) 06:38, 21 August 2014 (UTC)
Thanks for the rewording of that sentence. There's something very odd going on there. I didn't seem to be able to get across what was wrong. Still worried about the citation. Next little step: pleroma? Myrvin (talk) 18:41, 22 August 2014 (UTC) 22:08:57, 21 August 2014 review of submission by AlexPMA
AlexPMA (talk) 22:08, 21 August 2014 (UTC) Regarding Capital Insurance Group Entry: Hi Cerebellum. I would be interested to learn more about why this article was denied as it was reviewed by two other edits with extremely minor edits and every fact was cited with either an internal wiki link or an external third party link. The page is salient because of two verifiable unique factors in the insurance industry (the first to offer a smoke-free premium credit and one of the very limited number of regional insurance companies with a mobile application.) Furthermore, the company is already cited in an existing wikipedia url of Kelly-Moore Paints (a stub article). As the url exists already, a fully-sited and strictly factual page would be a legitimate extension, would it not? Happy to abide by any/all guidelines but as far as I can tell by the wiki "best practices", this should be a solid fit. Please advise as to how to create a constructive article on this topic. Thank you AlexPMA (talk) 21:33, 11 September 2014 (UTC) Request on 18:48:46, 23 August 2014 for assistance on AfC submission by Marco Curreli
Hi Cerebellum! References have been added in the appropriate format to show notability. Please, approve the articles at your earliest convenience. Thanks. 17:04:10, 1 September 2014 review of submission by Kendrafutcher
18:40:13, 9 September 2014 review of submission by Teepurk
I am unsure of why my article was declined and was wondering if you could help me out or tell me what exactly I would need to change. Thanks! Teepurk (talk) 18:40, 9 September 2014 (UTC) Fifi EjinduI notice that you moved the above article into mainspace. I would just like to ask what criteria you used to assess the fitness of the article in mainspace. I have just come across the article, and it seems that at least one other editor considers it to be highly promotional in nature, and has tagged the article accordingly. I'm just a little disappointed that an article full of unencyclopaedic trash, like the high level of detail given to her "reknowned" 50th birthday party, has been allowed into mainspace under the auspices of this AfD program. Regards, -- Ohc ¡digame! 03:52, 20 September 2014 (UTC)
Request on 23:17:28, 7 October 2014 for assistance on AfC submission by Dave H Franks
PLEASE help me get this article accepted on your siteI have already tried to post this question twice on TEAHOUSE, complete with the four tildes, and it disappeared, so I sent it to the information team and was told to talk to you directly. However, since you do not have an e-mail or private message section, I am forced to do it this way to try AGAIN. I apologize up front for the caps I'm about to use, and for anything I'm apparently not supposed to put here, but with your response to my article in your review, I'm not even aware of what that would be, and I have no other choice but to do things this way. This is the most FRUSTRATING THING I have EVER been through. I have tried REPEATEDLY to submit an article on my boss, Ray Carr, at his request, BTW, and have repeatedly corrected items listed in my reviews, yet, NO MATTER WHAT I DO, this article keeps being rejected. And now, out of nowhere, this LATEST rejection includes this block: This submission has been blanked because its content violates Wikipedia's policies. This page has been blanked for privacy, security, or copyright reasons. Please do not restore the content that was removed. WTF?????!!! NOWHERE in any review did ANY Editor tell me that my article was violating any policies!!! Why all of a sudden does this show up? I made very few changes since my last review, save ones requested by the editors, and nothing has ever been on that page that would cause a reaction like that - or, at least I've never been given that response before. Here is the URL: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Ray_Carr And here is the latest submitted text, which I WISELY saved onto my computer after the LAST time it was restored by Wikipedia, from its last rejection: Raymond "Ray"/"DJRay" Kevin Carr, Sr. (born September 17, 1963) is a disc jockey, emcee, sports announcer and voiceover artist. [1] He has been a DJ since 1980, and is best known as the host of The Ray Carr Show [2], a weekly radio show on WCSB in Cleveland, OH. Ray has also been a radio host on WHK, and joined WCSB, 89.3FM - Cleveland State Radio in 2007. His show currently airs on Tuesday mornings from 7-9AM EST.[1] He has interviewed national and local Cleveland celebrities, including Ted Neeley, Gloria Jones, Jim Brickman, Johnny Holliday, Dr. Demento, Harry Benson, Richard Cheese, Jim Berkenstadt, Ann Serling, George Sipl, Carl Maduri, Larry Morrow, Les Roberts, George Wallace, Louis Clark, Dick Goddard, Big Chuck and Little John, Chuck Bergman, John Gorman, Wavy Gravy, Neil Zurcher, and Joe Tait. Ray is taking courses at Cleveland State University, for a double degree in Sports Management/Psychology. He is an athlete and coach, and has played - and refereed - baseball, softball, ice and roller hockey, basketball, football and cycling.[1] He has been announcing and doing color commentary for Lakewood Schools since 2001.[3] [1] He ran in the CVS Marathon in 2000, finishing with a time of 3 hours and 45 minutes. He volunteers at the Cleveland YMCA, coaching and teaching classes,[4] where he won the Golden Triangle Y.M.C.A. Award in 2001.