User talk:Anne Delong/Archive 8
This the archive of messages posted on Anne Delong's talk page, July to September, 2014. A barnstar for you! RAoKB
BlitzHey Anne! Mind helping this submitter out? See User talk:FoCuSandLeArN#Blitz. Appreciated, FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 18:47, 3 July 2014 (UTC)t Hello, thank you for your help with the Blitzkid page. Very helpful, very appreciated. Bluegrass huh? I'm going to check that out... after I get done with this project, lol. Keithramone33 (talk) 02:54, 4 July 2014 (UTC)Keithramone33
Keithramone33 (talk) 20:10, 26 July 2014 (UTC)Keithramone33
Here are three pages that I had accepted when I first joined Wikipedia. Dixie Flyers is a well-known and long-standing bluegrass band. The other two, Toronto Light Opera Association and Mandolin Society of Peterborough, are amateur musical groups, but the articles were accepted because reliable sources (mostly in newspapers) were found to back up all of the information. Because they are not long pages, there are fewer facts to back up! Okay, all of this as just my own opinion, so make of it what you will. —Anne Delong (talk) 03:03, 27 July 2014 (UTC)
Keithramone33 (talk)Keithramone33 — Preceding undated comment added 03:38, 27 July 2014 (UTC)
Article for Creation DeclinedI can't read the web site in detail, but I can tell that it is an attack web site against Wikipedia. I don't know if it is attacking the English Wikipedia or the French Wikipedia. I would consider it to be unreliable and biased (although its purpose is to claim that Wikipedia is non-neutral and biased). I would advise you to stay out of that morass. That is my advice. If you want to poke around in other declined articles, go ahead, but that one may be a minefield. Robert McClenon (talk) 15:12, 4 July 2014 (UTC)
About Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Alain RiazueloI saw your question on the noticeboard and added a comment to the article saying that he isn't well enough known and the material belongs in Bogdanov affair instead (as it is in the French version of the article). Riazuelo was editing that article during the controversy in 2005 but was not part of Wikipedia:Requests for arbitration/Regarding The Bogdanov Affair, though Igor Bogdanov was banned. StarryGrandma (talk) 01:52, 5 July 2014 (UTC)
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I'm trying to get the NYLO Hotel page approved, but it is saying it isn't noteworthy enough. I have updated the page with more than 20 news sources discussing NYLO Hotels both positively and negatively. I'd like the page reviewed again if possible. Thank you! Hello, Tanner Thurman. Finding those sources is a good start. Can you please look through them and remove any that are (1) press releases or other text written by someone connected with the company, and (2) blog, wordpress or forum postings, since these are considered to be personal rather than professional publications. You can probably spot these more accurately than I can. Now comes the hard part. The text in this article seems very polished and promotional, the kind of thing that would be written by the company PR department for a company brochure. It's full of travel industry jargon and what Wikipedians call "peacock words", such as "dynamic", "dramatic", "cutting edge", "hottest venues" and many more. Perhaps you are unaware that encyclopedia articles just contain neutral facts. Very little of what you have written is acceptable. The article shouldn't be telling the readers why they should stay at these hotels, or how wonderful the founders are – that's advertising, and I'm sure the company has its own web site for that. What's wanted are bare facts – When and where and by whom was the company was founded? Where is it's head office? Is it a private or public company? Have there been expansions, mergers, financing, etc. that have been reported in the news? When and where was the first hotel was built and what size was it? How many hotels are there now and what countries are they in? etc. The text that you have submitted and your desire for speedy acceptance leads me to believe that you may be connected in some way with the hotel chain and have a conflict of interest here. Please read WP:COI. It's often the case that closely connected editors find it very difficult or even impossible to write as though they were a neutral party. —Anne Delong (talk) 20:32, 11 July 2014 (UTC) afcI may be missing something, buy the tag reads that you marked Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Alessandro Rebucci for deletion as a copyvio of Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Alessandro Rebucci . Presumably you mean a copyvio of something else? (If it is, tell me so I an fix it, because he seems to be notable) Some of it seems to be a very close parapharas of http://www.iadb.org/en/research-and-data/alessandro-rebucci-principal-research-economist,6351.html?au_id=1071&bios=n, but that part is easy enough to omit. DGG ( talk ) 16:25, 12 July 2014 (UTC)
