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JIDFHi, this page is currently semi-protected for a month. I'm trying to take advantage of this to fix some long standing problems. I'm going through section by section making proposed changes. Feel free to comment or provide suggestions of your own.--Peter cohen (talk) 17:06, 5 January 2010 (UTC) AfD nomination of Street fightingAn editor has nominated one or more articles which you have created or worked on, for deletion. The nominated article is Street fighting. We appreciate your contributions, but the nominator doesn't believe that the article satisfies Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion and has explained why in his/her nomination (see also Wikipedia:Notability and "What Wikipedia is not"). Your opinions on whether the article meets inclusion criteria and what should be done with the article are welcome; please participate in the discussion(s) by adding your comments to Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Street fighting. Please be sure to sign your comments with four tildes (~~~~). You may also edit the article during the discussion to improve it but should not remove the articles for deletion template from the top of the article; such removal will not end the deletion debate. Please note: This is an automatic notification by a bot. I have nothing to do with this article or the deletion nomination, and can't do anything about it. --Erwin85Bot (talk) 01:04, 14 January 2010 (UTC) greetingsJust thought I'd introduce myself, so that the tone of my last comment on Talk:Gilad Atzon wouldn't be mistaken as personal, or belligerent. By the way, I love your photo on your user page. ;-) Nice work.--Abie the Fish Peddler (talk) 17:55, 15 January 2010 (UTC) Category for deletion: Your opinion neededThere is a category which is being discussed for deletion which I see great use in. It is: Category:Musicians who have served in the military. I wonder if you would check it out, and offer your opinion, either way, "Keep" or "Delete", here. (As I don't know you very well, I hope you will let me know whether you find such a request inappropriate.)--Abie the Fish Peddler (talk) 01:06, 16 January 2010 (UTC) Discussion invitationIkip 05:06, 28 January 2010 (UTC) (refactored) Ikip 04:08, 1 February 2010 (UTC) I was wondering if you could take a look at this article and help improve it if you get the time. Thanks. Viriditas (talk) 00:50, 1 February 2010 (UTC) I offer a sincere apology if you feel I stepped on your toes. My only intention was to stop an edit war and encourage a discussion that had already begun on the article's Talk page. — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 20:39, 5 February 2010 (UTC)
Intimidation will get you nowhereI made no personal attacks against you on the talk page. -- 72.219.191.45 (talk) 20:25, 13 February 2010 (UTC)
CRU article nameHello, I am writing you this message because you have participated in the RfC regarding the name of the Climatic Research Unit hacking incident article. As the previous discussion didn't actually propose a name, it was unfocused and didn't result in any measurable consensus. I have opened a new discussion on the same page, between the existing name and the proposed name Climatic Research Unit documents controversy. I have asked that no alternate names are proposed at this time. Please make your opinion known here. Thanks, Oren0 (talk) 05:49, 16 February 2010 (UTC)
Dartmouth College v. WoodwardI responded on the talk page you moved this discussion to.Tstrobaugh (talk) 00:25, 21 February 2010 (UTC)
Libertarianism (disambiguation)Moved here. CarolMooreDC (talk) 17:52, 23 February 2010 (UTC) Final discussion for Wikipedia:Requests for comment/Biographies of living peopleHello, I note that you have commented on the first phase of Wikipedia:Requests for comment/Biographies of living people As this RFC closes, there are two proposals being considered:
Your opinion on this is welcome. Okip 02:05, 24 February 2010 (UTC) A simple formulaHi Carol! I've been trying to avoid the headache of the policy pages, so haven't been paying much attention lately, but I did notice your comment earlier. I fully agree. I think policy should be as easy to understand as possible, and tied together more. For accuracy, if I were to try to make it clearer, I would say: By fact we mean attributes that can be verified and double checked. By value or opinion, on the other hand, we mean principles, ideas, beliefs or conclusions, which may be subject to dispute.’’ I think that not only complies with the spirit of the policies, but also with the sourced definitions. Personally, I'd sum all of the policies up in one "parent article," to clarify how they all interconnect, but that's just my opinion. Anyway, thanks. Zaereth (talk) 22:17, 23 March 2010 (UTC)