[5] Ray was drawn to sports and being in the middle of the action as far back as the early days of the Cleveland Cavaliers, when he was a ball boy during the Miracle of Richfield, in the 1975-1976 NBA season.[1] He worked on the stat crew for the Cavs when Bill Fitch was coaching, and helped out their trainer, Charley Strasser, at home games.[1]. A baseball fan since the age of 10, Ray spent many Sundays as a "pinch runner" in local games on the west side of Cleveland, OH [6] A supporter of many charities, Ray, most notably, has emceed the annual Alheimers Organization Blondes vs Brunettes Charity Powder Puff Football Game since 2011. The 2014 game raised $41,500 dollars for Alzheimers. He has also been one of the emcees for the White Cane Walk [7] at Legacy Village in Lyndhurst, OH since 2012, and has been the emcee for the Berea ARF (Animal Rescue Friends) annual Monster Mutt Dash and Howl-O-Ween Party [8] since 2012. Ray is also an animal rights advocate and a supporter of anti-drinking and anti-drug bills. Ray is a collector of Beatle Memorabilia, and has amassed rare and old recordings dating back past the early 20's. He also collects memorabilia on sports and Indians history, particularly Babe Ruth.[9] Ray has two children, Raymond, Jr., a rap singer, known as LittleItaly, [10] [6] born on December 13, 1984, who is single; and Roy, born on January 29, 1986, who married Courtney Blevens earlier this year. Ray is currently single. References 1. Meggas, Dale (5/1/08). "Carr Has A Voice To Be Reckoned With". The Sun Newspapers. 2. http://www.raycarram,com 3. Sayles, Jenny (11/01). "Keeping It Quiet - Girls Denied Use of PA For Warm-Up Music". The Lakewood Times. 4. Leathers, Jean (12/2001). "Volunteer Corner - Ray Carr". YMCA Lakewood Listener. 5. Crone, Steven (1/2002). "Volunteer Spotlight - Triangle Award Recipient Ray Carr (Again!)". YMCA Lakewood Listener. 6. Couglin, Dan (03/30/73). "Boys of Summer". The Plain Dealer. 7. http://whitecanewalk.kintera.org/faf/home/default.asp?ievent=1065100 8. http://bereaanimalrescue.com/monster-mutt-dash 9. Coughlin, Dan (7/71). "Yes, Ray, There Was A Babe". The Cleveland Press. 10. http://www.cleveland.com/music/index.ssf/2012/04/chardon-born_singer-songwriter.html External Links · Ray Carr's Show Website · WCSB Radio Website · Ray Carr's Facebook Page · The Ray Carr Show Facebook Page · Ray Carr's Twitter Page · Ray Carr's Instagram Page · Ray Carr's Linked In Page
Will you PLEASE help me write this correctly to FINALLY get it on this site? THANK YOU! CVActor1 CVActor1 (talk) 08:49, 8 October 2014 (UTC) AfD closeHey there, you closed Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Ciklopea as delete, but somehow failed to delete the page. I've marked for G6. Just a heads up. Thanks, ansh666 17:14, 29 October 2014 (UTC)
G.I. JoeHi, sorry for not getting back to you sooner, been busy. Thanks for the update on G.I. Joe! I would ask, when you got the time, to help out when you can with The Transformers (IDW Publishing). I'm updating it on a regular basis but its missing some stuff regarding the plot and I'm lacking in time to write a proper text so if you are familiar with it that would be great. Cheers! Plastelin (talk) 11:26, 6 November 2014 (UTC)
Blacklane Rejection 15 August 2014Hi Cerebellum, Thank you for reviewing my article on the company Blacklane on 15 August. You said that it didn't sound objective enough, so I have made a whole bunch of changes now and have resubmitted it. I was hoping you might take a look at it, as you are one of the people who has already read through it and therefore know a bit about it already. Also, if you still don't consider it ready for exposure, could you possibly give me some suggestions as to how I can change it? I decided to take it on as a response to a request in the "Requested articles" section https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Requested_articles/Business_and_economics/Companies and am determined not to give up! It'd be great if you could help me out! Thank you! All the best, -- Reconnamon (talk) 06:48, 12 November 2014 (UTC) Dear Cerebellum, Thank you so much for reading through the Blacklane article again and accepting! I really appreciate you taking the time out for it! All the best, Reconnamon (talk) 08:09, 17 November 2014 (UTC) Dear Cerebellum, Some months ago you declined my article 'Draft:Ulf Langheinrich". I am not sure to understand how to improve it. Do you mean the sources of the references are not detailed enough or are they not significant? As a contemporary artist in the field of media art, it is not easy to add neutral citations about his work, as they come from press releases or websites of the visited venues. Thanks in advance, Rupert4471 (talk) 17:33, 13 November 2014 (UTC)rupert4471Rupert4471 (talk) 17:33, 13 November 2014 (UTC) Request on 15:22:39, 18 November 2014 for assistance on AfC submission by Evelyn4414