Please comment on Talk:YesAllWomenGreetings! You have been randomly selected to receive an invitation to participate in the request for comment on Talk:YesAllWomen. Should you wish to respond to the invitation, your contribution to this discussion will be very much appreciated! If in doubt, please see suggestions for responding. If you do not wish to receive these types of notices, please remove your name from Wikipedia:Feedback request service. — Legobot (talk) 00:07, 13 July 2014 (UTC) Proposal re June BEDThere is a proposal at Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Articles for creation/June 2014 Backlog Elimination Drive#We need a conclusion that merits your consideration Fiddle Faddle 16:51, 14 July 2014 (UTC) Your draft article, User:Saldor/Smart Package ManagerHello Anne Delong. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "Smart Package Manager". The page will shortly be deleted. If you plan on editing the page to address the issues raised when it was declined and resubmit it, simply If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you want to retrieve it, copy this code: Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 15:03, 17 July 2014 (UTC) Help on new articleGood day, i was hoping you could help on this article i have been trying to get approval on for over a year now. thanks in anticipation — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ola olus (talk • contribs) 10:51, 18 July 2014 (UTC) Hello, Ola olus. I examined the references in the article, and here's what I found:
This man has been in the news fairly frequently. Can you perhaps cite some of these articles to improve the referencing, particularly in the sections that have no citations? I know little of Nigeria, so you will know better than I which ones are respected news sources there. Taking out some of the unsuitable references and replacing them with better ones would make a big improvement in the article.
—Anne Delong (talk) 15:32, 20 July 2014 (UTC) ThanksThank Anne Delong for your support. It really came in handy. I've done the corrections Magnus Kpakol and hoping to get approval this time. Thank all the same. Anne Delong Please comment on Template talk:Infobox personGreetings! You have been randomly selected to receive an invitation to participate in the request for comment on Template talk:Infobox person. Should you wish to respond to the invitation, your contribution to this discussion will be very much appreciated! If in doubt, please see suggestions for responding. If you do not wish to receive these types of notices, please remove your name from Wikipedia:Feedback request service. — Legobot (talk) 00:08, 19 July 2014 (UTC) Help PleaseHello Anne Delong, I found you from Teahouse. I want to change my username. I went through several wiki pages but I found it really confusing what to do. Will you please help me change my username with step by step process in simple terms and languages so that I can understand. Thank you! Hello, Asheshneupane95. I'm not sure than I can explain it any more simply than just following the numbered steps at Wikipedia:Changing username/Simple. I've never done it myself, but it seems as though, after checking the items on the list, you just click where it says "Click here to place your request.", fill in your old name, your new name and the reason for the change, and then save. By the way: Don't forget to sign your posts by typing four tildes (~); it only takes a moment, and it's important to help others communicate with you. Also, please remember to add edit summaries when you edit articles or talk pages; these are an important because they show how articles developed, and what topics are being discussed on the talk pages. —Anne Delong (talk) 13:17, 22 July 2014 (UTC) Please comment on Template talk:High trafficGreetings! You have been randomly selected to receive an invitation to participate in the request for comment on Template talk:High traffic. Should you wish to respond to the invitation, your contribution to this discussion will be very much appreciated! If in doubt, please see suggestions for responding. If you do not wish to receive these types of notices, please remove your name from Wikipedia:Feedback request service. — Legobot (talk) 00:09, 25 July 2014 (UTC) Your submission at AfC BEEPS was accepted BEEPS, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