Libertarianism articleDefining the details and history of Libertarianism is fine and dandy, but if people don't understand the train of thought that goes on inside libertarians, then ignorance will surely continue to cloud their minds. That is why I advocate with strong conviction the addition of quotes, poetry, motto's, slogans, and whole passages that expound upon the very logic and emotion of what Libertarianism is. --174.23.200.192 (talk) 10:24, 10 April 2010 (UTC) —Preceding unsigned comment added by 174.23.200.192 (talk) 10:23, 10 April 2010 (UTC)
Hi there. You posted a note on my talk page, but I don't think it applies to me. Someone else removed the contents of the lead. Torchiest (talk | contribs) 15:32, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
Sami Al-Arian
I left a message on the Israel Palestine Collaboration/Current Article Issues page about both the Al-Arian and Emerson articles, but I'm not sure that was the right place to post. You mentioned before about alerting several people to this issue. I know you may not want get involved personally at this point, but I would appreciate it if you could alert anybody you feel may share the same concerns as you and I. There are literally dozens of articles dealing with Muslim organizations and issues that are now heavily biased. annoynmous 00:16, 27 April 2010 (UTC)
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Laozi libertarianHi there. There is currently a discussion occurring about whether Murray Rothbard's description of Lao Tzu as a libertarian should be included in the Laozi lead, article body, or both. I think your input would be valuable, as you're able to overcome your personal biases in favor of appropriate weight and neutrality. Go here to join the discussion. Thanks! Torchiest (talk | contribs) 12:45, 12 May 2010 (UTC) Re: Gilad AtzmonHi. I was wondering if you could give me a very brief bullet list of essential things missing or needing removal. I say this because if looks to me as if the politics/Allegations of antisemitism section is already too large and could use some trimming. Viriditas (talk) 04:22, 12 May 2010 (UTC)
Hi Carol, I decided not to invest any more time in that discussion with Darkstar, but it's of no consequence. You know how the game works. Whoever's willing to put in the time at Google Scholar and find reliable sources to back up the content they want to see in the article wins. I find talk page discussions, especially extended talk page discussions, to be of little use in most cases, unless one just wants to debate. Tisane talk/stalk 21:57, 15 June 2010 (UTC)
Hello Ms Carol I hope your doing good and all is wellJust checking in with you.. I hope your doing well and all is good. hey I was still looking to correspond with you off line and reason and logic to the idea of freedom. I simply adore your insights.LoveMonkey (talk) 04:06, 17 June 2010 (UTC)
The Circle of Iron.LoveMonkey (talk) 02:04, 18 June 2010 (UTC)
Your question at WT:IPCOLLI replied there. As for the tool, it's http://toolserver.org/~mzmcbride/watcher/. (I would like to keep the tools discussion out of the award section, which is already bigger than some people's attention span.) — Sebastian 03:38, 17 June 2010 (UTC) (Please reply on this page. I'll be watching it for a while.)
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Check out the new things that the Smithsonian is offering us! Sadads (talk) 15:44, 22 June 2010 (UTC) ANIThis message has been sent to inform you about a discussion at WP:ANI. The thread is WP:ANI#Request for community ban of Darkstar1st. Thank you. TFD (talk) 03:55, 23 June 2010 (UTC) Libertarianism
Thanks for the encouragement. I don't have an ideological axe to grind but I think an article reflecting all views has much to recommend it, and at least there shouldn't be change to a narrower article without a full discussion and consensus. I think the problem is that contributors with an interest in and knowledge of "left" libertarianism seem to have gone AWOL a while ago. Unfortunately I don't have a lot of time to invest in the article, but I try to keep an eye on it.