Can you give me specific examples of where it needs more secondary references or smacks of undocumented assertions? I see what is wrong (secondary sources are not independent and authoritative enough), but need help in focusing. Is the "life" section ok as is? Are the regional and local newspaper articles too ancedotal? Would direct quotes from authors or from the artist (as quoted by authors) improve the article? I will continue to work on 'Gainor Roberts' to understand the process and hope to later contribute more to Wikipedia. Evelyn4414 (talk) 15:22, 18 November 2014 (UTC) evelyn4414 Evelyn4414 (talk) 15:22, 18 November 2014 (UTC) Talkback Message added 14:19, 19 November 2014 (UTC). You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{Talkback}} or {{Tb}} template. 78.26 (spin me / revolutions) 14:19, 19 November 2014 (UTC) You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{Talkback}} or {{Tb}} template. --Amdgescala (talk) 21:57, 25 November 2014 (UTC) Kezia NobleHello, I really appreciate you reviewing my article - I have removed even more references and left the ones who others have written about her. The reason why I re-submitted it prevously was because I did remove sources but nobody replied to me when I asked if I should remove anymore sources. I would really appreciate it if you could take a quick look at the references, (only a few left) and let me know if I should remove any more. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Kezia_Noble Thank you Wiki.017 (talk) 10:42, 28 November 2014 (UTC)
Thank you for your help!! I really appreciate it. I have removed the "best-selling" book fact because there aren't any current references on the web to support this fact. Other than this, if I submit the article again would you kindly be able to take a look at it? Thanks Wiki.017 (talk) 16:21, 1 December 2014 (UTC)
Ok amazing! Thanks for your help and have a great day Wiki.017 (talk) 11:26, 3 December 2014 (UTC) Please take a look at the comment the most recent reviewer has left me - how is this fair? I think it's extremely unfair. I have spent hundreds of hours on this article, done everything I could and trusted the comments the reviewers have left me, I removed the references and you removed an entire chunk of the article so that it would help it get accepted and now it gets rejected because of exactly that? That's extremely unfair. I just want the article approved. I'm giving up hope - any way you can approve it, since you thought the lesser references the better? Thanks Wiki.017 (talk) 18:30, 15 December 2014 (UTC) Draft October 17Hi! I noticed at Wikiproject:Mathematics that you review drafts. Here is one that you probably quickly could decide on. It is produced by User:YohanN7 (me) and User:Cuzkatzimhut. We can both create articles in main space, but I prefer to go via AFC anyway to get a sanity check. But this time it has taken unusually long, so I thought I could ask ... Draft:Derivative of the exponential map Best! YohanN7 (talk) 08:55, 3 December 2014 (UTC)
The Talos PrincipleHi Cerebellum, I hereby take you up on your offer to review one of my more recent drafts. It's about The Talos Principle. It's just a stub, but the game is set for release on December 11th, so the article's contents will be expanded in the near future. Oh, and thanks for the barnstar. :) --82.136.210.153 (talk) 21:44, 5 December 2014 (UTC)
21:57:36, 5 December 2014 review of submission by Norozco1Hey, i see that you have declined this article because you said, and i quote: "It is unlikely that it will be accepted unless new sources have been published since June covering this person", and that's what i'm trying to do because every since this article got deleted back in june, eveyone that read this article are surprised at this decision, and they don't like it one bit, so its my job to bring the article back to wikipedia, an i'm still trying my very best to do so, because if i do that, then maybe someone out there, he or she just might accept my request, and then re-add the article right back on the wikipedia web, and this time, it'll be better then ever, and after that, everything will be back to the way it was before deletion ever happen in the first place, and i can tell from the looks of it that the editors would want to edit this article, and they would be completely eagered to add new datas, new sources, and new references to the article, to make sure that this article stays on for good, and to make sure that this article should never end up being deleted from this site ever again, which is why i need everyones help and support for this, especially your help and support to make it happen, and before you know it, it'll soon be the article that won't get deleted, that is my hope to say the least, but wouldn't you agree too, Cerebellum? :-) Norozco1 (talk) 21:57, 5 December 2014 (UTC)
Article resubmittedDear Cerebellum, I improved my Article with reliable sources as you have required and re-submitted it. Can you please review and help me out by giving me your feeback? I hope it meets with your approval. Thanks & Regards Thilinaticbt — Preceding unsigned comment added by Thilinaticbt (talk • contribs) 06:54, 6 December 2014 (UTC)
Thank you...I only saw the link to your user page today... and it made me laugh! Thank you! Cheers, Shir-El too 14:57, 8 December 2014 (UTC) A brownie for you!
Happy Holidays...
Your submission at Articles for creation: Titan (gaming organization) has been accepted The article has been assessed as C-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. Note that because you are a logged-in user, you can create articles yourself, and don't have to post a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer.
Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Kevin Rutherford (talk) 05:15, 26 December 2014 (UTC)Nomination of Mickey Fondozzi for deletion A discussion is taking place as to whether the article Mickey Fondozzi is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted. The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Mickey Fondozzi until a consensus is reached, and anyone is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines. Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article. Cameron Scott (talk) 11:46, 5 January 2015 (UTC) My article about Ulf LangheinrichHi, I have posted several messages to you but no feedback since November. Maybe they were not a the right place. So here again...