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Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Sionk (talk) 21:26, 27 July 2014 (UTC)1976 Canary Island UFO Article on AFDPlease join the discussion about the fate of this article.98.174.223.41 (talk) 20:43, 29 July 2014 (UTC) Disambiguation link notification for July 30Hi. Thank you for your recent edits. Wikipedia appreciates your help. We noticed though that when you edited Austin Basis, you added links pointing to the disambiguation pages State farm, MFA and Life on Mars (TV series). Such links are almost always unintended, since a disambiguation page is merely a list of "Did you mean..." article titles. Read the FAQ • Join us at the DPL WikiProject. It's OK to remove this message. Also, to stop receiving these messages, follow these opt-out instructions. Thanks, DPL bot (talk) 08:50, 30 July 2014 (UTC) TBHello, Anne Delong. You have new messages at AlanM1's talk page. You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{Talkback}} or {{Tb}} template. Jim Carter (from public cyber) 22:08, 30 July 2014 (UTC) Please comment on Wikipedia:Village pump (proposals)Greetings! You have been randomly selected to receive an invitation to participate in the request for comment on Wikipedia:Village pump (proposals). Should you wish to respond to the invitation, your contribution to this discussion will be very much appreciated! If in doubt, please see suggestions for responding. If you do not wish to receive these types of notices, please remove your name from Wikipedia:Feedback request service. — Legobot (talk) 00:05, 1 August 2014 (UTC) Revised Earth Tribe L.A. per your excellent suggestionsDear Anne Delong. Just wanted to thank you for your attentive and thorough suggestions. Your advice in “getting this article accepted” is much appreciated, well-taken and I welcome more on my latest revision. Is this the best way to communicate? Based upon your advice, I have eliminated all ancillary material and cites. I have included only the notable “independent reviews or features in movie magazines” and “entertainment news sources” as you recommended: the Hollywood Reporter, Daily Variety, Los Angeles Times, Academy of Arts and Sciences and the United Nations. Thank you for your editorial comments and for your Wikipedia protocol advice. Thank you for taking the time to help get this article accepted. I'm a fan of bluegrass music, in particular the various finger-style picking techniques. Amazing. I welcome any further comments and ways of interacting. SpaceJace — Preceding unsigned comment added by SpaceJace (talk • contribs) 04:28, 5 August 2014 (UTC)
I hate to write such discouraging words to you, especially since I can see that you have the makings of a good Wikipedia editor (willingness to work collaboratively is a big plus here). If the article is turned down, you might consider instead expanding the "Rebuilding Los Angeles" section of the 1992 Los Angeles riots article, mentioning the arts grants, and giving some examples, one of which could be funding of the film. This is a high profile and widely watched article, though, so only do this if you can find a news report or other reference that specifically names the film or its creators as a grant recipient. —Anne Delong (talk) 13:29, 5 August 2014 (UTC) Verification, creds, linksI have several books including two anthologies I edited, won two NJ State Arts Council Fellowships, one in prose and one in poetry, won the Kinereath Genseler Award for my book Panic (also a BOTYA finalist) with Alice James Books, and there are a ton of links to my work on line. A quick search pulls these up. If they need to be linked on the page, then that would be great, but calling the page into question is inappropriate as my creds are in line with many other poets' pages: some Books and anthologies I have written or edited: http://www.blacklawrence.com/rigger-death-and-hoist-another/ http://syracuseuniversitypress.syr.edu/fall-2013/room-and-the-world.html http://alicejamesbooks.org/ajb-titles/panic/ http://www.blacklawrence.com/speech-acts/ http://www.ugapress.org/index.php/books/index/sense_of_regard Reviews or comments on my work: http://www.wordforword.info/vol18/Pollard.html http://thelinebreak.wordpress.com/2010/11/30/laura-mcculloughs-speech-acts/ http://thepotomacjournal.com/issue9/laura_mccullough.html http://contrarymagazine.com/2011/laura-mccullough-speech-acts/ http://www.guernicamag.com/daily/laura_mccullough_reading_recom/ Interviews of me or by me: http://nanofiction.org/weekly-feature/interviews/2013/10/five-questions-with-laura-mccullough http://tcjww.org/2014/02/10/interview-laura-mccullough/ http://www.poetsandartists.com/laura-mccullough/ http://realitysandwich.com/389/what_men_want_interview_laura_mccullough/ http://poems.com/special_features/prose/essay_hicok2.php http://poetsonadoption.blogspot.com/2011/04/laura-mccullough.html Radio or Videos of me or me interviewing other writers: http://www.leahbrowning.net/Apple/Fall_2009/Laura_McCullough.html