Good idea. Would need to think about the appropriate wording. Go ahead if you can think of one. Iota (talk) 12:47, 24 June 2010 (UTC)
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Proposed deletion of NontheismSee: Wikipedia:Articles_for_deletion/Nontheism. Greetings, I see that you have chosen to conspicuously identify as a "Nontheistic Wikipedian" Me too! Currently there is a proposal to delete the article Nontheism or merge and redirect it to Atheism. Greg Bard (talk) 22:24, 3 July 2010 (UTC) Wikipedia Campus AmbassadorHi there, my name is Annie Lin; I am the Campus Team Coordinator for the Wikimedia Foundation. I am emailing you because Wikimedia is launching a new project (the "Public Policy Initiative") for the 2010-2011 academic year and is currently looking for dedicated Wikipedians near the George Washington University and Georgetown University areas to serve as the project's Campus Ambassadors, and I thought you might be interested. More details about the Wikipedia Campus Ambassador role can be found at http://outreach.wikimedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_Campus_Ambassador. Here is also a little bit more information; in a nutshell: The Campus Ambassadors are crucial components of the Wikipedia Public Policy Initiative. Volunteers in this role will mainly be in charge of providing face-to-face training and support for professors and students on Wikipedia-related skills, such as how to create new articles, how to add images, how the talk pages work, etc. Campus Ambassadors will also help recruit other people on campus to contribute to Wikipedia articles, for example by setting up Wikipedia-related student groups and by organizing "Welcome to Wikipedia" social events. In general they will become known as Wikipedia experts on the university campus (in your case, on the GWU or Georgetown University campus). The estimated time commitment for this role is 3-5 hours a week, possibly slightly more at the very beginning and very end of the semester. The Wikimedia Foundation will hold a mandatory three-day training for all Campus Ambassadors in August, and will continue to stay in contact with and offer full support for the Campus Ambassadors throughout the academic semester. Please let me know if this is something that sounds interesting to you, so we can talk about next steps in the application process. Feel free to respond on my talk page or email me (alin@wikimedia.org). Thanks, and I look forward to hearing back from you! Alin (Public Policy) (talk) 18:43, 8 July 2010 (UTC)
Mediation: Israel and the Apartheid analogyJust an FYI, we are running a straw poll on title choices on the mediation page - see Wikipedia:Mediation_Cabal/Cases/2010-04-14/Israel_and_the_apartheid_analogy#Straw_poll_on_titles. If you pitch in a vote or three, we can move this along. --Ludwigs2 06:04, 12 July 2010 (UTC)
LibertarianismQuoting carol else where: Libertarianism means many things to many people and any one faction trying to enforce their view, especially with little discussion of WP:RS, really is working against wikipedia policies. CarolMooreDC (talk) 12:32, 19 July 2010 (UTC)
Mass Killings caused by CapitalismHuh... It's hard not to wonder whether you looked at the article in question at all - now renamed Mass Killings caused by Capitalism. You might also be interested in the comment I just made at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Mass killings under Communist regimes (3rd nomination) (which you already !voted keep on). It's in the Merge section.diff Rd232 talk 21:40, 17 July 2010 (UTC)
Libertarianism vs AnarchismSo you're a Libertarian! Surprise surprise! It's really kind of amazing how we can both think of ourselves as Libertarians yet have such conflicting views on the subject. Here's my guess as to why our views are so divergent. From my perspective...Libertarianism is based on the Harm Principle while for you it's entirely based on individual freedoms. Is that correct? Removing the Harm Principle from the equation I can see how it might be easy for you to connect Libertarianism and Anarchism. In our current society...would you say most men do not rape women because A. they lack the inclination or B. they have strong moral principles or C. they fear going to prison (where they themselves would be raped)? History is riddled with enough examples where we can easily rule out the first possibility. The second possibility is a little trickier. From the Christian perspective...Jesus is willing to forgive any sins as long as you repent. Personally I would rule that one out as well. The third possibility seems the strongest. Nobody wants to have all their freedoms taken away. Yet, even with that powerful disincentive...rape still frequently occurs in our society. Taking the United States for example, according to Rape statistics...in 2005 there were 191,670 victims of rape or sexual assault. In my Libertarian society...there would still be police, court systems and prisons...so the statistics wouldn't be that different. What about in your Libertarian society? --97.93.109.174 (talk) 20:23, 19 July 2010 (UTC)