Thank you
No feedback from you since November. Can you get back to me soon ? Is my article acceptable now? What should I do? Thank you Rupert4471 (talk) 13:16, 8 January 2015 (UTC)rupert4471 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rupert4471 (talk • contribs)
I have emailed you more links. Rupert4471 (talk) 15:40, 13 January 2015 (UTC)rupert4471 @Rupert4471: You convinced me with those last links; please resubmit the article and i'll accept it. --Cerebellum (talk) 22:21, 14 January 2015 (UTC) Infobox photo discussionHi again. Happy New Year. Can you offer your opinion on which photo is better for the Infobox here? If you're not able to participate, just disregard this message; you don't have to message me. Thanks. Nightscream (talk) 01:18, 10 January 2015 (UTC) 15:43:53, 16 January 2015 review of submission by 79.132.239.87
79.132.239.87 (talk) 15:43, 16 January 2015 (UTC)
Thanks Cerebellum! I've just resubmitted it. 79.132.239.87 (talk) 16:41, 19 January 2015 (UTC) RfC - Helper Script accessAn RfC has been opened at RfC to physically restrict access to the Helper Script. You are invited to comment. --Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 14:18, 1 February 2015 (UTC) Data Lost in Section "Golf Courses Designed by Herbert Strong"Hi Cerebellum: Can you please put back the 20 or more golf courses that disappeared from this section?! Where did they go?--EditorExtraordinaire (talk) 17:07, 1 February 2015 (UTC)
The duplicate stuff is okay to remove if you think it is unnecessary. I would like to keep the one Wiki table that showed his 9th place finish in the 1913 U.S. Open. Can you put that back in please? I am also wondering when this article might be approved to be published in the article space. It isn't a perfect article (being my first attempt) but it is better than a lot of others I've seen! Thanks.--EditorExtraordinaire (talk) 17:18, 1 February 2015 (UTC)
Excellent! And I see you have my very temporarily lost data back in place. Wonderful, you are so efficient! Thank you very much for approving the article, and improving it as well. :-) --EditorExtraordinaire (talk) 17:28, 1 February 2015 (UTC) Help for Reviewing an articleDear Cerebellum, I'm very sorry. I don't know if i'm writing you on the proper place. I would like to create an article in English about Marc Dozier, a movie maker related to Mundiya Kepanga. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mundiya_Kepanga I already wrote the article that was probably not good enough and it has since been deleted. Could you possibly help me to review it ? Thanks in advance, Best Regards, 82.216.177.22 (talk) 22:14, 12 February 2015 (UTC) Philippe Gigliotti @82.216.177.22: Hello! I would love to help you. Unfortunately I cannot find the deleted article you are referring to. Did you write it using a different account? I notice there is an article on Marc Dozier on the French wikipedia, so if you speak French I would recommend translating that and then posting it to Wikipedia:Articles for creation. I would be happy to review it for you. --Cerebellum (talk) 22:40, 12 February 2015 (UTC) 18:06:31, 9 March 2015 review of submission by 173.71.170.64
Thanks, Dave 173.71.170.64 (talk) 18:06, 9 March 2015 (UTC) Hi! New draftYou were pretty efficient with Derivative of the exponential map, so I thought I might ask you again: Draft:Lie algebra extension Best! YohanN7 (talk) 19:46, 16 May 2015 (UTC) Second Gene reviewHi. The gene article has gone through a lot of changes in the last couple of months. I've relisted it for GA review again if you're interested in being involved! T.Shafee(Evo﹠Evo)talk 02:04, 30 May 2015 (UTC) GA review for Al-Ma'arriI would like to inform you that I have changed the article about Al-Ma'arri to fix the problems that you have addressed. See the talk page for details. --Cusku'i (talk) 04:17, 24 July 2015 (UTC) July 2015
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Tunisian ArabicI thank you for your edit. I will take in consideration your comments and nominate the work soon. --Csisc (talk) 09:10, 13 September 2015 (UTC)
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Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! SwisterTwister talk 08:18, 2 November 2015 (UTC)A barnstar for you!
Hello Cerebellum! I acknowledge your action of deleting the page Donati Salla which I had created it in past two days ago however in your message that you sent it to me you have said that, you are not thinking if the page I created in belonging to Wikipedia then would you kindly direct me as to where should I allocate the page??? Second If you had seen some weaknesses in it please why can't you assist me in improving the page??? third can you assist me get the copy of the deleted page??? Infact I have been very embarrassed with your actions!!! Perhaps It's in my view that you do not want to see the records of black people being kept in this encyclopedia but I warn you to light your candle without letting other candles smelting and getting finished!!!!!! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Abdulrahman1985 (talk • contribs) 14:49, 11 November 2015 (UTC)
Thank you so much for your directions. I will work on it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Abdulrahman1985 (talk • contribs) 19:25, 11 November 2015 (UTC) Peak Oil good article nomination reviewThanks for doing the review of this article. This article was neglected for a long time, and I have been trying to update the page for months now. However, this is a community effort, and there are years of previous work here from multiple individuals. In addition, as you can imagine, the page has been quite politicized. I have done my best to improve the page. In the last few months most of the edits have been done by myself. Most of the figures have been updated for the recent data and much outdated information has been removed. I admit, there are some sections which need work (as would be the case for any article). However, there is only so much time in the day. Overall, I think the page is vastly improved from where it was previously. Discussions related to this subject have been going on for decades. You should appreciate that the article cannot be completely re-written based on relatively recent developments such as hydraulic fracturing and the 2014-15 price drop. Relevant to this, I refer you to my response to Insertcleverphrasehere's comments in the Talk section in which I refer to mention of the price drop and hydraulic fracturing in the article. I will attempt to address your comments as soon as I can. I would ask you to review this page constructively in the context of it's long controversial history and multiple contributors. If you could give me additional time if that is required, I would appreciate that. One final point, please refrain from the use of "you say..." in you future coments. This is incorrect - I probably didn't write the section being referred to. Many thanks.Blandx (talk) 01:56, 15 November 2015 (UTC)
The creator of Seven Different Leadership Styles left a message on my talk page requesting for a copy of the article, which you deleted. His e-mail address is at sheimroch [at] gmail [dot] com. Thank you. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 23:29, 21 November 2015 (UTC)
Donati SallaDear Cerebellum! I have made edits trough the article named Draft:Donati Salla kindly review the work and give me a feedback accordingly. Regards Abdulrahman1985 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Abdulrahman1985 (talk • contribs) 14:53, 24 November 2015 (UTC)
Article Resubmitted by Abdulrahman1985Dear Cerebellum, I improved the Article Darft:Donati Salla]]with reliable sources as you have required and re-submitted it. Can you please review and help me out by giving me your feeback? I hope it meets with your approval. Thanks & Regards Abdulrahman1985 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Abdulrahman1985 (talk • contribs) 14:59, 24 November 2015 (UTC) I have seen your EditsDear Cerebellum! I have seen your edits! Will the article Draft:Donati Salla be accepted??? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Abdulrahman1985 (talk • contribs) 15:54, 24 November 2015 (UTC) Kindly Review the Article Draft:Donati Salla againDear Celleberum! The Article Draft:Donati Salla has been reviewed by User:SwisterTwister however he challenged the issue of politicians notability guideline then I have made improvements on it kindly review the article and comment accordingly. Regards Abrulrahman1985 Abdulrahman1985 (talk) 10:11 AM Wednesday, November 25, 2015 East Africa Time (EAT) @Abdulrahman1985: Sorry for the late response, I see you've already moved the article back into article space. I agree that the article is probably notable so I don't have a problem with that. The only reason it's hard to establish the notability is that most of the sources you cite are not available online. If you know of an online version or you are able to scan the articles that would help, but you've put a lot of work into the article and it looks good. Again, sorry for the delayed response. --Cerebellum (talk) 20:07, 28 November 2015 (UTC) Jordan LusseyHello, could you please restore the editing history of Jordan Lussey prior to it being deleted by AfD. The player now passes GNG and WP:NFOOTBALL having made his debut today. Thanks, JMHamo (talk) 21:39, 28 November 2015 (UTC)
Nominations for the Military history WikiProject historian and newcomer of the year awards now open!On behalf of the Military history WikiProject's Coordinators, we would like to extend an invitation to nominate deserving editors for the 2015 Military historian of the year and Military history newcomer of the year awards. The nomination period will run from 7 December to 23:59 13 December, with the election phase running from 14 December to 23:59 21 December. MediaWiki message delivery (talk) 05:05, 7 December 2015 (UTC) Some dim sum for you!