http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4LAYKLSZVWo http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lfTrWCIJ8_4 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=15sRlWAN2fU http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GP0hTQee-9w Examples of poems online: http://goodmenproject.com/author/laura-mccullough/ http://www.tupeloquarterly.com/everywhere-i-havent-been-anywhere-by-laura-mccullough/ http://solsticelitmag.org/author/laura-mccullough/ http://www.leahbrowning.net/Apple/Fall_2009/Laura_McCullough.html http://www.versedaily.org/2014/aboutlauramccullough.shtml https://www.aprweb.org/poem/speaking-malagasy-isle-vanilla http://www.anomalouspress.org/8/26.mccullough.bowie.php http://www.diodepoetry.com/v4n2/content/mccullough_l.html http://www.drunkenboat.com/db18/laura-mccullough http://www.fishousepoems.org/?artist=mccullough-laura http://referentialmagazine.com/contributors/m-o/laura-mccullough/ http://www.connotationpress.com/a-poetry-congeries-with-john-hoppenthaler/2010/february-2010/307-laura-mccullough-poetry http://anti-poetry.com/anti/mcculloughla/ http://www.pebblelakereview.com/archive/2009_v6_1_health_wellness/poem_SweetSick.html http://www.2river.org/2RView/11_4/poems/mccullough.html http://www.wordriot.org/template.php?ID=743 http://baltimorereview.org/index.php/fall_2013/contributor/laura-mccullough http://www.tarpaulinsky.com/Summer03/LMCunt.htm http://www.madhattersreview.com/issue13/fiction_mccullough.shtml I teach in these two writing venues, one an annual conference, the other an MFA program: http://www.sierranevada.edu/academics/humanities-social-sciences/creative-writing-mfa/mfa-faculty/ http://wintergetaway.com/poetry-faculty.html Other things I have written that appear on Web: http://www.cortlandreview.com/features/14/spring/mccullough.php http://hub.gmnews.com/news/2006-04-06/Front_page/028.html http://hub.gmnews.com/news/2006-04-06/Front_page/028.html How does this get resolved? Lmccullough (talk) 20:42, 5 August 2014 (UTC) Lmccullough: As several others have written, people who insist on writing autobiographies of themselves and adding them as encyclopedia articles often have difficulty. The acceptability of an article isn't about 'creds'. It's about:
There is a special area of the encyclopedia reserved for editors who don't understand Wikipedia's policies yet, in which a draft can be created which doesn't show up immediately in the encyclopedia until after it's been edited up to standards. This is called Articles for creation. A draft there will be reviewed and tagged, but not deleted (except for copyright violations, which have to go), but the page will not show up in search engines until it is moved out to the encyclopedia. This gets rid of the urgency and lets new editors get their feet wet. It is recommended that people such as yourself who have a vested interest in an article create it there. If your article is deleted because of the AfD discussion, you can always start over there. About saving the article: Wikipedia has about 130,000 active editors, and each one has a unique personality, but the majority are helpful people. Often at these deletion debates, other editors step in and make improvements to the article, eventually changing the minds of some of the other editors by removing their reasons for recommending deletion. In this case, though, your confrontational approach has managed to alienate everyone, so you will have to do it yourself. Step one: Rewrite any text that has already been published anywhere, for copyright reasons. (You can formally donate the text if you wrote it, but then you are licensing it to be used, changed and even sold by anybody. It would likely be too promotional anyway). Step two: Remove all external links that are to web sites which are connected to you or which belong to organizations which have published your poetry, and put just a few in a section marked "External links" at the end, and don't use them as references – they have a vested interest in promoting you. Step three: Remove any text which is praise of any kind unless it is attributed to a reviewer, or is intended to promote yourself or your work. Step four: Add citations to reviews and other critical comment of your work to support the information in the article. Don't use any blogs, forums or wordpress sites, or any publishers sites or book sales sites, press releases, or any Youtube videos. Interviews only count if written up in a professional publication, and even then only what the interviewer says can be used as verified information. If you don't know how, read WP:Referencing for beginners. If you get stuck, try the WP:Teahouse – they help everybody who asks nicely. Here's a link to a site that uses the proper format: Mandolin Society of Peterborough Okay, go to it.... —Anne Delong (talk) 21:47, 5 August 2014 (UTC) —Anne Delong (talk) 21:47, 5 August 2014 (UTC) Poet countInterestingly, Category:American poets has 2,562 listings. Category:American women poets has 1,447 names. The poor, neglected, down-trodden, reviled men are listed in Category:American men poets with 1,115 names. (Actually these counts are not accurate because of how editors categorize different pages. My favorite poet, Peter Wild is listed as an Arizona poet, but not in the American poets category.) – S. Rich (talk) 03:55, 6 August 2014 (UTC)