thanks for your patienceI am surprised by the patience you've shown on the 'libertarianism' page, I can't even begin to emulate it! How do you talk to people who wouldn't do their 'homework'? I would have said, "to hell with you", and left the discussion long ago. So I thank you for, in effect, fighting for me too. Niku N6n (talk) 04:49, 21 July 2010 (UTC)
RTLampPlease stop. Just stop. — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 16:57, 21 July 2010 (UTC)
Umm ... thought this was strangeI saw this edit, and thought maybe you would find it of interest: [2]. Maybe it's nothing, or maybe it's old news to you. Cheers. BigK HeX (talk) 05:11, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
The Four Deuces vs TFD confusingSorry for any confusion by my change of signature, but it did not seem to confuse anyone else. TFD (talk) 23:17, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
Bastin's proposal on Libertarianism pageHello, Bastin says that minarchism and anarcho-capitalism should better be merged (on the libertarianism page) as they share the same ideology/theory/people, etc. Here anarcho-capitalism would be one end of the spectrum, and this merged entry would be the primary modern-day american version of libertarianism. If you and other long-timers agree, this is a good time to harness Bastin for this work! I don't think it would hurt the interests of Austrian-school version of Libertarianism. Bastin seems to be aware of what he/she is talking about. But you have to consider how this would evolve in the future. Later someone can claim that Rothbard's views are an "extreme point" and thus do not deserve a place on the libertarianism page. Cheers! N6n (talk) 08:13, 29 July 2010 (UTC)
User:RTLampThe new userpage he posted is pretty benign as such things go, and isn't really actionable. As for additional insults - He's had several final warnings, so if he posts anything else you should report him. But, to be honest, the best way to end this situation might be to deny him an audience. Ignore him, and he may well go away. I'll watchlist his pages, to be safe. Happy editing, UltraExactZZ Said ~ Did 12:10, 3 August 2010 (UTC)
Hey, just in case you missed it, there is an oppurtunity to get a free dinner this Tuesday August 11 and a chance to meet and hang out talk about Wikipedia:WikiProject United States Public Policy and WP:GLAM/SI. Sorry that this is so late in the game, I was hoping the e-mail would be a better form of contact for active members (if you want to get on the e-mail list send me an User e-mail ). Hope that you can attend, User:Sadads (talk)11:40, 9 August 2010 (UTC) LibertarianismPlease do not remove maintenance templates from pages on Wikipedia, as you did to Libertarianism, without resolving the problem that the template refers to, or giving a valid reason for the removal in the edit summary. Your removal of this template does not appear constructive, and has been reverted. Thank you. Just a reminder. The tag states that the article may lack a single coherent topic, so if you disagree, please discuss it on the Talk page in the section I started when I created the tag, don't just revert and comment in the summary edit. If it turns out I'm the only one who feels this way, I will remove it myself. If you need to respond specifically about this reminder, please do so here. Otherwise, we should continue discussion at http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Libertarianism#Incoherent_topic_maintenance_tag. Thanks. --Born2cycle (talk) 21:50, 10 August 2010 (UTC)
Discussion on closure of Israel and Aparthied mediationCurrent consensus seems to be to move the article to Israel and Apartheid with an appropriate disambiguation line to prevent any misinterpretations. Please weigh in over the next few days. --Ludwigs2 17:14, 11 August 2010 (UTC) Add a !vote in mediation?Carol: FYI: I notice you replied in Wikipedia:Mediation Cabal/Cases/2010-04-14/Israel and the apartheid analogy, but I think the mediator wanted replies in the bottom-most section of the page, where the "check marks" and "X"s are. So you may want to move your comment down into that bottommost section. --Noleander (talk) 19:29, 11 August 2010 (UTC) Hello Carol, your most recent comment on the Cabal page doesn't have a signature on it. ← ZScarpia 13:25, 18 August 2010 (UTC) Patience running out, tooI noticed that you seem to be running out yourself. I may begin an RFC/USER for Darkstar1st if he continues to make these crazy edits based on wild speculation, instead of WP:RS. Just a bit of advance notice, since you've mentioned that you're not available a whole lot for the time being. BigK HeX (talk) 05:43, 21 August 2010 (UTC)