Obama's asian trip listed at Redirects for discussion An editor has asked for a discussion to address the redirect Obama's asian trip. Since you had some involvement with the Obama's asian trip redirect, you might want to participate in the redirect discussion if you have not already done so. BDD (talk) 16:57, 1 June 2016 (UTC) For What It's WorthThought you might want to see how a page you greenlighted out of Articles For Creation in 2014 is progressing... Good call on that one... Thomas Skidmore (reformer) best regards, —Tim /// Carrite (talk) 01:45, 17 June 2016 (UTC)
Gospel of John has been nominated for Did You Know Hello, Cerebellum. Gospel of John, an article you either created or to which you significantly contributed,has been nominated to appear on Wikipedia's Main Page as part of Did you know Amethyst (Steven Universe)This seems to have been recreated again. I put it up for CSD as previously deleted via deletion discussion, I think it qualifies but just wanted to send the FYI since you did the last deletion. -- Dane2007 talk 01:30, 9 August 2016 (UTC)
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Hello, I might need some help building this page about the escape game in Prague called MindMaze. I keep trying to make it better but it seems i can't succeed without help. First it wasn't enough information about it so it got rejected. Now i filled it up from different sources,websites,blogs. It seems now that it's not neutral. I don't quite get the reasons behind this as other escape games have their wiki pages (like this one https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/AdventureRooms) with more or less info than I tried to do.
It's been three years, today. Your opinion is requestedHi. Can you offer your opinion on which photo is better in this discussion? Thanks. Nightscream (talk) 02:08, 15 November 2016 (UTC) Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Don AllisonYour closing states, "The result was delete. The sources added by the IP are mostly local, and so do not fix the concern raised by the nominator. The only good source is [1], and one source is not enough to establish notability." Nothing makes sense here. Your statement says "mostly local", which is not a policy concern even at WP:AUD for corporations. The nominator objects that only the hometown paper provides the information, which would be a valid concern in that WP:GNG requires "sources" (plural), and where the same paper might be considered as one source. But there are many sources. Even if you think there is only one "good" source, the "less-good" sources also contribute to WP:GNG. Here are the sources I found at the Google cache "This is Google's cache of https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Don_Allison. It is a snapshot of the page as it appeared on Nov 16, 2016 08:39:58 GMT."
Peerless NetworkHello - you left me a note about a move of the document Peerless Network to a draft section - so thought that I'd contact you to see how to proceed. An editor quickly put it up for "speedy deletion," stating that it fails the notability criteria. I couldn't disagree more - but at this point I've no idea how to prove this point. I've provided all references that are possible to provide - and provided arguments as to why the article should stand and why the company passes the credibility threshold imho (ie - they are responsible for technology that has made telecommunications as we now enjoy it possible. And won patents for this work.) Is this technology "article-worthy?" No - not really - which is why it is difficult to find "references." But "because" of the technology, companies and processes and the way that you and I use our telephones (both landlines and cellular/wifi) are improved - and that makes the company notable. (ever wonder how your wireless call moves from a cell tower to a wifi connection? Well, it is documented in one of the patents for Peerless.) If I include paragraphs about "these technologies" then I'll get dinged as "promotional." So - honestly, not sure how to proceed. But honestly, just hoping that one editor will recognize the importance of their work, deem it "notable" and publishable on Wikipedia. Hoping that you can provide guidance. Thank youJlk0221 (talk) 17:50, 28 November 2016 (UTC).