Anne, Draft:Best Before Records can expire, as there is now an article (Best Before Records}. 78.26 (spin me / revolutions) 21:09, 6 August 2014 (UTC)
Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Infinity Cat Recordings – old AfC I promised to look at a long time agoAnne, I think Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Infinity Cat Recordings is clearly notable. Aside from the current references, and the fact that the label has signed multiple notable acts, there is also an additional Billboard profile at [1]. 78.26 (spin me / revolutions) 21:17, 6 August 2014 (UTC) Probably notable, multiple releases by notable artists, plus the following: [2], [3], [4], quit after the first 3 google pages. 78.26 (spin me / revolutions) 21:24, 6 August 2014 (UTC)
I'm having a hard time finding anything on this one. 78.26 (spin me / revolutions) 21:29, 6 August 2014 (UTC)
Obsolete, as Loma Vista Recordings exists. Delete or merge. 78.26 (spin me / revolutions) 21:32, 6 August 2014 (UTC)
As you suggest in the comments, this should be merged with Decon. 78.26 (spin me / revolutions) 21:34, 6 August 2014 (UTC)
Having a hard time finding information on this label, if anything the information should be merged into Haldern Pop. 78.26 (spin me / revolutions) 21:38, 6 August 2014 (UTC) This is notable, was re-submitted to AfC, but I have just declined again because I feel it is promotional in tone. 78.26 (spin me / revolutions) 21:47, 6 August 2014 (UTC) I'm not seeing this gentleman is notable outside of Izzy Gold Records. 78.26 (spin me / revolutions) 21:51, 6 August 2014 (UTC) Please comment on Wikipedia:Village pump (proposals)Greetings! You have been randomly selected to receive an invitation to participate in the request for comment on Wikipedia:Village pump (proposals). Should you wish to respond to the invitation, your contribution to this discussion will be very much appreciated! If in doubt, please see suggestions for responding. If you do not wish to receive these types of notices, please remove your name from Wikipedia:Feedback request service. — Legobot (talk) 00:07, 7 August 2014 (UTC) Disambiguation link notification for August 7Hi. Thank you for your recent edits. Wikipedia appreciates your help. We noticed though that when you edited Decon, you added links pointing to the disambiguation pages The Alchemist and Classified. Such links are almost always unintended, since a disambiguation page is merely a list of "Did you mean..." article titles. Read the FAQ • Join us at the DPL WikiProject. It's OK to remove this message. Also, to stop receiving these messages, follow these opt-out instructions. Thanks, DPL bot (talk) 08:54, 7 August 2014 (UTC) A barnstar for you!
Hello and thank youDear Anne Delong, After the first day of the Wiki kurfuffle, I learned enough to realize I should step away, and frankly, I figured the page would go, and that was fine, and I was even grateful for what I had learned. But the last few days I have scores of messages and emails, and today someone got in touch and said I should go look at the page and look at what you and someone names Carrite had been doing in not just the discussion, but to the page itself. I'm flabbergasted, and I want to thank you for your support. I know, I know, the support isn't exactly for me; it's about integrity of information and about weighing out things impartially, and establishing context and credibility, but that took time and thoughtfulness, and I am grateful for that, not just as it relates to the developing page on me as a writer, but overall, for the whole shebang! I have so much more respect for the Wiki process than I had. It's like a burbling, fomenting, fermenting wrack line between data and meaning and what should or should not be coalesced into a representation of human collective meaning. It's both elegant and rather scary. I am off to a conference in VT this week, and I almost certainly will write about this. I write to figure out what I think, to make connections and meaning. IN a way, that's what Wiki is collectively, only not toward the end of making an aesthetic artifact, but rather one of facts (oh, how mutable is that word?) and relevance. Maybe you have a thought on this? You seem to have a ton of stars and notes, another