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LibertarianismYou may wish to comment on a posting at ANI.[3] TFD (talk) 16:26, 4 September 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for your current interventions on Talk. I agree with your editorial concept of "even the ones I don't like." This article has been such a fussy one over time. At the back of my head there's a perfectly good article produced by collaborative consensus editing; which seems to be obliterated by POV pushing. What puzzles me in particular is the current POV push seems to be focused around the issue of minarchist versus anarchist positions within the pro-property ideologies / movements! I feel like in a few minutes respective POV pushers will start pulling out Trotskite grade insults for each other :) Fifelfoo (talk) 16:23, 8 September 2010 (UTC)
Conflict of interesta report has been filed here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Conflict_of_interest/Noticeboard#user:carolmooredc_writing_a_book_and_using_wp_to_make_her_pov Darkstar1st (talk) 09:52, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
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KarmaiskingDon't be afraid to revert him. Once a user is community banned, any editor may revert their edits, including you. Yworo (talk) 16:01, 7 September 2010 (UTC)
I/P Coll ArchiveHi Carol I noticed the thread about the founding myths of Zionism is not on the talk page or in the archives.[4] harlan (talk) 00:04, 8 September 2010 (UTC)
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KiKOne of the key ways to spot a KiK ip is to geolocate - if it's Australia, it's probably him. That 64.x ip on Libertarianism was from Texas, and very probably was not KiK. Could have been a sock of someone else or (AGF) a new user. Ravensfire (talk) 02:40, 11 September 2010 (UTC)
Lede workGood edit. I prefer avoiding dicdefs, but I understand the spirit. Could you check the section I added for a Main article for Libertarian Socialism? I edited down the lede of that article to the most pertinent bits for Libertarianism, but may have cut too little. (Another reason to have good ledes, they make for good content to enter into other articles where there's cross linkages like this). Fifelfoo (talk) 13:21, 13 September 2010 (UTC)
DeletionistYworo doesn't actually seem to be a deletionist. Yworo has actually opposed the deletionist proposals in many of the previous RfCs. BigK HeX (talk) 14:05, 18 September 2010 (UTC)
Relaible sourcesI set up a discussion thread about The Independent Political Report at RSN.[5] Since you introduced a previous discussion thread your comments may be helpful. It appears to be informed and neutral and covers stories that do not appear in other sources, so if it is a reliable source it could be helpful for some articles. TFD (talk) 14:52, 20 September 2010 (UTC) Hi. As you recently commented in the straw poll regarding the ongoing usage and trial of Pending changes, this is to notify you that there is an interim straw poll with regard to keeping the tool switched on or switching it off while improvements are worked on and due for release on November 9, 2010. This new poll is only in regard to this issue and sets no precedent for any future usage. Your input on this issue is greatly appreciated. Off2riorob (talk) 23:29, 20 September 2010 (UTC) LibertarianismHi, CMDC - I'm happy to mediate at Libertarianism, but I know we had a conflict in the distant past on an unrelated issue. If I'm acceptable to you (and the others), I'm certain I could help. If I'm not acceptable to you, please say so wherever and I'll step aside. Hipocrite (talk) 14:03, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
Re:Wait, you were watching my talk? :P
HiNoticed your post about two years ago on the BLP talk page and I just posted a similar question / proposal here. Sorry to see that your question never got a reply, and I am hoping we can get more traction this time. Your thoughts on the topic would be appreciated. Thanks. 7 07:33, 14 October 2010 (UTC)
Legality[broken anchor] discussionCould you have a look at the legality[broken anchor] discussion? There appears to be a working consensus for proposal 2 emerging. I'm not sure what the next stage should be. In your opinion, should we close the discussion now and declare consensus, or use the outcome as a basis for the next stage of the process? PhilKnight (talk) 20:46, 2 November 2010 (UTC)