All - thanks for your help in preparing this article. I made some of the edits suggested, and responded to a few other points on the draft talk page (I think, I get a bit lost here still :) Anyhow, I'll resubmit and see what happens. I honestly think that I've followed all the criteria and of course, that the article and company are notable. But do appreciate very much both of your help and guidance - very kind of you. Thanks,Jlk0221 (talk) 16:59, 15 December 2016 (UTC) Please review your deletion of Miss Tennessee USAPlease see [1]. Thank you, Unscintillating (talk) 01:05, 21 December 2016 (UTC) Please review your deletion of Molly Brown (pageant titleholder)Please see [2]. Thank you, Unscintillating (talk) 01:21, 21 December 2016 (UTC)
Operation SweenyPlease feel free to delete it. Paul, in Saudi (talk) 01:42, 2 January 2017 (UTC) Comics articlesHello, it's me, Fusionem. Thanks for supporting me in comic articles like Infestation 2 and Kings Watch. Noe I need some help with an article titled Rom (comics), I need rename it as "Rom the Space Knight", becuase it is not only about the comic book, but also about the toy It is more a property of Hasbro's than Marvel's ow IDW's. If you want, expand the section where it should narrate the character's story in the IDW version. Thanks. Fusionem (talk) 23:42, 15 January 2017 (UTC)
Paul Mangano deleted pageI am in the process of recreating the deleted Paul Mangano page with rephrased wording and more citations to make it less promotional. If there is anything else that needs to be done please let me know. I'm hoping the page will stick this time. JRD2016 (talk) 16:43, 16 January 2017 (UTC)
15:45:00, 18 January 2017 review of submission by Belosnegova
Hello! The long description of heroes and their skills is crucial for the game, that is a major innovation in the sequel, a game-changing feature. Having them described as is now could be of a great value to players and for everyone, who likes the genre. Thank you! 10:21:43, 22 January 2017 review of submission by 41.239.35.166
Thank you so much for accepting the article, i will work on improving it by working on the text, references, along the way. Can i add more URLs to the External Links part. example: Official Website, Bandcamp, etc? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 41.239.35.166 (talk) 12:52, 22 January 2017 (UTC) 21:40:35, 23 January 2017 review of submission by DennisLLSantiago
Thank you for reviewing my page draft for FOX reporter Hollie McKay. 1. I removed the non-encyclopedic language I had extemporaneously included in the draft. 2. I improved the opening of article to refer more to her FOX credentials as a foreign correspondent and also to the online and video columns that she did FOX as their pop culture reporter. I added quotations from external material independent of FOX to further illustrate the nature of her roles. 3. I had been using a one size fits all copy and paste format to create citations. I re-labeled several of them that were not authored by McKay to more properly reflect that they were web situations and not news article citations. 4. The seemingly vast number primary citations you noted is actually a severely curated subset of the reporter's body of work which spans thousands of articles and videos published by her for FOX News over the last decade. What I tried to do was organize sets of them to illustrate the long term investigative story arcs that she covers over time by curating together illustration citations to make each point. 5. I did put a placeholder to create a table of links to other Wikipedia pages that have used McKay's work as citations. Should I continue to fill out this table. I thinkt it's on the order of 78 Wiki entries. Happy to do so. I'm thinking a table format would be appropriate. Does doing it that way make sense? 6. I also added a placeholder entry for McKay on the FOX News Wiki page in the correspondents section so that it can connect to this page once it is out of draft. I did search several of the other links to find notability citations which is where I found her childhood book. But I think the main body of the article really emphasizes her notability as a journalist. She's been relatively free of contention coverage on the internet aside from the instances of her calling out Anthony Bourdain and her report on th injuries of the cop at Ferguson, both of which I documented. I did look at the other Wiki pages for the other FOX News correspondents that already exist and I believe this one is already far more substantive than most of them. If there are any specific additions you can suggest I make please let me know. Thank you, DennisLLSantiago (talk) 21:40, 23 January 2017 (UTC) Dennis Santiago
02:00:25, 24 January 2017 review of submission by DennisLLSantiago
Thank you so much for your feedback on my questions and clarification of what type of citation you need. I now know what to locate to carry this project forward. Really appreciate it. DennisLLSantiago (talk) 02:00, 24 January 2017 (UTC) Dennis Santiago
08:42:36, 27 January 2017 review of submission by DennisLLSantiago
DennisLLSantiago (talk) 08:42, 27 January 2017 (UTC) Dennis Santiago
Your submission at Articles for creation: Gibril Haddad has been acceptedThe article has been assessed as C-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. Note that because you are a logged-in user, you can create articles yourself, and don't have to post a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer.
Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! DGG ( talk ) 05:09, 7 February 2017 (UTC)On this day, 10 years ago...
QuestionHow does one go about closing Category:Blacks only organizations on Wikipedia:Categories for discussion/Log/2017 January 14? Thanks. Mitchumch (talk) 14:24, 5 March 2017 (UTC) Happy Holidays
Hi CerebellumHi Cerebellum: is possible that you can edit and submission to article for creation for wikipedia, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Old_Wise/Alejandro_Correa_Rueda, I think it's for acceptance the article for wikipedia and I need your help. Thank you very much. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Old Wise (talk • contribs) 14:57, 15 March 2018 (UTC) Nomination of David Tischman for deletionA discussion is taking place as to whether the article David Tischman is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted. The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/David Tischman until a consensus is reached, and anyone is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines. Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article. A loose noose (talk) 23:00, 7 June 2018 (UTC) Five years of adminshipWishing Cerebellum a very happy adminship anniversary on behalf of the Wikipedia Birthday Committee! Chris Troutman (talk) 22:16, 29 October 2018 (UTC) 12 years of editing
Vedic religion in arabiaYou had deleted my topic in my discussion but you fascinating about my topic . And you can help me to discuss about this topic — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nittin Das (talk • contribs) 14:01, 2 March 2019 (UTC)
How to prevent copyright violationI do copy write to express my idea Nittin Das (talk) 06:49, 3 March 2019 (UTC)
Apportionment in the Hellenic ParliamentHello, thank you for approving the article apportionment in the Hellenic Parliament. I was wondering what the criteria were for it to be labelled as "start class" instead of C or B? --Michail (blah) 20:14, 5 April 2019 (UTC)
Vedic Religion in pre Islamic ArabiaThere many evidence that shows the existence of Vedic Religion(Hinduism) on pre Islamic Arabia. Arabia is also known as Arabisthan.The word Arab or Arabisthan is originally derived from the Sanskrit word Arvasthan, which means the land of horses. Arva means horse, and sthan means place. And the people who lived in the Arab were called semitic. Semitic is a Sanskrit word for Smritic.