process I know nothing about, that indicate that your Wiki peers think you are a reasoned and uber contributing member to the collective effort, and I add my thanks to it. Thank you. Laura Lmccullough (talk) 15:14, 9 August 2014 (UTC) Enquiry about fast-tracking an article review in Draft SpaceHi Anne, I hope this isn't in breach of anything but would it be possible to fast forward a review for Draft:Lisa Armstrong? I would like to be able to link it from an article that is currently about to undergo a Good Article assessment/review. It isn't my draft (although I have expanded and revised it rather a lot after discovering that it had been started.) Normally I would be happy to wait, but with the GA review coming up I'd rather like to have this up – and am not sure if, as an editor, I'm allowed to move it myself without it receiving a proper review first. Thanks so much! Mabalu (talk) 22:53, 11 August 2014 (UTC)
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Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Sionk (talk) 20:16, 17 August 2014 (UTC)Dear Tdamico789: I see that your article about the Ghost of Otis is up for review. I found a couple of extra references for you. This looks like an interesting band, but I can see that you are having trouble in writing the article in an "encyclopedic style". Would you like some help with this? I have worked on a lot of band articles. —Anne Delong (talk) 14:50, 12 October 2013 (UTC) Hi Anne, thanks for the extra references and your offer to assist. For many months, I've been trying to get the article right, trimming out promotional language and opinions, adding citations. Latest update was today. I'll happily accept your assistance in getting this article done. Tdamico789 (talk) 00:13, 18 August 2014 (UTC)
Hi Anne, thank you for taking the time to review the article. Your comments and input are always appreciated. Mybstimybsti2 (talk) 15:51, 31 August 2014 (UTC) I have improved on the AfC after your message on WT:FOOTBALL. Player now meets notability per WP:FOOTYN, having played in the fully-professional Thai Premier League. It's good to go. cheers. LRD NO (talk) 04:34, 18 August 2014 (UTC) Disambiguation link notification for August 18Hi. Thank you for your recent edits. Wikipedia appreciates your help. We noticed though that when you edited Graña y Montero, you added a link pointing to the disambiguation page Sheraton. Such links are almost always unintended, since a disambiguation page is merely a list of "Did you mean..." article titles. Read the FAQ • Join us at the DPL WikiProject. It's OK to remove this message. Also, to stop receiving these messages, follow these opt-out instructions. Thanks, DPL bot (talk) 09:14, 18 August 2014 (UTC) RfA DodgerThere seems to be something wrong with the transclusion or time stamp, please see WP:RFA. Kraxler (talk) 16:08, 20 August 2014 (UTC)
It looks to like my problems with AFD might kill off my chance to get the mop. The Opposers are even using my "mea culpa" posts against me – which I find more than a bit distasteful. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 18:07, 22 August 2014 (UTC)
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I don't think most editors think AfC reviewing is insignificant – but some of them don't like it; let's face it, it doesn't work perfectly. Some may have been showing restraint rather than ignorance, so it's better not to make assumptions or you may come across as dismissive yourself. Trying out NPP is a good idea; working in a variety of areas allows you interact with more editors and to see things from different perspectives. For example, you can see what new articles look like that don't come through AfC. —Anne Delong (talk) 17:05, 28 August 2014 (UTC)
AfC – Red Leaf RecordsAnne, speaking of your G13 rescues, I found a couple of more sources for Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Red Leaf Records and moved this highly notable label to the mainspace. 78.26 (spin me / revolutions) 19:02, 28 August 2014 (UTC) Aliyah JohnsonI don't deal with nominations for creation. When it is appropriate, I just create. I would not go out of my way to create an article for Aliyah Johnson at this time. She's a young athlete showing some promise. Will that develop into something notable? She's close, but not worthy of mention now. Since the work has been done, keep it in incubation. If she does something in the next few years, it could be useful. All we would have to do is tag on a WP:NTRACK notable accomplishment. If she hasn't improved by then, its probably not going to happen. Trackinfo (talk) 11:04, 3 September 2014 (UTC)
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Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Coin945 (talk) 10:54, 10 September 2014 (UTC)A cup of coffee for you!