Need you to take a look at thisHey, there has been a very long discussion here: [6], can you go through this entire discussion and see if there is consensus? Its important that you take a look at the arguments. I believe there is consensus for proposal two, and that the majority support it. --Supreme Deliciousness (talk) 20:59, 2 November 2010 (UTC)
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You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{Talkback}} or {{Tb}} template. Where angels fear to treadThank you for the invitation to look at Jewish control of the media. First impression: tricky. I'm not at all sure I want to put my head over the parapet there. I think I would be tempted to re-write the first sentence to read something like:
(where the latter is a made-up quote, but no doubt it should be possible to source something similar). It also might be worth thinking about changing the article name to Allegations of Jewish control of the media. Yes, I know that other articles in the series don't start "allegations of...", and there are reasons to go for the simpler title and not change; but I think this changed title would make where the article is coming from, and the scope intended, much more immediately apparent. Thoughts It seems to me that there are two underlying issues both of which we need to be careful about when writing the article. Firstly, there is that this is a slur which has been used again and again to do a lot of damage; so people (quite rightly) are going to want the article to make very clear that Wikipedia has no truck with it. Secondly, however, there are also sensitivities about the media presentation of Israel, in particular whether some groups, that have a particular view of what it means to be pro-Israel, are sometimes alleged to have achieved (or to be attempting to exert) hegemonistic control of presentation of that issue, with considerable power to marginalise other views. I'm certainly not saying that that is necessarily the reality of the situation; but it is a legitimate discussion that can be had in good faith, which WP has to be seen to be above, and presenting neutrally, rather than taking a side. Strictly speaking, as discussed in the article Jewish lobby, even if that were the case, it wouldn't be "Jewish" control of the media. Jewish views are actually much more diverse than that. But even AIPAC have been known to occasionally forget that, and say "Jewish lobby" when they mean "Israel lobby" (or perhaps even more accurately that should be "AIPAC-compatible take on Israel lobby"). So I think we do have to be quite careful with how we write the article, because these ideas can get blurred, to make it clear that we're not simply endorsing talking-points for those taking a particular advocacy role in the second discussion. Fortunately, WP's diverse reams of advice and policy have some good advice about how to put some critical distance between WP and the issues we cover. In particular, two standard good bits of advice come to mind. 1) There's no need to say "Hitler was a bad man". Instead, stick to the more concrete issues of what the man did, let the evidence pile up, so then the reader can decided. 2) Emotive labels: again, try to avoid them, and merely set out what the facts are in cold prose. Or, if such a label is important to the discussion, put it in a sourced viewpoint quote.
This is a very strong statement, that slams the door on any discussion of the issue in any context at any time. It sounds like the "voice of Wikipedia" actively imposing a line. I think it is too strident, particularly if people feel it is WP taking a position on issue 2 above. I also have reservations about the word "canard" used quite so bluntly. It's a very rhetorical word, which makes me think of somebody making a speech to consciously put over a particular position. So I don't think it hits quite the [Register (sociolinguistics)|register]] for a serious, sober Wikipedia article. Hence my suggestion of a different opening line -- one that firmly connects the slur with antisemitism as a historical fact, introduces the key phrase antisemitic canard with its important link, and emphasises that it is seen still to be at work in the world today; but places those last two points in the voice of an attributable source, rather than WP laying down the law. I think this revised sentence still sets out the article's stall well, but does so in a way that nobody could accuse of being in any way not NPOV. Yes, it leaves people to click through if they want a detailed explanation of what a "canard" is, but so be it. I'd then use the word "allegation" instead of "canard" throughout the rest of the article.