Sanskrit | Arabic | English Sagwan | Saj | Teakwood Anusari | Ansari| Follower Shishya | Sheikh | Disciple Mrityu | Mout | Death Karpur | Kafur | Camphor
There are evidences to show how poems were written praising the Hindus and Hinduism in Arabs. The following lines can be found in page 235 of Sair-Ul-Okul. Kafavomal fikra min ulumin Tab asayru Kaluwan amataul Hawa was Tajakhru We Tajakhayroba udan Kalalwade-E Liboawa Walukayanay jatally, hay Yauma Tab asayru Wa Abalolha ajabu armeeman MAHADEVA Manojail ilamuddin minhum wa sayattaru Wa Sahabi Kay-yam feema-Kamil MINDAY Yauman Wa Yakulum no latabahan foeennak Tawjjaru Massayaray akhalakan hasanan Kullahum Najumum aja- at Summa gabul HINDU which translates as: The man who may spend his life in sin and irreligion or waste it in lechery and wrath If at least he relent and return to righteousness can he be saved? If but once he worship Mahadeva with a pure heart, he will attain the ultimate in spirituality. Oh Lord Shiva exchange my entire life for but a day’s sojourn in India where one attains salvation. But one pilgrimage there secures for one all merit and company of the truly great. This poem was written in 1850 BC, that is 2300 years before the birth of Islam and Mohammed. A poem which praises the King Vikramaditya was also written by Jirrham Bintoi who had heard from his fathers and grandfathers about Vikramaditya who lived 500 years before him. The fact that Arabs regarded India as their spiritual and cultural motherland long before the damaging influence of Islam is corroborated by the following poem which mentions each one of the four Vedas by name: (Note The English translation) "Aya muwarekal araj yushaiya noha minar Arya-e Wa aradakallaha manyonaifail jikaratun" "Oh the divine land of Aryas (India) (how) very blessed art thou! Because thou art the chosen of God and blessed with knowledge" "Wahalatijali Yatun ainana sahabi akha-atun jikra Wahajayhi yonajjalur -rasu minal HINDATUN " "That celestial knowledge which like four lighthouses shone in such brilliance - through the (utterances of) Indian sages in fourfold abundance." "Wahowa alamus SAMA wal YAJUR minallahay Tanajeelan Fa-e-noma ya akhigo mutiabay-an Yobassheriyona jatun" "Bursting with (Divine) knowledge are SAM & YAJUR bestowed on creation, Hence brothers respect and follow the Vedas, guides to salvation" "Wa-isa nain huma RIG ATHAR nasayhin Ka-a-Khuwatun Wa asant Ala-udan wabowa masha -e-ratun" "Two others, the Rig and Athar teach us fraternity , Sheltering under their lustre dispels darkness till eternity" This poem was written by Labi-Bin-E- Akhtab-Bin-E-Turfa who lived in Arabia around 1850 B.C. That was 2300 years before Mohammed!!! This verse can be found in Sair- Ul-Okul which is an anthology of ancient Arabic poetry. It was compiled in 1742 AD under order of the Turkish Sultan Salim. Interestingly a book called origines, by Sir W Drummond Adds mentions the worship of over 350 different types of Gods in Arab. In the page 439 of the book, it mentions the existence of these Gods in the Kaaba shrine before it was destroyed by Mohammed. Here are the names of the Gods which were originally present in the Kaaba. Arabic | Sanskrit| English Al-Dsaizan | Shani | Saturn Al –ozi or ozza | Oorja | Divine Energy Al Sharak | Shukra| Venus Auds | Uddhav |A friend of Lord Krishna Bag | Bhagwan | God Bajar | Vajra |Indra’s thunder bolt
"Itrasshaphai Santul Vikramtul phehalameen Karimun Bihillahaya Samiminela Motakabbenaran Bihillaha Yubee qaid min howa Yaphakharu phajgal asari nahans Osirim Bayjayholeen Yaha sabdunya Kanateph natephi bijihalin Atadari Bilala masaurateen phakef Tasabahu. Kaunni eja majakaralhada walhada Achimiman, burukan, Kad, Toluho watastaru Bihillaha yakajibainana baleykulle amarena Phaheya jaunabil amaray Vikramitoon" - (S-O, Page 115) which translates as: "Fortunate are those who were born during King Vikrams reign, he was a noble generous, dutiful ruler devoted to the welfare of his subjects. But at that time, We Arabs oblivious of divinity were lost in sensual pleasures. Plotting & torture were rampant. The darkness of ignorance had enveloped our country. Like the lamb struggling for its life in the cruel jaws of a wolf, we Arabs were gripped by ignorance. The whole country was enveloped in a darkness as intense as on a New moon night. But the present dawn & pleasant sunshine of education is the result of the favor of that noble king Vikram whose benevolence did not lose sight of us foreigners as we were. He spread his sacred culture amongst us and sent scholars from his own land whose brilliance shone like that of the sun in our country. These scholars & preceptors through whose benevolence we were once again made aware of the presence of god, introduced to his secret knowledge & put on the road to truth, had come to our country to initiate us in that culture & impart education." Thus we can see that Vedic religion and culture were present in Pre-Islamic Arabia as early as 2,500 B.C., and definitely present at the time of Mohammed's birth. Tyrant402 (talk) 11:40, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
Web results Vedic (Hinduism) influence in Pre-Islamic Arabia - Religions - BooksFact Nomad789 (talk) 06:01, 8 June 2019 (UTC) Please make a research on Hinduism in pre Islamic arabia Nomad789 (talk) 06:03, 8 June 2019 (UTC) Regarding Father of Taekwondo page you had reviewdSir, Since this title in india has become quite controversial and there is a huge confusion regarding the real father of Taekwondo in India and hence forproper information it is required to make a seperate page regarding the issue includin the controversies... Further apart from Times of India, there are other sources like the link of the Awarding Agency and many other Authentic links which authenticates the Information, given here Regards Hi, about Afghanistan page populationHi, on the page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Afghanistan , There are three section about the population are wrong. number one:The population section on the right bar section of the page where it shows 31,575,018. It suppose be 37,135,635 instead of 31,575,018.