Draft:AgricenHi Anne, The draft:agricen page was an orphan. There is now a mention of Agricen in the Agrium entry (Agrium recently took a controlling interest in the company), so that it will not be an orphan if it becomes an article. Anything else you suggest for creating this article? Thanks! Caravass (talk) 16:06, 10 September 2014 (UTC)
Thanks, Anne! I made your suggested changes. Caravass (talk) 00:24, 15 September 2014 (UTC) Your submission at AfC Sharmin Ali was accepted Sharmin Ali, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
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Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Coin945 (talk) 17:01, 11 September 2014 (UTC)Quick QuestionHey Anne, have seen that you are quite active at the AFC. Great work there! I just had a quick question. So anybody who has received a very important award is notable, right? What about Guggenheim Fellowship? People who have received it are notable without considering anything else? Thanks, Muhammad Ali Khalid (talk) 17:36, 13 September 2014 (UTC)
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Please comment on Wikipedia talk:Username policyGreetings! You have been randomly selected to receive an invitation to participate in the request for comment on Wikipedia talk:Username policy. Should you wish to respond to the invitation, your contribution to this discussion will be very much appreciated! If in doubt, please see suggestions for responding. If you do not wish to receive these types of notices, please remove your name from Wikipedia:Feedback request service. — Legobot (talk) 00:07, 17 September 2014 (UTC) Thanks -- Need another assistanceHi, Thanks for your support in my past contribution. I'm really trying to sharpen my skills. Can you please give me your view on this draft i'm yet to submit: Draft:Keranique Draft:Keranique Thank you in anticipation — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ola olus (talk • contribs) 09:27, 17 September 2014 (UTC) Hello, Ola olus. I looked over that page, and it seems to me that all of your sources are self-serving press releases, company announcements, industry profiles and directory listings, etc. Those links make the page more of an advertisement than an encyclopedia article, and Wikipedia doesn't accept promotional content. For there to be an article about this specific brand, you will need to remove these, and add instead a number of references to articles written about it by journalists and other authors in published newspapers, magazines, or books. Those writers must have no connection whatsoever with the company or with Dr. Goldstein. A review section is good, but the reviews included should be those written by experts in the field, not just random people who have tried the product. If you find some, they should be made into proper citations, not linked directly in the article. Right now, the review section is not written in a neutral way, but instead belittles the source of complaints and seeks to explain away the problems using a non-neutral source. Dr. Goldstein herself. Also, the article shouldn't contain any of your own opinion, such as using the word "ideal". Right now this article has no chance of being accepted into the encyclopedia. Sorry! —Anne Delong (talk) 13:53, 17 September 2014 (UTC) Thanks Anne, I really appreciate your support. Will do the update as necessary. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ola olus (talk • contribs) 18:21, 26 September 2014 (UTC) CellpaddingWhy don't you just move the article to mainspace, and see if it has an AFD entered? Some AFC reviewers are exclusionist. Letting it run a possible AFD is more direct than submitting an MFD. Robert McClenon (talk) 18:45, 17 September 2014 (UTC) Speedy deletion nomination of Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Brian ZegerHello, This page seems to have already been deleted after being flagged for copyright infringement, but the link to the cited text in question refers to text that was also written by me, there is no copyright infringement. Is it possible to restore this page? There still seems to be questions about notability to be resolved, but I'd already put significant work into it and I'd rather not lose it all. Many thanks, Rawsoprano (talk) 16:25, 18 September 2014 (UTC) Dear Rawsoprano: All except the first few words of the text that was in this submission has been previously published on the Julliard website, and is clearly marked as copyright. It can't legally be copied into Wikipedia by a user with an anonymous user name, no matter who wrote it. There is a legal process for donating copyrighted text to the encyclopedia (Here it is: Wikipedia:Donating copyright material). Most often copyright holders don't want to do that anyway, because they are basically giving away their text, which can then be used by anyone, changed, and even sold, according to Wikipedia's license. Also, text in people's official profiles is often too promotional for Wikipedia (for example, praise, name-dropping and selective review comments), and is soon changed by other editors anyway, so going through the legal process ends up being a waste of time. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not a web host, and people are discouraged from creating "profiles" of themselves or their colleagues. (see WP:COI). I can't return any of the text that was on the Julliard website, but here is the one sentence and discography that were separately written: Brian Zeger (born May 6, 1957) is an American pianist, educator, artistic administrator and broadcaster. He is known primarily as an accompanist specializing in art song. Certainly the citations and links to reviews and articles have nothing to do with the Juilliard bio? ```` I agree. That's why I posted them here so that you can use them as citations if you rewrite the article with new text written especially for Wikipedia. —Anne Delong (talk) 14:57, 19 September 2014 (UTC) Recordings