These two sentences seem particularly problematic. In the first, the article seems to be aligning itself firmly with a list of people who have made it their agenda to oppose suggestions that the media may identify itself too closely with the hawks in Israeli politics. In the second sentence, the article seems to be laying down that even making that claim is an example of anti-semitism. This is well outside what is acceptable per WP:NPOV. The main section in the article dealing with this aspect of the question is also pretty much of a mess. In my view, this "Coverage of Israel" section should be moved after the analysis and commentary section (because I think it has to be addressed in an analytical framework, rather than just listing asssertions); and the section needs to start by framing the debate in NPOV terms as to whether those aligning themselves with a particular view in Israeli politics have managed to achieve a hegemonic power in American discourse. The article should of course make the point that even if that were to be the case, it would be to wrong to call it "Jewish" control. But in my view when people do say "Jewish lobby" or "Jewish viewpoint" rather than "Israeli right viewpoint" or "pro Israeli-right lobby", most of the time it's probably due to a not-thought-through verbal shorthand clumsiness rather than actual antisemitism. So the verbal infelicity should certainly be flagged; but that shouldn't take away from that it's whether or not there's an excessively uncritical of Israel viewpoint in the media that is the real topic of discussion and most likely the real issue of concern being expressed in such remarks. Anyhow, that's some initial thoughts on the article, no doubt not-sufficiently-thought-through and verbally clumsy. Jheald (talk) 23:56, 22 November 2010 (UTC) Carol. I don't do much editing nowadays on Wikipedia. This article doesn't particularly interest me. I am more interested in Western systemic bias, and keep an eye on that article to revert vandalism. --Timeshifter (talk) 00:43, 23 November 2010 (UTC)
YGMHi Carol, you have mail, regards. Off2riorob (talk) 16:40, 27 November 2010 (UTC)
Jewish control of the media: ScopeI hear you saying, I'm content to just fix the obvious organizational, WP:RS, BLP, WP:synth (when they appear) problems that make the article WP:POV. However, it would be very useful to understand whether you agree that moving analysis of Jewish influence in the media to a separate article would be helpful to deal with these problems. I feel like I've posed this question several times, and perhaps due to your disputes with others, still don't really know your answer.--Carwil (talk) 13:23, 10 December 2010 (UTC)
Oren Ben-DorHi Carol, I'm just getting my feet wet as an editor, and I was hoping to take a crack at expanding the stub on Ben-Dor. But I wasn't able to find substantial coverage beyond his own writings, so I switched gears and nominated the page for AFD. In hindsight, I probably should have approached you first with my concerns about his notability. I apologize if I acted too rashly. In any event, the AFD discussion page is up. I look forward to your input. Scaleshombre (talk) 09:57, 11 December 2010 (UTC)
Notice of discussionYou were mentioned in passing at Wikipedia:Administrators'_noticeboard/Incidents#Discussion_of_Scope_at_Talk:Libertarianism and may wish to attend to it. Fifelfoo (talk) 01:04, 21 December 2010 (UTC)
Seems like things are picking up again at United States and state terrorism. There is a new editor who was originally going to push for the 10th deletion discussion, but it seems like I've at least motivated him not to waste everyone's time there. But now he's trying to tag the article as POV/Synth without explaining why the tags should stay up, other than the usual vague explanation along the lines of: "This article is totally biased. It's citing leftie nutjobs like Chomsky instead of unbiased people (i.e. everyone who unconditionally supports the U.S. government).". I see that you were involved in a discussion about removing unjustified tags a while back, and thought you might be interested. -- Jrtayloriv (talk) 23:05, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
Scratch outsHowdy, I fixed your scratch-out at the RM for Allegations of Jewish control of the media. Ya accidently scratced out many others posts. GoodDay (talk) 15:54, 30 December 2010 (UTC) Your recent commentIn my opinion it's generally best to very carefully avoid commenting on the content & not the contributor everywhere on Wikipedia and especially on sensitive topics like this one. So I don't think that a comment like "some people are so paranoid thinking that the simple title supports the allegation, they freak out" is helpful. There's a reason why topics like anti-semitism, racism, Islamophobia, etc. get people upset: because there are currently living people, some of them Wikipedia editors, who have suffered from such things. That has no relevance to how we should name an article, of course, but it's very relevant in how we should deal with & describe our fellow editors. Thanks for your understanding and all your hard work on Wikipedia this year, and wishing you a happy New Year!CordeliaNaismith (talk) 16:32, 30 December 2010 (UTC)
Activism on WikipediaSomebody has emailed me evidence that you are an Anti-Israeli activist. Is it true that you are involved in that type of activity? Do you think it is appropriate to import your real world campaigns into Wikipedia? I recommend reading an essay I started a couple years ago: Wikipedia:Advocacy. Jehochman Talk 17:16, 30 December 2010 (UTC)
ANI NoticeThere is currently a discussion at Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Incidents regarding an issue with which you may have been involved. Jehochman Talk 17:56, 30 December 2010 (UTC)
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