number two:The section sentence where it shows "Afghanistan is a unitary presidential Islamic republic with a population of 31 million". it suppose to be 37 million population at least.
number three:Under the demographics section, where it shows"The population of Afghanistan was estimated at 31.6 million in 2018. Of this, 16.1 million are males and 15.5 million females. ". The population of Afghanistan should be 37,135,635.
Here is my reference https://www.worldometers.info/world-population/afghanistan-population/ Can you change the three section that I mentioned? 37,135,635 or 37 million is the most updated information of Afghanistan population currently. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 198.178.118.50 (talk) 12:26, 30 May 2019 (UTC)
Also, about the page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tajiks , I cannot edit it due to semiprotected. Can you also make some change please? On the right corner Afghanistan section: currently Afghanistan population are 37,135,840, my reference for Afghanistan population are (https://www.populationpyramid.net/afghanistan/2019/) and https://www.cia.gov/library/publications/the-world-factbook/geos/af.html). my reference for Afghanistan ethnic group composition are (http://www.gavilan.edu/geca/Honors_English_II/Honors_English_II/The_Kite_Runner_files/Ethnicities%20in%20Afghanistan.pdf) . Therefore,27% of 37,135,840 should be 10,026,676. While 33% of 37,135,840 is 12,254,827. Can you change it either to 10,026,676 or 12,254,827? Or 10 million or 12.2 million is fine. On the right corner Tajikstan section: currently Tajikistan population are 9,275,827, my reference for Tajikistan population are (https://www.britannica.com/place/Tajikistan)( https://www.worldometers.info/world-population/tajikistan-population/)(https://www.populationpyramid.net/tajikistan/2019/), my reference for Tajikistan ethnic group composition are https://www.indexmundi.com/tajikistan/ethnic_groups.html). Therefore, 84.3% of 9275,827 should be 7,819,488. Can you change it to either 7,819,488 or 7.8 million? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 198.178.118.50 (talk) 12:49, 31 May 2019 (UTC)
Hi!Hi! Sorry to bother you.
GA re-nomination of Succession to MuhammadHi. I just wanted to let you know that I'm going to re-nominate Succession to Muhammad for a GA review. Since you had performed the initial review last month, I was wondering if you'd be interested in doing this one as well? I think I managed to incorporate all your suggestions and I also did a fairly extensive re-write to fix the WP:NPOV issues (I wrote a breakdown of all my changes in the article Talk Page if you're interested, but just to warn you, it's a pretty long read!). I know this is a pretty big ask, so I understand if you don't really have time to do the review. In any case, I really appreciated your earlier suggestions, so thank you.
Your GA nomination of AfghanistanHi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article Afghanistan you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. Your GA nomination of AfghanistanThe article Afghanistan you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold Your GA nomination of AfghanistanThe article Afghanistan you nominated as a good article has failed Request on 22:09:40, 7 October 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Candi Jones
Could you please help in making the Draft: J. Long acceptable for publication? Candi Jones (talk) 22:09, 7 October 2019 (UTC) Candi Jones (talk) 22:09, 7 October 2019 (UTC)
Oh thank you! I didn’t see this, but I just resubmitted it. Thank you for all your help! Candi Jones (talk) 20:20, 10 October 2019 (UTC) Graveyard of empires and sikhs.Vandalism have been done. The term (graveyard of empires) should be re written. That is very important, and sikh empire never peneterated afghanistans current borders.Also the location have been changed from central/south asia (which was correct) to south asia. Fix that please. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2001:4643:C8EC:0:A0C1:4101:5938:F980 (talk) 14:45, 11 October 2019 (UTC)
I agree but the opening section information is about the empires that have invaded Afghanistan, keeping the tone of article in mind sikh empire doesnt fit in (which invaded peshawer and parts of frontier). And the nickname is a very "popular" phrase about history of Afghanistan with regarding the wars and invasions (which was already in the article before being deleted). I hope further changes are made. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2001:4643:C8EC:0:39DD:5A0B:82DC:80D4 (talk) 21:14, 26 October 2019 (UTC) You didnt responded to my suggestion. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2001:4643:C8EC:0:1D78:A5CD:9E59:3D17 (talk) 20:18, 9 November 2019 (UTC)
The changes are still not made. Hope you will find time to fix it sooner. Thanks. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2001:4643:C8EC:0:F9CC:88B:18EB:B769 (talk) 20:07, 1 December 2019 (UTC)
I saw it. Thank you for your contribution — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2001:4643:C8EC:0:AD66:BAC5:FF3:D59E (talk) 19:33, 11 December 2019 (UTC) |
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