and here are some sources that may or may not be useful – depending on whether they have information about Mr. Zeger; I didn't check: <ref>{{cite news|last=Stamler|first=Bernard|title=NEIGHBORHOOD REPORT: RELATIONS -- UPPER WEST SIDE; Horne's Accompanist, on Piano and at Movies|url=http://www.nytimes.com/1998/05/03/nyregion/neighborhood-report-relations-upper-west-side-horne-s-accompanist-piano-movies.html?scp=1&sq=brian+zeger+marilyn+horne&st=nyt|accessdate=3 January 2013|newspaper=New York Times|date=3 May 1998}}</ref> <ref name="bachtrack.com">[http://www.bachtrack.com/review-oberlin-deborah-voigt Deborah Voigt Thrills Her Oberlin Audience Despite a Throat Infection], bachtrack.com, March 10, 2013</ref> <ref name="Harriman-Jewell Series">[http://hjseries.org/web/video_details.aspx?ItemId=378163 Deborah Voigt and Brian Zeger in Post-Performance Conversation], Harriman-Jewell Series</ref> <ref name="chicagoclassicalreview.com”>[http://chicagoclassicalreview.com/2009/07/susan-graham-engages-the-head-and-the-heart-with-a-century-of-french-song/ “Susan Graham engages the head and heart with a century of French song”] 7/14/09, chicagoclassicalreview.com </ref> <ref name="wqxr.com">[http://www.wqxr.org/#!/articles/wqxr-features/2009/apr/30/rene_pape/ René Pape and Brian Zeger in performance at WQXR’s Greene Space], www.wqxr.com,</ref> <ref name="wireimage.com”> [http://www.wireimage.co.in/celebrity-pictures/Tenor-Piotr-Beczala-and-pianist-Brian-Zeger-perform-at-The-Broad-Stage/143547654 “Tenor Piotr Beczala and pianist Brian Zeger perform at The Broad Stage”] 4/28/12, wireimage.com</ref> <ref name="chicagotribune.com”> [http://articles.chicagotribune.com/2011-08-04/entertainment/ct-ent-0804-terfel-review-20110804_1_bryn-terfel-belsatzar-brian-zeger “Bryn Terfel’s artful song recital captivates at Ravinia”] 8/4/11, chicagotribune.com </ref> <ref name="Pieczonka article”>[http://www.scena.org/lsm/sm15-10/sm15-X_cover_en.html “Adrianne Pieczonka: A Delicate Balance”] 7/1/10, La Scena Musicale</ref> <ref name="Metropolitan Opera Lindemann Young Artists Development Program">[http://www.metoperafamily.org/metopera/auditions/young_artists/faculty-and-staff.aspx Metropolitan Opera Lindemann Young Artists Development] Program,.</ref> <ref name="NYTimes 2/28/08">[http://www.nytimes.com/2008/02/28/arts/music/28oper.html?pagewanted=print “Juilliard and Met meld opera training”], 2/28/08, newspaper=New York Times Retrieved August 15, 2013 </ref> —Anne Delong (talk) 20:29, 18 September 2014 (UTC) Your draft article, User:Blueway/sandboxHello Anne Delong. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "sandbox". The page will shortly be deleted. If you plan on editing the page to address the issues raised when it was declined and resubmit it, simply If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you want to retrieve it, copy this code: Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 14:59, 19 September 2014 (UTC) Please comment on Category talk:Ice hockey people from OntarioGreetings! You have been randomly selected to receive an invitation to participate in the request for comment on Category talk:Ice hockey people from Ontario. Should you wish to respond to the invitation, your contribution to this discussion will be very much appreciated! If in doubt, please see suggestions for responding. If you do not wish to receive these types of notices, please remove your name from Wikipedia:Feedback request service. — Legobot (talk) 00:09, 23 September 2014 (UTC) andres mendezWikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Andres Mendez is looking decent now. If you want to move what you have now to the mainspace, just let me know and I can finish it. -Drdisque (talk) 02:53, 23 September 2014 (UTC)
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your qyI'm aware of your qy earlier today, but I need to check, and I will deal with it tomorrow. DGG ( talk ) 04:41, 30 September 2014 (UTC) Your comment at RfAThanks for sharing your experience as an admin. I think it'll be very helpful to others. I smiled when I saw you admit you deleted a category. I managed to delete administrative categories twice in the last month. Thankfully, the editor that reported it assumed good faith and assume correctly that it was a mistake. I was also interested in your guardian angel comment. When I first became an admin I half expected that someone would tap me on the shoulder and say they were assigned to watch over me for a while and answer any questions I might have. Needless to say that did not happen. I think it would be a good idea. I had a similar experience when I first became an OTRS agent. It felt strange to be entrusted to take actions with very little training. I think it would be a great idea to institute this concept.--S Philbrick(Talk) 14:46, 30 September 2014 (UTC)
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